[Other] Alive Again

[Nyanmaru]

I'm a bit rusty xd

My pen is running out of ink
It might disappear in just one blink.
But that didn't stop it from giving life to words,
It's sharper than all your bloodstained swords.

With these blurry accidents on paper,
I've fought demons and bruised disasters
And now I'm not afraid to rhyme again and again
with this beat up pen.

I'll get inspiration out of trees, colors, the sky, your eyes,
I'll see the truth in each and every lie
I'll run out of ink but not words;
let them grow wings like a bird's
Let them soar high
Let them, once more, give you life.

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[Izanamı.]

good job!

 

[Nyanmaru]

good job!

I like it, great job

Thank you both, this means a lot

 

[Kazehime Seirin]

sounds cool :hooray:

 

[SayWhat21]

nice man enjoy it my favorite part was this one
My pen is running out of ink
It might disappear in just one blink.
But that didn't stop it from giving life to words,
It's sharper than all your bloodstained swords.

 

[Nyanmaru]

sounds cool :hooray:

Thank you! :bouncy:

nice man enjoy it my favorite part was this one
My pen is running out of ink
It might disappear in just one blink.
But that didn't stop it from giving life to words,
It's sharper than all your bloodstained swords.

Oh wow thank you so much

 

[Orami]

Really nice.

 

[Goetia]

Rusty or not, it is of good standard. Well done.

 

[Ryóma]

Nicely done. I quite like the last stanza.

 

[Nyanmaru]

Really nice.

Why, thank you

Rusty or not, it is of good standard. Well done.

Really? Thanks!

Nicely done. I quite like the last stanza.

:bouncy: thanks!!

 

[Kishi Uzumaki]

Good poem

I'll get inspiration out of trees, colors, the sky, your eyes,
I'll see the truth in each and every lie
I'll run out of ink but not words;
let them grow wings like a bird's
Let them soar high
Let them, once more, give you life.

i liked this part and i can relate to it .

 

[Ryu Kishi]

not bad

 

[Nyanmaru]

Good poem

I'll get inspiration out of trees, colors, the sky, your eyes,
I'll see the truth in each and every lie
I'll run out of ink but not words;
let them grow wings like a bird's
Let them soar high
Let them, once more, give you life.

i liked this part and i can relate to it .

not bad

It really means a lot when people say that it's good and can relate to it. Thanks so much

 

[Waindo]

Awesome awesome awesome! :x3: Last stanza is roaring!

 

[Nyanmaru]

Awesome awesome awesome! :x3: Last stanza is roaring!

Thanks Waindo :T_T:

 

[Kuroba Kurohime]

I loved the first and last Stanza <3
Good job