"The Past creates the Future" -*Chapter 1*."A Broken Home"

[Since yesterday]

I guess it's a bit in the rude side but since he said he's not portraying any mod. Guess that's the reason they allowed the chapter without editing.

 

[Impure World Ressurection]

Up to a great start.

 

[Sharingan Kakashi]

I guess it's a bit in the rude side but since he said he's not portraying any mod. Guess that's the reason they allowed the chapter without editing.

I don't find it rude at all, it must be took as a grain of salt. This is only a Fiction and most professional scripts use that type of language and situations.

 

[danivass]

I sure hope this fanfic continues soon as I enjoyed every single word of it

 

[Sharingan Kakashi]

I sure hope this fanfic continues soon as I enjoyed every single word of it

I so hope too. This guy has some brilliant f*cked up ideas.

 

[Zoro]

OHHH My god!! Try to give a contract to this man.
This is so good and must be read slowly and with attention, this is professional writing.
This is even better than your other work and i can really relate as i was an un-popular kid in high-school.
Thanks so much Kenshin for deliver once again, Thanks.

For the other user, no the duo is not badass they are actually very rude and people like that exist in every school.

This is very,very realistic.

Agree, entirely with this post. Once again, awesome FF by far the best no disrespect towards the others but Golden Boy has something more.

 

[Neji of the white eyes]

Kenshin when you get back please reply to this. You got me inspired to write as well with this specific wonderful work, as i was a bullied kid in school.
Thanks so much.

 

[aishwary]

your work is awesome

hope the mods didn`t feel bad after reading this :xd

 

[King Dante]

your work is awesome

hope the mods didn`t feel bad after reading this :xd

Bro did it again. He'll be back Tomorrow night only.

 

[Desert Gaara]

The writing is perfect but this one is to raw, realistic and serious to my liking. I prefer your other work "Utopic Monkeys", it's more entertaining as well.

 

[King Dante]

The writing is perfect but this one is to raw, realistic and serious to my liking. I prefer your other work "Utopic Monkeys", it's more entertaining as well.

Mehh, he is just describing what he used to do to kids in school.

 

[Michael92]

UPDATE FROM KENSHIN:

2 Chapters scheduled for this week.

 

[King Dante]

UPDATE FROM KENSHIN:

2 Chapters scheduled for this week.

He told me nothing. I bet he's too hooked on being a protagonist and a bully that as cocky as he is, he's focusing only on this one rather than the other. U_U

 

[Since yesterday]

UPDATE FROM KENSHIN:

2 Chapters scheduled for this week.

Looking forward. Do you know him personally to know that stuff?
Because we are not able to send him PM's or VM's now.

 

[Michael92]

Looking forward. Do you know him personally to know that stuff?
Because we are not able to send him PM's or VM's now.

I sent you a VM telling you how, so that we don`t spam

 

[Deidara Sempai]

UPDATE FROM KENSHIN:

2 Chapters scheduled for this week.

I hope they are just as good what will happen to the main protagonist after they see his book?

 

[Sharingan Kakashi]

I hope they are just as good what will happen to the main protagonist after they see his book?

Kenshin is always unpredictable.

 

[King Dante]

Kenshin is always unpredictable.

LOL wait until you read the new chapter of this FF. I got to read it today and like i was saying to Shunsui, there's some screwed up things going on.

 

[Sharingan Kakashi]

Party time! Can't wait. Now, that's a preview

 

[King Dante]

Party time! Can't wait. Now, that's a preview

If it gets approved lol He's the only one who needs approvals around here. Which is unfair