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S-Rank Lightning cool lightning like Lightning Blade !!
M'kay, so I assume you already went through the what is lightning and meditation shiz, so we can go straight to jutsu then.

(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: Two powerful lightning blasts.This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.

Essentially, this is a pretty easy jutsu, containing the chakra is the most difficult part. Focus lightning chakra in each of your hands, and then shoot the lightning chakra forward while materializing it into actual lightning, so that two powerful blasts go towards your opponent.
 

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M'kay, so I assume you already went through the what is lightning and meditation shiz, so we can go straight to jutsu then.

(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: Two powerful lightning blasts.This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.

Essentially, this is a pretty easy jutsu, containing the chakra is the most difficult part. Focus lightning chakra in each of your hands, and then shoot the lightning chakra forward while materializing it into actual lightning, so that two powerful blasts go towards your opponent.
*focusing lightning chakra in each of my hands*
*shoot the lightning ckakra forward while materializing it into actual lightning*
 

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*focusing lightning chakra in each of my hands*
*shoot the lightning ckakra forward while materializing it into actual lightning*
*Your hands spark, but nothing comes out*

You didn't shoot the chakra out far enough, or quick enough. Shoot it out of your hand more quickly. If you don't do it quick enough, then there's a chance that the lightning won't even leave your hand, hence what just happened.
 

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*Your hands spark, but nothing comes out*

You didn't shoot the chakra out far enough, or quick enough. Shoot it out of your hand more quickly. If you don't do it quick enough, then there's a chance that the lightning won't even leave your hand, hence what just happened.
*focusing lightning chakra*
*shoot the lightning chakra quick*
 

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*focusing lightning chakra*
*shoot the lightning chakra quick*
*The lightning shoots out all over the place, even shocking you yourself, and doesn't reach very far.*

This time it wasn't concentrated enough. When you expel the lightning chakra, make it so that it goes out almost as if you were shooting it through...... a tube. Of course, since it's lightning, it's going to be pretty crazy when you shoot it out, but you still have to contain the chakra enough so that when you shoot it out... that doesn't happen.
 

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*The lightning shoots out all over the place, even shocking you yourself, and doesn't reach very far.*

This time it wasn't concentrated enough. When you expel the lightning chakra, make it so that it goes out almost as if you were shooting it through...... a tube. Of course, since it's lightning, it's going to be pretty crazy when you shoot it out, but you still have to contain the chakra enough so that when you shoot it out... that doesn't happen.
*focusing lightning chakra*
*shoot the lightning chakra quick and focus to look like a tube*
 

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*focusing lightning chakra*
*shoot the lightning chakra quick and focus to look like a tube*
*Two blasts of lightning shoot out as I focus Raikiri in both hands. The jutsu all cancel each other out.*

While I wouldn't mind a bit more description, nice job. We'll go back to Raikiri and then Kirin after this, cause I'm gonna be a pain in the butt with both of those jutsu. >=)

Raiton: Chidori Raimei (Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm)
Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a circular area destroying all thats in its way.

Essentially, you focus chidori in your hand. When it hits something or when you push the chidori outwards, you spread the chakra in different directions to make giant lightning bolts that spread out from the original chidori.
 

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*Two blasts of lightning shoot out as I focus Raikiri in both hands. The jutsu all cancel each other out.*

While I wouldn't mind a bit more description, nice job. We'll go back to Raikiri and then Kirin after this, cause I'm gonna be a pain in the butt with both of those jutsu. >=)

Raiton: Chidori Raimei (Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm)
Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a circular area destroying all thats in its way.

Essentially, you focus chidori in your hand. When it hits something or when you push the chidori outwards, you spread the chakra in different directions to make giant lightning bolts that spread out from the original chidori.
*focusing chidori in my hand*
*It hits lightning*
*spread the ckaran in different directions to make a giant lightning bolts that spread out from a original chidori*
 
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