Through the eyes of a bird

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Okay I want you to know guys that I tried really hard to write this as lyrics to a song I had in mind, whether I succeeded or not, I still don't know, tell me what you think. That was the song that inspired me btw. [video=youtube;J1-7TVE0m-E]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J1-7TVE0m-E[/video]


Through the eyes of a bird



I’ve forgotten all these feelings
that would make me sing along
evil hunger, my new home
for what used to be my soul.

Father I shall not atone
for what I am, or I will be.
My dreams were always meant to fly,
fly free over the sea.

Is the world just a riddle
for the great minds alone?
Is solitude the price
of the great key I hold?

In a night, close to fire
you whispered me your goal
and my eyes wide-opened
shined for what it felt like love.

Is this what you really wanted?
I laughed and stared in awe.
Don’t search for what you’ve never wanted
what you were never really meant to know.

Is the world just a riddle
for the great minds alone?
Is solitude the price
of the great key I hold?

But my silence didn’t warn you
of the fears of the unknown.
All you really ever wanted
was to find where you belong.

All the songs I sang to you softly
all went wasted to deaf ears.
Just the fire kept you longing
for a moth to feel your feelings.

Is the world just a riddle
for the great minds alone?
Is solitude the price
of the great key I hold?

Now your fears have all vanished
as you finally see the truth
and the void gave me comfort
with the key that was your doom.

 
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Nice work bro loved the third, third last and last stanza :).

Is solitude the price
of the great key I hold?
and its answer in those last lines was just awesome.<3

Great work, Nice try :)
 

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Nice work bro loved the third, third last and last stanza :).

Is solitude the price
of the great key I hold?
and its answer in those last lines was just awesome.<3

Great work, Nice try :)
Thanks man, I'm really not sure about the result but at least it's an improvement from writing a couple of lyrics only to end up in rubbish XD
 

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Wow.....

You guys wrote tons of poems while I was gone, though yeah, I get it; this is more of a song that needs a music sheet; I could take my guitar now and mix some balad up xD

The last two verses intrigued me, and blew my mind the most.


Is the world just a riddle
for the great minds alone?
Is solitude the price
of the great key I hold?

Now your fears have all vanished
as you finally see the truth
and the void gave me comfort
with the key that was your doom.



Awesomely done bro!
 

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Wow.....

You guys wrote tons of poems while I was gone, though yeah, I get it; this is more of a song that needs a music sheet; I could take my guitar now and mix some balad up xD

The last two verses intrigued me, and blew my mind the most.


Is the world just a riddle
for the great minds alone?
Is solitude the price
of the great key I hold?

Now your fears have all vanished
as you finally see the truth
and the void gave me comfort
with the key that was your doom.



Awesomely done bro!
Thanks man and glad to have you back, I thought you got a permabanned XD
 
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