[Romance] An Unlit Path

Ryu Kishi

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In the distance i see you,
Lost in the light, there is no
Shadow in sight.

Your words drift in the wind,
Words that are warm, not
Shrouded in pain. A glimps
From your eyes leaves me
Hungry for lies.

The lies that tempt my
Heart, that leads it away from its path

A path that was dark, but
Now Hope lights the way.
But this hope is a fools
Only embrace.

For i see not the light but a
Dream that could be,
But that dream is not a
Dream; that is meant for me to see.

But now i hunger, for that
Sight of you standing in
That light, i hunger now
As if it were my right.

But the darkness holds on
To me tight, never will its
Grasp fade,for in its sight: it
Sees no light.

Only my dark pain, that
Is what gives it life. For
You are my dream, that
Was never my light.
 

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:T_T: One of the best poems from you U_U.

It was a ride of emotions dude, 5 stanza gave hope which you took away in 7th and the final stanza was just too much.:T_T:
Absolutely brilliant, gloomy, despondent, and astoundingly beautiful <3.

Excellent one dude.<3
 

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:T_T: One of the best poems from you U_U.

It was a ride of emotions dude, 5 stanza gave hope which you took away in 7th and the final stanza was just too much.:T_T:
Absolutely brilliant, gloomy, despondent, and astoundingly beautiful <3.

Excellent one dude.<3
Thanks fiendyXD
 
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