[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[BusinessManTeno]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Genjutsu: Tetsu Kikyuu) Illusionary Arts: Hide and Seek
Type: Supplamentary
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 25
Damage: N/a
Description: This is a very useful technique allowing the user to play mind games with the opponent. The user will do the tiger handseal, which induces the opponent into the illusion. What the opponent will see is the user pressing his hands on a flat surface being the ground, a wall, a building, etc. Creating a large portal which the user will then get inside of. Once the user enters the portal, the portal will close up, letting the opponent believe that the opponent is no longer there. The user will then emerge from a portal anywhere around the opponent, poking his head out. This technique is normally used to enrage the opponent. In reality the opponent still has reign over his body as if he wasnt in an illusion, the only thing is that the opponent does not see the real user but the fakes coming in and out of portals leaving him open for attack, but can backfire if not careful.

Note: Can use a max of 4 times
Note: This technique last 2 turns, unless broken
Note: Dojutsu users and sensors can sense/see the real body even through the illusion without breaking it.

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‡ Declined ‡ Do you have control over what portals you emerge from? or is it pre-determined when you first cast the genjutsu? like you just keep randomly emerging from portals around the opponent? It can't be something you control unless you maintain the illusion (meaning you can't perform any other techniques while it's active).

(Genjutsu: Tetsu Kikyuu) Illusionary Arts: Hide and Seek
Type: Supplamentary
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 25 (-10 per turn)
Damage: N/a
Description: This is a very useful technique allowing the user to play mind games with the opponent. The user will do the tiger handseal, which induces the opponent into the illusion. What the opponent will see is the user pressing his hands on a flat surface being the ground, a wall, a building , etc. Creating a large portal which the user will then get inside of. Once the user enters the portal, the portal will close up, letting the opponent believe that the opponent is no longer there. The user will then emerge from a portal anywhere around the opponent, poking his head out. This technique is normally used to enrage the opponent. The user is able to control where the portals will open up around the opponent,In reality the opponent still has reign over his body as if he wasnt in an illusion, the only thing is that the opponent does not see the real user but the fakes coming in and out of portals leaving him open for attack, but can backfire if not careful.

Note: Can use a max of 4 times
Note: This technique last 2 turns, unless broken
Note: Dojutsu users and sensors can sense/see the real body even through the illusion without breaking it.
Note: User cannot use any other jutsu or attack while this is in use.

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✦Approved ✦

Proof to sound training.

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(Kuchiyose/Ototon: Shu Kichigai) Summoning/Sound Style: Lord Of Madness
Type: Supplementary / Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40 (-20 per turn)
Damage: N/a (-10 per turn)
Description: Lord Of Madness is one of the 3 dancing taboos of the sound style. Incorporating the summoning style as a host for the technique this being the 3rd in rank compared to the other 2. The user will start by biting his thumb while quickly slamming his hands on the ground causing a mummy wrapped in bandages to emerge from the ground behind the opponent. The mummy body is made from earthen material while being infused with chakra from the user. The bandages around the mummys body will began to unravel revealing his body to have multiple holes in his body which releases sound as he moves. The user will then direct the mummy to begin dancing, releasing sounds as he begins to move. The dancing is very easy going, and soft so to speak. This will cause the sound being produced from the mummy to enter into the opponents ear causing their ears to ring violently. This does not produce damage to a high degree (Only enough damage in the brain area where it stings a bit). The purpose of this is to knock the concentration of the opponent all the way off. This restricts the opponent from using any mind based jutsus, be it yamanaka jutsu, genjutsu etc, and jutsus of forbidden rank. This technique effects the opponent by causing the sound to enter into the opponent(s) ear to violently ring.

Note: Can use twice per match with a 3 turn cool down
Note: Technique last 3 turns (Mummy dances) unless destroyed by an jutsu of equal or above.
Note: This technique is similar to a clone, thus the user can use techniques while the mummy is dancing
Note: Cant use any sound jutsus in the same turn that the mummy is dancing.

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(Kuchiyose/Ototon: Shu Ranmyaku) Summoning/Sound Style: Lord Of Kaos
Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90 (-40 to user)
Description: Lord Of Kaos/Chaos is one of the 3 dancing taboos of the sound style. Incorporating the summoning style as a host for the technique this being the 2nd in rank compared to the other 2. The user will bite their thumb drawing blood out right after slamming their thumb on the ground to summon a mummy infused with sound chakra made from earthen materials, the host for his technique. The mummy will emerge from right beside the user as his bandages begin to fall, revealing holes all around his body which produces sounds based on movement. The user will then direct the mummy to begin dancing, causing the mummy to do a very violent dance while spinning seconds later producing major effects of sounds that can even be heard throughout a village. Once the mummy begins spinning, violent sounds will produce from 1 meter outward from his body, causing a violent shockwave to be produce from the mummys spinning in a 360 degree angle, leveling anything in its path, obliterating it. As the technique reaches out of mid range, the sound shockwaves will condense in the direction of the opponent, creating a 20 meter radius translucent ball of sound that once it impacts the opponent it creates another massive shockwave in a 360degree angle up to long range. The orb of sound is so powerful that it will create a crater 20 meters wide and 10 meters deep. This technique is very dangerous as it not only drains a huge amount of chakra but it puts the user at risk of being effected by the technique

Note: Can only use once
Note: Counts as 2 move slots
Note: Cant use sound jutsus for 3 turns after use
Note: Due to fatigue of major drainage of the chakra, the user will only be able to use 2 jutsus in the next turn

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✦ Both Declined, first summoning has an ability that wouldn't be allowed, the prevention of all Yin based attacks. The second one is practically a boosted Canon Sound jutsu. It combines the Canon S rank that causes an omnidirectional burst with a Sound CJ I've seen.✦

 

[Penguin]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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Furaingupengin no Ato: Tsubasa no Hitotsu Art of the Flying Penguin: Wingless One
Type: Offensive
Rank: B-rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: A basis for the Furaingupengin no Ato fighting style. After equipping himself with a sword, the user would tether a connection to himself and the sword via a web, with the usage of spider ninjutsu. The web itself would be more durable than regular steel, albeit a different feel and more versatile in movement due to what the spider web is made of. Then, after rotating the sword for a quick moment, the user would sling the sword at the opponent with a massive increase in speed due to the momentum of the sword from rotating it intensely, and the sword's mass from it being made of a metal. The speed of the sword would be comparable to an arrow being shot from a longbow. Due to the spider web still being connected to the sword and the user, the user would be able to channel chakra into said spider web to augment the trajectory of the sword entirely and without any delay, making this one of the most versatile and basic techniques in the whole fighting style.

Can only be taught by Penguin
Must know Furaingupengin no Ato to learn this technique

‡ Pending ‡ Leaving for Madara.

✦ Pending, what do you mean by "augment the trajectory"? Clarify this. ✦

Suiton: Suishin Pengin - Water Style: Propelling Penguin
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C-rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: A very simplistic suiton ninjutsu in nature, combining the ideals and characteristics of Suiton: Suidan no Jutsu and Suiton: Suihachi, the user will produce very powerful streams of water from their hands and or feet, propelling them through the air at ridiculously high speeds. The speeds are so fast, nearly doubling the user's base speed when using this jutsu, that the user would not be able to react accordingly or even see things clearly unless their reaction times dictate otherwise. The jutsu is not meant to be used offensively, but to simply outrun any technique coming for him, but it has it's downsides. To the average shinobi, this jutsu is a double edged sword due to the fact that they cannot process their environment faster than what they are moving, so they would be prone to hitting things that slower moving targets could avoid.

Note: Can only be used four times per conflict
Note: Can only be taught by Penguin.

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‡ Declined ‡ Eh, I don't like the mention of double speed. I'd remove it but you elaborated on it so extensively.

Suiton: Hogo Pengin no Tangan - Water Style: Plea of the Protective Penguin
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: C-S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 15-40
Damage: 30-80
Description: A fairly simple but effective suiton ninjutsu, Hogo Pengin no Tangan is a suiton ninjutsu that uses the properties crystalized water to coat the blade of a sword. The user would put as much or as little chakra into the blade to crystalize as they want, and then they would simply cut through an opposing jutsu, releasing a crescent of crystalized water towards the opponent. With paramount chakra control, the user would then control the crescent of crystalized suiton much like the jutsu Suiton: Nagareru no Yari, only except instead of hand movements, the user would control the crescent via waving their sword up, down, left, or right. The user could control the crescent up to mid range with ease, and due to the crescent's properties of crystalline water, it's cutting power would be unmatched, even compared to the famous Suiton: Suidanha.

Note: Can only be used twice
Note: Can only be taught by Penguin

‡ Declined ‡ No more Japanese names when referencing things. ENGLISH PLEASE. I also see no reason for this to be multi-ranked.

Suiton: Suishin Pengin - Water Style: Propelling Penguin
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C-rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A (+20 to taijutsu)
Description: A very simplistic suiton ninjutsu in nature, combining the ideals and characteristics of Suiton: Suidan no Jutsu and Suiton: Suihachi, the user will produce very powerful streams of water from their hands and or feet, propelling them through the air at high speeds. The speeds are faster than the user's base speed, but no so much as to double it, meaning the opponent can still track the user, albeit difficult to the naked eye. The jutsu is not meant to be used offensively, but to simply outrun any technique coming for him, but it has it's downsides, since it would be hard for the user to change directions quickly at such a high rate of speed, unless their reaction rates dictate otherwise. The user can also use Suishin Pengin to augment their taijutsu power, being that taijutsu is most powerful when a large mass hit's an object with increased velocity. Using the concepts stated above, the user could use the streams of water to increase their speed to hit the opponent, causing serious injury.

Note: Can only be used four times per conflict
Note: Can only be taught by Penguin.

‡ Declined ‡ I'd prefer it if this just propels the user at their base speed. Also, this should be used solely for evasion so remove the boost to Taijutsu.

Suiton: Hogo Pengin no Tangan - Water Style: Plea of the Protective Penguin
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: A fairly simple but effective suiton ninjutsu, Hogo Pengin no Tangan is a suiton ninjutsu that uses the properties crystalized water to coat the blade of a sword. The user would put as much or as little chakra into the blade to crystalize as they want, and then they would simply cut through an opposing jutsu, releasing a crescent of crystalized water towards the opponent. With paramount chakra control, the user would then control the crescent of crystalized suiton much like the jutsu Suiton: Nagareru no Yari, only except instead of hand movements, the user would control the crescent via waving their sword up, down, left, or right. The user could control the crescent up to mid range with ease, and due to the crescent's properties of crystalline water, it's cutting power would be unmatched, even compared to the famous Suiton: Suidanha.

Note: Can only be used three times per conflict
Note: Cannot use this jutsu consecutively
Note: Can only be taught by Penguin

‡ Approved ‡

 

[Matt]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Doton: Kuishinbō tatchi | Earth Release: Gluttonous Touch
Type: Attack
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60 (+10 if the mud is ignited)
Description:
As the name hints towards, 'Kuishinbō tatchi' is a jutsu that is initiated either off of coming into contact with the target or doing a series of 3 hand seals to initiate it from a distance. Once the user touches the target, whether it's through his (user's) hand, leg, elbow etc. he'll release a a baseball sized dark blob of muddy earthen material which will stick to the target. Alternatively the 3 hands seals allow the user to make the blob shoot from the ground anywhere within 15m of himself to stick onto a target. The blob of Earth takes on unique properties of the flammable mud variant of Earth, being very mud-like and sticky to the touch, thus seeming like a ball of swamp material with its dark color and sticky texture. Once the blob is in contact with the opponent it starts to act on its own accord. The blob of mud begins to duplicate itself like a germ of some sort, quickly spreading across the target as it expands to become thicker and heavier by the second. Within a moment's notice the mud would completely ensnare the opponent's entire body, starting to smother and crush him within the mud. Due to the flammable nature of the mud it would be highly reactive to flames, sparks and electricity; catching a blaze and making the mud even more dangerous. The mud doesn't make explosions when it is ignited though, but simply catches on fire to start heating and turning the mud into a molten mud of sorts. This isn't limited to simply being used on a human either, it can be used on summonings or other jutsu within reason (like a stone golem) to ensnare and constrict them with the mud.

☆ Needs to be taught by BlackCrow
☆ Usable 3x
☆ Lasts 2 turns unless destroyed

‡ Pending ‡ Leaving for another mod.

✦ Approved on the condition NK cant learn this ✦

(Gurifon Gijutsu: Alfheim no Habataki) Griffin Art: Wingbeat of Alfheim
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S-Rank
Range: N/A
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user applies a unique Griffin Summoning Tattoo to their back, in the shape of a Griffin's wings. By channelling Chakra into this tattoo, the user Summons a pair of wings from one of the Griffin's of the Summoning Contract. These wings are not directly linked with the user's body, as that would be classified as Medical Ninjutsu. Instead these wings are physically Summoned and linked to the user, via the aforementioned Tattoo. Using these Wings, the user can perform various actions, such as high-speed unassisted flight, Taijutsu and Wind Release enhanced actions, utilizing the Wings as a defensive shield, and other such actions.

Note: Can only be used once per battle/ event.
Note: Lasts for 4 turns.
Note: No B-Rank or above Ninjutsu for 2 turns after this technique ends.
Note: Must have signed the Griffin CSC.

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‡ Declined ‡ While I appreciate the original way of accomplishing this, this is similar to every technique which creates wings for the user.

 

[Houdinii]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Genjutsu: Enmu za Kanchi)-Illusionary Arts: Haze of Perception
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Medium
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description:
To begin the user will form two hand seals and place their target under a subtle illusion. In this genjutsu the target will first see a large puff of smoke poof into existence and expand past the caster as they finish their hand seals(similar to a summoning or clone technique) encompassing the target as well as it momentarily blocks their vision. That is when the second stage of the illusion is put into place, the caster of the illusion will manipulate the targets sight so that they will see what is behind them instead of what is in front of them. So when the smoke clears and they are able to see again it seems as if the caster of the technique had moved during the haze. Due to this techniques effects when the target regains sight of the user they will actually be facing the opposite direction to them and as such will be prompted to release techniques the wrong way, causing them to miss. It is also worth noting that the caster of the illusion manipulates the targets sight to mimic things they would normally see in relation to their body as they face forwards.(Hand/arm movements, the nose etc)

Note:
~Can only be used twice
~Cannot use genjutsu above A rank next turn
~Can only be taught by xHoudinii

‡ Pending ‡ Cool technique. Leaving for another mod.

(Futon: Kaiin Kohheru)-Wind Release: Dutch Oven
Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description:
The user will expel wind from their mouth which they will form into a very wide and thin 'sheet' of air. As it is released the user can shape this sheet into any form desired (cone, dome, sphere etc), the main advantage of this technique is that it is very good at containing and moving any type of air based gas, mist, poison, toxin etc. After containing or moving the gas the user can at any time perform one hand seal and cause the sheet to rupture, either at one point (pushing the gas in one direction) or completely(releasing the gas in that area). Its also worth noting that due to the strong wind currents that form the sheet, coming into contact with it directly would push the enemy back and knock them over, though with no lasting damage.

Note:
~Can only be used three times
~Can only be taught by xHoudinii

‡ Declined ‡ Add a note about what rank techniques this can send back. I also think you should raise to an A-Rank.

(Raiton: Keshi Ittou)- Lightning Release: Rave Party
Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90
Description:
The user will begin this technique by channelling huge amounts of raiton chakra through one of their arms and into their hand. Due to the huge amounts of electricity that travel through their arm when they do this, the user takes a moderate amount of electrical damage to that arm which causes a severe degree of pain and numbness. The user then touches the ground with that hand, creating 12 'rods' of lightning(5m tall) that burst from the ground wherever they see fit and there they shall remain until activated or destroyed. Upon contact with any enemy or technique the rods detonate in an electrical explosion, affecting the area short range of them. When one rod detonates the others react to it and explode as well, triggering a chain reaction of electrical explosions.

Note:
~Can only be used twice
~The rods cannot be created directly under the opponent
~Cannot use lightning techniques above A rank in the same turn or the next
~Due to the pain and numbness experienced, the user is restricted from grasping objects and forming hand seals for the rest of this turn and the next.
~Can only be taught by xHoudinii

‡ Declined ‡ Similar techniques exist.

(Futon: Kaiin Kohheru)-Wind Release: Dutch Oven
Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will expel wind from their mouth which they will form into a very wide and thin 'sheet' of air. As it is released the user can shape this sheet into any form desired (cone, dome, sphere etc), the main advantage of this technique is that it is very good at containing and moving any type of air based gas, mist, poison, toxin etc. After containing or moving the gas the user can at any time perform one hand seal and cause the sheet to rupture, either at one point (pushing the gas in one direction) or completely(releasing the gas in that area). Its also worth noting that due to the strong wind currents that form the sheet, coming into contact with it directly would push the enemy back and knock them over, though with no lasting damage.

Note:
~Can only be used three times
~Can move or contain a max of A rank gas, poison etc
~Can only be taught by xHoudinii

‡ Approved ‡

(Katon: Doubutsushi Ru-retto)-Fire Release: Fauna Roulette
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30 (-10 per turn)
Damage: 60
Description: The user will form two hand seals and focus their chakra into an existing source of fire or fire technique. By doing so they will manipulate the shape of of the fire technique, forming it into one of various sentient animals that can attack or defend for the user. The creature passively feeds off of the users chakra to keep both their shape and autonomy. The bigger the animal the denser it becomes, being able to interact with solid objects. The smaller they are however the quicker and more agile the beasts.

Notes:
~Can only be taught by xHoudinii
~Can only be used three times and each usage lasts for four turns

‡ Approved ‡ Bear in mind this can only be used on non-streaming fire techniques. Otherwise, nice technique.

 

[Akasha]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

I got permission from NK to resubmit.

(Doton/Katon: Tamashī no rekuiemu) - Earth/Fire Release: Requiem of Souls
Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90 (-20 to the user)
Description: Requiem of Souls is one of the more powerful techniques which is actually a combination of both fire and earth release. It was named Requiem of Souls due to the amount of souls it so took within time of its existence and its power also increases with every new one it so takes. User would through the rapid release and conversion of chakra focus doton chakra within one of their limbs before slamming it onto the field upon which they are standing. With the slam onto the ground they would cause for firstly and omnidirectional wave of flammable, sticky mud to spread out underground within mid range radius. The mud would be quite adhesive and heavy and as soon as it forms, it would have similar effects to the swamp but at the same time it would be covered by a layer of earth above which would disable it to take its effects immediately. Now, as soon as they release the flammable mud they would release a pulse of warm katon chakra breaking the layer of earth which was covering the mud and igniting it, causing for an omnidirectional wave of demon like souls of fire to spread all around the user in mid range radius whilst leaving a wave of heat behind it. Keeping in mind that it would be optional if user wants to use the fire wave but rather just leave the mud stay dormant (for up to three turns). As soon as the mud forms, it would have similar effect as if the swamp was created within the battlefield. However unlike the swamp, characteristic to mud from this technique is that it would pull inside only those who have differing chakra signature as they've already been fed by their chakra upon activation of this technique. And perhaps indeed, by using water one would be able to disperse the flames upon their combustion, the mud won't be so easy to get rid off. A mere spark of lightning would cause for layer of earth covering the mud to break, simultaneously it would also get ignited, due to heat emitted by it. Once the flames have been formed, using a wind jutsu would cause for them to explode into a maelstrom. In case whereas the flammable mud was ignited without user sending forth a pulse of their chakra as to arouse the flames but rather due to a different source (heat from lightning and/or similar), the demon like souls would always transit in direction of a person who has a differing chakra signature.

Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: Counts as two moves if both the earth and fire part of this technique have been used
Note: The jutsu would leave a great tool on the one using it and drain them off 20 chakra points and unable to use techniques which require more than two hand seals in two turns span.
Note: Upon using this technique user won't be able to use A ranked jutsu of earth element and S ranked of fire within the same turn this one was activated as well as S ranked earth in the next one
Note: Can only be Taught by Akasha

‡ Declined ‡ Remove the ability to not "ignite the mud". This should always be a Earth/Fire jutsu. Are there any tells to the mud forming beneath the battlefield? ​

(Doton/Katon: Tamashī no rekuiemu) - Earth/Fire Release: Requiem of Souls
Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90 (-20 to the user)
Description: Requiem of Souls is one of the more powerful techniques which is actually a combination of both fire and earth release. It was named Requiem of Souls due to the amount of souls it so took within time of its existence and its power also increases with every new one it so takes. User would through the rapid release and conversion of chakra focus doton chakra within one of their limbs before slamming it onto the field upon which they are standing. With the slam onto the ground they would cause for firstly and omnidirectional wave of flammable, sticky mud to spread out underground within mid range radius. The mud would be quite adhesive and heavy and as soon as it forms, it would have similar effects to the swamp but at the same time it would be covered by a layer of earth above which would disable it to take its effects immediately. Now, as soon as they release the flammable mud they would release a pulse of warm katon chakra breaking the layer of earth which was covering the mud and igniting it, causing for an omnidirectional wave of demon like souls of fire to spread all around the user in mid range radius whilst leaving a wave of heat behind it. As soon as the mud forms, it would have similar effect as if the swamp was created within the battlefield. However unlike the swamp, characteristic to mud from this technique is that it would pull inside only those who have differing chakra signature as they've already been fed by their chakra (users) upon activation of this technique. And perhaps indeed, by using water one would be able to disperse the flames upon their combustion, the mud won't be so easy to get rid off. A mere spark of lightning would cause for layer of earth covering the mud to break, simultaneously it would also get ignited, due to heat emitted by it. Once the flames have been formed, using a wind jutsu would cause for them to explode into a maelstrom. In case whereas the flammable mud was ignited without user sending forth a pulse of their chakra as to arouse the flames but rather due to a different source (heat from lightning and/or similar), the demon like souls would always transit in direction of a person who has a differing chakra signature.

Note: The release of mud could only be noticed through means of sensory and/or doujutsu
Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: Counts as two jutsus user can use per turn
Note: The jutsu would leave a great tool on the one using it and drain them off 20 chakra points and unable to use techniques which require more than two hand seals in two turns span (the one in which it used and the following one)
Note: Upon using this technique user won't be able to use A ranked jutsu of earth element and S ranked of fire within the same turn this one was activated as well as S ranked earth in the next one
Note: Can only be Taught by Akasha

✦ Approved ✦

(Genjutsu: Shirasagi no han'i) - Illusionary Arts: Egret's Purview
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: Egret's Purview is a dormant type of genjutsu whose activation precedes a motion of sorts made by the one who is placed under it. Once the person under the illusion starts to extend/flex/adduct/move in any way their parts of the body (fingers, wrists, legs, arms etc.), the part which was in motion would completely turn into paper which infinitetly and rapidly stretches as long as they are sending forth signals for the motion to be made. If the illusion has not been broken but they change the signals they are sending for motion e.g from leg to arm, the said arm would also go through the changes. This will be followed as long as the genjutsu has not been broken. The genjutsu will stay domant for three turns before automatically having its effects disabled.

Note: Can only be used thrice per battle
Note: Can only be Taught by Akasha

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✦ I'm not really a big fan of dormant genjutsu, but this one is very similar to the canon Sharingan Genjutsu Demonic Eye Illusion: Burning Paper Body ✦

(Calliandra no hōden) - Discharge of Calliandra
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Through the rapid conversion and release of chakra in addition to performance of a single hand seal user would affect any paper sheet that is spread out on the battlefield which would cause for paper needle like projectiles to be discharged in short range radius around the affected sheet. The size of each needle is fifteen (15) to thirty (30) centimeters and they are considerably thin which would allow for better and easier penetration of the entity/body which they are influencing. Their quick motion in addition to their size would affect ability of opponent as to observe their movement, giving out a blurred shadow as they are moving.

Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
Note: Must possess biography which can utilize Paper Ninjutsu
Note: Can only be Taught by Akasha

‡ Declined ‡ On second thoughts, I can't approve this. Considering how easily you can surround your opponent in paper (checked some of your customs), this would be unreasonable.

(Calliandra no hōden) - Discharge of Calliandra
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Through the rapid conversion and release of chakra in addition to performance of a single hand seal user would affect any paper sheet that is spread out on the battlefield which would cause for paper needle like projectiles to be discharged in short range radius around the affected sheet. The size of each needle is fifteen (15) to thirty (30) centimeters and they are considerably thin which would allow for better and easier penetration of the entity/body which they are influencing. Their quick motion in addition to their size would affect ability of opponent as to observe their movement, giving out a blurred shadow as they are moving.

Note: This jutsu can't be used on the paper upon which target is directly standing, everything around their body radius is usable
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Must possess biography which can utilize Paper Ninjutsu
Note: Can only be Taught by Akasha​

✦ Declined, I have to agree with NK. Your Paper jutsu make this jutsu far too exploitable. ✦

 

[Tsuki]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Rōdoran'nā Kuchiyose: Jio to Kiko) - Roadrunner Summon: Jio and Kiko
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user summons two roadrunners, each one of them having the height of an average shinobi. They both specialize in the usage of the wind element, however, only performs a rather restricted amount of jutsus within said element. Basically, self-restricting themselves. Amongst them, Jio likes to show others the greatness of wind so he'll only allow himself to perform S-Rank and A-Rank wind techniques (won't use Forbidden, B, C and D ranks). As for Kiko, he likes to show others the versatility of wind despite his jutsus of choice not being the greatest in rank so he'll only allow himself to perform A-Rank and B-Rank wind techniques (won't use Forbidden, S, C and D ranks). Both of them can perform those techniques without any hand seals whatsoever and can use their tail to perform techniques that require a Giant Fan. They are capable of performing any technique the user knows as long as it is within the ranking restriction previously stated. Besides their ability with elemental techniques, their movement and reaction speed is equal to the user's base movement and reaction speed. Each one of them can withstand B-Rank and below techniques. Unfortunately, due to their short wings, they can only fly/remain airborne for a duration of two turns. Lastly, they are distinguished by their ability to transform into two metallic spheres varying between the size of a basket ball and a tennis ball. While in this form, they can float and move mid-air however they want and can serve the purpose of delivering freeform damage or be used by their summoner to remain in the air and move from his/her airborne position by stepping/standing on one of them for evasive maneuvers. The transformation is triggered by the roadrunners (one of them or both at the same time) and would count as one of the user's 3 moves per turn.

Note: Can only be summoned once
Note: They remain on the field for 4 turns while in roadrunner form
Note: Techniques used by the roadrunners count towards the user's 3 moves per turn

✦ Declined, for one the bolded part needs to be edited. They need a constant speed, not something based on the user's speed as this causes it to vary greatly depending on who summons it. Their tracking will be the norm for their speed as well, so it doesn't need to be mentioned. Metallic spheres is also kind of iffy, but as it practically grants them the pseudo ability of flight as they can float and move anywhere and then you can have them transform back. ✦

(Rōdoran'nā Kuchiyose: Moofy to Pengin) - Roadrunner Summon: Moofy and Penguin
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user summons two roadrunners, each one of them having the height of an average shinobi. They both specialize in the usage of the water element, however, only performs a rather restricted amount of jutsus within said element. Basically, self-restricting themselves. Amongst them, Moofy likes to show others the greatness of water so he'll only allow himself to perform S-Rank and A-Rank water techniques (won't use Forbidden, B, C and D ranks). As for Penguin, he likes to show others the versatility of water despite his jutsus of choice not being the greatest in rank so he'll only allow himself to perform A-Rank and B-Rank water techniques (won't use Forbidden, S, C and D ranks). Both of them can perform those techniques without any hand seals whatsoever and without the need of any water source present on the terrain. They are capable of performing any technique the user knows as long as it is within the ranking restriction previously stated. Besides their ability with elemental techniques, their movement and reaction speed is equal to the user's base movement and reaction speed. Each one of them can withstand B-Rank and below techniques. Unfortunately, due to their short wings, they can only fly/remain airborne for a duration of two turns.

Note: Can only be summoned once
Note: They remain on the field for 4 turns
Note: Techniques used by the roadrunners count towards the user's 3 moves per turn

✦ Declined, without the need of a water source is a no. Remove that part and the same notice about speed and tracking applies for these as well. Another note for both summonings is this airborne thing. The contract says they cant stay in the air long, and 2 turns out of 4 turns is basically half their summoning life, which isnt a relatively short duration. ✦

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(Genjutsu: Hanbun Sora no Hai) - Illusionary Arts: Half Empty Grail
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user performs two hand seals, inducing the target in an illusion that disrupts the target's chakra system and the chakra within their brain. The sole purpose of this genjutsu is to cause the target and all of his/her senses to perceive that they no longer posses chakra within themselves. This does not include the consequences that a shinobi's body experiences when their chakra is exhausted (in our RP), which can hint the target that there is something out of the ordinary going on. They might be lead to resort to use a small weapon or other means to escape the illusion by inflicting minor harm to themselves (following release rules of genjutsu), allowing the user ample moments to attack. This is because Half Empty Grail prevents them from being capable of controlling their own chakra and chakra flow in reality due to them believing that they do not possess any of it, thus, preventing them from performing chakra-requiring techniques. This implies techniques such as a full body chakra surge, self illusionary techniques or control their chakra to perform "Illusion Technique: Release". Victims trapped by this genjutsu also have their sustained techniques from previous turns end because of losing chakra connection and control over them as a consequence of this illusion. A comparison to this can be that of a shinobi holding a sword with their hand and suddenly get trapped in an illusion where all their senses lead them to believe that their hand suddenly got amputated, making them lose control over their hand, which also makes them lose hold of the sword in reality. This only happens if they are the ones giving away their chakra to feed the ability/technique, not if said ability/technique is the one "absorbing" chakra from them. Half Empty Grail can only be performed thrice per conflict. It cannot be layered on or be layered on with other illusions.

‡ Declined ‡ The coloured doesn't make any sense to me. I also added a note.

‡ Declined ‡ This is just unreasonable when stacked with other things.

(Genjutsu: Hanbun Sora no Hai) - Illusionary Arts: Half Empty Grail
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user performs three hand seals, inducing the target in an illusion that disrupts the target's chakra system and the chakra within their brain. The sole purpose of this genjutsu is to cause the target and all of his/her senses to perceive that they no longer posses chakra within themselves. This does not include the consequences that a shinobi's body experiences when their chakra is exhausted (in our RP), which can hint the target that there is something out of the ordinary going on. They might be lead to resort to use a small weapon or other means to escape the illusion by inflicting minor harm to themselves (following release rules of genjutsu), allowing the user ample moments to attack. This is because Half Empty Grail prevents them from being capable of controlling their own chakra and chakra flow in reality due to them believing that they do not possess any of it, thus, preventing them from performing chakra-requiring techniques. This implies techniques such as a full body chakra surge, self illusionary techniques or control their chakra to perform "Illusion Technique: Release". Victims trapped by this genjutsu also have their sustained abilities/techniques from previous turns end/deactivate because of losing chakra connection and control over them as a consequence of this illusion. A comparison to this can be that of a shinobi holding a sword with their hand and suddenly get trapped in an illusion where all their senses lead them to believe that their hand suddenly got amputated, making them lose control over their hand, which also makes them lose hold of the sword in reality. This illusionary technique cannot be layered on or be layered on with other illusions. It also cannot be stacked with ninjutsu/fuinjutsu techniques that explicitly state in their description that they serve the purpose of partially or fully paralyzing the affected target (such as Chidori Nagashi, Killing Intent, Tongue Twister Seal, etc).

Note: Thrice per battle
Note: Cannot be taught to others

✦ Declined, I have to agree with NK. ✦

 

[Klad]

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Senkai: Mureiru! | Gyration: Come together!
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will take three out of his five stakced up frisbees on his back. Before he'll throw them in the air, the user must coat each frisbee with lightning chakra, thus increasing their cutting capabilities as well as their speed, thus having complete control over them. Afterwards, the user will hurl these three firsbees in a way, that they will form a levitating triangle (1m above the ground level); the tip (one firsbee) will lie 2 meters behind the enemy, whereas the other two will place themselves 2 meters before the enemy. Forming a lightning formation, as such, the user will manipulate the lightning in a way that the triangle made of frisbees will come close together, in fast speeds, in order to cut the target in two.

‡ Pending ‡ Leaving for Madara.
✦ Approved, though I don't really get what you're trying to say by "lightning formation"...if you mean just a triangular shape and you make the frisbees shoot inwards to cut through the opponent, then it's approved on that basis. If you mean something like channeling the lightning to form a triangular formation of lightning in between the frisbees, then it's not approved ✦

Genjutsu: Paranoia | Illusionary Arts: Paranoia
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: This type of genjutsu involves triggering a false inner self of the target. Disturbing their chakra flow, the user will pressure the target's mental state, that it comes down that they have beliefs they are being paranoid. The trapped person will mentally suffer all the consequences that this state of mind gives, such as being delunsional, having exaggerated self-importance, being aware of every single thing around, or even doubting their teammate intentions. So to say, the target will think he is under a full state of anxiety or fear, simply put, they will experience madness itself.

-Can only be used twice
-Can only be taught by Klad

‡ Declined ‡ While a cool idea, this goes beyond the limits of normal Genjutsu.

 

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(Genkotsu Kamakiri: Naibu Kiseihachi: Shin'nyū ) Mantis Fist: Glyptapanteles Phytometrae: Infestation
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30 (-5 on activation)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Allows for the user to implant a cluster of lighting chakra into the enemies body upon contact that will remain dormant until the desired. Upon the users desire a cluster, or clusters, can activate so as to afflict an enemy with their set ailment. Clusters can be utilised to create the standard sensations of pain, paralysation, or complete loss of feeling, and can even be utilised alongside other Mantis Fist techniques for more specific or specialised effects. While this technique has little application in battle, it can be utilised as a tool to force subservience. As with many Mantis Fist techniques, the user can utilise this on themselves should they so wish. (Standard pain is categorised as extreme yet momentary sharp pain that quickly fades but can, during it's duration, create openings in an opponent stature - especially if they're caught on unawares. Standard paralysation is like that which would be inflicted by many Lightning techniques, such as Chidori Nagashi, and loss of feeling is as if the nerve endings of a region have been completely severed. Pain lasts for the time it would take for a Kage to perform three hand seals, while paralysation/loss of feeling persists for two turns.) Cluster activation can be fatal depending on where situated, it's effects, and how many of them are, i.e, the user could strike an enemy on their temple to create a cluster that, on activation would release a paralysing wave across it's surrounding area, namely the brain, to induce serious paralysis, if not death. (One cluster to the head would cause paralysis severe enough to incapacitate a victim until they receive medical attention, two or more would lead to death.)
This technique is traditionally executed with the user jabbing at an opponent with one or two fingers to repeatedly poke them, with emphasis placed on speed and accuracy over power. Although, as with all Mantis Fist techniques the manner in which this technique may be used is both flexible and adaptable so that the user may always retain some degree of unpredictability and capitalise on any openings, such as utilising this technique discretely during a handshake and so on.

Note:
- Can only be used 3x.
- Can create up to four clusters per use, clusters can be activated one at a time or all at once at the cost of a passive expenditure of -5 chakra per activation set.
- Each strike can create on cluster, although a mantis fist user could easily deliver four strikes to the same vicinity in the time that it would take to perform one.

✦ Declined, I'm not approving a Mantis Fist jutsu where you can attack an opponent and have a delayed effect. ✦

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(Tairei: Nuno chūnyū) - Oversoul: Infinity Edge
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Infinity Edge is an extremely powerful technique that allows for the chakra augmented extension of dozens of threads and strings that storm out from around the users body and furiously assail anything within range. This technique was originally created to deter an opponent who may be more well versed in martial arts than the user from entering short range; but the storm of chakra enhanced threads are also capable of defending the user from various elemental techniques of equal rank as they slice matter to shreds and repel the remains. In it's wake this technique leaves deep scars in the ground while also altering the terrain near the user, such as felling trees, shredding rock formations and so on.

Note:
- Can only be used 3x.
- No Oversoul techniques above A rank for the rest of, and the next turn.
- Three turn cool down between uses.

✦ Declined, this hardly needs to be S rank, and 3 usages for an S rank is too many anyway. ✦

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(Genkotsu Kamakiri: Naibu Kiseihachi: Shin'nyū ) Mantis Fist: Glyptapanteles Phytometrae: Infestation
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30 (-5 on activation)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Allows for the user to implant a cluster of lighting chakra into the enemies body upon contact that will remain dormant until activated. Upon activation a cluster, or clusters, can disperse so as to afflict an enemy with their set ailment. Clusters can be utilised to create the standard sensations of pain, paralysation, or complete loss of feeling, and can even be utilised alongside other Mantis Fist techniques for more specific or specialised effects. While this technique has little application in battle, it can be utilised as a tool to force subservience. As with many Mantis Fist techniques, the user can utilise this on themselves should they so wish. (Standard pain is categorised as extreme yet momentary sharp pain that quickly fades but can, during it's duration, create openings in an opponent stature - especially if they're caught on unawares. Standard paralysation is like that which would be inflicted by many Lightning techniques, such as Chidori Nagashi, and loss of feeling is as if the nerve endings of a region have been completely severed. Pain lasts for the time it would take for a Kage to perform three hand seals, while paralysation/loss of feeling persists for two turns.) Cluster activation can be fatal depending on where situated, it's effects, and how many of them are, i.e, the user could strike an enemy on their temple to create a cluster that, on activation would release a paralysing wave across it's surrounding area, namely the brain, to induce serious paralysis, if not death. (One cluster to the head would cause paralysis severe enough to incapacitate a victim until they receive medical attention, two or more would lead to death.)
This technique is traditionally executed with the user jabbing at an opponent with one or two fingers to repeatedly poke them, with emphasis placed on speed and accuracy over power. Although, as with all Mantis Fist techniques the manner in which this technique may be used is both flexible and adaptable so that the user may always retain some degree of unpredictability and capitalise on any openings, such as utilising this technique discretely during a handshake and so on.
Clusters can be activated by the user coming into direct contact with an infected target again. The user need not touch the same spot that was previously targeted, but instead merely needs to come into contact with the opponents body or clothing. In the case of self-infection Clusters can be activated at will.

Note:
- Can only be used 3x.
- Can create up to four clusters per use, clusters can be activated one at a time or all at once at the cost of a passive expenditure of -5 chakra per activation set.
- Each strike can create on cluster, although a mantis fist user could easily deliver four strikes to the same vicinity in the time that it would take to perform one.

✦ Declined, "until desired" and "until activated" is the same thing. You only made this activated in a different delayed way instead of auto activating. And why would you, for example, hitting someone's foot originally allow you to activate it by hitting their hand next time? ✦

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(Tairei: Nuno chūnyū) - Oversoul: Infinity Edge
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40 (-10 per turn)
Damage: 80
Description: Infinity Edge is an extremely powerful technique that allows for the chakra augmented extension of hundreds of threads and strings that storm out from around the users body and furiously assail anything within range. This technique was originally created to deter an opponent who may be more well versed in martial arts than the user from entering short range; but the storm of chakra enhanced threads are also capable of defending the user from various elemental techniques of equal rank as they slice matter to shreds and repel the remains. In it's wake this technique leaves deep scars in the ground while also altering the terrain near the user, such as felling trees, shredding rock formations and so on. Due to the quantity, minute size and speed in which the released threads move at it is virtually impossible to accurately discern the attack pattern of every thread, much less a single one, and as such enemies faced with this technique are generally forced to either back out of short range or have to produce an adequate defence to protect from being subjected to an onslaught of potentially fatal cuts. The user is also capable of sustaining this technique for several turns provided that the technique is not overcome, making it particularly effective at stalling out Taijutsu enhancing modes, however in doing so they become limited to solely using Oversoul techniques.

Note:
- Can only be used 2x.
- No Oversoul techniques above A rank for the rest of, and the next turn.
- Three turn cool down between uses.

✦ Declined, I'm still not convinced this should be S rank. I see that you tried to justify it's rank by adding to it but this is practically just a oversoul version of Chidori Nagashi that you're trying to buff to be able to defeat same rank elemental attacks, I also assume a way to release A rank and below Genjutsus. It's only able to play on the same level as elemental attacks if it is imbibed with elemental chakra. Raw chakra into the cloths will always be weak to same rank ninjutsu. You also make it seem if it can be used indefinitely if 10 chakra is spent per turn, another no. It needs a limit on how many times it can be used AND for how long. 2 usages is fine if you're so adamant on it being S rank, but it still needs a turn limit. ✦
‡ Both Pending ‡ Leaving for Madara.

Raiton: Zeusu Takumi no Waza | Lightning Release: Zeus' Craftsmanship
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Calling on concepts from 'Four Pillar Bind' and 'Lightning Blades Levitation', this technique allows the user to perform two hand seals and send Lightning chakra into the ground to carve out multiple shapes of rock through the careful administration of the destructive properties of lightning. Various shapes can be crafted, ranging from walls, cubes and pillars to spikes and even crude weapons. The shapes, filled to the brim and coated with lightning chakra, can be manipulated to violently rise from the ground, guided into a desired position, and can even be made to levitate mid-air. Upon creation the shapes will, acting as conductors and amplifiers for the lightning chakra, release multiple bolts of lightning that dance from one shape to the next at rapid speeds and repeatedly shock anything caught within their formation. Meanwhile the created shapes pose the threat of crushing, smashing into, or stabbing through anything caught within their path. The created shapes can be of a large enough scale to impale and completely incapacitate a large summoning such as Gamabunta. However they can also be created in far smaller sizes for the sake of releasing smaller, yet far more potent lightning bolts. In the case of the creation of but a single shape, lightning will radiate out from around the rock forming a perimeter of electricity that will cover twice the area of that which the rock covers.

Note:
- Can only be used 2x
- No Lightning techniques above A rank in the user's next turn
- Can only be taught by Scaze

‡ Approved ‡

 

[Detective L]

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( Genjutsu/Ninjutsu: Surairakūn ) Illusion Arts/Ninja Arts: The Sly Raccoon
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A rank
Range: Short - Long range
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: An unorthodox technique which combines both a simple Ninjutsu technique, and a Genjutsu technique. Without the need for hand seals, the user will place a simple Genjutsu on the opponent. The illusion is triggered once the opponent comes into close range of the user. The illusion would serve its purpose once the opponent would strike the user of the technique. The user would use the substitution technique, and displace his body with that of a nearby object, however, the opponent would be unaware, and see that they had in actuality struck the user of the technique. The user would then be affected by whatever the opponent had used on him, in the illusion but in reality, would have ample time counter-attack whilst the opponent is distracted. After being affected by the technique the opponent had used, the user, in the illusion, would explode and splatter blood all over the opponent and cloud their vision.

Notes:

-Can only be taught by Detective L.
-Can only be used 2 times per fight.
-No Genjutsu in the same turn, and no Genjutsu above S rank in the next turn.

‡ Declined ‡ I believe Priest tried something like this in the past.

 

[Kirikoe]

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(Bakuton - Funshutsu Ken) Blast Release - Erupting fist
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: short
Chakra: 30 (+5 per turn)
Damage: +20 to physical based tai
Description:The user focuses their blast chakra into their limbs which can be augmented together with regular taijutsu, upon contact with anything the user touches they can release a small localised focused blast, unlike the landmine fist it lacks power however it does very much increase the users power in taijutsu, creating a small focused blast that packs a bludgeoning impact and can cause light burns , complimenting the users taijutsu greatly, the blasts released are very small and very pinpoint, due to this chakra control needed it causes the technique to be a high ranking technique.

The user whiles under the effects of this empowerment can strike through earth based structures of high rank aided by there taijutsu as the focused blast spreads through the earth based structure like ripples causing it to break apart in the process. The user however can only use Blast Release techniques along with earth and lightning which make up the element and non elemental techniques such as tai, nin, gen and ken while this is active.

- Lasts for three turns
- Can only be used twice per battle

‡ Approved ‡

(Bakuton - Ningen bakudan) Blast Release - Human Bomb
Type: Offensive|Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user focuses bakuton chakra around there body and with a burst focuses this chakra out of every pour, creating an outward explosion from the user which has a 360 degree radius travelling around him, above him and below him, the explosion will cause a crater beneath the user as the explosion destroys the very earth he is standing on due to its omni-directional blast. The explosion encompasses the entirety of short range around the user, this explosion can cause burns and internal damage from the shockwaves released.

- Can only be used 2 times per battle
- Must wait 2 turns between usage
- No S-Rank or above Blast in the user's next turn

‡ Approved ‡

(Fuuton - Taifū būmu]Wind Release - Typhoon Boom
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user jumps up and performs a front somersault, extending there leg as they make a full rotation, similar to the taijutsu technique leaf flash kick, however, as the user jumps and rotates they will channel wind chakra into either leg, and upon bring the heel kick down manifest the wind around the leg as a large, narrow, solid tornado due to its high pressurised state, which extends out to long range which slams down into the earth or the opponent.

The tornado deals both impact bludgeoning damage along with tearing and cutting damage and has the power cause cracks and fractures in the earth.

- Can only be used three times per battle
- Must wait two a turn between usage
- No wind techniques above S rank in the same turn

‡ Declined ‡ What makes this any different from Hardliner Gale?

 

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(Hebi Senpo: Sukēru Bakudan) - Snake Sage Arts: Scale Bomb
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user does the snake sign and starts gathering their senchakra into their hands. In their hands the user creates a ball of snake scales that is filled inside with snake acid/venom infused with senchakra. The user will than grow it to the size of Chō Ōdama Rasengan. The user will than either throw it or slam it against the opponent. When the opponent gets hits with it the scale first burst out and cut the opponent all over the body. The acid/venom will that hit the opponent burning their skin and getting into their cuts. The venom will than get into the opponents body through the cuts and start to cause paralysis to the opponent after being expose to it for 2 turns. If the user has a snake summoning out the user can be on top of the snake's head and channel his chakra into the snake and have the snake create the ball and release it from its mouth.
Note: Usable 2 times a battle
Note: Must know Snake Sage Mode
Note: Cant use any other SM jutsus the same turn as this

‡ Declined ‡ Poor wording and no to the usage of using this through summons.

 

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Pitohui Geijutsu: Iyemoja no hōyō - Pitohui Arts: Embrace of Iyemoja
Type: Defense/Offense
Rank: S
Range: Close
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user claps, summons from Modakeke and clad his entire body in pitohui feathers. This feathers are light though thick as steel and able to tank B-rank and below techniques without notable effect though can be canceled out completely by A-rank elemental attack which would prompt the feathers to poof back to Modakeke. However their beauty lies in their complete immunity to pure taijutsu and in their own counter attack. If for example, an opponent tries to punch the user the feather can open up and form hard scales able to shave, pierce and impale the target's hands and because they are cursed with neurotoxins, they discharge mild toxins into the open wound of the target causing paralysis. More potent and lethal dose of toxins can be administered through a direct hit from the user's attack while wearing the feathers. The damage that would be recieved from this goes beyond total body paralysis as the target is prone to blood poisoning and lastly heart failure if the toxin is not removed in 2 turns.
NOTE: Although the user still would be pushed by the force of the attack even if he receives no damage from them.
NOTE: Usable once per battle
NOTE: Last 4 turns
NOTE: No forbidden rank Ninjutsu(pure) while wearing the feathers.

‡ Declined ‡ The poison effect is far too much.

Pitohui Kuchyosei: Afuape no Tsuin - Pitohui Summoning: Afuwape Twins
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user rubs blood across his Pitohui tattoo or does the summoning handseal then presses his palms on a surface or claps to execute the summoning.
The Afuape twins, Atukpa and Ewedu are a pair of pure black Hooded Pitohuis who are very powwerful and special amongst the ranks of Hooded Pitohui warriors. They can be either summoned together as a pair or separately, though summoning them as a pair boost their power and will thus a +10 damage to their ninjutsu.

Atukpa
She is entirely colored black though her color changes to pure brown whenever she uses her signature jutsu. The 50m sized Pitohui is an earth specialist able to use earth techniques that her summoner knows upto S-rank and what she only needs to perform them is her to be in contact with the earth or through the flap of her wings should she be not in contact with earth(If the earth jutsu does not require a contact with earth).
Atukpa's signature ninjutsu however is her ability to turn her entire self into mud. Although she is prone to lightning, she is able to morph into any shape, extend her body, pass through intricate obstacles, harden herself at will and can be immune to physical attacks as they would just pass through her.
Like every other Pitohuis, Atukpa possesses an equally lethal amount of neurotoxins on her body giving a paralysing effect to her physical attacks.

Ewedu
Like her sister, he is also black, same sized, however a distinguishing feature he posseses is a longer hooded tendril above his head. Ewedu is a Lightning specialist able to use lightning techniques that the summoner knows up to S-rank and what he only needs to perform them is to flap his wings instead of handseals. His special ability is particularly utilized upon his summon into and when he leaves the battle field. Unlike his sister who appears and leaves in a cloud of purple smoke, Ewedu's appearance comes like a harmless translucent pop. The pop is actually a harmless barrier that instantly spread across the entire battle field. The barrier however comprises of Ewedu's lightning chakra and its composed of electromagnetic pulse. In this barrier, Nobody except Ewedu is able to use lightning jutsu. Lightning technique above S-rank however can overcome the subduction of the barrier thus the barrier does not affect Forbidden rank lightning jutsus. This barrier last until Ewedu leaves the battlefield. His leaving the battle field deactivates the Electromagnetic barrier and with the same pop sound, erects another one which last for only 3 turns. This barrier is composed and supersaturated with static electric charges. This does not hinder anyone trapped in the barrier from using lightning, albeit the reverse. Static electricity lingers and would pose a threat when there is too much friction causing a quick phenomenon called electricity by induction. this affects mostly those who runs at immense speed, because they work against air resistance, they create air friction which inturns cause the static electricity around to gather around them and generate electricity which would shock them. Lightning technique used in this barrier is faster than normal and using any kind of water jutsu in the barrier would cause conduction of the static electricity and immediate electrocution. Electocution due to air friction or water usage is A-rank.

NOTE: The twins can only be summoned once except if they are summoned separately, then the summoning can be used twice.
NOTE: Due to Ewedu"s special ability, summoning count as two moves
NOTE: The barrier erected when Ewedu leaves the field of play also counts as a move.
NOTE: They last for 4 turns on the field of play.

‡ Declined ‡ Shorten this.



Pitohui Kuchyosei: Owanbe - Pitohui Summoning: Owambe
Type: Suplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user smears blood on the Hooded Pitohui tattoo, claps or slams his hand on a surface to summon Owambe. Owambe is a very small pitohui, size of small akamaru and can be carried on the summoners head. She has no power whatsoever nor can she use any ninjutsu by herself. However with her on the field of play, every other hooded pitohui in Modakeke, has a special link to her that makes it so that with her on the field, their morale and will to protect her and her summoner becomes tripled thus they develop an extra saturation of toxin on their entity. This makes them instead of appearing an disappearing in a cloud of smoke, the cloud of smoke is replaced by a cloud of purple neurotoxin gas. The potency of the cloud of toxin depends on the level of the hooded pitohui that is summoned or sent back. If the hooded pitohui summoned while Owanbe is on the field is B-rank, the level of damage the neurotoxin does to anyone apart from the summoner and Owambe would be equivalent to B-rank damage.
NOTE: Owambe can only be summoned once but can be on the battle field until the summoner sends her back, not just because she is a harmless bird, but because she needs cudling and likes being a domestic pet.
NOTE: Once summoned though, only one other Pitohui can be in play while she is on the field

‡ Declined ‡ I didn't mean it was simply overpowered for an E-Rank. It's just overpowered in general. It needs to be toned down in some way.

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Pitohui Geijutsu: Iyemoja no hōyō - Pitohui Arts: Embrace of Iyemoja
Type: Defense/Offense
Rank: S
Range: Close
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user claps, summons from Modakeke and clad his entire body in pitohui feathers. This feathers are light though thick as steel and able to tank B-rank and below techniques without notable effect though can be canceled out completely by A-rank elemental attack which would prompt the feathers to poof back to Modakeke. However their beauty lies in their complete immunity to pure taijutsu and in their own counter attack. If for example, an opponent tries to punch the user the feather can open up and form hard scales able to shave, pierce and impale the target's hands and because they are cursed with neurotoxins, they discharge mild toxins into the open wound of the target causing paralysis. More potent and lethal dose of toxins can be administered through a direct hit from the user's attack while wearing the feathers. The damage that would be recieved from this goes beyond total body paralysis as the target is prone to blood poisoning which could lead to neuro disfunction and cause the target to be unable to mold A-rank jutsus and above for 2 turns likewise totally rendering them unable to conjure jutsu that requires advance chakra control like genjutsu and fuinjutsu for 2 turns.
NOTE: Although the user still would be pushed by the force of the attack even if he receives no damage from them.
NOTE: Usable once per battle
NOTE: Last 4 turns
NOTE: No forbidden rank Ninjutsu(pure) while wearing the feathers.

✦ Declined, pick either no A rank jutsu and above or no advanced chakra control jutsu. Not both. ✦

Pitohui Kuchyosei: Afuape no Tsuin - Pitohui Summoning: Afuwape Twins
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user rubs blood across his Pitohui tattoo or does the summoning handseal then presses his palms on a surface or claps to execute the summoning.
The Afuape twins, Atukpa and Ewedu are a pair of pure black Hooded Pitohuis who are very powerful and special amongst the ranks of Hooded Pitohui warriors. They can be either summoned together as a pair or separately, though summoning them as a pair boost their power and will thus a +10 damage to their ninjutsu.

Atukpa
She is entirely colored black though her color changes to pure brown whenever she uses her signature jutsu. The 50m sized Pitohui is an earth specialist able to use earth techniques that her summoner knows upto S-rank and what she only needs to perform them is her to be in contact with the earth or through the flap of her wings should she be not in contact with earth(If the earth jutsu does not require a contact with earth).
Atukpa's signature ninjutsu however is her ability to turn her entire self into mud. Although she is prone to lightning, she is able to morph into any shape, extend her body, pass through intricate obstacles, harden herself at will and can be immune to physical attacks as they would just pass through her.
Like every other Pitohuis, Atukpa possesses an equally lethal amount of neurotoxins on her body giving a paralysing effect to her physical attacks.

Ewedu
Like his sister, he is also black, same sized, however a distinguishing feature he posseses is a longer hooded tendril above his head. Ewedu is a Lightning specialist able to use lightning techniques that the summoner knows up to A-rank and what he only needs to perform them is to flap his wings instead of handseals. His special ability is particularly utilized upon his summon into and when he leaves the battle field. Unlike his sister who appears and leaves in a cloud of purple smoke, Ewedu's appearance comes like a harmless translucent pop. The pop is actually a harmless barrier that instantly spread across the entire battle field. The barrier however comprises of Ewedu's lightning chakra and its composed of electromagnetic pulse. In this barrier, Nobody except Ewedu is able to use lightning jutsu. Lightning technique above S-rank however can overcome the subduction of the barrier thus the barrier does not affect Forbidden rank lightning jutsus. This barrier last until Ewedu leaves the battlefield. His leaving the battle field deactivates the Electromagnetic barrier and with the same pop sound, erects another one which last for only 2 turns. This barrier is composed and supersaturated with static electric charges. This does not hinder anyone trapped in the barrier from using lightning, albeit the reverse. Static electricity lingers and would pose a threat when there is too much friction causing a quick phenomenon called electricity by induction. this affects mostly those who runs at immense speed, because they work against air resistance, they create air friction which inturns cause the static electricity around to gather around them and generate electricity which would shock them. Lightning technique used in this barrier is faster than normal and using any kind of water jutsu in the barrier would cause conduction of the static electricity and immediate electrocution. Electocution due to air friction or water usage is A-rank.

NOTE: The twins can only be summoned once except if they are summoned separately, then the summoning can be used twice.
NOTE: Due to Ewedu"s special ability, summoning count as two moves
NOTE: The barrier erected when Ewedu leaves the field of play also counts as a move.
NOTE: They last for 4 turns on the field of play.

✦ Declined, once again, shorten this. You actually seem to have made it longer....✦

Pitohui Kuchyosei: Owanbe - Pitohui Summoning: Owambe
Type: Suplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user smears blood on the Hooded Pitohui tattoo, claps or slams his hand on a surface to summon Owambe. Owambe is a very small pitohui, size of small akamaru and can be carried on the summoners head. She has no power whatsoever nor can she use any ninjutsu by herself. However with her on the field of play, every other hooded pitohui in Modakeke, has a special link to her that makes it so that with her on the field, their morale and will to protect her and her summoner becomes tripled thus they develop an extra saturation of toxin on their entity. This makes them instead of appearing an disappearing in a cloud of smoke, the cloud of smoke is replaced by a cloud of purple neurotoxin gas. The potency of the cloud of toxin depends on the level of the hooded pitohui that is summoned or sent back. If the hooded pitohui summoned while Owanbe is on the field is B-rank, the level of damage the neurotoxin does to anyone apart from the summoner and Owambe would be equivalent to B-rank damage. However, the damage that would be caused is not lethal, B-rank summoning: Paralysis for 2 turns, A-rank: Paralysis for 3 turns: S-rank summoning: Paralysis for 3 turns with extremely itchy skin + slight respiratory problems. Regardless of rank, prolonged contact/inhalation of the toxin i.e, if the target does not get out of the fume for 2 turns, he would pass out.
NOTE: Owambe can only be summoned once but can be on the battle field until the summoner sends her back, not just because she is a harmless bird, but because she needs cudling and likes being a domestic pet.
NOTE: Once summoned though, only one other Pitohui can be in play at a time while she is on the field

✦ Declined, how does she have no power when her power is to enhance other Pitohui? She needs a usage duration limit just like any other summoning with an ability. Also, this poison isnt going to cause paralysis for 2 turns as well as make them pass out if they dont leave the mist in 2 turns, one or the other. And something else; it says that if the summoning on the field is B rank, then this would cause B rank damage, implying the damage would rise if used by an A or S rank summoning. That's another no, it should be B rank all around. ✦

 

[Axle]

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(Suiton: Mizu sōsā): Water Release - Water Saucers
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30 (-5 per turn & -5 to increase/decrease size)
Damage: 60 (+10 if increased, -10 if size is reduced)
Description: By utilizing the moister in the air, the user will materialize up to two saucers made of water, one in each hand 22 inch in diameter by 1/2 inch thick. The user will then throw the saucers or mentally manipulate them to be released. Once released/thrown, the saucer's trajectory can be controlled through mental commands or body gestures. By utilizing the moister in the air, the user can materialize water around the saucer(s) to increase their size, up to five meters in diameter and 1 inch thick. This will naturally slow down the speed of the projectile(s) compared to a thrown rock. The user can also compress the saucer instead and decrease it in size, equalling to 11 inches in diameter by 1/4 inch thick, naturally increasing their speed to a full fledged traveling arrow. The natural un-enhanced speed of the saucers are equal to the average water bullet techniques. The user has the liberty of increasing or decreasing the saucers individually, or as a pair. The saucer's edges are highly condensed and sharp, able to slice through things with ease within reason.

- Can be used four times per battle
- User is restricted to Water-Style techniques or non-elemental so long as they don't require hand signs whilst active.

‡ Declined ‡ Similar techniques exist and too much detail tbh.

(Fuuinjutsu - Atarashī sekai no hōsoku ): Sealing Technique - Law of the New World
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 40 (-80 if the user subsitutes the opponent instead of himself)
Damage: 0 (-20 to user for each time he uses it)
Description: The user places a seal on their weapon and it must be in the user's biography. The user seals one of their elements or genjtutsu away, meaning that by the user sealing away either one of their 5 basic elements, the user can use an advanced version of the substitution technique. By using the same principle of the substitution technique. The user can perfect the technique and can trade places with any object on the battlefield as long as both targets are within mid-range of the user. The user only needs to say "Law" which activates the law, upon activation, chakra is visible around the battlefield indicating the limit of the technique. The user can use the technique before the chakra is fully expanded when visible. In order to abide by the law, the user must give up one element for the remainder of the battle. After the user says "World" the chakra is immediately dispersed across the battlefield. After which, the user doesn't even after to look at the opponent in order to swich him with another object, including the user. Once done, the technique cannot be used for 2 more turns for exhaustion. In the same turn as the switch, the user cannot use another Forbidden technique.
Note: Can only be used 4 times per match
Note: Must know Fuuinjutsu
Note: The user must give up one of the 5 basic elements

‡ Declined ‡ What you seal away and what you gain are completely unrelated. This is basically an unrestricted version of FTG. DNR.

(Fuuin: Tōritsu doragonsureiyāmajikku) - Sealing art: Inverted Dragon Slayer Magic
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: (+15 for each elemental combination)
Description: This technique is the sister sealing of Dragon Slayer Magic. By using another set of seals in the user's mouth/throat, the user can use one of the 5 basic elements to combine with an attack that is launched from the user's mouth. There are 5 seals, each seal is stocked with one of the 5 basic elements.
Note: This technique can be used 5 times per match (applies to the sealings in general and not individually)
Note: No Fuuinjutsu in the next turn

‡ Declined ‡ You can't make variants of techniques that belong to other people.

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[Method]

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(Akuma Homura:Uroko no Ronové)Satan's Flame: Scales of Ronové
Type: Defensive
Rank: C-A
Range:Short
Chakra: 15-30
Damage: N/A
Description:
A defensive technique of Satan’s Flame in which the user will apply to practice the style into a more defensive technique. The user will channel his/her chakra to any point in the user’s body prior to impact with a target, physically or with a weapon. The user will release a large or even a small amount of chakra at this point, and create a burst of fire in order to cushion the attack. The user can keep this technique active by flowing his/her fire chakra through the body , allowing them to counter over taijutsu or kenjutsu based techniques.

*Can be used twice per battle*
*Lasts up to two turns on each usage*
*The burst and defensive power of the burst of fire is determined on how much chakra is used, abling them to stop up to A-rank Kenjutsu or Taijutsu(elemental S&W applies)*

✦ Declined, burst of energy to cushion a matter based attack? =/ you're basically saying that you can release a burst of fire from a point on your body to "cushion" a blow from any matter based attack up to A rank. This in itself, releasing bursts of fire from the body to intercept an attack, has been done before, notably with Pervy Sage's Power of the Dragon Fire jutsu. ✦

(Akuma Homura: Baalberith no Maboroshishou)Satan's Flame: Baalberith's Phantom Phase
Type: Defensive
Rank: B Ranked
Range:Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description:
A defensive technique of Satan’s Flame in which the user will apply to practice the style into a more defensive technique. The user will channel a massive amount of chakra into their feet, and will run towards an enemy attack. The user will then channel chakra into their entire body, mimicking the Hozuki’s Hydration Technique and allowing physical attacks to phase through the user. The user can use it a more specific locations in the body, allowing them to easily counter more difficult attacks.

*Can only be used once every two turns after usage*
*Protects the user up to B-rank Taijutsu, Kejutsu, Free Form Weapons*

✦ Declined, this is basically Hasashi's Meramera mode, DNR ✦

Meiton:Hadesu no tsubasa | Dark Release:Wings of Hades
Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 30 +5
Damage: 60
Description: To perform this jutsu the user is required to absorb a technique using the "Inhaling Maw" technique. The rank of this technique requires the user to store chakra of at least A Rank. The chakra is stored within a separate part of the user, not mixing with their main chakra network. Unlike combination techniques that require the user to sacrifice two moves to perform, the user is able to utilize both in a single move. This is due to the user practically having two separate "storages" of chakra to channel chakra across.
The user releases their dark chakra & channels it across their back, manipulating the shape to take on the form of dark purple wings filled with shades of black. The wings are made purely of dark chakra condensed together.

Dark | Simply using Dark chakra alone allows the user to motion the wings to wrap around the user creating a shield around the them. This protects the user from certain attacks following the element advantages of the release ability. The size of the wings are enough to either cover the upper half of the body, or the entire body if crouching down.

Wind | The user channels chakra across the wings, creating a coat of wind which works alongside the wings. The Dark chakra begins to flap back & forth while the wind, spreads out, augmenting the wings power & speed, granting the user flight. Due to the force applied by the wind, faint gusts are created within short range, deflecting small projectiles of sorts.

Fire | Following a similar pattern to the Wind element, the user channels their chakra across the wings. The wings begin to flap back & forth & as they do a flame appears across them. The flame releases a blaze of fire while the wings flap, spreading out short range all around the user. The flame deals direct damage to anyone within short range, burning them on contact & is used more so to keep the opponent from closing in on the target.

-The elements are self sustaining, allowing them to stay active without assistance for 3 turns. The user can perform "Inhaling Maw" on an B rank technique to prolong the effects of the wings by two turns
- Only a combination of Wind & Dark release can grant the user flight
- Must pay an additional 5 chakra each turn of use.
- Taught by Method

✦ Pending, will get someone else to look at this, Dark jutsu isnt my forte. ✦

Declined
I don't want to completely DNR this idea, but my biggest issue with this is the existence of a second chakra network. If I remember correctly, I don't believe that there's anyone in Naruto that has a second chakra network. Something like that would require surgery, and even then, I don't think that medical ninjutsu has the ability to do that. So if you could prove that it is logically possible to have a second chakra network, then do resubmit, otherwise, I'm sure this likely wouldn't work at all.

 

[Akuma]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Nidhoggr √ Warudoumei ) ≈ Draco Summoning Technique: Nidhogg √ Malice Sriker
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: Nidhogg is a dark gray skin colored Draco with green eyes and green wing-like membranes. Nidhogg prides itself in it's ground based and fighting style, being a Taijutsu specialist. It's length reaches up to two and a half meters, with it's tail alone being almost as long as it's body which can hit/whip people with great force ( B rank ). It stands slightly taller than an adult human and can use Taijutsu (Kaito's too if the user knows it) up to A rank and can even hold/wield weapons (though it can't use elemental taijutsu). While moving on four legs it moves as fast as a taijutsu specialist, while moving as fast as lee without weights while running (it's movements attacks are still trackable by tai specialist). It's hard skin can protect it from basic damage of C rank tai and lower. Nidhogg has a personal taijutsu technique from which it earns the name "Malice Striker" it coils it's tail around the opponent's neck and delivers two punches charged with chakra into the target's gut. Once the wind is knocked out of them, he leaps into the sky with them in his grip and entangles his tail around their limbs/body while spinning facing the ground. Smashing the target head-first into the ground while jumping away at the last second (Much like Lee's technique) with the damage of A rank tai. And it's capable of speech like other summonings.
≈ Can only be summoned twice (with 2 turns interval)
≈ Remains four turns on the field, three the second time.
≈ Taijutsu techniques used count to the user's three jutsu.

‡ Declined ‡ I see what you're going for but a summon as fast as a Taijutsu specialist without weights? I'm not going to allow that.

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(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Nidhoggr √ Warudoumei ) ≈ Draco Summoning Technique: Nidhogg √ Malice Sriker
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: Nidhogg is a dark gray skin colored Draco with green eyes and green wing-like membranes. Nidhogg prides itself in it's ground based and fighting style, being a Taijutsu specialist. It's length reaches up to two and a half meters, with it's tail alone being almost as long as it's body which can hit/whip people with great force ( B rank ). It stands slightly taller than an adult human and can use Taijutsu (Kaito's too if the user knows it) up to A rank and can even hold/wield weapons (though it can't use elemental taijutsu). While moving on four legs it moves as fast as a taijutsu specialist, while moving as fast as a Taijutsu master while running and both four and two legs (it's movements attacks are still trackable by tai specialist). It's hard skin can protect it from basic damage of C rank tai and lower. Nidhogg has a personal taijutsu technique from which it earns the name "Malice Striker" it coils it's tail around the opponent's neck and delivers two punches charged with chakra into the target's gut. Once the wind is knocked out of them, he leaps into the sky with them in his grip and entangles his tail around their limbs/body while spinning facing the ground. Smashing the target head-first into the ground while jumping away at the last second (Much like Lee's technique) with the damage of A rank tai. And it's capable of speech like other summonings.
≈ Can only be summoned twice (with 2 turns interval)
≈ Remains four turns on the field, three the second time.
≈ Taijutsu techniques used count to the user's three jutsu.

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✦ Approved, edited the speed part. References to the speed chart technically aren't allowed. ✦

(Shin Fo-ji Furu) √ Daken's Forged Tools
Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30 (-10 per turn if active)
Damage: 60
Description: The user can turn bone into tools, objects, weapons and other items, create shuriken, chains, shields, etc. and/or create structures/buildings of varying permanence directly from the ground. Users who have mastered this ability can use it for almost any situation, creating anything they need. One can create any item they have seen or can imagine and have a good idea how it functions. The constructs much like any other Shikotsumyaku technique, have steel hardness and like-wise weapons are very sharp. If the user is in contact with the object they can freely re-shape it without counting as another move once per use of this technique. However only applies if the object has been within their possession since being made.
- Can only be used x5 per battle.

✦ Declined, collides with way too many Kaguya customs to allow and has been done before. I think Jax has this in a simpler form. ✦

(Shujou Shidousha Kobushi) § Celestial Emperor's Scorching Fist
Type: Offensive/Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra: 50 (-15 users hands)
Damage: 90
Description: A technique favored by the masters of Strong Fist. The user releases a large amount of chakra from their entire body and aims it into a single area, such amount of energy will manifest like a large cloud around the caster with such power that it emits a decent amount of heat, enough for the user to sweat briefly. The entire energy is pooled into both hands which at this point emit a bright orange light before the user attempts to land a double-fisted attack onto the target's body (commonly the torso). Upon impact, the chakra which has gained burning properties from being so tense will be released in a wave through the target's body. Severely burning their insides and scorching the outer skin layer. The opponent is sent sprawling through the air due to the momentum of the attack and force of the release. The technique's power is of such magnitude that it even without contact with a surface, the user can thrust it into the air and release the gathered chakra reserve as an orange pillar of energy through the air, reaching a considerable distance without losing strength and playing equally against elemental jutsu of equal rank. A master of Kaito's Taijutsu or EIG can use the technique with a single hand, without splitting the power through both hands (as regular users take more damage, thus using both hands). When the technique is used ranged, both fists are put side by side to release a single pillar of chakra.
Can only be used once per battle.
Mastery of basic Taijutsu is required to use.
The user's arms are burned from the usage, being unable to form more than 3 handseals for the next four turns.
Cannot use any S rank or higher Taijutsu next five turns and the user's taijutsu lose -10 damage during this time.

✦ Declined, collides with too many Taijutsu customs that create waves of energy upon impact that does practically what you wrote here (notably, Zatoichi Taijutsu and Kiyoshi jutsu used in taijutsu blows. ✦

 

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Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Nezumi Shuhō: Sesshi Gantoretto) Rat Technique: Incisor Gauntlets
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user summons two giant rat incisors over each arm that are as wide as the user's body when put together, and span from two inches in front of the users fist, over his forearm and up to his elbow. Since the enamel of a rat's incisors is harder than Steel and platinum, the gauntlets allows to user to smash through techniques of custom elements such as aluminum, steel, and earth techniques of the same rank or below by punching at the incoming technique and utilizing the natural gnawing power of the rats. The incisors can also be used to block previously listed attacks of the same rank or below, but will crumble if hit with one of those techniques of higher rank. When used to attack an opponent it would cause serious crushing damage to them, dealing blunt force trauma and possibly internal bleeding. The can also be used in a defensive measure to block or stop incoming techniques, by simply holding the gauntlets together in front of him. While the gauntlets are active the user is unable to use other techniques tied to the Nezumi contract, but they can also be dissolved when the user chooses.
~Must sign the rat contact to use.
~Can only be used twice per battle.
~Lasts for three turns before dissolving.

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✦ Declined, rat enamel is harder than iron and platinum indeed, but steel's hardness varies on the Mohs scale from 4 to 8. Also, a human's enamel is roughly a 5 on the Mohs scale yet Iron, a 4.5, is able to break a tooth with enough pressure, same as in the case of a rat's incisor. Their jaws is what allows them to pressure to break and bite through things, not the strength of the enamel itself. Rat enamel is 5.5 meaning anything higher would break it and anything with enough force would likewise do the same. Now on to the actual jutsu. You summon rat teeth over your hands and attack with them. I'd assume the points are sharp. Now, how would this cause crushing damage or anything? This would cause piercing damage if anything, you need force and pressure to make it cause crushing damage. ✦

(Kenjutsu: Fujin) Sword Art: Wind Blade
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will channel raw chakra into their sword and manipulate it to sprout eight ribbon-like blades of wavy green chakra that break off from the original. With a simple swing of his sword the user can transmit a slash through the blades that travel along the surface of objects (including walls, floors, and ceilings) and emerge to strike the enemy anywhere that the user can see, and can even be fired outward from his sword directly. The emerging blades are sharp enough to pierce through solid objects, are about twelve inches in width, and can rise up to twelve feet. The user can also have the previously transmitted blades lay dormant along the surface they had traversed, and have them emerge on his command.
~Only one blade can be released per slash.
~Can only be used twice per battle.
~Must wait four turns before it can be used again.

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✦ Declined, I'm honestly confused on this one and the gif didnt help much. ✦

(Kenjutsu: Kanazuchi) Sword Art: Twin Blades
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will channel raw chakra into their sword before quickly unsheathing and throwing it towards in a horizontal motion. The blade will quickly spin as the user performs a hand gesture, which causes a bright flash of green chakra to be emitted as the sword splits into two equal sized blades that spin even faster in a vertical motion towards the enemy. The chakra that was channelled into the blade prior to splitting augments them to the point that they can cut through solid objects. After cutting through the intended target the blades will merge back into one and return to the user, who catches it by the hilt.
~Can only be used three times per battle.
~Cannot be used consecutively.

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✦ Declined, basically Demon Windmill Shuriken. Just swap the shuriken with a sword. Or even Shuriken Shadow Clone jutsu, just make one instead of 100 lol. ✦

 

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(Hikigaerusuraimu) – Toad Slime
Type: defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The toads of Mount Myoboku have glands that produce a slime that serves many different purposes. This is something that Jiraiya studied for many years before he perfected into a technique of his own. The toads produce this goo like substance from their glands all over their body, making them very slippery which could not only make it more difficult for an opponent to strike the user of this technique with Taijutsu, seeing that this slippery feature could be used to let the strikes somewhat slide off of him. Furthermore this slime like substance also makes the user taste and smell revolting to anyone who may taste or smell him. This would turn out to be quite troublesome for opponents such as the Inuzuka or anyone with enhanced smell and taste, as they would be able to experience the foul smell and taste of the Toad Slime to its fullest, causing them to feel their stomachs turning and making them vomit continuously, for several moments, being unable to control them self. For someone with enhanced smell or taste this can be tasted or smelt all the way into mid-range from the user of this technique, yet for normal people it is only going to affect them if they are within short-range. The final feature of this technique is that this Toad Slime that the user may produce from his glands keeps his body moist, and it also serves as a sort of barrier which prevents infections and fungus and other sorts of illness that may come from the outside to harm the user. The user himself is resistant towards the smell and taste it emits, similar to the toads whom are also naturally resistant towards it themselves.
Note:
- This technique requires signing the Toad Contract
- The technique may be performed trice per battle
- When activated the technique stays active for 4 turns
- This technique makes the user resistant towards C-rank and below Taijutsu
- This technique may be used by the user or any of the toad summonings

‡ Declined ‡ Tone down the whole vomiting thing. This technique shouldn't have such a powerful effect. At most, you can overwhelm Inuzuka/Ganmi sensing for a small duration after they've been affected by this.

(Hikigaeru No Shita Baindingu) – Toad Tongue Binding
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: A unique technique developed by the toads and taught unto the ones who have signed the contract. The toads can utilize this technique without using any hand seals or hand gestures, while the user is required to perform the serpent hand seal. This technique allows the user or a toad to release their tongue out, extending its width and length drastically, shooting out of their mouth at intense speed, like when a frog attempts to catch a fly with their tongue, a high speed reflexive movement. The tongue of both the user and the toads using it, have the unique toad characteristics, as they are extremely sticky and it is used to catch and wrap around the opponent. This would effectively render the opponent incapable of moving at all, due to the tongue wrapping around every single limb, while strangling them. To make this technique more lethal towards the enemy, the toads developed a unique property that allowed the toads and the ones who signed the contract to change the properties of their own tongue after having caught the opponent. This is done by the user releasing a wave of chakra through his tongue, which then causes the tongue that is wrapped around the enemy to change into the same flesh like substance as the one found inside the fire breathing toad, causing the tongue to swell up rapidly consuming the enemy while digesting them completely. Another ability of this technique may be that during the entire time that this technique is utilized, the tongue will release acidic stomach liquid from itself, similar to the one found in the Fire Breathing Toads Stomach, which corrodes and melts through human flesh and bone. When the technique is used and the tongue is shot out, the user is capable of maneuvering between objects with his tongue and aim for his target.
Note:
- May be performed trice per battle
- Can be used by both the user and Toads
- Must have signed the Toad contract

‡ Declined ‡ I believe Teno submitted a CFS based on this. You need his permission to make something like this.

(Hikigaerubōkarusakku) – Toad Vocal Sac
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: This technique was invented by the toads themselves and taught unto the ones who have signed the toad contract. The vocal sac of the toads is generally used to emit their frog calls from, yet it can also be used in another way. This technique requires the user to perform the Boar hand seal, while then with a powerful inhaling action, he will form a vocal sac similar to the one the toads have, inhaling and storing incoming techniques of tangible matter, such as mist, smoke, gasses and the likes. Storing it inside the vocal sac where it will then cause no harm to the user, while then the user is capable of redirecting the entire gas, mist or smoke in any direction he desires, in a powerful stream like fashion, and depending on the technique or tangible matter that is stored in the vocal sac, it may cause harm to the opponent if sent directly back at him. This technique is also usable by Toads. The technique only allows a toad or user to suck up A-rank or below tangible techniques like mist, gas and smoke, and release it back towards the enemy.
Note:
- This technique requires signing the Toad Contract
- The technique may be performed trice per battle

‡ Declined ‡ All the things you mentioned are intangible, not tangible. Also, is this usable on poisonous gases? Wouldn't the summon using this be affected by the poison?

resubmitting:

(Hikigaerusuraimu) – Toad Slime
Type: defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The toads of Mount Myoboku have glands that produce a slime that serves many different purposes. This is something that Jiraiya studied for many years before he perfected into a technique of his own. The toads produce this goo like substance from their glands all over their body, making them very slippery which could not only make it more difficult for an opponent to strike the user of this technique with Taijutsu, seeing that this slippery feature could be used to let the strikes somewhat slide off of him. Furthermore this slime like substance also makes the user taste and smells revolting to anyone who may taste or smell him. This would turn out to be quite troublesome for opponents such as the Inuzuka or anyone with enhanced smell and taste, as they would be able to experience the foul smell and taste of the Toad Slime to its fullest, causing them to feel their stomachs turning and making them vomit as well as feeling sick of the foul stench having difficulty in concentrating when smelling the toad slime for the first time. The smell and taste overwhelms someone like the Inuzuka and Gamni for a short duration after their exposure before they will be able to compose themselves, leaving them open for a short moment. For someone with enhanced smell or taste this can be tasted or smelt all the way into mid-range from the user of this technique, yet for normal people it is only going to affect them if they are within short-range. The final feature of this technique is that this Toad Slime that the user may produce from his glands keeps his body moist, and it also serves as a sort of barrier which prevents infections and fungus and other sorts of illness that may come from the outside to harm the user. The user himself is resistant towards the smell and taste it emits, similar to the toads whom are also naturally resistant towards it themselves.
Note:
- This technique requires signing the Toad Contract
- The technique may be performed thrice per battle
- When activated the technique stays active for 4 turns
- This technique makes the user resistant towards C-rank and below Taijutsu
- This technique may be used by the user or any of the toad summonings

(Hikigaerubōkarusakku) – Toad Vocal Sac
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: This technique was invented by the toads themselves and taught unto the ones who have signed the toad contract. The vocal sac of the toads is generally used to emit their frog calls from, yet it can also be used in another way. This technique requires the user to perform the Boar hand seal, while then with a powerful inhaling action, he will form a vocal sac similar to the one the toads have, inhaling and storing incoming techniques of intangible matter, such as mist, smoke, gasses and the likes. Storing it inside the vocal sac where it will then cause no harm to the user, while then the user is capable of redirecting the entire gas, mist or smoke in any direction he desires, in a powerful stream like fashion, and depending on the technique or tangible matter that is stored in the vocal sac, it may cause harm to the opponent if sent directly back at him. This technique is also usable by Toads. The technique only allows a toad or user to suck up A-rank or below intangible techniques like mist, gas and smoke, and release it back towards the enemy. The toads are not immune to poison or venom from other creatures or techniques, meaning that they cannot perform this technique on poisonous techniques without having the risk of being infected and ultimately die of the poison. A toad or user may use this technique on poisonous techniques in battle, but they will without a doubt be affected by it.
Note:
- This technique requires signing the Toad Contract
- The technique may be performed trice per battle

✦ Both Approved, made slight edits. ✦

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(Ninpo: Yūgen shōgekiha)- Ninja Art: Profound Shockwave of Awareness
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Yūgen shōgekiha, a move developed by the talented Jiraiya showcases the rudimentary and often bypassed use of chakra. The ability to induce a physical disturbance on the opponent without actually harming them, drawing a little inspriration from Killing Intent. The move begins by having the user's foot/feet on the ground, this is essential to the technique and if this simple requirement is not met it fails. Once the user has connection to the ground with at least a foot he will stop his leg, sending chaka racing through the ground in a controlled manner towards his opponent(s). This chakra ripples underground by about 2 meters to avoid any surface disturbances, once it reaches below the opponent it will race up into their bodies flushing their chakra system with the user's. This is also a form of Kai and can release the opponent from Genjutsu but the main use of the foreign surge is to overload their tenketsu with as much as the user's chakra that they are left momentarily in a state of shock, like having a wave of uncontrollable feelings rush through their bodies. With the chakra consisting of both physical and spiritual energy both the target's body and mind are sent into a state that can only be described as a profound one, so much that the opponent is lost for words and actions as an indescribable sensation races over their entire bodies. This only lasts the duration of the turn its used and opponent's will easily overcome the feeling once the chakra finishes surging through them. The surge also disallows them from performing any chakra costing Ninjutsu techniques up to S ranked due to an already S ranked amount of chakra in their system, but with basic Ninjutsu weak to elemental Ninjutsu the user is free to perform Ninjutsu surge like techniques of A ranked and above to break free from this alien surge. Alternatively, the user can have this technique affect multiple targets in an 360 degree manner of his position but this only reaches up to Mid ranged as opposed to a more focused, Long ranged reach.
Note(s):
- Can only be done 2x
- No other Ninjutsu techniques above A ranked in the same turn and the next
- Cannot be used on opponents who already has a continuous surge of chakra running through their system, regardless of rank

‡ Declined ‡ DNR.

(Hikigaeru No Himitsu) –The Toads Secret
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: Signers of the toad contract have learned to harness the unique venom that is found within The Cane Toad and other toad species. The venom from the different toads are gained through extracting it from toads and storing it in bottles for later use, or by applying it to the weapons of the users choice, such as swords, axes, kunai, shuriken, senbon etc. It may even be applied to smoke bombs, flash bombs and tags so when they explode the venom will be carried by the explosion to the enemy. This makes for a very dangerous and possible lethal arsenal of weaponry for future combat. Unlike most venoms found in other animals, the toads’ unique venom which is found inside the toads and on their skin as it is produced by the glands, does not require to enter the enemy’s body to affect them. The toxicity of a toad’s venom depends on the amount and to affect an enemy it only requires touching the skin of the person or animal. The toads venom will cause an enemy to become dizzy, having blurred vision as well as slurred movements, and if the enemy is affected by too much venom it will cause bleeding from eyes, nose and other areas as well as involuntary coughing. This venom that is produced by toads can be utilized in several ways by the user.

The user is, due to their mastery of toads and having studied the venom, has become capable of producing said venom from their body as they manipulate the glands that they will make to do so, so that it coats their skin like a layer of sweat. This is utilized in combination with Taijutsu. When this is done the user is far more lethal as he only needs to graze or touch the enemy to affect them, yet the effect that it has on the enemy depends on the strike. If the user is capable of touching the enemy once, the opponent will not feel anything for the first turn, yet the next turn he will begin to be slightly dizzy as well as having slightly slurred movement due to the touch of the venom on the users’ body. Yet this is what a single touch does, nothing more nothing less. If the user wants to do more lethal damage upon the enemy he needs to strike them further. After each strike that is done to the enemy, the effects will become more severe, and they last for the entirety of the battle unless the enemy has an antidote towards the venom of some sort. Due to the studies of the toads and having mastered its abilities, the user has become immune towards any and all toad venom. The venom on the users body stays on his body for the entirety of the battle unless it is washed away.

The user is also capable of utilizing the venom that they produce or gain by extracting it from other toads, by applying it to different weapons and tools. The user is capable of applying this venom to their armor, sword, axe, arrow, kunai, shuriken, senbon, whips or any other kind of weaponry. This means the venom is also capable of being used not only on weapons capable of being thrown or shot towards the enemy, but also capable of being used together with a sword and thereby used together with Kenjutsu techniques. This of course causes the weapons and the users Kenjutsu strikes to be more lethal, as they merely need to graze the enemy to cause the before mentioned effects. To make the users arsenal even more dangerous, the user is also capable of placing this toad venom upon smoke bombs, flash bombs, explosive tags, chili pepper bombs and any of the likes, so when they do explode they will not only cause the effect that they normally do, they will also cause the small amount of venom that is placed upon them to be carried out into the area with the blast, so it will hit the target and cause immediate effect. Below is a small table that shows how many strikes, touches of venom that is required for each effect to take place. Every time a strike happens it stacks upon the previous one and causes more severe actions as seen below. After the last strike in the table below, it will cause the enemy to eventually die from the effects after his turn is complete. The effects of the venom take place one turn after the strike happens.

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1 Touch/Strike: Dizziness and slurred movement
2 Touch/Strike: Blurred vision, difficulty seeing
3 Touch/Strikes: bleeding from nose and ears
4 Touch/Strikes: bleeding from eyes, nose and ears
5 Touch/Strikes: Bleeding from eyes, nose and ears as well as coughing up blood involuntarily (Eventually it will end with the death of the enemy)

Note:
- User must have signed and mastered the Toad Contract
- The user is only immune towards venom that originates from the toads
- The Jutsu is capable of being used four times per battle
- The Jutsu can be used to create an arsenal of weaponry outside of battle

‡ Declined ‡ This is a copy of Zaphkiel's technique for spiders. You even have a spoiler highlighting the different effects just like he did.

(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Tahm Kench) –Summoning Technique: Tahm Kench
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Tahm Kench, a legendary toad from ancient times said to be almost as old as Gamamaru the Great Toad Sage. Into a sunken town the handsome Jiraiya ran, for he owed gold and blood and yet had none to spare. He was desperate, and before long he was about to walk away and change his path, when he heard a song call on him to change his luck again. Now the singer was a creature, with the biggest mouth Jiraiya had ever seen. “Excuse my song” the monster toad said, “the tunes purpose was your attention for I knew you had troubles, and I can offer solutions… can you save me from this bind you ask… boy the world is one river, and I am its King”. Jiraiya was offered a solution for a simple prize, the toads hunger to be satisfied when he so wished and Jiraiya took it. The monster toad is a giant, dark brown and green swamp colored toad, that stands as tall as a large two story building and with a mouth and stomach so large that it can consume almost anything, especially when it expands its stomach it is capable of consuming animals and people with ease, even summoning animals larger than him. The massive toad has a grim and dark demeanor unlike the other toads, wearing old metal hand braces that used to be handcuffs, and he has a small mustache. The toad saved Jiraiya and accepted to be part of the contract, yet he would not be a pet of any sort neither would he rest until Jiraiya paid his debt. The toad was never summoned again, yet when it came to Jiraiya finding a woman he actually liked, a beauty, the toad would appear rising out of the water nearby. Even tho Jiraiya tried everything he could to cast out the toad, it ate all of the gold, the food and all the presents and even the house for its hunger, nothing satisfied. Before Jiraiya knew what had happened the toad monster had snapped its jaw around the woman tearing her apart with his almost shark like teeth, snapping bones and ripping flesh apart as he devoured her in front of him. It was only afterwards Jiraiya was capable of subduing the monster toad. The massive monster toad with his stomach that cannot be satisfied and his teeth that can tear anything apart was subdued by Jiraiya and is now forced to do Jiraiyas bidding for what he had done. Jiraiya first realized the horrifying powers the toad actually possessed when he summoned him for the first time. With his dark demeanor, razor sharp teeth and white eyes he would come off as terrifying to anyone standing before him.
With his powerful tongue and jaw, Tahm Kench is capable of releasing his tongue out in a straight line, in which it with great force will either smash into the target or wrap around them, sticking to them due to its sticky like liquid upon the tongue. This can quickly subdue the target before the tongue will retract back into his mouth, where he would snap his jaws closed, devouring the enemy. His jaw is capable of breaking bone, tissue, organic materials and even some metal of lower resistance (bite and crush through B-rank and below solid objects). Besides his powerful jaw and tongue, Tahm Kench has a unique stomach which allows him to, with his acidic stomach fluids, completely devour animals and organic matter within seconds after it enters his stomach. This of course means immediate death, if the person or animal inside him does not react immediately. Yet there is one thing he can do, he can keep the one who summoned within his mouth, keeping him safe from attacks if he so wishes.

Besides these features that the legendary River King has, he is capable of three different techniques of his own, a particular set of abilities which makes him a nightmare to anyone who meets him.

The first ability that Tahm Kench possesses is the power to literally swim through both water and earth, as he releases chakra from his body, so that the earth around him turns into a swamp like state, so he can swim through it and deep into the ground if he wishes. This allows him to swim on land as well as on water, but not only that, he is capable of swimming at very high speed, through the ground to any desired location and hide if he wishes. And while doing so the ground which he passes through will immediately turn back to normal after he has passed leaving no trace of him. This allows him to take refuge underground, or make a surprise attack as he shoots up from the ground like a bullet devouring anything that he catches with his mouth as he comes out.

The second ability which he possesses is the power to release a powerful jet stream of highly acidic stomach fluids from his mouth. This jet stream is so powerful and so acidic that it slices and melts through organic matter, flesh and metal with ease. And the powerful stream shoots out with very high pressure, also being capable of changing its direction by simply turning his head. This stream has a very long range and can be used to slice and melt through anything. The second ability can also be used in another way. This other way allows Tahm to keep the acidic stomach fluid within his stomach and building it up so that it fills up almost the entire stomach. This is of course mostly used when he has consumed an enemy, and this is done to suffocate them and increase the speed at which the enemy is devoured.

The final ability which Tahm possess is the power to dislocate his jaw, opening it so wide that he can devour virtually anything (not boss sized summonings) while then using his massive stomach and his large lungs, he begins to suck in anything within mid-range from him. When he does so, he creates a powerful vacuum like effect, where everything is sucked in with immense force, and everything is sucked straight into his stomach and devoured the moment it touches his stomach fluids. The technique is stopped when Tahm decides to close his mouth again and not allowing anything to leave his stomach. This powerful vacuum effect is so powerful that it requires great strength to be capable of standing his ground and not be sucked in.

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Note:
- The first ability to go underground and swim around is considered a B-rank technique and it has a long-range reach.
- The second ability which allows Tahm to use his stomach fluids in two different ways is considered an A-rank technique and it has a long-range reach if used like a stream.
- The third and final ability is considered a very powerful S-rank technique which sucks in everything within mid-range from Tahm.
- The first ability can be used 3 times per battle, the second ability can be used 2 times per battle and the third ability can be used 2 times per battle.
- Tahm stays on the battlefield for 5 turns
- Requires the user to have signed the Toad Contract
- No other summonings on the battlefield at the same time

‡ Declined ‡ Shorten this.

Resubmitting Tahm Kench, shortened it and reworded a few things.

(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Tahm Kench) –Summoning Technique: Tahm Kench
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Tahm Kench, a legendary toad from ancient times said to be almost as old as Gamamaru the Great Toad Sage. This toad is unlike any other toad as it is refered to as a monster, that is a giant, dark brown and green swamp colored toad, that stands as tall as a large two story building and with a mouth and stomach so large that it can consume almost anything, especially when it expands its stomach it is capable of consuming animals and people with ease, even summoning animals larger than him. The massive toad has a grim and dark demeanor unlike the other toads, wearing old metal hand braces that used to be handcuffs, and he has a small mustache and having shark like teeth so that he may shred anything he desires. With his dark demeanor, razor sharp teeth and white eyes he would come off as terrifying to anyone standing before him.
With his powerful tongue and jaw, Tahm Kench is capable of releasing his tongue out in a straight line, in which it with great force will either smash into the target or wrap around them, sticking to them due to its sticky like liquid upon the tongue. This can quickly subdue the target before the tongue will retract back into his mouth, where he would snap his jaws closed, devouring the enemy. His jaw is capable of breaking bone, tissue, organic materials and even some metal of lower resistance (bite and crush through B-rank and below solid objects). Besides his powerful jaw and tongue, Tahm Kench has a unique stomach which allows him to, with his acidic stomach fluids, completely devour animals and organic matter within seconds after it enters his stomach. This of course means immediate death, if the person or animal inside him does not react immediately. Yet there is one thing he can do, he can keep the one who summoned within his mouth, keeping him safe from attacks if he so wishes.

Besides these features that the legendary River King has, he is capable of three different techniques of his own, a particular set of abilities which makes him a nightmare to anyone who meets him.

The first ability that Tahm Kench possesses is the power to literally swim through both water and earth, as he releases chakra from his body, so that the earth around him turns into a swamp like state, so he can swim through it and deep into the ground if he wishes. This allows him to swim on land as well as on water, but not only that, he is capable of swimming at very high speed, through the ground to any desired location and hide if he wishes. And while doing so the ground which he passes through will immediately turn back to normal after he has passed leaving no trace of him. This allows him to take refuge underground, or make a surprise attack as he shoots up from the ground like a bullet devouring anything that he catches with his mouth as he comes out.

The second ability which he possesses is the power to release a powerful jet stream of highly acidic stomach fluids from his mouth. This jet stream is so powerful and so acidic that it slices and melts through organic matter, flesh and metal with ease. And the powerful stream shoots out with very high pressure, also being capable of changing its direction by simply turning his head. This stream has a very long range and can be used to slice and melt through anything. The second ability can also be used in another way. This other way allows Tahm to keep the acidic stomach fluid within his stomach and building it up so that it fills up almost the entire stomach. This is of course mostly used when he has consumed an enemy, and this is done to suffocate them and increase the speed at which the enemy is devoured.

The final ability which Tahm possess is the power to dislocate his jaw, opening it so wide that he can devour virtually anything (not boss sized summonings) while then using his massive stomach and his large lungs, he begins to suck in anything within mid-range from him. When he does so, he creates a powerful vacuum like effect, where everything is sucked in with immense force, and everything is sucked straight into his stomach and devoured the moment it touches his stomach fluids. The technique is stopped when Tahm decides to close his mouth again and not allowing anything to leave his stomach. This powerful vacuum effect is so powerful that it requires great strength to be capable of standing his ground and not be sucked in.

Note:
- The first ability to go underground and swim around is considered a B-rank technique and it has a long-range reach.
- The second ability which allows Tahm to use his stomach fluids in two different ways is considered an A-rank technique and it has a long-range reach if used like a stream.
- The third and final ability is considered a very powerful S-rank technique which sucks in everything within mid-range from Tahm.
- The first ability can be used 3 times per battle, the second ability can be used 2 times per battle and the third ability can be used 2 times per battle.
- Tahm stays on the battlefield for 5 turns
- Requires the user to have signed the Toad Contract
- No other summonings on the battlefield at the same time

✦ Declined, SHORTEN THIS ✦

 

[BlacKing]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Magen: Seigyo Funō Ni) - Demonic Illusions: Spiralling Out of Control
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: Obito casts an illusion upon his opponent(s) that forces them to see an image of his mask or the scar on his face spiraling and shifting position, not unlike the image of him performing Kamui. The opponent(s) will then see themselves being sucked into the middle of the Kamui headed towards the eye of Obito. In reality, the opponent(s) start walking/running towards Obito in a trance.
Note: Can only be used 2x per battle.
Note:: No S Ranked Genjutsu can be used the turn before or the turn after this technique is being used.

‡ Declined ‡ The last bit goes beyond the normal limits of Genjutsu (controlling the opponent's movements). This is also somewhat similar to Jiraiya's Black Hole illusion.

Katon: Rensa-en | Fire Style: Chained Flames
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Chakra: 30 (an additional 10 every time this ability is used per turn
Damage: N/A
Description: The user, being a master of fire, is capable of performing/chaining multiple fire based attacks from a single fire source as long as they are capable of performing the handseals needed (If any) for the techniques. The user can perform a stream of fire and then cause multiple streams of fire based jutsu to come from that direct source.
Note: Requires Mastery of Fire.
Note: Requires Fire Specialty noted in bio
Note: Once activated, can only be deactivated if the user cannot use Fire Style techniques
Note: The user cannot use the same technique twice for this to work.
Note: Must be from a streamed attack, the user cannot chain projectile based fireball attacks.

‡ Declined ‡ Scaze has submitted and is working on a similar technique.

 

[Naruto.]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Youton: Barukan No Hinansho)- Lava Release: Vulcan's Shelter
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user gathers their Youton chakra and channels it to their entire body, essentially turning their whole body into solid or molten lava. The solidity is similar to Dragon Flame Release Song technique. This process happens quite fast, and the user immediately reforms into their original shape after several seconds. Physical attacks would cause the opponent's body part(s) to melt and burn terribly. Elemental strengths and weaknesses apply.
Note: Can only be taught by Naruto.
Note: Must have mastered Lava.
Note: Can only be used thrice per battle.
Note: The user can't attack/defend while in this form.

‡ Declined ‡ Raise this to at least A-Rank. I also feel like you're restricting yourself with the last note. Instead of basing this around Water replacement, you should make it more like Gaara's Sand body e.g. you should be capable of maintaining your form, moving around as a wave of lava, still capable of using other techniques e.g. Earth, Fire, Lava and non-elemental abilities.

(Youton: Seisekkai Bassuto)- Lava Release: Quicklime Burst
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user gathers a large amount of their Youton chakra and channels it into the ground, causing a large amount of quicklime to emerge from the ground, as a powdery substance, released into the air, which wraps onto the opponent. Inhaling this causes severe irritation to the eyes, and skin to the opponent. This doesn't do great damage by itself, but it's true potential is released when it is used on a water source/or in conjunction with a water technique/or an opponent's water technique. When combined with water, it turns into a liquidy substance, expelling enough heat to ignite combustible materials, as well as drying and hardening quickly into cement which traps the opponent within it. Basically, it can be used to turn chakra/chakra-less water into cement.

Note: Can only be taught by Naruto.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
Note: No Lava techniques above A-Rank in the same turn.

‡ Approved ‡

 

[Vayne]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Dizorubu) Dissolve
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Once in a suitable range the user would take a step forwards with his left(right) foot, then raise his right(left) leg in an attempt to deliver a front roundhouse kick in which his shin is drawn back. The kick would be aimed towards the opponent's stomach. Naturally, the kick follows a counter clockwise arc pattern. The attack would appear simple but it is actually a set up. The roundhouse kick was simply a ploy. A ploy that sets up the crescent kick. The moment the opponents guard is brought up the user would perform multiple actions simultaneously: He would unexpectedly move his left(right) leg around so that the tip of his foot is away from the opponent (heel is facing the opponent ). The user would snap his right(left) leg chin upwards, not losing momentum while doing so. This is done with adequate hip movement, naturally. The entire process leads to the user's right(left) foot slamming onto the targets unprotected face. The attack could be used to send the opponent flying several meters back.
-4x per battle.
-Completion of basic tai training.

‡ Pending ‡ Leaving for Madara.

✦ Approved, removed a sentence. This could have been achieved via freeform Tai without wasting a CJ slot though, tbh. ✦