Re: Custom Jutsu Submission
(Katon: Unari no Funkazan)- Fire Release: Bellow of Vesuvius
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 (-15 to user)
Description: The user will begin this technique by channelling fire chakra through their arms and into their hands. Due to the amount of chakra that travels through their arm, the user experiences an incredibly painful level of damage to the limb which causes a degree of numbness. The user then proceeds to clap their hands together and from them a huge amount of superheated, non-flammable ash will spew forth.The ash will first quickly envelop the user before it billows upwards to form into a large cloud that will grow to span the entire battlefield.
Due to the ash's density and heat it will not allow any threat to effect or pass through it(following elemental adv/disadv). After being released the ash would accumulate and form into a cloud above the user, as it does so the ash would begin to fall from the cloud (S rank in strength) within short range only as it starts to spread over the battlefield. In turn 2 it would spread to include medium range and finally in turn 3 it would encompass long range as well. The ash would stick to any enemy targets or techniques and incinerate them from the exposure and temperature.
Once the ash has been created the caster can use shape manipulation to form a bolt of ash that erupts onto a targeted area once per turn (S-rank and reaches up to long range).The ash thunderbolt is capable of decimating the area which it strikes, causing a large amount of damage. The user will employ chakra control to form a layer of chakra around himself during this technique, to insulate themselves from the effects of the ash.
Note:
~Can only be used twice
~The cloud lasts for 3 turns
~No other katon techniques while this technique is in play
~Due to the numbness and damage to their arm, the user cannot form hand seals for two turns
~The bolt of ash counts as one of the moves in that turn
~Can only be taught by xHoudinii
Declined - i'm not gonna allow this to last, it's like costant raining S rank fire. Hell no. Spew out the ash into a ball in the air, clap and have it blast out in all directions. And user has to defend himself in that case. Or severely reduce the rank of this.
~New Submission
(Suiton: Hari no Gomu)-Water Release: Bungee Gum
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 20 (+10 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description:
The user will focus their chakra into the water particles surrounding them up to mid range, altering the water and forming it into a thin haze while giving it sticky qualities. This haze is unique in that it can quite rapidly be condensed into sticky water wherever the user needs, its high viscosity allows it to stick to any surface. The user is able to do this in at least two points at once, forming a ‘string’ of sticky water between objects.
The other useful property of this water is that due to its nature the user is able to manipulate it freely, making it contract or stretch as they see fit for a range of uses, bringing the objects together at a rapid pace for instance. The mist passively absorbs chakra from the user to allow it to maintain its volume and allow it to form again in the area if it was dispersed momentarily. If this technique comes into contact with its user they are able to focus their chakra onto their skin which will cause the water to fall off quickly and harmlessly.
Note:
~Can only be used 2 times
~If dispersed it takes 1 turn to reform
~Lasts for 4 turns
~Can only be taught by xHoudinii
Declined - been done before and so many people trying to do it just since i became a mod.
~Reduced the turn limit and addressed the issue with the user being exposed to the ash(Katon: Unari no Funkazan)- Fire Release: Bellow of Vesuvius
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 (-15 to user)
Description: The user will begin this technique by channelling fire chakra through their arms and into their hands. Due to the amount of chakra that travels through their arm, the user experiences an incredibly painful level of damage to the limb which causes a degree of numbness. The user then proceeds to clap their hands together and from them a huge amount of superheated, non-flammable ash will spew forth.The ash will first quickly envelop the user before it billows upwards to form into a large cloud that will grow to span the entire battlefield.
Due to the ash's density and heat it will not allow any threat to effect or pass through it(following elemental adv/disadv). After being released the ash would accumulate and grow into a cloud above the user over the course of the first turn. In the second turn the ash would begin to fall (S rank in strength) within short range only as it starts to spread over the battlefield. In turn 3 it would spread to include medium range and finally in turn 4 it would encompass long range as well.The ash would stick to any enemy targets or techniques and incinerate them from the exposure and temperature.
Once the ash has been created the caster can use shape manipulation to form a bolt of ash that erupts onto a targeted area once per turn(S-rank and reaches up to long range).The ash thunderbolt is capable of decimating the area which it strikes, causing a large amount of damage. The user will employ chakra control to insulate himself from the effects of the ash.
Note:
~Can only be used twice
~The cloud lasts for 4 turns
~No other katon techniques while this technique is in play
~Due to the numbness and damage to their arm, the user cannot form hand seals for two turns
~The bolt of ash counts as one of the moves in that turn
~Can only be taught by xHoudinii
Declined - Forbidden rank that lasts 4 turns is a no? Also you say it covers the user when it forms. Why wouldn't the forbidden ranked ash just kill you then and there? It would just look like what happened in pompei, cover burn and kill you.
(Katon: Unari no Funkazan)- Fire Release: Bellow of Vesuvius
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 (-15 to user)
Description: The user will begin this technique by channelling fire chakra through their arms and into their hands. Due to the amount of chakra that travels through their arm, the user experiences an incredibly painful level of damage to the limb which causes a degree of numbness. The user then proceeds to clap their hands together and from them a huge amount of superheated, non-flammable ash will spew forth.The ash will first quickly envelop the user before it billows upwards to form into a large cloud that will grow to span the entire battlefield.
Due to the ash's density and heat it will not allow any threat to effect or pass through it(following elemental adv/disadv). After being released the ash would accumulate and form into a cloud above the user, as it does so the ash would begin to fall from the cloud (S rank in strength) within short range only as it starts to spread over the battlefield. In turn 2 it would spread to include medium range and finally in turn 3 it would encompass long range as well. The ash would stick to any enemy targets or techniques and incinerate them from the exposure and temperature.
Once the ash has been created the caster can use shape manipulation to form a bolt of ash that erupts onto a targeted area once per turn (S-rank and reaches up to long range).The ash thunderbolt is capable of decimating the area which it strikes, causing a large amount of damage. The user will employ chakra control to form a layer of chakra around himself during this technique, to insulate themselves from the effects of the ash.
Note:
~Can only be used twice
~The cloud lasts for 3 turns
~No other katon techniques while this technique is in play
~Due to the numbness and damage to their arm, the user cannot form hand seals for two turns
~The bolt of ash counts as one of the moves in that turn
~Can only be taught by xHoudinii
Declined - i'm not gonna allow this to last, it's like costant raining S rank fire. Hell no. Spew out the ash into a ball in the air, clap and have it blast out in all directions. And user has to defend himself in that case. Or severely reduce the rank of this.
~New Submission
(Suiton: Hari no Gomu)-Water Release: Bungee Gum
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 20 (+10 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description:
The user will focus their chakra into the water particles surrounding them up to mid range, altering the water and forming it into a thin haze while giving it sticky qualities. This haze is unique in that it can quite rapidly be condensed into sticky water wherever the user needs, its high viscosity allows it to stick to any surface. The user is able to do this in at least two points at once, forming a ‘string’ of sticky water between objects.
The other useful property of this water is that due to its nature the user is able to manipulate it freely, making it contract or stretch as they see fit for a range of uses, bringing the objects together at a rapid pace for instance. The mist passively absorbs chakra from the user to allow it to maintain its volume and allow it to form again in the area if it was dispersed momentarily. If this technique comes into contact with its user they are able to focus their chakra onto their skin which will cause the water to fall off quickly and harmlessly.
Note:
~Can only be used 2 times
~If dispersed it takes 1 turn to reform
~Lasts for 4 turns
~Can only be taught by xHoudinii
Declined - been done before and so many people trying to do it just since i became a mod.
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