[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Seblax]

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Icelator's Mist (Hyouton: hikiri )

Rank: S
Type: Offense/Defense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80 (10 to user)
Description:The user sends his ice chakra through the air making it turn into a freezing mist that blinds by creating a light ice surface over it the enemy while it senses the enemy’s motions just like the sensing rain style. Moreover, the user keeps regenerating it so that even if the enemy uses jutsu that take it away it would regenerate itself.
~ can only be used once per battle.
~ +10 damages for each hyouton attack used while the mist is on
~ can only stay for up to 3 turns
~ the user can't use ice element after the mist limited time is off for 2 turns


Grey Glove (kai gurabu)

Rank: A
Descriptions:A glove that has tattoo tags over it that hold weapons inside it that the user can summon them by charging his chakra through the tattoos and do a one-hand handseal.
~ this is a custom glove for bios not a jutsu

Fan-blade ( uchiwakun )

Rank: A
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Descriptions: A large fan that has blade like shape in its own outer angles that is made from developed aluminum, the inner fan is made from light developed Rubber that can contain a huge amount of wind, it has two chains out of it that is robbed by chakra links and the users hand giving the ability of controlling it even from distance, it can also be sealed within the grey glove.
~Makes fuuton jutsus +10 damages to the enemy
~protect from fuuton attacks up to B rank (C and D rank doesn't damage the user)*changeable by mods*

wind style: Stun ( Fuuton: teiryuu)

Rank: S
Type: Defense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descriptions:the user charges his fuuton chakra throw all the air around him and the enemy then concentrate it making the enemy unable to use the wind styles neither he could making the fuuton element unable to be used for 2 turns.
~ can only be used once per battle

ice style: Forest of the Frozen screams ( Hyouton: mori touketsu himei

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offense/Defense/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50 (+20 if there was no water over the ground)
Damage Points: 100
Descriptions:the user charges the water the he created before with his ice chakra through his water's chakra making it fill with the ice chakra, then makes the ground turn to ice that would stick the enemies legs to the ground, at that moment it rises randomly creating trees of ice from that slicing through the enemy’s body fast.

~This jutsus range depends on the range the water is covering *if water did cover the ground*
~there is also "roots" created under to those trees, so fleeing down wont help
~can only be used once per battle
~the user can't use ice jutsus for 3 turns
~can be followed with ice expansion style only as a ice jutsu
~ all the Branches are are directed at the enemy

~ All Declined ~

 

[Xylon]

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Meteorain (Ryuusein)
Rank; S
Range; Medium-Long
Type; Offense
Chakra cost; 30
Damage point; 50
Description; While in 8 gates form, the user focuses gates chakra in his fist, when released the magnitude temporarily levitates the user from the ground, directing the massive amount of energy towards his target, the user moves with the speed of light violently punches the targets gut, breaking through all defenses not letting even a gate user to be able to react against it.
Note; Must have activated 7th gate.
-Usable twice in a battle.
-Gates last 2 lesser turns.
-Damage the user by 20.

7th gate allows the user to vaguely move at the speed of light;

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9th gate (Kyumon)
Rank; S
Range; Self
Type; Supplementary
Chakra cost; 40
Damage points; N/a
Description; 9th gate is a fighting skill, enabled when used 8 gates with the influence of yin/yang, unlocking crown chakra. The technique stabilizes the rushing effects of the gates, giving user complete command over his chakra, since the overflowing gates chakra is directed towards the 9th gate outside the body, the positive effects of the gates more or less remains the same, while the negative effects are removed.
Note; Must know yin/yang and 8 gates.
-Last 2 turns.
Advantages
• Allows the user to user to keep his variety of techniques whilst maintaining the gates.
• Removes all the damaging effects of gates.
Disadvantages
• Weakens the effectiveness of gates, 30% damage is removed from the total increase in damage.

~ Both declined ~

 

[Pain..]

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( Konchuu Kuro-n Ginou No Jutsu ) Bug clone skill

Rank: A
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Type: Supplementary
Description: Basically the kikai (or destruction bugs) turn into a complete and exact replica of the Aburame user.

~ Declined, last warning to read rules and restrictions ~

 

[Caliburn]

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Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40 (+10 each turn)
Damage points: 80
Description: The user starts to awaken partially his swordsman spirit, which manifests itself in two extra heads and four extra arms, which all have a sword. In fact these extre limbs are actually nothing more than "partially clones". The difference is they aren't separate, they can't preform any elemental jutsu's outside Butai Kyuuen. They also share one brain, unlike normal clones, and give a 360? vision.
After that the user holds the swords so the blades are pointing towards the opponent. He then leaps towards him slashing him with all nine of his swords at once, shreading the opponent completely, afterwards ending in a position where all the swords are held in a way to make them look like they're fanning out.
All the swords cover, for a swordsman, a wide area around the user and are strong enough to break nearly any swordsman stance and to defend against it. By focusing chakra into the swords, the user increases also the defensive capacity of the attack so that it can even block A rank jutsu's.

*Can only be used two times per battle*
*Can't be used the turn after it was used*
*User needs to know both Santoryu and Ken Ki*
*The extra limbs can't preform elemental jutsu's, though the user can keep them around for max of two turns, which cost +10 chakra each turn*
Creating the extra limbs:

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Just after the attack:

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Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80 (+10 each turn)
Description: The user starts to awaken partially his swordsman spirit, which manifests itself in two extra heads and four extra arms, which all have a sword. In fact these extre limbs are actually nothing more than "partially clones". The difference is they aren't separate, they can't preform any elemental jutsu's outside Butai Kyuuen. They also share one brain, unlike normal clones, and give a 360? vision. If the user already has done this before this technique, he doesn't have to do it again.
The user places all his swords in some kind of a quarter/half-wheel shaped horizontal position. When close to the opponent, the user rotates something between 90?-180? and during it he slashes with all his swords. Due to the wheel-shaped position, the slashes aren't all at the same time, but are a series of slashes one after another on different hights due to the rotation.
The user ends with his swords in a full wheel-shaped position.
It's both and attack and defence that protects the user on all sides and is strong enough to block most sword-attacks and to break any stance. By focusing chakra into the swords, the user increases also the defensive capacity of the attack so that it can even block A rank jutsu's.

*Can only be used two times per battle*
*Can't be used the turn after it was used*
*User needs to know both Santoryu and Ken Ki*
*The extra limbs can't preform elemental jutsu's, though the user can keep them around for max of two turns, which cost +10 chakra each turn*

The user after the attack:

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PS: I asked Rei about the extra limbs and she was more or less fine with it, outside "no extra peewees" but it's the RP-mods call. As it's possible to create an entire copy of yourself that can think and move on its own, I don't find it impossible just to create temporary a few extra limbs that can't use any elemenetal jutsu's, which is in se the main point of clones.

~ All Approved ~

 

[-Quest-]

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Sorry Question but you just copying Anbu Kakashi Lighting BodyFlicker Jutus

u mean this??

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Raikou Shunshin no Jutsu [Lightning Body Flicker Skill]

Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 10
Damage: N/A
Description: the user fire off a bolt of lightning. This bolt of lightning is actually not meant to hit the opponent, as where the lightning bolt strikes is where the user will transport

looks different to me

 

[Icemyster]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Konchuu Kuro-n Ginou No Jutsu ) Bug clone skill

Rank: A
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Type: Supplementary
Description: Basically the kikai (or destruction bugs) turn into a complete and exact replica of the Aburame user.

this is already a jutsu.

 

[Mugiwara]

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(Hone Heigou)- Bone Merge

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Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user uses Shikotsumyaku to merge with the users bones that are on the battlefield. Once he merges with the bones, he can move at high speed through the bones. After the user has merged with the bones, he is completely untrackable.
Note: Only 3 times per battle.
Note: 2 rounds between use.
Note: The user has to be in contact with the bone in order to merge with it.

~ No Kaguya Zetsus please O_O ~

(Tessenka no Mai Tate) - Dance of the Clematis Shield

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Rank: S
Type: Defense
Range: Short(Self)
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using the same bones used for Dance of the Clematis Flower, the user will form a huge shield, that is nearly indestructable except to attacks which are Forbidden Rank. The shield is spiral formed around the users arm, and big enough to cover one side of the user's body.
The spiral shaped shield starts spinning, deflecting incoming attacks.
Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: Lasts for one round
Note: While the user has this technique active, he cannot form any handseals cause he only has 1 free hand.

~ Approved, I edited bits ~

(Hone Matsuri)- Bone Constriction

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Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user manipulates bones that are nearby the opponent making them form into 5 whips that pop out of the earth at really high speed capturing the opponents hands, feet, and neck. These whips will harden after capturing the opponent, going back to their diamond hard form, restricting the opponent from making any movement. These whips for at extremely high speed, no handseals needed, the user just stomps the ground.
Note: Usable twice per battle

~ Declined ~

(Hone Matsuri)- Bone Constriction

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Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user manipulates bones that are nearby the opponent making them form into 5 whips that pop out of the earth at really high speed capturing the opponents hands, feet, and neck. These whips will harden after capturing the opponent, going back to their diamond hard form, restricting the opponent from making any movement. These whips form at high speed, no handseals needed, the user just stomps the ground.
Note: Usable once per battle

~Declined~

(Suiton: Mizu Umihebi no jutsu) - Water Release: Water Hydra Technique

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Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user focuses a huge amount of chakra into a huge volume of water, manipulating the water, forming it into a 9 headed hydra. For each head that is cut off, two new ones are regenerated. This hydra, after being formed will continue attacking the opponent till its destroyed. It can shoot water orbs from its mouths, with power of each orb equal to an C rank water attack.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: Lasts for two rounds.
Note: No water attacks one round afterwards.

Declined~ Similar Technique exists o_o

 

[Sin]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Fuu/Ototon:Naishoubanashi Nemuri Suto-Mu)- Wind/Sound Release: Whispering Sleep Storm
Type: Supplementery/Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points: 60
Description: While focusing wind chakra through the air, and performing a 4 handseal sequence. The wind chakra will flow faster as then the user will release sound waves from there mouth, making rhe vibrations rub against the wind chakra in the air, producing a whispering but strong sound, this sound will make the opponent hearing faulter and not work as well, but also make them seem sleepy, as the vibrations will go into the opponent's ears, and confuse their brain vibrations. This will slowly make the opponent lose balance and sense of everything, if the opponent has a eye kekkei genkai activated, the opponent will be able to directly see the vibrations coming, and may be able to stop it. After a turn, the opponent will fall asleep only able to wake up by some other noise loud enough to break the opponent's slow but powerful trance.
-Usable twice per battle
-Must have mastered sound and wind
-Must be taught by Sin or any other sound learner who has been taught this
~Pending~ Someone else please check O_O
~ Declined ~

(Genjutsu: Chouin Konmei)- Illusion Technique: Sealing Confusion
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Doing one seal, to which they place a illusion which just requires the opponent to be facing in the direction of which the user is facing, this illusion makes any seals either the opponent's self or the user, the opponent will think any seal will seem like 3x as many as it really is, so if the user does 3 seals, the opponent think's 9 seals, this confuses the oppponent so when they do a seal they will keep doing many seals even though they only needed to do that many seals.
-Lasts 4 turns unless the opponent is a rank lower then it lasts 5 turns, any lower it will be 6 turns
-Must be taught by -Sin-
-This genjutsu takes affect right away
~Declined~ kind of weird IMO Oo and 6 turns is too long. It's OP because it prevents the opponent from using jutsu

 

[Ben-sama]

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(Raiton : Denkou Bakudans) Lightning Release : Lightning Bombs

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Rank : S
Type : Offensive
Range : Short/Mid
Chakra Cost : 40
Damage Points : 80
Description : The user will jump into the air and then concentrate lightning chakra in his palms and release it in the shape of two lightning orbs that once in collision to something solid (Example : Ground, other jutsu etc.) will explode covering everything in a 5 metre radius in an explosion.
- Three times per battle
- No raiton during the turn in which this jutsu is used

~Declined~ Similar Jutsu Exists

(Katana Dansu) Blade Dance

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Rank : S
Range : Short/Long
Type : Offensive/Deffensive
Chakra Cost : 40
Damage Points : 80
Description : The User Infuses His Blade With Chakra And Throws It Into The Air, Continiously Spinning. The User Controls The Chakra Within The Blade To Maintain The Blade In Air, Keep It Spinning And Then Can Guide It Into The Location He Wants.
- Once Per Battle
- Blade Lasts In Air For 3 Turns, Then Returns To It's Owner

Approved~

(Sanzoku Taijutsu : Sakashima) Bandit Taijutsu : Reverse

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Rank : A
Type : Offensive
Range : Short
Chakra Cost : 30
Damage Points : 60
Description : The User Will Infuse His Legs And Arms With Chakra And Make A Fast Backflip, With One Leg During The Backflip The User Will Position One Of His Legs To Collide With His Opponent, Most Usefull Is To Collide With The Opponent's Chin Sending Him Backwards.
- Three Times Per Battle

Approved? Oo

 

[Passion]

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( Rōnin kenshi jutsu: Shi ken jiten ) - Ronin swordsman arts: Four sword rotation

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Rank: S
Range: Short
Type: Attack
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80 ( - 15 to user )
Description: User will take out his Ronin blade set and set the blades on specific order. Shortest blade, Wind blade is held on user's mouth sideways. Middle sized blade, Lightning blade is wielded on left hand. Longest blade, Water blade is wielded on right hand. As the user has put sword on this order he will focus wind chakra on shortest blade and lightning chakra on middle sized blade. When the chakra is infused to these swords user will run towards the target and make deadly set of multiple slashes and stabs while rotating. When user has rotated for a moment he will put the blades into their scabbards and finish the rotating with swing of Guillotine.
Note:
- Can only be used once
- No Genjutsu or Taijutsu on same turn
- Causes - 15 damage to user
- Skilled swordsman can block the attacks even if he/she has no dojutsu
- No sword attacks for one turn afterwards

~ Approved ~

( Taijutsu: bōgyo chuugaeri ) - Taijutsu: Defending Somersault

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Rank: S
Range: Short
Type: Defence - Attack
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A ( Same as opponents attack )
Description: This move works on the fact that user will focus chakra on brain and nervous system gaining abnormal speed of 3rd gate and calculating skills that are almost good as sharingan's. So as the opponent attacks user he/she will use this move to defend effectively from incoming taijutsu attack and make somersault kick on opponent's chin at the speed of 3rd gate launching opponent back one range.
Note:
- Can be used twice per battle
- Recharging this move takes three turns
- Causes - 10 damage to user every time it's used
- No taijutsu or genjutsu for two turns after usage

~ Are you serious ? Declined ~

( Fuuton: yōriku makura ) - Wind release: Pillow landing

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Type: Supplementary - Defence
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: User will fill own lungs with air and infuse wind chakra into it. As the wind chakra is infused the user will breath out big gust of wind that cannot be used as attack. The gust is used to protect themselves from falling from heights by blowing the air at ground or thing that you're landing on causing the landing to be soft as pillow preventing user to get hurt from falling great heights.
Note:
- Can be used twice per battle

~Approved~

 

[Seblax]

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Icelator's Mist (Hyouton: hikiri )

Rank: S
Type: Offense/Defense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80 (10 to user)
Description:The user sends his ice chakra through the air making it turn into a freezing mist that blinds by creating a light ice surface over it the enemy while it senses the enemy’s motions just like the sensing rain style. Moreover, the user keeps regenerating it so that even if the enemy uses jutsu that take it away it would regenerate itself.
~ can only be used once per battle.
~ +10 damages for each hyouton attack used while the mist is on
~ can only stay for up to 3 turns
~ the user can't use ice element after the mist limited time is off for 2 turns


Grey Glove (kai gurabu)

Rank: A
Descriptions:A glove that has tattoo tags over it that hold weapons inside it that the user can summon them by charging his chakra through the tattoos and do a one-hand handseal.
~ this is a custom glove for bios not a jutsu

Fan-blade ( uchiwakun )

Rank: A
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Descriptions: A large fan that has blade like shape in its own outer angles that is made from developed aluminum, the inner fan is made from light developed Rubber that can contain a huge amount of wind, it has two chains out of it that is robbed by chakra links and the users hand giving the ability of controlling it even from distance, it can also be sealed within the grey glove.
~Makes fuuton jutsus +10 damages to the enemy
~protect from fuuton attacks up to B rank (C and D rank doesn't damage the user)*changeable by mods*

wind style: Stun ( Fuuton: teiryuu)

Rank: S
Type: Defense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descriptions:the user charges his fuuton chakra throw all the air around him and the enemy then concentrate it making the enemy unable to use the wind styles neither he could making the fuuton element unable to be used for 2 turns.
~ can only be used once per battle

ice style: Forest of the Frozen screams ( Hyouton: mori touketsu himei

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offense/Defense/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50 (+20 if there was no water over the ground)
Damage Points: 100
Descriptions:the user charges the water the he created before with his ice chakra through his water's chakra making it fill with the ice chakra, then makes the ground turn to ice that would stick the enemies legs to the ground, at that moment it rises randomly creating trees of ice from that slicing through the enemy’s body fast.

~This jutsus range depends on the range the water is covering *if water did cover the ground*
~there is also "roots" created under to those trees, so fleeing down wont help
~can only be used once per battle
~the user can't use ice jutsus for 3 turns
~can be followed with ice expansion style only as a ice jutsu
~ all the Branches are are directed at the enemy

~ All Declined ~

so you just declined everyone's submition and approved only mod's

i request from another mod to see those, or at least tell me what to do with them?what should i edit?

Icelator's Mist (Hyouton: hikiri )

Rank: S
Type: Offense/Defense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80 (10 to user)
Description:The user sends his ice chakra through the air making it turn into a freezing mist that blinds by creating a light ice surface over it the enemy while it senses the enemy’s motions just like the sensing rain style. Moreover, the user keeps regenerating it so that even if the enemy uses jutsu that take it away it would regenerate itself.
~ can only be used once per battle.
~ +10 damages for each hyouton attack used while the mist is on
~ can only stay for up to 3 turns
~ the user can't use ice element after the mist limited time is off for 2 turns


Grey Glove (kai gurabu)

Rank: A
Descriptions:A glove that has tattoo tags over it that hold weapons inside it that the user can summon them by charging his chakra through the tattoos and do a one-hand handseal.
~ this is a custom glove for bios not a jutsu

Fan-blade ( uchiwakun )

Rank: A
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Descriptions: A large fan that has blade like shape in its own outer angles that is made from developed aluminum, the inner fan is made from light developed Rubber that can contain a huge amount of wind, it has two chains out of it that is robbed by chakra links and the users hand giving the ability of controlling it even from distance, it can also be sealed within the grey glove.
~Makes fuuton jutsus +10 damages to the enemy
~protect from fuuton attacks up to B rank (C and D rank doesn't damage the user)*changeable by mods*

wind style: Stun ( Fuuton: teiryuu)

Rank: S
Type: Defense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descriptions:the user charges his fuuton chakra throw all the air around him and the enemy then concentrate it making the enemy unable to use the wind styles neither he could making the fuuton element unable to be used for 2 turns.
~ can only be used once per battle

ice style: Forest of the Frozen screams ( Hyouton: mori touketsu himei

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offense/Defense/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50 (+20 if there was no water over the ground)
Damage Points: 100
Descriptions:the user charges the water the he created before with his ice chakra through his water's chakra making it fill with the ice chakra, then makes the ground turn to ice that would stick the enemies legs to the ground, at that moment it rises randomly creating trees of ice from that slicing through the enemy’s body fast.

~This jutsus range depends on the range the water is covering *if water did cover the ground*
~there is also "roots" created under to those trees, so fleeing down wont help
~can only be used once per battle
~the user can't use ice jutsus for 3 turns
~can be followed with ice expansion style only as a ice jutsu
~ all the Branches are are directed at the enemy

Problems? Well, first, you're over your week's submission...but aside from that...

Ice Mist has been created before. Grey Glove is not in template and how can it NOT be a jutsu. This is the custom jutsu submission O_O. Fan blade has no restrictions. In Wind Stun, your grammar usage was so terrible that I couldn't even interpret it. What the hell does "making the enemy unable to use the wind styles neither he could making the fuuton element unable to be used for 2 turns" mean? O_O Did the sentence fragment just asexually reproduce an even worse sentence fragment?
The last jutsu is OP......did I do a good job of explaining it thoroughly enough? O_O

 

[Nadare]

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Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Healing Points: 5
Description: If you are an advanced and highly skilled Swordsman, there is theoretical sword fighting and training behind practical sword fighting.
Swordsman are teached about the body. To be able to fight, they must know of every muscle stretch and bone movement. After long years of body study and herbal knowledge, this brings two things:

1. Swordsman are able to tell from great distance what stretches or bone breakes one had/has or even what movement he has done, after this jutsu has been used. This way they can at once know what movement is going to follow once they see the previous one. They get an advantage at what's going to happen, therefore a second more to react. This jutsu gives them the ability to predict someone's movement. They can only predict up to one second in the future, though the user still doesn't see the future of the surrounding. He only sees what the muscles of the enemy are going to do.
   
2. They can perfectly help themselves from shallow wounds, non-complex poisons, etc. Here we are not talking about med-ninjutsu - This is advanced First Aid. Example:
   They can bandage cuts and stabs with their clothing. They are able to find herbs to defy non-complex poison. They can stop their blood flow with wires in a certain point if needed. And most importantly, they are able to gather chakra in points that hurt. This way they can defy pain. Whenever this jutsu is used, user instantly puts bandages over his cuts, and gathers chakra in the point where it hurt. This way, he partially stops bleeding, and prevents pain to a certain point. Although this is nothing near med-jutsu, and it not even the same branch of art. This is , as mentioned, advanced first aid.

*Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.*
*Note: Must have completed practical and theoretical sword training under Caliburn.*

Declined~ A bit OP and the Second part seems simply impractical. O_O

Rank:A
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This is a highly advanced Kenjutsu. After the user has awoken Ken Ki, he puts his sword in front. He holds it in one hand (no matter which), therefore the sword is positioned a little bit to the side, in front of the shoulder. The sword must be very polished, and it must not have been soaked in blood in the fight before. The user gathers chakra in the sword. The sword works as a mirror. It projects an image of the user on the other side of the sword. The enemy therefore sees two users, and doesn't know which one is the real. Now comes the hard part;
After long years of training, and after awakening the Ken Ki, he is able to manipulate his weapons with great accuracy and style. With the sword full of chakra, he moves it in a very complex way, making the mirror-image of the user move. This restricts his movements, but if he is in Ken Ki mode, his movements and reflexes are faster. In the use of this jutsu, the movements are restricted, as mentioned, but only to the level of a normal swordsman if the user used Ken Ki.
The user moves the sword, making the image attack, defend and everything else. To the enemy seems like he is attacked by two people BUT only one of them is real, and the user can freely say who it is. The other one is an illusion. This causes to the enemy to defend from attacks that don't exist, often slashing and stabbing in the air. Example of an attack:

• After creating the mirror image of myself, 1 puts together his hands, and crouches. 2 runs towards him, and steps on the hands, jumping backwards. In the same second, 1 jumps upwards, giving him extra power to jump. In the air, 2 makes some somersaults, and then lands behind the enemy. He takes the sword from his mouth and slashes the enemy. As the enemy wants to block it, the attack goes through him but does no effect. In the meantime, he is stabbed by the real one (No.1) from behind. Note: While 1 was doing the step for 2, he had the sword in his mouth, controlling 2 with his mouth.

They would be called with numbers, to cause less arguments. This the ultimate distraction, and few are able to see through this jutsu. Only Byakugan, Sharingan can see who is the real one. This jutsu only lasts as long as does Ken Ki. After Ken Ki is over, the illusion disappears. Also, the user has to control the illusion constantly with a lot of concentration. He can control him with the moving of his hands. Advanced swordsman can control the illusion while having the sword in the mouth. The difference between this jutsu and a simple clone technique is, that here the enemy never knows which one is the real one.

*Note: Can only be used once.*
*Note: Must have completed sword training under Caliburn.*

~Declined~

Please, read carefully the description. Everything is explained. Also, if you have to decline them, please tell the reason. Thank you U_U

 

[Riku..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

No word for microburst, so I just took the words for micro and burst, just saying in case this means something totally different when put together. o.o

(Fuuton: Maikuroheki) Wind Style: Microburst
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: XX (death on contact from the downburst or outburst/cushion) (20 to user)
Description: A microburst is a localized column of sinking air, literally. From the sky, a large burst of air will push down to the ground. This blast is extremely large, and in width, it could be comparable to the size of many, many buildings put in a position that would make the outline of a circle. The microburst begins with the downburst, which is when the air is actually being pushed down onto the ground. This power is strong enough to flatten forests and possibly buildings. Once it pushes down, bringing an abundance of rain down with it in a wet microburst, the microburst enters its second stage—the outburst. The wind, because it’s going downwards, goes out in all directions by curving sideways and slightly upwards when colliding with the ground, making this part of it unavoidable, as it spreads out across the terrain. The winds are still strong enough to push back and break trees. Afterwards, the ‘cushion’ stage will occur. During this stage, winds at the surface will begin to slow while the wind will begin to curl up even more. Essentially, this is an enhancement of the outburst. The winds will begin to spread out even more and in even more broad directions, moving higher up into the sky as they do so, filling almost the entire terrain with powerful wind. None of these stages are cancelled out by the other, during the outburst, the downburst is still occurring, and the cushion just boosts the outbursts power and range. As mentioned earlier, there are two versions of a microburst—dry microbursts and wet microbursts, one of which creates an elemental combination. A wet microburst, which is, as its name suggests, accompanied by precipitation, would be almost like a hurricane. During the downburst, heavy rain would come down with it, and in the outburst, the rain would blow out sideways instead of downwards, maintaining its elemental combo, so first it’s like a downwards hurricane and afterwards, almost identical to a normal hurricane, but the wind and water is all moving in different directions outwards. The dry microburst, meanwhile, starts with rain in it, but, however, it evaporates before it reaches the ground, and this cool air descends and accelerates towards the ground. Essentially, a dry microburst is a version of the wet one, without rain however. This microburst is cooler than a wet microburst however, which doesn’t do much more than slightly lower the temperature for a moment.
Note: Only usable twice per battle
Note: The user must wait a minimum of 10 turns before doing this the second time.
Note: The user can only use one other jutsu during this turn.
Note: No wind jutsu for 3 turns.
Note: The user must specify whether they are creating a wet or dry microburst (since a wet one would be an elemental combination, while a dry one would be only wind)
Note: Because this is essentially a natural disaster enhanced by chakra to boost its effect, the microburst does not last for too long, approximately 10-20 seconds in total, due to it being sustained by chakra, since a normal microburst usually lasts for a few seconds.
Note: More information on microbursts:

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Note: The user is not effected by the microburst, as they can control the chakra in it to move the wind past them, but takes 20 damage after usage due to the large amount of chakra it takes.

~ Declined, this is OPed. If you want to control a natural disaster, reduce its power drastically. ~

 

[Konoha's Yellow Flash]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Doton: kyojin Nami )Earth Style:Earth Tsunami
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user focuses chakra on his hands and he then slams the ground, infusing the chakra on it, this makes a 20 meter earth wave appear and go towards the opponent.
Note:Usable twice per battle

(Doton Kangoku no jutsu) Earth Style: Earth prison
Rank:C
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra cost:15
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The user focuses chakra on his hand and comes closer to the opponent and traps him/her within an earth prison.The user must mantain contact with the earth prison or otherwise it will be broken.
Note:it can easily be broken with a lightning attack

(Doton: Deido Kangoku no jutsu)Earth Style: Mud prison
Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Chakra cost:20
Damage points:N/A
Description:If there is an earth prison jutsu on the battle, the user can infuse chakra on the prison to make it more resistant against attacks , teh difference with this jutsu is that the user does not need to stay besides the mud prison since it is sturdy enough and the jutsu will not break, the user may do wahterver he pleases with the prison(throw it ,compress it ,etc)
Note:Can?t be used if the opponent isn?t trapped within an Earth Prison.
Note: Usable twice per battle
Note: unlike earth prison,this jutsu can only be broken by B rank and above lightning jutsus

~ All Declined. Please do not create techniques that are a mash of existing techniques combined with canon jutsus ~

 

[HiddenShadowNinja]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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(Jissen Kenbu)- Battle Sword Dance
Type- Attack
Rank- B (S-rank if combined with Kaiten Kenbu Rokuren)
Range- Short-Mid
Chakra cost- N/A
Damage- 40 (80 if with Kaiten Kenbu Rokuren)
Description- After using Ryusui no Ugoki to flow around the enemy, confusing them with a constant change in speed, the user strikes from various points using one Kodachi (two Kodachi if combined with Kaiten Kenbu)
*Only HiddenShadowNinja’s bios can use/teach this jutsu
*Must have at least one Kodachi (short sword) to use this attack
*Must know and use Ryusui no Ugoki before using this attack
*Can be instantly combined with Kaiten Kenbu Rokuren only counting as one full move
*If combined with Kaiten Kenbu Rokuren, no C-rank or higher taijutsu next turn

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(Kaiten Kenbu Rokuren)- Spiral Sword Dance Six Successions
Type- Attack
Rank- A
Range- Short
Chakra cost- N/A
Damage- 60
Description- The user spins around rapidly, while holding two Kodachi backhand, to slash the opponent six times instantly. It relies on confusing the the opponent on the direction from which each strike is going to come.
*Only HiddenShadowNinja’s bios can use/teach this jutsu
*Must have two Kodachi to use this jutsu

~ Declined, these don't deserve to be actual techniques of such high ranks ~

 

[Pervyy]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Summoning Animal: Deamons
Scroll Owner: The pervy sage
Other Users who have signed contract: N/a
Summoning Boss if existing: The Lich king
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:

Deamon dragon underling - A dragonkin able to use fire and ice attacks and fly and carry the user.

Deamon Liger - A Deamon liger is a cross between a tiger and a lion with a evil aura with destructive power who is able to use all elements and do great damage. These are summoned in pairs

Prince smaug - Smaug is the prince of the deamons and posseses great power and is harder than others to summon. Smaug has the power to control all elements and yin and yang, though only if the user can. Smaug can weild a deamonic sword with great power.

The lich King - A humanoid who is able to transform into a dragon in an instant, the lich king can use all elements including yin and yang if the user can but takes alot of chakra to summon. The lich king can only be controlled by The pervy sage though maybe he will lissen to others in due time. He, like the prince can transform at will and has the greatest dragon blade of all, Flareon!

~ WTF ? Declined. O_O ~

 

[Caliburn]

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Rank:S
Type: Attack
Range: Medium/Long (it can be short, but that depends on how the fireflies are positioned)
Chakra cost: 40 (+10)
Damage points: 80 (-10)
Description: The user creates many small, glowing greenish fireballs that float around an enemy by focusing katon-based chakra into his hands (or sword) which are then released. The idea behind this attack's name is that before he attacks with them, the small fireballs look like fireflies in the air, making the opponent dropping his guard as it doesn't look like an attack. These 'fireflies' surround the target (or targets) on all sides and not only the target, but a large area around him.
The user then has two options. Or he makes them all explode at the same time, creating a deadly inferno that can even evaporate water sources or he can send them all at once towards the opponent, making them explode all at once on the opponent. The attack can cover a wide terrain.

*Can only be used twice per battle*
*The user can't use any katon jutsu's next turn*
*The user takes -10 damage*
*The user can keep the fireflies intact for one turn, but he needs to pay +10 chakra*
*Can only be taught by Caliburn*

~ Reduce the explosion size ~

I already submitted this one once, so I'm just trying it again as it got declined.

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The world's strongest thrust, there are four ways to preform this technique. These four variations only have very small differences:

1. This is the standard one. The user places his right foot in front and positions his left more to the back. He stretches his right arm and places the tip of the blade on his right hand and he grabs the end of the hilt with his left hand. He then just runs towards the opponent, using the speed of Ken Ki, and thrusts the sword anywhere he wants. In the case the thrust is evaded, the user can still make a vertical side-slash.
2. The stance is exactly the same, only you raise your right hand, which results in the blade pointing to the sky. This is to attack opponents with the thrust who are airborn.
3. The stance is exactly the same, only now you raise your left arm, which results in the blade pointing to the ground. The user jumps into the sky and thrusts the opponent diagonally from the air downwards.
4. The strongest form of the Gatotsu. It's preformed in short range while standing still. Normally the user needs the speed of the legs to thrust, however now it uses all the muscles of the upper body, resulting into an incredibly powerful thrust.
   
   The user can change which adaptation he wants to use while he's doing the technique. For instance when he's doing a straight thrust and the opponent jumps into the air, he can raise the sword with his hand instantly to thrust the opponent while he's airborn. With other words multiple thrusts are possible during the same move. The thrust is so strong it penetratres the opponent till the guard of the sword.
   This is also one of the longest sword-attacks possible as when the user thrusts, he completely stretches his body forward with, at the climax of the attack, the end of the hilt positioned on the palm of the user. So all the users energy is focused into the sword (while normally some gets lost due to the way you hold a sword)
   
   *Can only be taught by Caliburn*
   *The user must have released Ken Ki*
   *Can only be used four times per battle*

The four variations:

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~ Approved ~

This one already got approved, I'm just resubmitting them.

Old one:

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short/medium/long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80(-10 for the user and +20 for the oppenent if he would dodge it, the 80 doesn't count then)
Description: This is an advanced form of the Burning ash accumulation-jutsu. The user focuses chakra in his stomach and releases it as an extremely hot ash cloud(1000?C) with incredible speed from his mouth(up to 700 km/hr). This cloud can only travel over ground and water. When it travels over the ground it absorbes large chunks of earth and rock, making it even more dangerous. When traveling over water, the water evaporates and makes the cloud even faster, but a lot lighter.
Even if the opponent escapes, the ash burns his lungs and skin.

*Can only be used 2 times/battle*
*The user has automatically -10 damage*
*The user can't use any Katon jutsu's the next 3 turns*
*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*It's still weak against water jutsu's, it only travels faster if it goes straight over it*

Based on a true natural phenomenon:

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New one: I deleted the part that it only can travel over ground and water as it's just not needed, the blue parts are the things I added and I changed the restrictions a bit.

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80(-10 for the user and +20 for the oppenent if he would dodge it, the 80 doesn't count then)
Description: This is an advanced form of the Burning ash accumulation-jutsu. The user focuses chakra in his stomach and releases it as an extremely hot ash cloud(1000?C) with incredible speed from his mouth(up to 700 km/hr).
When it travels just above the ground it absorbes large chunks of earth and rock, making it even more dangerous. When traveling over water, the water evaporates and makes the cloud even faster, but a lot lighter.
The jutsu doesn't require any handseals and by clicking your teeth, the cloud explodes tremendously. However even without blowing up it's incredibly strong.
Even if the opponent escapes, the ash burns his lungs and skin.

*Can only be used 2 times/battle*
*The user can't use any katon jutsu's the next two turn*
*The user has automatically -10 damage*
*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*It only travels faster if it goes straight over water, but this doesn't mean it's stronger than water*

Based on a true natural phenomenon:

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~ Declined. No, do not submit it again with these changes. ~

 

[~Kensei-kun~]

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(Mi Ten Katana ) Three Heaven Sword
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short
Chakra: 60
Damage: N/A
Description: The user focuses chakra into a box with a seal on it when the seal is broken the box opens and three swords come out that where created with my own hands and have my own blood in them so only i can use them.The swords are one long sword and two short swords.The long sword is a pure black katana aand the short swords have pure white blades.This blades are chakra blades allowing them to combine with other elements and slash through them with ease.
~The more elements applied the stronger then swords become

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~ Declined. Many weapons exist similar to these ~

 

[Sinister]

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(Raiton/Genjutsu:Raikou Toukai Kokudo )- Illusion/Lightning Technique: Lightning Destruction Realm
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The User cast an illusion in which everything around the opponent suddenly turns dark, Limiting his vision to only in front of him, When attempting to move the opponent will also find out that he is chained to the ground. Now unable to move there will be a loud crack of thunder and the rain begins. Thus drenching the foe in water. while it is raining the sky illuminates with thunder, All while this is happening the Foe will begin to see Medium sized blue balls of electricity surround him, 1 ball will turn into thousands of electricity orbs. Under the Users commands (which the foe will hear) the thousands of little orbs begin to glow even brighter and grow in size eventually causing multiple explosions around the opponent eventually resulting a Huge electrified explosion that Kills the opponent within the genjutsu. outside of the genjutsu the opponent actually gets wet and severly burned if not avoided in time.
•Usable By Sinister only
•Usable only once per battle
•User cannot use Lightning element 3 turns afterward
•No More Genjutsu rest of battle

~ Declined. Half of this is very reminiscent of an existing Genjutsu ~

 

[Gatsndshanks]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(San Ame no Jutsu) Acid Rain Technique

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Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user changes the compounds of rain droplets into acid that can corrode metal or burn flesh.
• Can only be used twice per battle

~ Declined ~