[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[-Ventus-]

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(San Ame no Jutsu) Acid Rain Technique

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Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user changes the compounds of rain droplets into acid that can corrode metal or burn flesh.
? Can only be used twice per battle

sorry but we already have that =/


(Ensan no Kouu) - Acid Rain
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40(-5 per turn to keep active)
Damage Points: -10 each turn or as long as the user has this jutsu in effect
Description: A powerful ninjutsu that laces the clouds with a large amount of poison elemental chakra to change the structure of the rain. The end result is a storm that does not rain water, but instead rains a powerful acid that can eat through most materials. Unfortunately, skin is not one of those materials. Instead of instantly eating through, it causes skin to instantly blister and slowly dissolve in a most painful way.

 

[Passion]

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( Fuuton: yōriku makura ) - Wind release: Pillow landing

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Type: Supplementary - Defence
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: User will fill own lungs with air and infuse wind chakra into it. As the wind chakra is infused the user will breath out big gust of wind that cannot be used as attack. The gust is used to protect themselves from falling from heights by blowing the air at ground or thing that you're landing on causing the landing to be soft as pillow preventing user to get hurt from falling great heights.
Note:
- Can be used twice per battle

~Approved~

( Raiton: Myaku no Denki ) - Lightning release: Pulse of Electricity

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Rank: S
Type: Offensive - Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80 ( - 10 to user )
Description: User takes seven seconds to charge lightning chakra into own palms and during that time user can't perform jutsus that require handseals or use anything that require usage of palms and hands. After the lightning chakra is gathered user will shoot out pulse of lightning that's combined with gust of wind blasting small rocks and logs etc. The attack is short ranged and causes numbing and paralyze to anything on the area of this attack but this attack is unable to kill its targets.
Note:
- Acquiring required lightning chakra takes seven seconds to gather.
- It takes three turns for this move to cool down
- The force of this move is huge and it can break through most earth jutsus.
- Causes Ten damage to user when used.
- Can be used two times per battle

~ Declined ~

 

[Zenryoku]

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(Katon: Enshoku Bara) - Fire Release: Scarlet Flame Rose

Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user concentrates and exhales a large flame of fire racing along the floor at the opponent spreading around them before erupting into a scarlet flame coloured Rose which then engulfs the opponent in a furious fire and then speading out like petals as it vanishes leaving the land scorched.
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.

(Suiton: Mizu Ryuu Bara) - Water Release: Water Dragon Rose

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short- Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user concentrates and excretes a medium volume of water in the shape of a rose that then shoots directly at the opponet with tremendous speed and then as it begins to strike the target the middle opens up creating like a jaw with jaggerd teeth that then closes down on the opponent engulfing them.
Note: Can only be used 3 times.

~ Approved, but make both twice only per battle ~

 

[Ben-sama]

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(Genjutsu : Fukappatsu Omoi) Illusion Technique : Slow Mind

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Rank : A
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short/Long
Chakra Cost : 30
Damage Points : 60
Description : The User Snaps His Fingers Once And The Opponent Falls Under The User's Genjutsu, Where The Opponent's Mind Starts To Think Very Slow, Almost Leaving No Reaction, Making It Impossible To Quickly Think Of Something To Do To Evade An Opponent's Attack.
- Twice Per Battle

(Doton : Oujou Wana) Earth Style : Death Trap

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Rank : S
Type : Offensive
Range : Short/Long
Chakra Cost : 40
Damage Points : 80
Description : The User Makes The Ground Under The Opponent Cave In About Two Metres Into The Ground And Then Makes Multiple Spikes Rise Out Of The Ground In A Position To Completely Prevent The Opponent From Moving, And Finally The Earth Around The Caved In Hole Starts Closing In On The Opponent - Crushing Him.
- Twice Per Battle
- No Doton During The Turn And The Next Turn This Jutsu Is Used

~ Both Declined, techniques exist ~

 

[~Nemesis~]

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Name: Doton: Dosei dangan
Rank:S
Range:Mid~Close
Chakra:50
Damage:80
Description:A defensive jutsu which rips up huge amounts of earth from around the user and encases them in a sphere, the earth is then condensed and reinforced with chakra. This defense proves to be so strong that it can block pretty much anything that is thrown at it Yet It Retains The ability to be Pierced By Lightning Element , However there are downsides. The most obvious is that the user cannot see outside of the dome,
*Can Only Use twice Per Battle*


Name: Raiton: Fuzui [Lightning Release: Paralysis]
Rank:S
Range:Close
Chakra:50
Damage:80
Description:The user gathers chakra in their hand, converting it to their element and causing tiny bolts to travel between their fingers. Touching someone with the entire inside surface of the hand will result in temporary paralysis, lasting 1-2 posts, while touching with only part will cause the area to go numb, the size of the area dependent on how much contact.
*Can Only Be Used Twice Per Battle*

~ Declined, techniques exist ~

 

[Alucard]

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Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user slams his hand on the ground releasing a considerable amount of chakra. After that a storm of dragons is unleashed to attack the opponent from all angles and directions.
*Useable only twice per battle.

~ Declined O_O ~

 

[Nadare]

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Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This skill allows the user to make chakra run through all of the wires he uses in the fight. This way, he turns them invisible. This has to be posted at the beggining of the fight, as it's a skill. With the use of this, the user does not have to mention wires before hand.

~ Declined, impossible ~

Rank: A
Type: Defense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user stands in front of the enemy, and puts his sword in front. He puts it into a defensive position, and crouches a bit. As the enemy charges/ does a direct thrust, the user turns for 90?, a little bit to the side. He does this in the last moment, just before he is hit by the enemy's direct thrust so that the enemy just continues his path, and can't stop. The user lifts his foot a little bit, and makes the enemy who went just past him, fall on his face. Just before he falls, the user also pushes him forward, to make the enemy's impact with the ground more painful. But this is what the enemy thinks. When the user touches the enemy to push him, he has a expl. note on the hand. He leaves it on the enemy's back, without his knowledge. He then instantly jumps back, just before the tag is detonated.

~ Declined, this doesn't need to be a jutsu ~

 

[aTastyCookie]

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(banryoku erubo-) Vicious Elbow
Type:Attack
Rank:B
Range:Short
Chakara Cost:25
Damage:40
Description:The user exerts a burst of chakra into their elbow with a simultaneous strike. If the concentrated pressure successfully lands on the opponent's temple, it will stun them for seeral seconds and cause blurry vision. If it lands on their solarplexus, it will take the wind out of them and stun them for a moment.
-Can Only Be Used 3 Times

~ Approved ~

 

[Typhon]

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(Fuuton: Boushi Kazenokogiri) Spinning Wind Saw
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Mid-Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user preforms a series of hand seals and concentrates wind at their waist. They then spin at high speeds causing the wind at their waist to spin and extend to mid-range. As the wind extends it also thins out, creating a series of sharp wind blades extending from the waist of the user. These blades spin at the same speed of the user, in a way similar to a buzz saw. An opponent hit by this attack will be easily cut, if not sliced in half.
~ Can only be taught by Sacrifice
~ Can only be used 3 times per battle.
~ Leaves the user dizzy and unable to preform A rank or above jutsu that require hand seals in the next turn.

~ Approved ~

(Fuuton: Kazeyokoana) Wind Tunnel Transportation Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 45
Damage: N/A (-10 to user)
Description: The user preforms a series of hand seals and creates a tunnel of wind between him and his opponent. This tunnel is crafted not for damage, so the sharpness of the wind is greatly reduce, and instead focuses on the pressure characteristic of wind. The user can then send weapons such as kunai or shuriken through this tunnel at tremendously high speeds. However the true purpose of the tunnel is to transport the user. By jumping into the tunnel the user is catapulted forward by the wind pressure at tremendous speeds. Upon entry into the tunnel the time it takes to reach the destination makes it impossible for the opponent to preform a series of hand seals. Because the pressure is pushing towards the opponent, objects cannot enter from that side and will just be immediately pushed away. When the user passes through their tunnel their body receives minor cuts on the surface of their skin.
~ Can only be used once for battle.
~ After being created it lasts for the duration of the user's turn.
~ The wind makes the user unable to hear or react to changes in the opponent's position when he is travelling in the tunnel.

~ Approved , I edited bits ~

 

[Sin]

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(Kenjutsu: Kage Arashi) - Sword Art: Shadow Tempest

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Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: Beginning in a stance holding your scabbard which your sword is in, User will focus all their chakra, and if the user is a jinchuuriki, will take part of the bijuu chakra and spin rapidly/without bijuu, just spinning with there chakra. Then while spinning there sword, User will take there sword, and still spinning, taking there scabbard and throwing it, this will make a rapid slicing art, which will seem like a very fast shuriken, then User will spin closer to the opponent, and using there sword, will make it go around the User's waist very quickly, making what looks like there is two swords spinning.

Close to the opponent, and if sending an attack to the User, the User will focus wind chakra in there feet, and spinning and pushing themself off the ground still spinning with their sword, so they are hopping over the opponent and when they reach behind the opponent they will stop spinning very quickly and placing so much pressure into the sword while stopping the opponent will be stabbed so quickly in the back, as the pressure of all the chakra is pressed into the opponent's back.
-Can only be taught by -Sin-
-Must be a trained swordsman/trained by Caliburn
-Can only be used once per battle
-This attack can be done very fast, 2 seconds if in Ken Ki-

~ Explain it better, I'm lost by all the repeated, unintelligible description ~

 

[Passion]

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( Raiton: Myaku no Denki ) - Lightning release: Pulse of Electricity

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Rank: S
Type: Offensive - Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80 ( - 10 to user )
Description: User takes seven seconds to charge lightning chakra into own palms and during that time user can't perform jutsus that require handseals or use anything that require usage of palms and hands. After the lightning chakra is gathered user will shoot out pulse of lightning that's combined with gust of wind blasting small rocks and logs etc. The attack is short ranged and causes numbing and paralyze to anything on the area of this attack but this attack is unable to kill its targets.
Note:
- Acquiring required lightning chakra takes seven seconds to gather.
- It takes three turns for this move to cool down
- The force of this move is huge and it can break through most earth jutsus.
- Causes Ten damage to user when used.
- Can be used two times per battle

( Mokuton: kanadzuchi no gunyagunya mokuzai ) - Wood release: Hammer of Flexible wood

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Type: Supplementary - Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A ( + 30 per hit )
Description: The user will focuse Earth based chakra on hand at the same time with Water based chakra on other hand. After that the user will perform Tiger → Horse → Tiger → Snake → Boar → Bird changing user's own arm into big trees that resemblaces a big sledgehammer and part at the tip is filled with spear likeish sharp spikes. The wood of hammer if flexible so it can be swinged huge distances and create combos of multiple hits by the hammer that's hardened wood which is almost hard as iron or rocks. This move is advanced and manipulated version of

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Note:
- Can be used only once
- The wood arm lasts two turns unless the user reverts it

~ Declined, this is basically of a canon jutsu ~

 

[Icemyster]

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(subeta of emo-shon) Sword Of Emotion
Rank-S
Type-Supplementary
Range-Short/Mid
Chakra-40
Damage-(+20 to all taijutsu)
Description-
Being forged by unknown artists, the sword was given a very unique shape, also, very unique powers. The wielder o the sword's emotions are amplified, making the user's chakra reflect that, giving all pure chakra based attacks by +30, and enhancing the users physical strength as well. When the sword is in use the user's outward appearance is given a blueish glow. While the sword does not increase the user's speed, it gives the user strength matching that of Tsunade. The sword may shoot of small blasts of chakra eqivalent to that of a C-ranked attack. The user may also channel his chakra through the sword, giving it equal strength of a sword with raiton charged through it. Its reach may be extended by chakra, making it double in length.
*Can Not be destroyed, but cannot destroy everything
*Can only shoot up to three C-ranked Chakra Blasts Per turn
*Blade is only 3.5 feet Long

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~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

 

[Emperor]

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Yes, I know I wrote the first one so it sounds funny, but I just did the humour because I was in a good mood, and so please treat it as a legitimate submission.

( Mufogen: Kakyaku no Fuzengarite ) - Blanket Illusion: Imperfect Reaper of Legs

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Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 35
Damage Points: Depends on conditions given below.
Generally, the worst ninja to fight are those that move so fast that they dodge attacks, and can strike without notice. To correct this deplorable state of affairs, and to eventually counter the speeds of certain Konoha Jounin as well as some ninja from other villages [ most notably the Raikage ] the Akatsuki came up with this technique to quickly render those ninja unfit for battle during the eventual conflicts that would occur in their quest for world domination.
After some brainstorming by the most powerful members of the organisation, it was brought to a conclusion with the startling proclamation that the legs were essential for the generation of speed. The rest of the group, understandably stunned by this unexpected conclusion after hours of ideation, remained contemplative.
Again, the onus of development fell on the shoulders of the same brainstormers. After another extended session, the above technique was developed. Some members claim it was the product of watching a silver-haired Jashinist trip on a wire - though the brainstormers merely smile mysteriously when this is mentioned.
To wit, however, the working of this devastating technique is as follows. The member of Akatsuki [ henceforth referred to merely as "the member" ] casts an illusion over the complete area. Except for the member himself [ or herself, to avoid looking chauvinistic ]any person in the area finds that their legs seem to stop moving due to the illusion affecting the motor control of the target's brain.
While this may seem a rather anti-climatic result, the effect on a running target is devastating. With the legs suddenly stopping, the upper part of the target's body is violently thrown forward, while their legs remain in position, meaning the target falls down violently on his [ or her ] head.
The technique has an even more devastating impact as the speed of the target increases. One merely running at normal ninja speed or slightly higher will probably experience bruising. One running at speeds matching those of the released Eight Gates will suffer a broken skull, and resulting unconsciousness. The explanation for this phenomenon involved extreme calculation on the Akatsuki's part using high-level Mathematics and many arguments [ the same Jashinist, for instance, insisted that 3x8=11 ] and ends in the equation f=ma which answers why force increases as speed increases. Akatsuki have recently issued a statement wherein they plan to sue a man called Newton for copying their formula.
The technique has been found to have an effect on speedily running Uchiha or Jinchuuriki as well, due to the fact that they take a second to break the illusion, which is more than enough to make them bash their head on the ground. This property of the technique developed, apparently, from testing. It is unconfirmed that Uchiha Itachi found himself falling down mysteriously repeatedly one day.
In an effort to control the spread of this technique [ and also possibly pranking of Uchiha Itachi ] the Leader has banned any Akatsuki member from using this technique more than thrice per battle on a promise of painful death. Furthermore, he is willing to throw any Akatsuki who teaches it to a non-Akatsuki into a pool of rabid fangirls, which is why the Akatsuki members never teach to this to anyone except each other.

~ Extract from Pg.37, Akatsuki Handbook for Idiots.

( Mumyo Jinpu Ryu Satsujin Ken: Mizuchi ) - Limitless Divine Wind Style Killer Sword: Mizuchi

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Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 35
Damage Points: 70
" The voice of the wind...the god murdering strike, Mizuchi."
The wind in the arena begins to howl, swirling around both user and opponent with the force of a strong breeze. The user grins, before making a motion as if he is pulling an imaginary sword out of a scabbard. Instantly, the wind in front of, behind, to the sides of and above the opponent form themselves into slicing streams that appear pure white to an opponent. Capable of slicing through wood and stone with ease, the streams of wind rip the unlucky opponent into pieces from every direction should they connect with him.
~ The user may call upon the wind to perform this technique only thrice per battle.
~ There has to be a gap of one turn between each use.

( Ura Hassun ) - Reverse Hassun

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Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
" Naginata Hijutsu, destroyer of men."
The user holds his hands together, as if grasping an imaginary staff. Chakra begins to flow through his hands, forming a naginata. He then rotates the naginata violently with his hands, and then, before releasing it, makes it rotate in the opposite direction with his chakra. The conflicting rotations of the naginata allow it great destructive power that rips apart the target. The naginata can be thrown or used to stab at close range. If thrown, its rotations generate it such speed that it cannot be diverted from its trajectory by wind.
~ The force of the rotation causes skin to peel from the user's hands. He can, therefore use this technique only once per battle.

~Declined~

 

[Caliburn]

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Rank:S
Type: Attack
Range: Medium/Long (it can be short, but that depends on how the fireflies are positioned)
Chakra cost: 40 (+10)
Damage points: 80 (-10)
Description: The user creates many small, glowing greenish fireballs that float around an enemy by focusing katon-based chakra into his hands (or sword) which are then released. The idea behind this attack's name is that before he attacks with them, the small fireballs look like fireflies in the air, making the opponent dropping his guard as it doesn't look like an attack. These 'fireflies' surround the target (or targets) on all sides and not only the target, but a large area around him.
The user then has two options. Or he makes them all explode at the same time, creating a deadly inferno that can even evaporate water sources or he can send them all at once towards the opponent, making them explode all at once on the opponent. The attack can cover a wide terrain.

*Can only be used twice per battle*
*The user can't use any katon jutsu's next turn*
*The user takes -10 damage*
*The user can keep the fireflies intact for one turn, but he needs to pay +10 chakra*
*Can only be taught by Caliburn*

~ Reduce the explosion size ~

I already submitted this one once, so I'm just trying it again as it got declined.

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The world's strongest thrust, there are four ways to preform this technique. These four variations only have very small differences:

1. This is the standard one. The user places his right foot in front and positions his left more to the back. He stretches his right arm and places the tip of the blade on his right hand and he grabs the end of the hilt with his left hand. He then just runs towards the opponent, using the speed of Ken Ki, and thrusts the sword anywhere he wants. In the case the thrust is evaded, the user can still make a vertical side-slash.
2. The stance is exactly the same, only you raise your right hand, which results in the blade pointing to the sky. This is to attack opponents with the thrust who are airborn.
3. The stance is exactly the same, only now you raise your left arm, which results in the blade pointing to the ground. The user jumps into the sky and thrusts the opponent diagonally from the air downwards.
4. The strongest form of the Gatotsu. It's preformed in short range while standing still. Normally the user needs the speed of the legs to thrust, however now it uses all the muscles of the upper body, resulting into an incredibly powerful thrust.
   
   The user can change which adaptation he wants to use while he's doing the technique. For instance when he's doing a straight thrust and the opponent jumps into the air, he can raise the sword with his hand instantly to thrust the opponent while he's airborn. With other words multiple thrusts are possible during the same move. The thrust is so strong it penetratres the opponent till the guard of the sword.
   This is also one of the longest sword-attacks possible as when the user thrusts, he completely stretches his body forward with, at the climax of the attack, the end of the hilt positioned on the palm of the user. So all the users energy is focused into the sword (while normally some gets lost due to the way you hold a sword)
   
   *Can only be taught by Caliburn*
   *The user must have released Ken Ki*
   *Can only be used four times per battle*

The four variations:

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~ Approved ~

This one already got approved, I'm just resubmitting them.

Old one:

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short/medium/long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80(-10 for the user and +20 for the oppenent if he would dodge it, the 80 doesn't count then)
Description: This is an advanced form of the Burning ash accumulation-jutsu. The user focuses chakra in his stomach and releases it as an extremely hot ash cloud(1000?C) with incredible speed from his mouth(up to 700 km/hr). This cloud can only travel over ground and water. When it travels over the ground it absorbes large chunks of earth and rock, making it even more dangerous. When traveling over water, the water evaporates and makes the cloud even faster, but a lot lighter.
Even if the opponent escapes, the ash burns his lungs and skin.

*Can only be used 2 times/battle*
*The user has automatically -10 damage*
*The user can't use any Katon jutsu's the next 3 turns*
*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*It's still weak against water jutsu's, it only travels faster if it goes straight over it*

Based on a true natural phenomenon:

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New one: I deleted the part that it only can travel over ground and water as it's just not needed, the blue parts are the things I added and I changed the restrictions a bit.

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80(-10 for the user and +20 for the oppenent if he would dodge it, the 80 doesn't count then)
Description: This is an advanced form of the Burning ash accumulation-jutsu. The user focuses chakra in his stomach and releases it as an extremely hot ash cloud(1000?C) with incredible speed from his mouth(up to 700 km/hr).
When it travels just above the ground it absorbes large chunks of earth and rock, making it even more dangerous. When traveling over water, the water evaporates and makes the cloud even faster, but a lot lighter.
The jutsu doesn't require any handseals and by clicking your teeth, the cloud explodes tremendously. However even without blowing up it's incredibly strong.
Even if the opponent escapes, the ash burns his lungs and skin.

*Can only be used 2 times/battle*
*The user can't use any katon jutsu's the next two turn*
*The user has automatically -10 damage*
*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*It only travels faster if it goes straight over water, but this doesn't mean it's stronger than water*

Based on a true natural phenomenon:

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~ Declined. No, do not submit it again with these changes. ~

You hurt my feelings :T_T: lol

Rank:S
Type: Attack
Range: Medium/Short
Chakra cost: 40 (+10)
Damage points: 80 (-10)
Description: The user creates many small, glowing greenish fireballs that float around an enemy by focusing katon-based chakra into his hands (or sword) which are then released. The idea behind this attack's name is that before he attacks with them, the small fireballs look like fireflies in the air, making the opponent dropping his guard as it doesn't look like an attack unless he is experienced [ Kage onwards ]. These 'fireflies' surround the target (or targets) on all sides and not only the target, but also the area around him (up to five meters on every direction).
The user then has two options. Or he makes them all explode at the same time, creating a deadly inferno that can even evaporate water sources within that five meters or he can send them all at once towards the opponent, making them explode all at once on the opponent.

*Can only be used once per battle*
*The user can't use any katon jutsu's next turn*
*The user takes -10 damage*
*If user releases fireflies from sword, he cannot use Kenjutsu for next turn. If from hands, no Taijutsu next two turns.*
*The user can keep the fireflies intact for one turn, but he needs to pay +10 chakra*
*Can only be taught by Caliburn*

~ Approved, I edited bits ~

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: 100 (-20)
Description:The user starts to focus an enormous amount of katon-based chakra into his sword and starts to spin it above his head while the chakra keeps building up momentum into the sword. Then he impales the sword into the ground, releasing the large amount of chakra into the earth instantly. The ground begins to shake as multiple extremely long fire spears erupt from the ground at varied angles at different times to surround and trap the opponent in a prison of flame-spears on all sides.
Because the spears appear from different places and angles, it can even block and imprison people with extreme speed due to its structure.
Soon there are so many spears it has become a large inferno which consumes the opponent completely, changing the environment into a molten and heavily scorched wasteland

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*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*Can only be used once per battle*
*The user can't use any katon-jutsu's next turn*
*The user takes -20 damage due to the use and loss of a large amount of chakra*

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

Rank:S
Type: Attack
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user focuses katon-based chakra into his sword and then he slams the sword on the ground creating a fissure in the earth and releasing a large amount, condensed fire in it. The fire travels to the opponent at high speeds, splitting the earth apart, and then engolves the opponent completely + it partially feels like he's struck with a large sword.
It's incredibly hard to extinguish these flames. Not because they're hot, but because a large part of it is in the earth and the user can divide the fissure into multiple ones. For instance he can split them in two and make them redirect to the left and right and then again straight forward. This makes it hards to aim the water source as it can be a web of multiple fissures. A spreading wave of water, however, can extinguish the entire thing.

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*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*Can only be used once per battle*
*Fires last for one turn only*

~ Approved, I edited bits ~

 

[Passion]

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( Mokuton: kanadzuchi no gunyagunya mokuzai ) - Wood release: Hammer of Flexible wood

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Type: Supplementary - Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A ( + 30 per hit )
Description: The user will focuse Earth based chakra on hand at the same time with Water based chakra on other hand. After that the user will perform Tiger → Horse → Tiger → Snake → Boar → Bird changing user's own arm into big trees that resemblaces a big sledgehammer and part at the tip is filled with spear likeish sharp spikes. The wood of hammer if flexible so it can be swinged huge distances and create combos of multiple hits by the hammer that's hardened wood which is almost hard as iron or rocks. This move is advanced and manipulated version of

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Note:
- Can be used only once
- The wood arm lasts two turns unless the user reverts it

~ Declined, this is basically of a canon jutsu ~

( Mokuton: Fūin Akuma bai mon ) - Wood release: Sealed Demon dual gate

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Type: Defence
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A ( - 15 to user )
Description: User will make Snake → Dragon → Rooster → Boar handseals and raise Gates of special wood before him. The wood gate is sealed shut by multiple hard wooden and it has statues on each side of the gate that take form of Madara and Hashirama senju and these statues connected to each other by hands from behind the the gate. Symbol of fire is carved in the middle of this gate and the gate is able to withstand attack at the power of Menacing ball. The jutsu can be broke by strong punch combined with advanced Doton jutsu like Earth spear of Kakuzu's.
Note:
- Can be used only once
- No wood for two turns afterwards
- The gate last for one turn.
- User is strained so much that he begins panting with exhaustion, drastically lowering his physical abilities like speed, strength, agility etc.
- Any Taijutsu used after this will have rank reduced by two.

( Genjutsu: Suna taifū ) - Genjutsu: Sand Storm

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Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: User will make Tiger handseal and release chakra on surroundings while glaring into opponent's eyes making opponent think that strong sandstorm is ravaging. The sandstorm causes opponent's vision to be blurred and the opponent will squint own eyes preventing the opponent from targetting attacks accurately.
Note:
- Can be used only once
- Dojutsu isn't affected by this technique
- No genjutsu for rest of the battle

~ Both Approved, I edited them. ~

 

[Daemon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Genjutsu: Vi-nasu Furai Wana Zansatsu ) - Genjutsu: Venus Fly Trap Massacre

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Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user Summons A Swarm Of Venus fly traps that use their roots to bind the opponent will the others devour him/her. Even though this is an illusion the opponent is paralyzed and cannot move.
Note:
- Can be used only once
- Dojutsu isn't affected by this technique
- No genjutsu for rest of the battle
- Genjutsu Lasts for One turn

~ Declined,similar to existing jutsu. ~

 

[Typhon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

White Secret Technique: Whipping Worms
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: After summoning the ten puppet collection of Chikamatsu the puppetteer controls the 10th puppet causing it to bow its head to the ground. Whip-like wires extend from the three holes on its head and dig into the earth. The whips burrow through the earth and come up at the spot of the puppeteer's choosing. These whips can then be used to strike the opponent with devastating lashes capable of cutting through limbs, or it can be used to grab onto an opponent's limbs trapping them in place.
~ Must be a puppet user.
~ Must have the ability to use the 10 puppet collection of Chikamatsu.
~ The 10th puppet is immobile during this move.
~ Only usable three times per match.

~ Japanese names ? ~

White Secret Technique: Three Buddhist Treasures Vacuum Destruction
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage: 50
Description: After summoning the ten puppet collection of Chikamatsu the user manipulates puppets #4, #6 and #8 to form a three man pyramid. Puppet #4 activates the technique which creates a powerful vacuum that pulls everything in front of it through the small opening between the three, destroying them.
~ Can only be used with the ten puppet collection of Chikamatsu.
~ The vacuum is prone to being overloaded by large amounts of things.
~ When used it can last until the user's turn is finished.
(This is actually a cannon jutsu, but it wasn't on the official list.)

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White Secret Technique: Sealing Technique: Lion Closing Roar
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description:This sealing technique completely blocks the target's chakra with a sealing formula (封印式, fūin-shiki) drawn on the ground or a wall. This is done by closing all the tenketsu of the person caught in the middle. Signifying this is the stylized kanji for "close," or "shut" (閉, hei) drawn in the middle of the sealing formula. This technique uses a lion-headed kannon. This ninja tool is used by Chiyo as a means for using the Sealing Technique: Lion Closing Roar. It is kept inside one of the puppets from the Puppet Collection of Chikamatsu. It starts out as a small ball that can be held in one's hand, but when thrown grows out into a man-sized lion's head with numerous large fangs and its mouth wide open. If aimed correctly, the tool will pin the target against a wall with its mouth, making them unable to move.
~ Only usable once per match.
~ Must be using the ten puppet collection of Chikamatsu.
(This is also a cannon ability that was not on the jutsu list.)

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~ For the last time, this is the custom jutsu submission, not canon jutsu submission. Talk to Kaito. ~

 

[Alucard]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Just so you know what is the Gift of the Hermit Group, it's nothing special, just a type of chakra used on the Fire Temple.

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Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: -
Description: The user will focus on his Gift of the Hermit Group chakra and for a matter of seconds, he will enter on a state of meditation. With this, the user's chakra perception is amplified multiple times, so that he can carefully sense chakra to the point of knowing how much chakra one is releasing.
*User doesn't know what is the nature of the chakra (i.e. Fire Jutsu)
*User must have mastered Gift of the Hermit Group
*Usable only on Alucard Nosferatu Bio

~ Restrict the whole thing somehow, else you're just gaining the abilities of a sensor ~

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will focus on his Gift of the Hermit Group chakra bringing up the ideals of the Fire Temple. After that, the user will release pressurized chakra through all of his body and the ground around him will start to break. This technique will grant him speed comparable to the second version of a tailed beast transformation. With this jutsu, the user's jutsus which require the Gift of the Hermit Group type of chakra are increased by +15 damage.
*User must have mastered Gift of the Hermit Group
*Usable once per battle
*Lasts 4 turns
*Usable only on Alucard Nosferatu Bio

~ Reduce the speed drastically, and remove the extra power up. If you want the power up, add restrictions that forbid use of any other thing except Fire Temple Techniques. ~

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 90
Description: The user will focus a great amount of his Gift of the Hermit special kind of chakra while doing a row of hand seals. After that he will clap his hands. A huge pack of dogs made of spiritual energy will appear on the field. The user will send them to attack the opponent and once near him, the user can make the dogs to explode. Each dog does an enormous exp
*User must have mastered Gift of the Hermit Group
*Usable once per battle
*If on Shunkō Mode, the turns remaining will decrease by one
*Usable only on Alucard Nosferatu Bio

~ What, no restrictions ? And this is Forbidden, so it had better be good, self-damaging ones like burning your hands etc. ~

 

[HiddenShadowNinja]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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This is the jutsu i'm referring to

Summoning: The Black Gate
Type- Defensive
Rank- A
Range- Short
Chakra cost- 30
Damage- N/A
Description- After preforming the needed hand signs the user summons a great black gate out of his shadow, which can block any attack A-rank or lower.
*Only HiddenShadowNinja can use/teach this jutsu
*Must be a member of the Nara clan to use this jutsu
*This jutsu lasts for 3 turns

Opening the Gate: The Nine
Type- Attack
Rank- S
Range- Short-Long
Chakra cost- 45
Damage- 90
Description- After summoning The Black Gate the user opens its doors by sending his shadow chakra into them. This reveals nine hooded black riders on horseback with long swords lined up across the opening. These riders then converge on the target all at once slashing down upon him/her. After the attack is finished they return through the Black Gate which then dissapates back into the shadows. These riders are the original nine Shadow users. They attempted to make a forbidden jutsu but it backfired upon them and their shadows are now trapped within the jutsu they tried to create, forced to do the bidding of any Nara clan member strong enough to summon them. And because they are just shadows, any attacks go right through them as they continue to chase down their target.
*Only HiddenShadowNinja can use/teach this jutsu
*Must be a member of the Nara clan to use this jutsu
*Must have Summoned The Black Gate beforehand.
*Unaviodable unless with space/time ninjutsu
*No other Shadow jutsu for 2 turns after this
*These riders only last for the turn this justu is used
*This jutsu can only be used once per battle

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

 

[Ben-sama]

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(Asaito Tate) Thread Shield

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Rank : S
Type : Deffensive
Range : Short
Chakra Cost : 40
Damage Points : N/A
Description : Using His Threads, Kakuzu Forms A Big, Round And Powerful Shield In Front Of Him To Block The Enemie's Attacks, He Can Aswell Make Tiny Openings In The Shield To View What Is Ahead.
- Twice Per Battle
- Only Kakuzu Can Use

(Asaito Tama) Thread Sphere

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Rank : S
Type : Offensive
Range : Short/Mid
Chakra Cost : 40
Damage Points : 80
Description : Using His Threads, Kakuzu Forms A Sphere Around The Opponent With No Opening Which Then Closes In On The Opponent - Crushing Him. Some Threads Will Be Infused With Chakra, That If The Opponent Would Escape, The User Would Be Alarmed.
- Once Per Battle
- Only Kakuzu Can Use This Technique

~ Both Approved ~

(Fukumen Kokuou) Mask King

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Rank : S
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short
Charka Cost : 40
Damage Points : N/A
Description : Kakuzu's Masks Will Fuse Into One Great Being Out Of Threads Which Will Have Control Of All The Elements That Kakuzu's Masks Posses And Will Be Able To Launch Multiple Attacks At Once
- Once Per Battle
- Lasts For 3 Turns
- Every Turn The Mask King Stands, He Absorbs 10 Chakra Points Out Of The User To Keep Him Intact.

(Genjutsu : Osore No Mizu) Illusion Technique : Fear Of Water

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Rank : A
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short/Mid
Chakra Cost : 30
Damage Points : N/A
Description : The User Sends The Opponent Into An Illusion Where The Opponent Obtains A Phobia Of Water... Everything Water Related Will Cause The Opponent To Panic And Every Touch Of Water Will Paralyse The Opponent For 5 Seconds.
- Lasts For Two Turns
- Once Per Battle
- No Genjutsu During The Turn And The Next Turn This Jutsu Is Used.

(Suiton : Aoi Naito Nami) Water Release : Blue Knight Wave

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Rank : S
Type : Offensive/Deffensive
Range : Short/Long
Chakra Cost : 40
Damage Points : 80
Description : The User Materializes A Very Large Amout Of Water Out Of Nowhere And Then Launches It In The Form Of A Big Wave Towards His Opponent, The Waves Very Front Is Shaped In A Group Of Medieval Knights That Are Infused With The User's Chakra Will Be Able To Change Direction Of The Wave Or Even Attack The Opponent With Their Own - Water Made Swords. The Wave Is Able To Rip A Building Off The Ground. The Wave Leaves A Large Amount Of Water On The Ground.
- Once Per Battle
- No Suiton During The Turn The Turn This Jutsu Is Active.

~ These three Declined ~