Re: Custom Jutsu Submission
(Fuuton: Kakure Geiru)- Wind Release: The Hiding Gale
Type: Supplementary/Offense
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30 (+10 for every technique used)
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will gather their wind chakra and release it outward to create a large gust of wind. However, this gust of wind takes on a very similar characteristic to that of Wind Release: Wind Blade. Not only do they appear the same in color and destructive ability (due to its deadly cutting nature), but it retains another similar ability; the wind gust created will be intangible. Now, the main difference is, the user will release the wind gust into certain structures or tool sets, this includes earth-like jutsus(or CE/KG similar) or even metal weapon(s). This happens because of the intangibility of the wind, being able to phase through solid matter objects, however through precise control with chakra, the user will aim the wind gust towards the body of the structure, almost seeming like an infusion of sorts; in reality the wind has just caught up and made contact with the structure, this can be done through the speed of which wind naturally moves allowing it to catch up to other elements in time for the infusion to take place, this method is best used in combining with other projectiles. The initial infuse can be done by blowing the gust of wind into the initial technique (This method is best used in combining with other projectiles) or (for streaming usages only) they create a intangible- almost invisible (because of the similarity of the wind blade)- portal upfront of the user for which they will allow those similar solid structures to pass through and fuse into, or in better terms, the wind will begin to guide at the same direction of which the streaming technique is moving because of its fluid movement that wind has as a property. Now, with the wind infused in the object(s), this prevents certain opponent from being able to detect the wind which is hidden in the structure, however this does not apply to most dojutsu and sensory. The strong offensive use for this technique is its ability of deception and surprise attack, for even if they destroy the initial technique used for the wind to infuse within, it can still bypass and continue to the opponent, however no longer be considered intangible after it bypasses the first attack, because of the "protection" the other technique had for the wind. The size of the gust of wind, is rather medium sized in nature (can cover around a five meter radius), but it can be practically infused with any type of size structure such as Earth Release: Great Stone Golem Technique, however using the Golem as example, it must be used strategically as the Golem is about to attack for the wind does not remain dormant in other colossal like beings or structures, Yin/Yang would be needed. If the technique makes contact with the opponent, it can surely push the opponent back and deliver serious cuts and bruises because of its sharp nature. The user can also use this wind gust and infuse it into more then one object however it would cause more chakra consumption. This technique can only be used on the users own technique, and after the wind is re-released it will no longer be an intangible substance, it will be a regular gust of wind with the same rank and damage output. When using this technique, depending on the speed of the technique attempting to phase through it, the user can either use a clone/ally/summon and launch the techniques at the same time for them to stay at similar pace (only applicable to water based techs KG and CE alike), this technique can be used right before earth and metal based techniques, because wind is naturally much faster and is able to catch up to these slower moving elements.
Note: Can only be taught by Noni
Note: Can only be used three times
Note: This technique does not work with lightning, wind, and fire
Note: Requires one turn cool down before re-use
Note: Can not use wind techniques above S-Rank during the turn used and next turn
Note: This technique can only be used to supplement and phase, not allowed to be used as an individual attack or defense, unless used along with another technique
☼ Declined ☼
The basic concept of this technique is flawed. The intangibility of the wind blade isn't a unique property to that technique, it is just the basic property of wind not being a solid construct. If the wind blade hit a wall of earth, it would still clash with it. It just can't be blocked in the sense of clashing with another sword.
(Fuuton: Sagi-tekina kaze ni yoru shi)- Wind Release: Death by the Deceptive Breeze
Type: Supplementary/Offense
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30 (+10 for every technique used)
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will gather their wind chakra and release it outward to create a large gust of wind. However, this gust of wind takes on a very similar characteristic to that of Wind Release: Wind Blade. Not only do they appear the same in color and destructive ability (due to its deadly cutting nature), but it retains another similar ability; the wind gust created will be intangible. Now, the main difference is, the user will release the wind gust into certain structures or tool sets, this includes earth-like jutsus (or CE/KG similar,
that might have openings in its structure). This happens because of the intangibility,
light, and fluid nature of the wind - the wind will come into contact and seep into the cracks/openings of earthly material.
There are two ways in allowing the wind to merge with the material. The initial can be done by blowing the gust of wind into the initial technique (This method is best used in combining with other projectiles) or (for streaming usages) they create a intangible- almost invisible - portal upfront of the user, for which they will allow those similar solid structures to pass through and fuse into, or in better terms,
the wind will begin to seep into the openings of the earthly technique becoming "one with the earth", allowing the structure to take control of the trajectory. Now, with the wind infused in the object(s), this prevents certain opponents from being able to detect the wind which is hidden in the structure, however this does not apply to
some dojutsu and sensory. The strong offensive use for this technique is its ability of deception and surprise attack, for even if they destroy the initial technique used for the wind to infuse within, it can still bypass and continue to the opponent, however no longer be considered intangible after it bypasses the first attack. The size of the gust of wind,
is dependent on the size of the technique merging, but it can be infused
with a max size of a structure such as Earth Release: Great Stone Golem Technique, however using the Golem as example, it must be used strategically as the Golem is about to attack for the wind does not remain dormant in other colossal like beings or structures, Yin/Yang would be needed
(meaning the technique will only ever last one turn before it disperses naturally). If the technique makes contact with the opponent, it can surely push the opponent back and deliver serious cuts and bruises because of its sharp nature. The user can also use this wind gust and infuse it into more then one object however it would cause more chakra consumption. This technique can only be used on the users own technique.
An important note for this technique is, this is not a dual-elemental technique, and whatever structure the wind comes in contact with will remain with the same elemental strength and weakness (that specific structure). So it won't increase a techniques defense, neither.
Note: Can only be taught by Noni
Note: Can only be used three times
Note: This technique works on only earthly material with openings/cracks/pores (wood, plants, etc)
Note: Requires one turn cool down before re-use
Note: Can not use wind techniques above S-Rank during the turn used and next turn
Note: This technique can only be used to supplement and phase, not allowed to be used as an individual attack or defense, unless used along with another technique
✦ Pending, leaving for someone else, too much of a headache reading this. ✦
-Declined- This is better but its still really lacking. Get rid of all of that intangible wind stuff. I have a water CJ which inflates certain earthen substances by entering their pores, so I'm sure wind can affect the same set of substances/materials. This is actually a very simple technique but as with most of your submissions, you tend to bloat the description for whatever purpose. Try to keep things as concise as possible. Change the way you accomplish this entirely. Make this a technique which happens directly after another technique has been used (happens in the same timeframe). Only mention details which are absolutely essential. If you don't make this clearer, I can't approve this.
(Raiton: Shusei Bolla)- Lightning Release: Bolla's Modification
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A (Depends on the jutsu)
Description: The user will perform one hand seal and release their chakra towards preexisting lightning, specifically lightning that is either "focused" (lightning that retains a shape, or has powerful piercing ability, such as a Spear or Animal) or "unfocused" (lightning that does not retain a shape, and destructive, such as the nagashi). Using a concept that has been shown from various lightning jutsus (specifically with the Chidori variants), the user will take a hold of their lightning chakra, and forcefully turn that chakra into the opposite composition it is retaining at that moment. Essentially the user at will, will be able to turn focused lightning, by willfully dispelling its shape, turning it into a unfocused lightning source. When turning it into an unfocused lightning source, it becomes heavily similar to the Nagashi, having numbness and destructive capability of against solid matter. Unfocused lightning also has a unique property of conducting and combining with other material and elements, when doing that it would add a 20+ damage. The same is for unfocused lightning, where the user will inject their chakra and turn the unfocused lightning source, and turn it into a specific shape, the unfocused lightning would come together to create the shape of lightning spear (Similar to the Lightning Release: False Darkness Spear). The spear will have a clean pierce, and a certain amount of tangibility. Note the size, rank, and damage capabilities depend on the initial current of the first lightning. The larger the initial technique was, will comprehend with the change of lightning form when performing the jutsu. This jutsu can fully be used on lightning that is combined with other material, or conducted on other constructs (such as water, metal, earth, etc). By simply turning the surface of the lightning into focus or unfocused lightning, however this comes with a drawback, where the initial elemental combo will no longer be in effect for that material it is conducting, destroying it, rendering it useless. This jutsu can be used on dormant lightning, for there is evidence of lightning remaining dormant, things like holding the nagashi on a sword, or lightning currents in water sources/techniques. Evidence of this kind of advance shape manipulate and deformation, is present by taking evidence of the various chidori variants, and how they can turn into different shapes or perform different attacks/tasks. This is simply an advance offset of that mechanism in lightning. Another note is, when the user manipulates the lightnings form, they can re-aim the lightning (like a projectile), or remain focus and stream the lightning.
Note: Can only be taught by Noni
Note: Can only be used four times
Note: Can not be used with natural lightning (e.g. Kiri), because of its scarce and how limited it is to control
Note: Can not be used on an opponents technique
Note: This jutsu can only be used once per technique, so when the form of lightning is changed, it can not be reversed
-Declined- Nice concept. Turning focused lightning into unfocused lightning is viable but the reverse isn't. I say this simply because unfocused lightning jutsus require constant streaming most of the time and so when you stop fuelling them to use this, your technique will have already dispersed. You're free to try and find a way around this since its probably possible but as it is your technique won't work both ways.
(Raiton: Shusei Bolla)- Lightning Release: Bolla's Modification
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A (Depends on the jutsu)
Description: The user will perform one hand seal and release their chakra towards pre-existing lightning, specifically lightning that is either "focused" (lightning that retains a shape, or has powerful piercing ability, such as a Spear or Animal) or "unfocused" (lightning that does not retain a shape, and destructive, such as the nagashi). Using a concept that has been shown from various lightning jutsus (specifically with the Chidori variants), the user will take a hold of their lightning chakra, and forcefully turn that chakra into the opposite composition it is retaining at that moment. Essentially the user at will, will be able to turn focused lightning, by willfully dispelling its shape, turning it into a unfocused lightning source. When turning it into an unfocused lightning source, it becomes heavily similar to the Nagashi, having numbness and destructive capability of against solid matter. Unfocused lightning also has a unique property of conducting and combining with other material and elements, when doing that it would add a 20+ damage. The same is for unfocused lightning, where the user will inject their chakra and turn the unfocused lightning source, and turn it into a specific shape, the unfocused lightning would come together to create the shape of lightning spear (Similar to the Lightning Release: False Darkness Spear).
To allow for unfocused lightning to turn into a spear, the user will perform this technique first, and then the inject itself into a unfocused lightning source/technique that will either be dormant (read further) or created right after through a technique. From their the user will be able to control the unfocused lightning source to allow for the manipulation to occur. A similar process as streaming techniques, after the spear is created, the user doesn't need to focus on it no longer for that scenario. The spear will have a clean piercing power and a certain amount of tangibility. Note the size, rank, and damage capabilities depend on the initial current of the first lightning (i.e. a B-Rank will inflict 40 damage). That rule only applies to unfocused techniques made focused. Focused techniques transformed into an unfocused surge will have no damage capabilities but they will be capable of paralyzing the opponent in the same way as Chidori Nagashi. The larger the initial technique was will dictate the size of the reformed technique. When a focused technique is turned into an unfocused surge of lightning, the lightning will spread out in such a way that it encompasses short-range around the area the jutsu originally encompassed. This jutsu can fully be used on lightning that is combined with other materials or conducted on other constructs (such as water, metal, earth, etc).
By simply turning the surface of the lightning into focused or unfocused lightning, however this comes with a drawback, where the initial elemental combo will no longer be in effect for that material it is conducting, destroying it and rendering it useless. This jutsu can be used on dormant lightning, for there is evidence of lightning remaining dormant, things like holding the nagashi on a sword, or lightning currents in water sources/techniques
(the user would still need to inject this technique into that lightning source to take control and manipulate it). Evidence of this kind of advance shape manipulation and reformation is present by taking evidence of the various chidori variants, and how they can turn into different shapes or perform different attacks/tasks. This is simply an advance offset of that mechanism in lightning. Another note is, when the user manipulates the lightning's form, they can re-aim the lightning (like a projectile), or remain focus and stream the lightning.
Note: Can only be taught by Noni
Note: Can only be used three times per battle
Note: Cannot be used on an opponent's technique
Note: This jutsu can only be used once per technique, so when the form of lightning is changed, it can not be reversed
Note: Can not be used with natural lightning (e.g. Kirin), because of its scarce and how limited it is to control
‡ Approved ‡ Made some edits. Changed this to A-Rank.
(Ninjutsu: Pawā no datsu kōchiku)- Ninja Art: Deconstruction of Power
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: An advance ninjutsu technique. Through either activating this technique near instantly (instant because of how the activation does not cause initial harm) which will have the technique activate passively or by the users command from their on out (not including the turn needed to waste for activation), or through channeling chakra into a preexisting technique (which will cost a turn every time doing so). It's purpose is simple, when a user decides to stop the channeling of a technique (such as a streaming technique), or deactivate a technique all together (such as humanoid techniques, or projectiles) the technique will disperse as normal, however they will leave trails of specific composition that makes sense logically towards the element that is being deactivated. This deactivation is instant, and none of the deactivation releases is meant to inflict serious harm, it is only meant to disarm and/or distract the opponent through specific releases, while also helping in combination efforts. When deactivating/stopping a earth tech, it will burst into heavy dust - non-lethal dust - water would turn to mist, lightning would turn into bright, flashing light (is aimed forward and covers a 180degree radius at that direction), fire would turn into a flammable gas (slightly grey in color), and wind would turn into a intangible wind gust that can push an opponent off balance (similar to Earth Release: World Shaking). When deactivating a technique, it will move into the direction it was first aimed, and the size of each of these dispelled techniques will be as large as the initial technique created. This technique can also be used on time consuming dormant techniques, such as a spike of earth that the user created some time ago, essentially any technique the user created at one time can be dispersed using this technique, simply by injecting their chakra.
Note: KG/CE used along side this would have to follow logical bases, wood for example would burst into simple saw dust, storm would release a bright light, scorch would release a simple heat wave, etc
Note: Can only be taught by Noni
Note: Can only be used twice
Note: Lasts four turns
Note: After deactivation user must wait one turn before re-use
✦ Declined, for one, I'm not keen on all these "instant activation" jutsu you keep attempting; I dont plan on approving more of these, it's a precedent I'm not looking to further establish, nor these passive activation jutsu either. That being said, I think you have some things confused; most if not all of these when elements when dispersed do not cause these effects: Fire simply stops fueling and essentially evaporates, water stays the same generally, earth falls and crumbles, wind disperses into harmless wind, and lightning simply ends. What you're going for is something altogether different, and no the KG/CE usage with this as well. Used twice but lasts for turns? Lol no. ✦
Must be a signer of the Eastern Marsh Harrier contract
