(Sanmyaku no Ma ni Shiroi Kawa o Kakatte Iru)- Between the Mountains Rests the White River
Type: Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 0/30
Damage: N/A
Description: This technique is based upon the user’s grip strength and specific muscle control gained from years of taijutsu training. When a sword strike (or any other weapon) nears the user, they will utilize their increased grip strength to stop the weapon in its path. This can be used on A-rank and lower attacks. Utilizing individual fingers, the user will stop an incoming sword strike by pinching the blade between the tips of the middle finger, pointer, and the thumb. This avoids the sharp edge of the blade while also stopping the weapon from reaching the body. Utilizing the remainder of the body, the user will also negate the momentum from the attack by tensing the muscles at precisely the right moment to counteract the incoming force. Another variation is using the open palms of both hands to intercept the attack. This attack can also be chakra-infused to stop chakra based attacks up to the same rank.
Note: Usable three times per battle
Note: Requires mastery of taijutsu and NB taijutsu due to extreme muscle control (non-restricted)
(Kai Gyorai) - Chi Torpedo
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user begins by being in motion this can be anything from a full on sprint to a simple step forward. As the user is in motion he catapults himself from the ground in an extreme spinning motion towards the target using his raw leg strength and a massive amount of chakra to torpedo himself forward colliding with anything in his path. As he does so the user releases chakra from every area of his body creating a dense aura that engulfs him as he spins toward the opponent at a fast pace. If the user is able to strike an opponent directly he would do so headfirst with the top of his head reinforced heavily by the use of chakra and the dense aura that surrounds him.
With the momentum of this technique the user is able to move from mid range to short range at a quicker pace being a bit faster then what he can do running full sprint towards someone. This allows him to create and exploit an opening in mid range or exploit an opening in short range and push the opponent back while doing moderate damage to him. The attack itself has enough force behind it to knock an opponent away up to five meters while also breaking bones such as the ribs and bruising muscles and internal organs leaving the opponent somewhat weakened by the attack. It can also cause moderate friction burns and lacerations due to the chakra aura.
Notes:
Can only be used twice per battle
Has a 2 turn cd
No S rank taijutsu in the same turn
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Pretty sure this one already exists as a CJ, and definitely already exists as the Inuzuka's technique where they basically do the same thing.
(Raiton: No kōdo) – Lightning Release: Lux's Luminosity
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user concentrates their raiton chakra and then channels it through a weapon. The weapon can be anything; sword, kunai, shuriken, explosive tag etc. The raiton chakra is incredibly concentrated and the user utilizies his chakra control to keep the erratic nature of the lightning in check, so that no crackling or sparks come flying off the weapon. The only sign that there is any difference with the weapon is that it glows a pulsing blue because of the lightning flowing through it. At the users command the raiton chakra will begin to emanate from the weapon, increasing the weapons brightness as the lightning is steadily released from it. This makes the weapon release a blinding flash of light and it continues to give out this dazzling light for about half a dozen seconds but the user can end it early if he wants to. The blinding light has no effect on the user as the raiton is his own chakra.
Note: This can be used on large amounts of small weapons, like a bunch of shuriken or kunai but they must all be imbued at the same time and the technique must be repeated to use the jutsu on another batch of them.
Note: Any large weapons must have this jutsu repeated to be used on again.
Note: Cannot be used on a CW
Note: Can only be used thrice
Note: No lightning techs over S-rank in the same turn
Note: Two turns must be waited after each use before using it again
Declined
Double rainbow? What could it mean?! (Subtle Lux reference. Man, the Lux Lich Bane days...) Anyways, issues with this. First of all, it makes sense for it to go through a regular weapon, but explosive tags and smaller weapons? That doesn't work at all. They can't channel or focus such a sheer amount of Lightning chakra. Also, I'm confused as to the point of this technique. Does it do damage? Does it simply blind? Why is it even S-Rank?
(Raiton: No kōdo) – Lightning Release: Lux's Luminosity
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user concentrates their raiton chakra and then channels it through a weapon. The weapons it can be applied on a pretty varied; sword, kunai, shuriken etc. The raiton chakra is incredibly concentrated and the user utilizies his chakra control to keep the erratic nature of the lightning in check, so that no crackling or sparks come flying off the weapon. The only sign that there is any difference with the weapon is that it glows a pulsing blue because of the lightning flowing through it. At the users command the raiton chakra will begin to emanate from the weapon, increasing the weapons brightness as the lightning is steadily released from it. This makes the weapon release a blinding flash of light and it continues to give out this dazzling light for about half a dozen seconds but the user can end it early if he wants to. The blinding light has no effect on the user as the raiton is his own chakra. However the larger the weapon that it has been applied on, the more potent the blinding light. Shuriken being small and not being capable of focusing a large amount of raiton chakra can only give off a weak flash which would only hinder the opponents peripheral vision. If the weapon is larger like a sword or an axe than the blinding light would be much more powerful and the opponent would have to either look away or close their eyes because of its strength and might even leave permanent damage to their vision. The weapons still have their offensive abilities, which aren't boosted by the electricity at all because of the condensed manipulation.
Note: This can be used on large amounts of small weapons, like a bunch of shuriken or kunai but they must all be imbued at the same time and the technique must be repeated to use the jutsu on another batch of them.
Note: Any large weapons, such as swords etc, must have this jutsu repeated to be used on again.
Note: Cannot be used on a CW
Note: Can only be used thrice
Note: No lightning techs over S-rank in the same turn
Note: Two turns must be waited after each use before using it again Note: It cannot work with explosive tags or any other flimsy weapons
✦ Pending, leaving for someone else ✦ Declined. A few things: Overal, the jutsu isn't all too bad but there are a few essential things wrong with it. The light would blind you, as the chakra to up the light is yours, but the light itself (as light isn't essentially raiton, but you make it so that it is) isn't, as it is an effect of the raiton (lightning CHAKRA) creating lightning (not chakra) which blinds you. The light is thus an effect, of an effect created, which would not have your chakra in it directly, as it is not a direct result of it. If you could somehow manipulate it though, that it bends in a certain way, or specify that it the light only moves a certain way, that is a different story. Also: it's borderline light release, which is a CE. Hence why I'm a bit reluctant and strict about the having to be very specific.
(Suiton: Seputon Riben-Sei) - Water Release: Septon's Convenience
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A (+10 chakra to Water Release techniques)
Damage:N/A
Description: The user will activate an ability which allows them to extract water from the battlefield (for the use of techniques) when its not readily available for the next three turns. Through expending some extra chakra, the user can extract the water residing in mud, swamp, oil and similar liquids. Once the water content of the targeted semi-solid/liquid has been depleted, it will lose its watery consistency. Swamp and mud sources will harden into rock once they're devoid of water content and other liquids will simply leave a residue of miscellaneous by-products. Size is taken into regard so large-scale water jutsus cannot be made from a small puddle.Activating this ability is instant and does not consume any time whatsoever. The reason this technique's activation is instant is because stand alone it does not do anything and its effects are only initiated when the user utilizes a Water Release technique.
Note: Lasts three turns
Note: Can only be used thrice per battle
Note: Can only be Taught by Danzo
✦ Declined, this is just extraction of earth, water based items into water, something I remember seeing before, though i cant recall if it was approved or not. Plus, I wouldn't allow this with earth based jutsu anyway, it's just a method of getting around using water jutsu with no water source. ✦
(Suiton: Seputon Riben-Sei) - Water Release: Septon's Convenience
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A (+15 chakra to Water Release techniques)
Damage:N/A
Description: The user will activate an ability which allows them to extract water from the battlefield (for the use of techniques) when its not readily available for the next three turns. Through expending some extra chakra, the user can extract the water residing in mud, swamp, oil and similar liquids. Once the water content of the targeted semi-solid/liquid has been depleted, it will lose its watery consistency. Swamp and mud sources will harden into rock once they're devoid of water content and other liquids will simply leave a residue of miscellaneous by-products. Size is taken into regard so large-scale water jutsus cannot be made from a small puddle.Activating this ability is instant and does not consume any time whatsoever. The reason this technique's activation is instant is because stand alone it does not do anything and its effects are only initiated when the user utilizes a Water Release technique.
Note: Lasts three turns Note: The substance that is being extracted from must be made from chakra and cannot be a pre-existing source
Note: Can only be used thrice per battle
Note: Can only be Taught by Danzo
✦ Declined, when I said no earth jutsu, I meant that I wouldnt approve this with earth jutsu or earth based items as it is simply just extraction water from earth, something that I am almost 100$ sure has been done before, especially from mud and swamp sources. ✦
(Suiton: Umi no Shinryaku) - Water Release: Ocean's Invasion
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user concentrates his suiton chakra and sends traces of it inside an earthen structure. The traces of suiton chakra while small are abundant throughout the structure, and the larger the earthen structure the more suiton chakra will be stored inside it. The suiton chakra can remain stored there for a turn but if the earthen structure is destroyed before then then the chakra then dissipates harmlessly. The user can form a single seal with one hand, as a means of activating the jutsu, and convert all the suiton chakra into water by increasing the chakra of the traces and then making it take the form of water. This makes the earthen structure seemingly explode in a burst of water and debris from the structure which would crush and drown any opponent caught in it
Note: The chakra only stays in the structure for a turn
Note: Can only be used on earth jutsus as they're tangible, and only within reason
Note: Cannot be used on earth jutsus above S-rank
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[Futon : Sōdaina Kaze no Fenikkusu] - Wind Release : Grand Wind Phoenix Type: Attack Rank: S Range: Short- Long Chakra Cost: 40 Damage Points: 80 Description: The user will gather wind chakra and focus it on the sky, approximately twenty meters above ground. He/She will use the wind chakra to create, and manipulate already-existing wind currents and compress it to a large and pressurized mass of wind resembling a phoenix, and is the half the size of Gamabunta. When the phoenix is fully formed, it will explode into a large and powerful barrage of mini phoenixes that are the size of Aburame bugs and will come down towards the ground and the opponent. The force and power of the individual phoenixes is so great that it is capable of going through three meters of solid, no-rank earth with ease while dealing slight bruises and cuts to an enemy, should they be hidden underground. With the use of a single hand seal, and maintaining that hand seal, the user can manipulate the course of movement the little phoenixes are aimed at to target the enemy, which would allow the user to avoid getting hit by his/her own technique. Note: Can only be used twice per battle and can only be taught by Edward. Note: Cannot use Wind jutsus on the same turn, and no Wind techniques above S-ranks on the next turn. Note: Two turn cooldown between each usages.
Declined. "I have permission from X" isn't allowed. It might have been overlooked sometimes, but that is not the general course of how this works. Remember that.
( Genjutsu: Seigi no te ) - Illusionary Arts: Hands of the Righteous Type: Supplementary / Offensive Rank: A Range: Short-Mid Chakra: 30 Damage: N/A (60 If used Offensively) Description: Hands of the Righteous is an illusionary technique that takes control of two senses: The sense of Sight and Touch. The user will use hand motions to place their hands and cross them across the chest. After doing so, the user will disrupt the normal chakra flow of the target(s) to cast an illusion to one or more targets. In the illusion, the target(s) would feel arms/hands sprouting out of their body, depending on where the user wants the hands to appear out of. This is where the sense of touch comes from, where they would feel the limbs coming out of their body (which won't hurt or anything, just give off a 'weird' feeling on that area), and the hands would be able to make contact with the enemies' body and they'd feel it as well. Depending on the usage, the user can use these hands to do a multitude of things. For example, the user can touch the enemy as a distraction, like tickling or having the hand sprout out to cover the enemies eyes, blocking their vision. Or, if the enemy is running, the user can have the hands sprout out to trip the enemy in the illusion, which would cause them to come at a complete stop in reality. Offensively, the user can use the hands to break bones, like turn their heads a full 360 degrees, causing immense pain or using hands to punch the enemy, which is within the illusion, of course. The usages of it depends on the user's creativity and imagination; of course, there is a maximum of ten arms/hands that they can use in the illusion at any given time. Notes & Restrictions:
- Usable 4 times per battle.
- Teachable by Edward.
- Hands lasts for two turns, or until it is dispelled. Any effects caused by the hands lasts for two turns, like if your vision is blocked from the hands, you lose vision for 2 turns or until dispelled, or if you're unable to move from the hands clutch, that would last for two turns. - Cannot be used to have the hands sprout and force the enemy to move from one location to another.
✦ Declined, I'm against allowing genjutsus of high ranks without handseals, edit it to 2 handseals with a cooldown time in between uses. ✦
Resubmitting: Edited in a cooldown usage and two hand seals.
( Genjutsu: Seigi no te ) - Illusionary Arts: Hands of the Righteous Type: Supplementary / Offensive Rank: A Range: Short-Mid Chakra: 30 Damage: N/A (60 If used Offensively) Description: Hands of the Righteous is an illusionary technique that takes control of two senses: The sense of Sight and Touch. The user will perform two hand seals: Rat and Tiger. After doing so, the user will disrupt the normal chakra flow of the target(s) to cast an illusion to one or more targets. In the illusion, the target(s) would feel arms/hands sprouting out of their body, depending on where the user wants the hands to appear out of. This is where the sense of touch comes from, where they would feel the limbs coming out of their body (which won't hurt or anything, just give off a 'weird' feeling on that area), and the hands would be able to make contact with the enemies' body and they'd feel it as well. Depending on the usage, the user can use these hands to do a multitude of things. For example, the user can touch the enemy as a distraction, like tickling or having the hand sprout out to cover the enemies eyes, blocking their vision. Or, if the enemy is running, the user can have the hands sprout out to trip the enemy in the illusion, which would cause them to come at a complete stop in reality. Offensively, the user can use the hands to break bones, like turn their heads a full 360 degrees, causing immense pain or using hands to punch the enemy, which is within the illusion, of course. The usages of it depends on the user's creativity and imagination; of course, there is a maximum of ten arms/hands that they can use in the illusion at any given time. Notes & Restrictions:
- Usable 4 times per battle with a two turn cooldown between each usage
- Teachable by Edward.
- Hands lasts for two turns, or until it is dispelled. Any effects caused by the hands lasts for two turns, like if your vision is blocked from the hands, you lose vision for 2 turns or until dispelled, or if you're unable to move from the hands clutch, that would last for two turns.
- Cannot be used to have the hands sprout and force the enemy to move from one location to another.
Declined. While the idea behind this genjutsu is very out of the box and original (kudos to that), the effects and possibilities do not make sense in accordance to the rank and power level of it. First of all, you are on the verge of telling how someone feels in the genjutsu (saying that he won't feel the arms sprout out). That in itself is normally an auto-decline, but it also feels like a safe-lock for you. The pain of them sprouting hand all over their body would break the genjutsu, which in itself makes the illusion illogical as there isn't a reasonable way how it wouldn't hurt the opponent. Second, the neck breaking part... Come on man, their head gets a full rotation, and it causes "immense pain"? He would be dead, and by that standard again, the genjutsu would break.
Also: usable 4 times? howmany times are you going to break someone's neck?
Try to re-assess the boundaries of your genjutsu. The hands sprouting out without hurting is doable at best, but not with the current powers it has.
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(Suiton: Mizu Kamigami no Zangyakuna Fukushū) - Water Release: Atrocious Vengeance of the Water Gods Type: Offensive Rank: S Range: Short-Mid Chakra: 40 (-15 per turn) Damage: 80 Description: With the use of three hand seals, the user can summon forth a large vortex of water around the enemy and the user, or around the enemy only. The vortex of water is circular, with a maximum diameter of 15 meters and a minimum diameter of five meters therefore, the target must be within mid-range. It reaches the height of twenty meters and spins at a dangerously fast speed, such that physical contact with the spinning vortex would be capable of cutting off limbs. The vortex itself is more like a spinning wall of water shaped like a circle rather than a vortex, because it is hollow inside and serves as a water source and to keep the enemy inside. Once the "vortex" of water is created, the user, with the use of shape manipulation, will shape hundreds of basketball-sized goldfishes with pressurized 1 foot horns. They attack from all directions, except the direction the user is standing on if he was to create the vortex around him as well to avoid the technique from backfiring. They jump out of the wall/vortex of spinning water as if it was a river and jump out to attempt to impale the target(s). The goldfishes jumping from the walls have a long-reach, therefore, they are able to jump from one side of the vortex and land on the other one and continuously jump back and forth to repeatedly attack the enemy. Notes & Restrictions: Note: Useable three times per battle with a four turn cooldown before each usage Note: Can only be taught by Edward. Note: Lasts 2 turns per usage.
Declined. Clean up the description. You're throwing visualization into it at every sentence. Is it a vortex or a circle? Isn't a vortex circular? You're contradicting yourself over the course of two sentences. Also, an amount of water such as that, materialized out of thin air is a bit overkill, especially given the shape manipulation and control you need over it (as it spins fast enough to cut off limbs. Also, you can probably release it during the same turn? How does that affect the power? You need to try and incorporate these kind of things.
Suiton: Pengin no Sutikkī Mizu - Water Style: Penguin's Sticky Water Type: Supplementary Rank: C Range: Short-Long Chakra: N/A Damage: N/A Description: By concentrating suiton chakra in a specific spot on the battlefield, and applying nature and shape manipulation, the user can effectively create a penguin shaped globule of sticky water. The penguin shaped globule can reach a maximum height of one meter and width of one meter.
Note: Can only be taught by Penguin.
✦ Declined, has been done before, creating sticky water in a specific location on the field ✦
Ivlivs Type: Supplementary Rank: S Range: N/A Chakra: N/A (-30 when using an ability) Damage: N/A Description: Ivlivs, a legendary weapon forged by Medea herself, was a coin roughly the size of a golden drachma, but is actually an aureus made completely of imperial gold, making it indestructible. The coin's two sides have Julius Caesar on one and an axe on the other, which refers to Caesar's victorious conquest over the barbarian tribes of Gaul (Southern France), which were represented by an axe. The coin was found by Ashitaka during a trip to France. He visited an old battlefield where the Roman Legion battled the Gaul, and saw a golden coin laying on the ground. Thinking nothing of it, Ashitaka picked it up and pocketed the coin. In his room in Konoha, Ashitaka flipped the coin to decide a silly question of his, heads being yes and tails being no, but was alarmed to find out when he flipped the coin, it landed on it's head side and begun a transformation. The coin turned into a three foot long imperial gold sword once it landed on heads, and on tails, it transformed into a five foot long lance. Due to Zues' blessing, any raiton channeled through the sword or lance gets a ten damage point bonus. An ability that Ivlivs' sword form has is that if Ashitaka channels raiton chakra through it, raiton armor in the shape of a giant penguin materializes around the user. The giant penguin shroud is an A-ranked ability and follows the elemental strengths and weaknesses for raiton. One ability that Ivlivs' lancer form has is that it can conduct incoming electrical attacks, and by thrusting Ivlivs' javelin form at the opponent, the incoming raiton will be expelled at them in the form of a lightning bolt. This ability is D-S ranked depending on the incoming raiton jutsu's rank. Ivlivs is very loyal to Ashitaka, and if anyone other than him tries to utilize Ivlivs, it will begin to glow and spark a little, purely cosmetic, then transform back into a coin.
Note: Once Ivlivs has been flipped, the user cannot flip it again for a turn
Note: All abilities Ivlivs grants the user can be used thrice per battle with a turn cool down in between each use
Note: Can only be used by Penguin.
✦ Declined, for one the Penguin thing makes little sense in relation the Ivlivs. Secondly, it creates an Elemental Familiar around you created from lightning, done before, only difference is you make a Penguin here. And now you've made the javelin ability more confusing: By one line, you seem to imply that the lightning is created from the javelin itself and travels outwards. Then, you later start it's based on the incoming jutsu rank, making it appear as if you are using incoming Lightning jutsu to counter or something. Whichever it is needs to be clarified and no to the multirank part, choose a rank and go with that. ✦
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Penginsurasshu - Penguin Slash Type: Offensive Rank: S Range: Short-Mid Chakra: 40 Damage: 80 Description: The user will channel their raiton chakra into their hand and stretch it outwards, resulting in a flash of light to appear. Once the flash of light dissipates after a quick moment, two human sized penguins made of raiton can be seen on the immediate sides of the opponent. To make the raiton penguins appear, during the flash of light, the user would channel their raiton chakra on both sides of their opponent. Anything in the middle of the penguins would be stunned for a short while as the user dashes as fast as they can towards the stunned target to perform a numerous amount of slashes with their sword. After performing the combo, the user will channel raiton chakra into their sword once more and thrust it at the opponent and release it upon making contact, resulting in the opponent getting thrown meters away at high speeds with unfocused raiton crackling over their body.
Note: No raiton over A-rank during this turn
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: No kenjutsu over B-rank for the next turn
Note: Can only be taught by Penguin.
Both Pending, leaving for Kurisu ✦ Declined, unreasonable as I thought; there is a short burst of lightning and two penguins appear on each side of the target and anything inside itt would be momentarily paralyzed. This wording makes it almost impossible to avoid being hit by this first burst of chakra. Also S rank is not needed. ✦
Ivlivs Type: Supplementary Rank: S Range: N/A Chakra: N/A Damage: N/A Description: Ivlivs, a legendary weapon forged by Medea herself, was a coin roughly the size of a golden drachma, but is actually an aureus made completely of imperial gold, making it indestructible. The coin's two sides have Julius Caesar on one and an axe on the other, which refers to Caesar's victorious conquest over the barbarian tribes of Gaul (Southern France), which were represented by an axe. The coin was found by Ashitaka during a trip to France. He visited an old battlefield where the Roman Legion battled the Gaul, and saw a golden coin laying on the ground. Thinking nothing of it, Ashitaka picked it up and pocketed the coin. In his room in Konoha, Ashitaka flipped the coin to decide a silly question of his, heads being yes and tails being no, but was alarmed to find out when he flipped the coin, it landed on it's head side and begun a transformation. The coin turned into a three foot long imperial gold sword once it landed on heads, and on tails, it transformed into a five foot long lance. Due to Zues' blessing, any raiton channeled through the sword or lance gets a ten point damage bonus. An ability that Ivlivs' sword form has is that if Ashitaka throws the sword at an opponent and forms a single hand seal, Ivlivs immediately becomes coated in raiton chakra and can be controlled through whistles. Ashitaka must keep the hand seal held and can only control Ivlivs up to mid range before he loses control of it. One ability that Ivlivs' lancer form has is that it can conduct incoming electrical attacks through the tip of the javelin, and by thrusting Ivlivs' javelin form at the opponent, the incoming raiton will be expelled at them in the form of a lightning bolt. This ability is a-ranked. Ivlivs is very loyal to Ashitaka, and if anyone other than him tries to utilize Ivlivs, it will begin to glow and spark a little, purely cosmetic, then transform back into a coin.
Note: Once Ivlivs has been flipped, the user cannot flip it again for a turn
Note: All abilities Ivlivs grants the user can be used thrice per battle with a turn cool down in between each use
Note: Can only be used by Penguin.
✦ Declined, for one what's up with the name? It should have both the Japanese and translated name. If a translation cant be found, you can at least post it twice like ( Ivlivs ) - Ivlivs. Also fix the background, France, Gaul, etc dont really exist in the Narutoverse. Turning into a lightning enhanced lance that is controlled by whistling would be much akin to a Sound jutsu, while not directly being one. Controlling a sword remotely is already a canon jutsu, I dont see it would be needed here either. You should put more thought into this and Greco-Roman mythology, as that is what the stories follow ( For example, Jupiter and not Zeus ) and his relation to lightning and thunder. ✦
Penginsurasshu - Penguin Slash Type: Offensive Rank:A Range: Short-Mid Chakra:30 Damage:60 Description: The user will channel their raiton chakra into their hand and stretch it outwards, resulting in a flash of light to appear. Once the flash of light dissipates after a quick moment, two human sized penguins made of raiton can be seen on the immediate sides of the opponent. This is done because the raiton penguins travel from the user's location all the way to the opponent via running at average speed. Anything in the middle of the penguins would be stunned for a short while as the user dashes as fast as they can towards the stunned target to perform a numerous amount of slashes with their sword. After performing the combo, the user will channel raiton chakra into their sword once more and thrust it at the opponent and release it upon making contact, resulting in the opponent getting thrown meters away at high speeds with unfocused raiton crackling over their body.
Note: No raiton over S-rank during this turn
Note: Can be used thrice per battle
Note: No kenjutsu over A-rank for the next turn
Note: Can only be taught by Penguin.
(Kemono no Kage no Gyakushū) – Shadow Strikes from the Beast
Rank: A
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will channel chakra into two swords and will start swing in multiple directions releasing purple waves of chakra in an omnidirectional waves. The waves of chakra can block ninja and break through B rank and below earth ninjutsu.
Note: Can only be taught by Korra.
Note: Usable 4 times a match
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Uhh, what? Block ninja? Please fix all the errors in your description. Grammatically as well.
(Kemono no Kage no Gyakushū) – Shadow Strikes from the Beast
Rank: A
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will channel chakra into two swords and will start swinging them in multiple directions releasing purple waves of chakra in an omni directional waves. The waves of chakra can block ninja tools and break through B rank and below earth ninjutsu.
Note: Can only be taught by Korra.
Note: Usable 4 times a match
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Declined. Template is wrong. First Type, than Rank.
(ZX Basutā: Noba Kōgeki) ZX Buster: Nova Strike
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage:60
Description:The user, utilizing Hienkyaku, will quickly leap into the air and release a massive burst of chakra from their feet, while cloaking their body in chakra; the result is a massive aura that surrounds the user and accelerates them forward at high speeds, protecting them from damage and allowing them to act as a virtual cannonball in a type of full-body flying tackle.
Note: Cloak of chakra only protects against jutsu of A rank and lower
Note: Can be used 4 times per battle
Note: Can only be taught to ZX Buster users.
✦ Declined, too vague and generic, exists in many forms as well. This is just surging chakra to enhance your speed as you deliver a hit, in this case a tackle. ✦
(ZX Basutā: Buki Heki) ZX Buster: Weapon Burst
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: ZX Buster is a style that uses chakra manipulation as a secondary factor in its art. Using the chakra metal gloves(or in cases of being used by a master, their bear hands), the user is able to manipulate "leaked" chakra, which is the basis of ZX buster, in a various weapons to augment close quarter combat. Out of this "leaked" chakra, the user is able to create a series of weapons to aid them in battle. These weapons can range from Tonfa to a staff to twin daggers, a sword etc. However, only one weapon can be created at a time and would need the already created weapon to disperse before creating new ones. The weapons are created by molding this "leaked" chakra into the form they desire then compressing that chakra into a solid form to be used in battle. Due to the solid construction of the weapons, they can clash with solid objects.
Note: Can be used 4 times per battle.
Note: Each weapon created lasts 2 turns before dispersing.
Note: Can only be taught to ZX buster users
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Genjutsu: Nagano Shobatsu (Illusion Arts: Eternal Punishment)
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: This is a layered genjutsu derived from the Dormant Punishment genjutsu. The first technique of the jutsu is the parent jutsu. The second illusion is a lower level, B-ranked illusion which creates an illusion of a clone(s) of the user appearing point blank range and killing him in an instant which induces a sudden shock almost like in killing intent. However shortly after the hallucination of death everything resets as if nothing happened just before happening again in the same or in a different way. The object of the second illusion is to create momentary fear and/or a momentary shock that disturbs the victim’s focus either making it difficult for them to react and determine their opponent’s real movements by continuously looping the image of their death. However, if the user figures out they’re in an illusion and they attempt to release the technique with kai or a chakra surge, the first illusion, Dormant Punishment, will activate and merely add the layer of binding the user with chains while the second illusion continues to loop. Requires Rat, Bore, Tiger, and Dog Hand seals.
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Note: No other genjutsu can be used while this one is in play
Note: Can only be used twice per battle and counts towards one of the usages for Dormant Punishment.
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Declined Layered Genjutsu but then you say the first technique of the jutsu is the parent technique and...uh? Even I am lost. Also, the effects are similar to Izanami and I cannot approve it.
(Sono Yuuen Kawauso Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Sono Otokooya)- Great Otter Summoning Technique: The Father Type: Summoning Rank: S Rank Range: Short Chakra: 40 Damage: 80 Description: Otokooya is the original otter, he is roughly about the same age as the giant toad from Mt Myo. But it doesn't show, Otokooya is an large otter, weighing in at 520 lbs. He is 4 ft in girth and 11 ft long. Do to his enormous size Otokooya can only be summoned in large bodies of water. Otokooya was raised in the waters Amegakure. When he was a child there was an oil spill and that is the reason he is the only black otter. The oil had a significant impact on his body's capability. The oil caused his furs to grow more compactly together. Causing his furs to be extremely dense, allowing him to resist up to C Rank ninjutsu. In Amegakure folklore it was said that the reason for it always raining was because of the abundance of the otters in their waters. So whenever Otokooya is summoned black clouds are formed above the user and it begins to rain oil. The oil is highly flammable and if ignited can cause harm to those effected by the oil. Otokooya's chakra is linked directly to the clouds so he can feel disturbances in the air and react appropriately. Otokooya being able to only move freely in the water he has grown adapt to the element of water. Due to this Otokooya can freely use all water jutsus s rank and below that don't require hand seals. Otokooya being the grand otter and father of all otters is the only otter that can speak. Notes:
-Can only be summoned in large bodies of water
-All jutsu used by Otokooya count towards the user's 3 moves per town
-Can resist only c rank ninjutsu. Anything above sends the otter back to Ame
-Otokooya's back when below water can be stood upon without revealing his presence. -Can only be summoned once per battle for a maximum of 4 turns
-Can only be summoned by those I teach and myself
Declined
You need to clarify a bunch of things. Firstly, the oil rain. Exactly what is the range of this? You said it forms above the user, but if it's only raining on him, then what's the point? Also, standing on top of him without others being able to sense his presence? How is that logical when
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(Ninpou: Shinshi Koin)- Ninja Arts: The Gentleman's Coin Type: Supplementary/Attack Rank: B rank Range: Short-Mid Chakra: 20 Damage: 40 Description: The user performs 2 brief hand seals then molds a large amount of chakra into the compacted form of a singular coin. The coin glows a bright light blue color and is about the size of the average currency coin in Naruto (Quarter). From long range the coin is near impossible to see from mid range the coin just appears as a light blue blob and at short range it can be distinctly seen. The coin materializes along the top of the user's thumb while the rest of the fingers wrap around in a fist almost. The user then flicks his thumb upward flicking the coin forward towards the opponent. The coin flickers through the air rotating and gathering force, about half way the user clicks his teeth and via shape manipulation the coin can do one of two things. The coin can expand into a massive coin which falls down onto the opponent from above crushing him. Or the coin multiplies into 10 smaller coins which attack the opponent head on and pelt like bullets or needles in Naruto context. The coin is buoyant in nature meaning it can travel across water, land or through the air the same effect occurs in the end. Before the coin's effect a cloud of smoke occurs and through the smoke the actual attack happens. The coin can be used for supplementary purposes, meaning only occurring for role play. The user says something cool like "Oh I forgot to tip you" In the dawn tavern and flicks the coin behind him. When it hits the ground it causes a small fire or explosion.
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Gecko
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Uhh, you say it's for RP but it's actually pretty strong. Also, that cloud of smoke is really a hell no...
(Sono Yuuen Kawauso Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Sono Otokooya)- Great Otter Summoning Technique: The Father Type: Summoning Rank: S Rank Range: Short Chakra: 40 Damage: 80 Description: Otokooya is the original otter, he is roughly about the same age as the giant toad from Mt Myo. But it doesn't show, Otokooya is an large otter, weighing in at 520 lbs. He is 4 ft in girth and 11 ft long. Do to his enormous size Otokooya can only be summoned in large bodies of water. Otokooya was raised in the waters Amegakure. When he was a child there was an oil spill and that is the reason he is the only black otter. The oil had a significant impact on his body's capability. The oil caused his furs to grow more compactly together. Causing his furs to be extremely dense, allowing him to resist up to C Rank ninjutsu. In Amegakure folklore it was said that the reason for it always raining was because of the abundance of the otters in their waters. So whenever Otokooya is summoned black clouds are formed around the battlefield, covering it entirely and it begins to rain oil. The oil is highly flammable and if ignited can cause harm to those effected by the oil. Otokooya's chakra is linked directly to the clouds so he can feel disturbances in the air and react appropriately. Otokooya being able to only move freely in the water he has grown adapt to the element of water. Due to this Otokooya can freely use all water jutsus s rank and below that don't require hand seals. Otokooya being the grand otter and father of all otters is the only otter that can speak. Only being able to be summoned within water Otokooya's chakra disperses in said body masking his 'presence'. Notes:
-Can only be summoned in large bodies of water
-All jutsu used by Otokooya count towards the user's 3 moves per town
-Can resist only c rank ninjutsu. Anything above sends the otter back to Ame
-Otokooya's back when below water can be stood upon without revealing his presence.
-Can only be summoned once per battle for a maximum of 4 turns
-Can only be summoned by those I teach and myself
Declined. Most of it doesn't make sense at all. First of all, he's able to stop only C-rank ninjutsu? So D-rank hurts him? Also, the oil being integrated into his skin would make him highly weak to fire techniques as the oil that pours over the battlefield is highly flammable as well. Secondly, otters cause rain? I don't get what this has to do with your jutsu, apart from it giving you a reason to say your otter can summon oil to rain down. Lets say he does rain down oil, does this cost him mana per turn? Also, definitely no go that his chakra can't be summoned in a pool of water. It makes no sense. Please give a more logical reasoning to everything for it to be approvable
(Ninpou: Shinshi Koin)- Ninja Arts: The Gentleman's Coin Type: Supplementary/Attack Rank: B rank Range: Short-Mid Chakra: 20 Damage: 40 Description: The user performs 2 brief hand seals then molds a large amount of chakra into the compacted form of a singular coin. The coin glows a bright light blue color and is about the size of the average currency coin in Naruto (Quarter). From long range the coin is near impossible to see from mid range the coin just appears as a light blue blob and at short range it can be distinctly seen. The coin materializes along the top of the user's thumb while the rest of the fingers wrap around in a fist almost. The user then flicks his thumb upward flicking the coin forward towards the opponent. The coin flickers through the air rotating and gathering force, about half way the user clicks his teeth and via shape manipulation the coin can do one of two things. The coin can expand into a massive coin (roughly twice the size of the opponent) which falls down onto the opponent from above crushing him. Or the coin multiplies into 10 smaller coins which attack the opponent head on and pelt like bullets or needles in Naruto context. The coin is buoyant in nature meaning it can travel across water, land or through the air the same effect occurs in the end. Before the coin's effect the coin flashes red then the actual attack happens. *The coin can be used for supplementary purposes, meaning only occurring for role play. The user says something cool like "Oh I forgot to tip you" In the dawn tavern and flicks the coin behind him. When it hits the ground it causes a small fire or explosion. *
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Gecko Note: Can be stopped by techniques of the same rank or higher. Note: sentence with asterisk is meant only for rp
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(Doton: Chika Moui)- Earth Style: Underground Menace Type: Supplementary/Attack Rank: A Rank Range: Long Chakra: 30 (-10 to keep active) Damage: 60 Description: The user performs string of 6 hand seals and slams his hand to the ground quickly. Following a small puddle of mud appears beneath the hand of the user. From the opponent's perspective it would appear as just an ordinary puddle, but deep beneath the puddle underground lies a special creature. The underground menace, a cross between a rat gopher and mole is the epitome of the perfect mobile earth based create. Made of condensed and solidified earth its appearance of sloppy mud is from the mud that constantly drips down onto its body. The underground menace has the innate ability to sense vibrations amidst the ground via the connection it shares with puddle of mud. The beast is capable of moving underground at the same speed of the user and is unaffected by A rank and below earth jutsu due to it being made of condensed earth. Being comprised of the user's chakra all detections of vibrations are felt by the user as well. The beast moves on its own but requires a constant flow of chakra to keep that link with the user. Without that (-10) the menace can sustain itself for 3 turns. When it moves the puddle can be seen moving above ground, which makes the menace an easy target. Once per turn the menace is capable of striking below the ground to protrude a large spike from the ground to attack or defend. (Counts as a move of the user's)
Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Gecko
Declined. DNR. Sensing vibrations due to the pool of mud makes no sense, as the mud doesn't cover everything. You'd only be able to sense what happens directly around the mud (and the range would be low), not everywhere. And then there's the rest. Just no.
( Toku Kuuhaku Kadou Mori) Shield Vacuum Vortex Lance Type: Offensive Rank: A rank Range: Short Chakra Cost: 30 Damage Points: 50 Description:
The user while holding there shield outwards in front of themselves, arm extended channels wind to the front of the shield creating a sucking vortex which pulls objects and enemies towards them. The suction tunnel will only attract objects not attached to the ground and only up to the weight of an enemy. Once in range the user can then reverse the rotation of the vortex and extend the wind outwards from the shield, creating a spiralling lance which pierces the enemy after being pulled close enough. The wind lance will extend up to 10 feet.
Restrictions:
+ must have a shield to use.
+ can only be used 3 times per battle
+ usable once per turn.
+ can only be taught by Rojuro
(Raiton: Retaihou Hassha) - Lightning Style: Railgun Discharge Type: Offensive Rank: A Range: Short/Long Chakra: 30 Damage: 60 Description: By gathering electrical currents on the palm of either hand through raiton chakra control, the user is able to fire a projectile at higher speed of what that object would regularly move; by utilizing a great amount of electricity. This works with any small sized object, a rock, a coin, a piece of metal or up to the size of a kunai but no bigger. By discharging lightning once the object is flicked/hurled at target, the projectile is used as the tip of a destructive lightning discharge of great sizes with follows behind the object. With power that rifts and tears the earth in it's wake. The railgun has great speed as any other lightning oriented jutsu and can be fired at a rate of 3 shots per use. Though with each shot the power is divided equally ( 3 shots = C rank and 2 shots = B rank, each).
• Can only be used thrice per battle. With a one turn cooldown in between uses.
Declined, DNR. There have been enough speed enhancers for objects.
(Korui Nuki) - Siegfried Breaker Type: Offensive Rank: S Range: Short Chakra: 40 Damage: 80 Description: The user begins by focusing all of his body strength while maintaining his center of balance and delivers a kick, commonly used to strike airbone targets. The user has to focus all their power into their legs, forcing them to lower their arms and enter a guardless stance. An enemy could easily land a devastating attack towards their upper body, if the timing and use of this technique is not careful executed. By standing merely on one foot alone, representing the point of balance, the opposite leg extends vertically upwards in a perfect angle to strike targets in a higher position than that of the user - this can be used so long as the opponent is on higher altitude than that of the user's feet, i.e, a target could be standing and the user who is placed into a ducking position could still use this technique if their stance allows it. Because the entire physical power is all poured into a single point of impact, the power behind the attack is so heavy it creates a small crater beneath the user's foot on the ground, and deals significant damage to it's target as well.
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☼ Declined ☼
Not seeing a reason for the to be S-ranked.
(Doragonhada) - Dragon Skin Type: Supplementary Rank: A Range: Short Chakra: 30 Damage: - (60 offensive) Description: The user produces a large amount of bone to ooze out from their skin in a flowing pattern downwards to the edges. Creating a skin of bone scales running smoothly across the selected body part. The scales clad an entire body area in a frenzy of white shards, sharp edges with great shredding ability. However because of the large amount closely placed together, these bones are not dense or thick, rather slim instead. Because of this, instead of protecting the user from body blows with their hardness, rather the steel hard scales have a shaving effect when it comes into contact with opponent(s) if contact brushes off at opposite motions, essentially shredding through their skin. Following the same flow of the scales however would result in no damage.
• Can only cover a max of half the body at a time. And the scales can otherwise be fired as projectiles with a long reach, following the same speed of Finger Bone Bullets.
• Can only be used thrice per battle.
Declined, DNR. Kaguya bones are tough as bone (ha, pun!) to begin with, and inherently can't be broken by techniques that aren't empowered. Also, this is basically a defense and offense technique, as you can still fire projectiles. Too overpowered.
Summoning Animal: Narwhal Scroll Owner: -Vegeta Other Users who have signed contract: None yet Summoning Boss if existing: None yet Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Will create later Description and Background: Nicknamed "The Unicorn of the sea", the narwhal, or narwhale (Monodon monoceros), is a medium-sized toothed whale and possesses a large "tusk" from a protruding canine tooth. It lives year-round in the Arctic waters around Greenland, Canada, and Russia. It is one of two living species of whale in the Monodontidae family, along with the beluga whale. The narwhal males are distinguished by a long, straight, helical tusk, which is an elongated upper left canine. The narwhal was one of many species described by Carolus Linnaeus in his publication Systema Naturae in 1758.
Like the beluga, narwhals are medium-sized whales. For both sexes, excluding the male's tusk, the total body size can range from 3.95 to 5.5 metres (13.0 to 18.0 feet); the males are slightly larger than the females. The average weight of an adult narwhal is 800 to 1,600 kilograms (1,800 to 3,500 pounds). At around 11 to 13 years old, the males become sexually mature; females become sexually mature at about 5 to 8 years old. Narwhals do not have a dorsal fin, and their neck vertebrae are jointed like those of other mammals, not fused as in dolphins and most whales.
Found primarily in Canadian Arctic and Greenlandic and Russian waters, the narwhal is a uniquely specialized Arctic predator. In winter, it feeds on benthic prey, mostly flatfish, under dense pack ice. During the summer, narwhals mostly eat Arctic cod and Greenland halibut, with other fish such as polar cod making up the remainder of their diet. Each year, they migrate from bays into the ocean as summer comes. In the winter, the male narwhals occasionally dive up to 1,500 metres (4,900 feet) in depth, with dives lasting up to 25 minutes. Narwhals, like most toothed whales, communicate with "clicks", "whistles", and "knocks".
Narwhals can live up to 50 years old. The current population of the narwhal is about 75,000. Narwhals have been harvested for over a thousand years for meat and ivory, and a regulated subsistence hunt continues.
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I'm not accepting copy and pastes like this. Why do I need to know what age these guys reach sexual maturity? The description and background should be used to provide information that is transferable to the RP. Things like size, color, unique characteristics (i.e. their "horn"). Stuff like their age of sexual maturity, specific feeding patterns, living around Canada/Arctic, places that don't exist in the Narutoverse, etc. are unimportant and can be removed.
-Would have bolded changes but all I did was delete stuff-
Summoning Animal: Narwhal Scroll Owner: -Vegeta Other Users who have signed contract: None yet Summoning Boss if existing: None yet Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Will create later Description and Background: Nicknamed "The Unicorn of the sea", the narwhal, or narwhale (Monodon monoceros), is a medium-sized toothed whale and possesses a large "tusk" from a protruding canine tooth. The narwhal males are distinguished by a long, straight, helical tusk, which is an elongated upper left canine.
Like the beluga, narwhals are medium-sized whales. The males are slightly larger than the females. The average weight of an adult narwhal is 800 to 1,600 kilograms (1,800 to 3,500 pounds). Narwhals do not have a dorsal fin, and their neck vertebrae are jointed like those of other mammals, not fused as in dolphins and most whales.
The male narwhals occasionally dive up to 1,500 metres (4,900 feet) in depth, with dives lasting up to 25 minutes. Narwhals, like most toothed whales, communicate with "clicks", "whistles", and "knocks". However, these ones can communicate with their summoner. Narwhals can live up to 50 years old.
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(Reinin' Rijjihandosutoraiku) - Rainin' Ridge hand Strike Rank: A Type: Offensive/Defensive Range: Short Chakra Cost: 30 Damage Points: 60 Description: The user begins gathering raw chakra to their fists to enhance the force of their blows, then performs the ridge hand strike (up to 6 strikes total, +10 damage each). Like a chop, but the inside of the hands is used for the strikes (predominately the side of the thumb and pointer knuckles instead of the pinky finger region) performed with an inward whipping hook type motion, driving fierce pounding strikes. Because of range of motion, the blows would generally be aimed towards the sides of the head or low if done vertically to be most effective, however, by swaying ones body slightly like a tree bends in the wind, a user can lean their torso regain out of the way of a strike pulling back the shoulder blade while extending their striking arm outwards, striking straight striaght forwards with the attack, dodging and counter-attacking almost in one motion.
~Notes~
-Only usable 3x's per battle
-Must be taught by -Vegeta
Declined. Format is wrong: first Type, then Rank.
(Saido byōtō chakura suiryoku) - Side-wards chakra thrust Rank: C Type: Supplemental/Defensive Range: Short-Mid Chakra Cost: 15 Damage Points: N/A Description: The user jumps into the air by up to one meter and then sends out a small gust of chakra from his foot lowest to the ground, sending him a little higher as the user spins their body to the left or right and throws their body weight in the direction they want to go. Using their momentum from the spinning and chakra, they manage to thrust their body in the direction they wish, up to mid range.
(Moudouken Kuiiru no Isshou Hassei) - Quill Outbreak Type: Offensive/Defensive Rank: B Range: Short-Mid Chakra: 20 Damage: 40 Description: Due to the Echidna's bony/spiny structure possessing well over a thousand quills, the quills withheld on their backs can be used as an all-around (short-mid) attack covering all ranges. In cohesion with the quills being able to cover all ranges, the Echidna are also able to focus their firing range in a specific direction. Through extensive chakra manipulation, their quills take the shape of one meter senbon.
- Takes two turns for their Quills to grow back
(Nebaneba Shita Shitakakutou) - Sticky Tongue Grapple Type: Offensive/Defensive Rank: D Range: Short-Mid Chakra: 10 Damage: 15 Description: Due to the Echidna possessing a sticky tongue, and sometimes a tongue containing spines (quills) it makes it easier for them to latch onto enemies/objects. This technique allows the Echidna to shoot their tongues out Short-Mid Range, and grab hold of their target pulling them forward, and/or keeping them stationary. The Echidna are also able to cling to the user of this technique's arm with their underbelly (soft portion), then perform this technique.
- The Tongue quills are half the size of regular senbon
- Can be used 3 times per battle
(Hane Pen no Tate) - Shield of Quills Type: Offensive/Defensive Rank: A Range: Short-Mid Chakra: 30 Damage: 30 Description: The Echidna attaches its underbelly to the users arm, and uses chakra to increase the size of its quills (to one and one-half meters long) covering the users entire body in quills protecting from physical/elemental attacks. The quills can protrude outward (spiky-like), or downward (like an armadillo's shell) depending on the users choice of defense regarding the incoming assault. While protruding Outward Quills, the user can fire them at their opponent(s) (360-range, or focused range) causing significant damage if hit (due to the size of the senbon).
Fire/Wind/Lightning: Downward Quills will tank the assault
Earth/Water: Outward Quills will rip apart the assault
- Blocks A-Rank, and below techniques
- S-Rank techniques will cause this technique to diminish, and will cause slight damage to the user of this technique.
- Can be used 3 times per battle
Katon: Honō no tanken (Fire Release: Flame Daggers) Type: Offensive Rank: C Range: Short Chakra: 15 (+5 for a second dagger +5 per dagger per turn to sustain) Damage: 30 (+5 for a second dagger) Description: The user will focus katon jutsu into their hands before making a closed fist and manifesting the katon chakra into the shape of a blade roughly the length of a standard kunai (that can then be extended out to the length of a tanto) that appears to hover off the users closed fist so as to not burn them (therefore there is no physical contact between the fire and the user). The user will then further compress the fire chakra while increasing the heat of the flame as much as possible, creating an intense flame that is almost like a solid. This can be channeled so that it appears as it the user is holding the dagger(s) in a reverse grip or in a normal grip but the flames will disperse if the user opens their closed fist, effectively stopping the jutsu. A second blade can be manifested in the users other hand at the cost of addition chakra and both blades can be sustained as long as the user keeps their fists closed and continues to focus on the katon chakra. Notes:
- Can only be taught by Shinta,
- Blades can be sustained a maximum of three turns and remain in the orientation they were manifested in (eg. Reverse grip),
- Blades are not actually in direct contact with the users hand(s), instead that appear to float just outside their closed fist, imitating the appearance of holding an actual blade.
Updating and editing some grammatical errors... well the ones I can find anyway xD
Katon: Honō no tanken (Fire Release: Flame Daggers) Type: Offensive Rank: C Range: Short Chakra: 15 (+5 for a second dagger +5 per dagger per turn to sustain) Damage: 30 (+5 for a second dagger) Description: The user will focus katon jutsu into their hands before making a closed fist and manifesting the katon chakra into the shape of a blade roughly the length of a standard kunai (that can then be extended out to the length of a tanto) that appears to hover off the users closed fist so as to not burn them (therefore there is no physical contact between the fire and the user). The user will then further compress the fire chakra while increasing the heat of the flame as much as possible, creating an intense flame that is almost like a solid. This can be channelled so that it appears as though the user is holding the dagger(s) in a reverse grip, normal grip or manifested as if it is extending out from between the users second and third knuckles but the flames will disperse if the user opens their closed fist, effectively stopping the jutsu. A second blade can be manifested in the users other hand at the cost of addition chakra and both blades can be sustained as long as the user keeps their fists closed and continues to focus on the katon chakra. Notes:
- Can only be taught by Shinta,
- Blades can be sustained a maximum of three turns and remain in the orientation they were manifested in (eg. Reverse grip),
- Blades are not actually in direct contact with the users hand(s), instead that appear to float just outside their closed fist, imitating the appearance of holding an actual blade,
- The daggers are only able to be maintained in the position (reverse grip, normal grip or extended from knuckles) that they where manifested in. To change grip would mean a cancellation, restart of the jutsu and thus causing the jutsu to take up another one of the three turns.
Approved, edited your extra note somewhat as to make it more transparant to the opponent.
Fūton: Torie - (Wind Release: Saving Grace) Type: Supplementary/Defensive Rank: A/S Range: Short Chakra: 40 Damage: N/A Description: The user begins by rapidly charging and releasing a full-body surge of rotating wind from all over their body that then expands outwards to short-range. This is done by charging their chakra and releasing it with the motion of extending their arms and legs in the star position (Arms outstretched to the side, legs outstretched and spaced outside shoulder width), the end result is that the user will be able to suddenly halt their directional momentum and hover momentarily using the spinning of the wind. This is particularly useful if one has been sent flying in the air and wants to regain a sense of control, by performing this jutsu they will be able to stop the uncontrolled movement and hover for a brief moment to give them enough time to assess their position. As a secondary application of the jutsu, the any jutsu that would normally cover the opponent would be pushed off and away from the user, so long as they are able to move their limbs. An example of this would be to prevent a massive amount of fire from burning the user, by creating a spinning current of wind that deflects the flame around the user, respecting the elemental advantages/disadvantages of course. It will also deflect solid object away from the user up to and including A-ranks (S-rank for specialist in wind) as well as people. Those who specialise or have a natural wind affinity will be able to create an S-rank version of this jutsu, other users will only be able to create an A-rank version. However, the momentum halting ability is not strengthened or weakened by the rank. Notes:
- Can only be taught by Shinta.
- Can only be used four times a match.
- For the rank increase, Wind must be listed as either primary (one seal for jutsu) or secondary speciality (Faster seals), else they will only be able to use the A-rank applications.
✦ Declined, if I'm correct, -Naruto Uzumaki- has a wind jutsu that allows him to stop any movement of his body by releasing wind from his pores, stopping him instantly. Besides that, you gave the worst example possible; this would certainly not push fire off of you given fire's and wind's interaction with each other, and likely cause you to ignite yourself to great damage ✦
Fūton: Torie - (Wind Release: Saving Grace) Type: Supplementary/Defensive Rank: B Range: Short Chakra: 20 Damage: 40 Description: The user begins by rapidly charging and releasing their wind chakra to create an area of compressed wind directly on their back or chest, which upon the users activation will release a pressure wave away from the user. The user releases the compressed chakra through the action of sharply extending their arms and legs in the star position (Arms outstretched to the side, legs outstretched and spaced outside shoulder width), the end result is that the user will be able to suddenly halt their directional momentum. This is particularly useful if one has been sent flying in the air and wants to regain a sense of control, by performing this jutsu they will be able to stop the uncontrolled movement and hover for a brief moment before gravity takes hold and they fall back to the ground, giving the user enough time to assess their position. A secondary application of the jutsu, is that any object or person standing directly behind or in front of the user, will be sent hurtling short-range away from the user, also deflecting solid objects away from the user up to and including B-ranks (A-rank for wind specialists). Those who specialise or have a natural wind affinity will be able to create an A-rank version of this jutsu, other users will only be able to create an B-rank version. However, the momentum halting ability is not strengthened or weakened by the rank. The user may also use this combination with running or other manoeuvres to give a momentary boost in speed that can be used to dodge appropriate sized attacks. Notes:
- Can only be taught by Shinta.
- Can only be used four times a match.
- For the rank increase, Wind must be listed as either primary (one seal for jutsu) or secondary speciality (Faster seals), else they will only be able to use the B-rank application. - When using to assist with dodging, the user must already have momentum in the direction they wish to move i.e. running forward and releasing the wind from their back.
Declined: edit out the part about being able to re-position yourself as it was what declined your previous jutsu as well. I like the idea behind it for the rest, though it is somewhat generic but it reminds me a bit of a Jetpack. The only thing I want you to certainly edit out is the part where Specialists can perform it a rank higher. It makes no sense, because in our RP specialists don't work that way. The chakra and damage would also have to be edited if specialists can use it a rank higher, which you did not alter either. Apart from that, I don't have a lot to say about it.
( sunasand release cloud dust) Typeffensive Rank: b rank Range: long range Chakra: 40 Damage: n/a Description: the user gather up large amount of sand into a cloud then raise his into a fist then the cloud burst into small threads of
dust of around the area then the opponent cannot see allow him to go blind for a while
☼ Declined ☼
Compare this to other people's submissions to see what you did wrong.
Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Neodaidarosu | Summoning Technique: Neo-Daedelus Type:Supplementary Rank:S - Rank Range:Short Chakra:40 Damage:N/A Description:
Neo Daedelus is one of the strongest Viperfish still in existence. Neo - Daedelus is the same size as Red Gyarados. Neo Daedelus is a two headed Viperfish with his body covered in some of the hardest scales known to man giving him protection from B Rank Katon techniques. Both of Neo's heads can perform up to S Rank Suiton techniques. Neo can travel through the water with very great speed by placing its heads close together.
Note: Can only be summoned once per battle.
Note: Must have signed the Viperfish summoning contract
Note: Stays on the field for 4 turns.
Note: If both heads are used for a Suiton Jutsu then they both count as 2 of the users move per turn count.
Note: Must be first summoned in water
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Declined: Overall the summoning is ok, but I need you to specify it a bit more. Your note is rather confusing in that it's somewhat contradictory. If both heads use a jutsu, the count as 2 moves. Do you mean the heads work together to make one jutsu? Do you mean both heads use a separate jutsu? Do you mean if they combine their heads for a jutsu it has more power? You are somewhat unclear on this and it will need some more clarification. Also, having two heads on the same body still makes it so they can't two jutsus at the same time, considering it is still 1 body and thus 1 chakra pool that 'it/they' share.
(Suiton: Haidrosupurasshu) | Water Release: Hydro Splash
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Water Splash is a simple jutsu, used to maximize the usage of a water technique. Normally when a water technique is used (Ex. Stormy Blockade), majority of the water goes wasted. To avoid that, the users who have learned this technique will simply channel their chakra into the water molecules when they splash, and turn then into bullet like projectiles before shooting it at the opponents. With a very fast spped and force, these water "bullet" molecules can rip/penetrate a huge wall of earth, destroying it. The users can also channel their chakra into calm water and achieve this effect.
Note:
Can only be used thrice.
These "bullets" of water can be seen with naked eyes.
Can only be taught by BlackCrow
Declined: While I really like the idea behind this jutsu, and it certainly utilizes the "waste of water", I can't help but see the contradiction again. You state they move very fast (try to avoid using vague terms like these, as it will give you an auto-decline most of the time) you also state they can be seen by the naked eye. Are they blurry when seen (due to the speed), or do you see them clearly? If clearly, they can't be moving that fast, and if blurry it means they move to fast as we're talking about 90-250 km/h. Taking into account the fact that these are pretty small, and water is transparant for the most part, it can be a bit deceitful. Try to give it a bit more restrictions, and tone it down in terms of speed and raw power. It won't be penetrating a huge wall if it's A-rank. It would if it's B-rank, but it would still be put to a halt. Also, you messed up the template. Type first, then rank.
(Katon: Moeru Onara)- Fire Release: Burning Fart Type: Offensive Rank: B Range: Short Chakra: 20 Damage: 40 Description: This is a rather unorthodox technique which is mostly utilized in defensive maneuvers. The technique itself requires little to no chakra and is easy to perform. When the opponent is position near you, aiming to attack you from behind, you can utilize this technique to catch him by surprise. Here the practitioner will simply gather chakra inside his rectum. Afterwards he will release his gas or well he will literally fart. This fart is both increased in strength and speed when it exits due to the chakra which flows with it, and not only that, the chakra will be used to turn the fart into a form of flamethrower which sends a large flame directly backwards into the opponent burning him alive and catching him by surprise. Restrictions
Can only be taught by BlackCrow
can only be used once every 2 turns
Declined: >_> errr... You would burn your "behind" due to using this technique. Add that as a restriction >_>
(Fūton: Tadai Fūdan) - Wind Release: Heavy Bullet Type: Offensive Rank: A-rank Range: Short-Mid range Chakra: 30 Damage: 60 Description: After performing the necessary hand seals of Ox > Ram > Tiger, the user will exhale an incredibly forceful sphere of wind towards an indicated target. Unlike similar techniques this one does not explode on contact with an object, but instead disperses after the damage of a solid strike is done. This is because this technique's chakra composition is specifically designed to maintain its shape when striking a target. Due to this characteristic, and the velocity of that the "bullet" is fired, this technique releases an incredible amount of pinpoint force upon contact. This force is enough to easily break bones and shatter most defenses making it a highly dangerous skill. Also, due to the speed of the "bullet" this technique will not by instantly incinerated by anything other than an one rank below fire technique. As such this technique will pass through, and ignite, on lesser flames which will cause fiery explosions on contact with a target.
- Can only be used twice
- Needs a 1 turn cooldown before using it again and using it for the 2nd time in the match will weaken the bullet and will lower its speed/power and also will be a B-rank jutsu in damage and chakra
- After using it for the 1st time in the match the next turn the user will be able to use only B-rank and below jutsus and after using it for the 2nd time he won't be able to use A-rank and above wind jutsus for 1 full turn
- Can only be taught by Osmon.
Declined: explanation is vague. Only one rank below fire techs can incinerate it? If you put this in, you might as well put in what higher ranked fire techs do to it as well. Respect the elemental strength and weakness table. There is no need to put in what Katon does to it, as a rank lower fire tech will disperse it and higher ranked ones will absorb it (depending on the type of jutsu). At the same time, another A-rank win technique will cancel it out all the same. The thing I find the weirdest is your restriction. Why put in that it will only be B-rank the second time you can use it? There is no incentive for this, as it doesn't affect your body. If it did, all your wind jutsus would be weaker as a result.
(Suiton: Poseidon no sutikkītoraidento) - Water Release: Poseidon's Sticky Trident Type: Offensive/Supplementary Rank: A-rank Range: Mid-Long range Chakra: 30 Damage: 60 Description: After making the needed hand seals of Dog > Bird, the user begins molding large chakra amount into his chest before releasing it from his mouth in a thick high viscosity gluey substance and aiming it towards the opponent, it's firstly released as a simple little stick made out of sticky water but while travelling towards the target it gets more fast and the shape changes to a fully created trident made of sticky liquid water the same as [Starch Syrup Capture Field] jutsu. It's thrown in the same way as a spear is released. It has extra abilities like splitting the points into three separate arrows that can pierce through 3 different targets or hit the same target to weaken him before the main spear attacks him (from which the 3 "arrows" are released). It can also be used as a weapon by releasing the chakra from the mouth before using shape manipulation to create a solid spear, the solid spear can be throw or can be used to attack the opponent, however it can still split the points into arrows and attack the opponent into a solid form.
-It can be used twice per battle with a two turn cooldown before using it again
- It can't be used in short range because the thick substance can't re-create into a spear fast enough, it needs to be either mid or long range from the target to be created.
- Can only be taught by Osmon.
Declined: I changed the wording a bit to make it more readable, but you have to work on this. I also removed the second restriction, as evading without countering the jutsu is not allowed in our RP, only if a jutsu is used for it. As for the actual jutsu, I don't agree that the three "arrows" of the trident can still be released in short range, when attacking the opponent. Change it so you're able to do so when you throw the trident.
(Fuuton: Yoake no avil) - Wind Release: Anvil of the Dawn
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user focuses their fuuton chakra in their hand and condenses it so that it takes the form of a small war hammer. With the creation of the hammer a great mass of wind is formed about 5 meters above the opponent. The hammer can break apart small objects and jutsus, following elemental strengths and weaknesses, but because of its small size it isn't able to impede anything wide spread. The user then drops, slams, throws; anything that means the hammer will be touching the ground. On the hammers descent towards the ground the wind also begins to head down towards the opponent. The mass of wind is shaped almost like a large cushion and it is 5 meters long and wide. Synchronizing with the second the hammer touches the ground the cushion of wind slams down onto the opponent at the same time, crushing him as the wind its composed of is incredibly dense.
Note: Wind techniques above S-rank cannot be used in same turn as its use. Note: The mass of wind is A-ranked and so is the hammer. The hammer cannot be used to directly harm the opponent but it can break apart anything that is smaller than a human. (Following elemental strengths and weaknesses of course)
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Osmon
Declined
I'm really confused about this jutsu. So you say a hammer forms in your hand, but so does a wind above the opponent? And what of the hammer itself? How large is it? So is this supposed to work like Earth Release: Dropping Lid? Because I'm confused as to how it is logically linked to the "mass of Wind" that forms above your opponent. You can't just drop the hammer to the ground and have that mass of Wind come down at the same time. That makes absolutely no sense.
(Fuuton: Yoake no avil) - Wind Release: Anvil of the Dawn Rank: A Type: Offensive Range: Short-Mid Chakra Cost: 30 Damage Points: 60 Description: The user focuses their fuuton chakra in their hand and condenses it so that it takes the form of a small war hammer only about 30 cm in size. The hammer is composed of 6 thick layers of wind which are held together by chakra. The hammers layers can be released from the hammer each time the user swings the hammer with a moderate amount of strength. When the hammer is swung the layer is released as a B-rank large wave of wind and the hammer diminishes in size slightly. The hammer itself can break apart objects and jutsus C-rank and below, following elemental strengths and weaknesses, and within reason (so because of the hammers size it wouldn't be able to completely stop a large wave of water for example.) A maximum of two layers can be released in one swing, and the strength of the wave created is increased depending on how many layers are released. If its two layers then an A-rank wave of wind will be given off. The other way that the hammer can be used is when the user drops, slams, throws; anything that means the hammer will be touching the ground. When that happens the remaining layers are all released at once and an A-rank wave of wind is released omnidirectionally and it is capable of pushing the opponent back a range(so if they're in short range they'll be pushed into mid range) and giving them deep cuts. If the user uses this then the hammer is instantly dispersed afterwards.
- Wind techniques above S-rank cannot be used in same turn as its use.
- The hammer can be maintained for 3 turns but it can be dispersed at will or if all the layers are used
- Can only be used twice per battle
- Can only be taught by Osmon
Declined: while the core foundation behind this CJ is excellent, and refreshing (kudos to you!) I have one small issue. The fact that you need to be able to keep the layers together with chakra, and that you can use it whenever you want means you have to maintain the technique (even if it's only to keep it together) to keep it active. This small issue makes it so it's impossible to use other jutsus while using this one (except if you have yin-yang). You'll need to work around that in order for it to work. I also noticed your format was wrong with this jutsu. First type, then rank. Not the other way around. Keep it in mind as it will auto-decline it for this turn.
(Futon/Raiton: Reitō tenshi no kami
disuku) | Wind/Lightening Style:
Divine Discs of the Frozen Angel
Rank : S
Type : Offensive
Range : Short-Mid
Chakra Cost : 40
Damage Points : 80
Description : The user begins by channeling his wind and lightening chakra into his mouth, and then with a single handseal, releases it in the form of 8 flying discs made of wind. These discs are slightly larger that the normal shurikens but possess a cutting power far greater than one, thanks to the cutting property of the wind. These discs are capable of flight on their own and move around passively, as they spread around the opponent before converging and attacking him from all directions. Each disc is capable of slicing the the opponent and giving him deep cuts unless he is protected by some armour. Now what makes these discs stand out, is the fact that they release lightening bolts at the opponent when they reach close range from him. Each bolt is capable of numbing and paralysing the opponent's limb which was shot at for atleast 3 seconds. The user can use this to his advantage and attack the opponent.
Note:
Can only be used thrice.
Discs last for 2 turns
Cannot be used in consecutive turns.
Can only be taught by Devilicious
Declined: format is wrong. First type, then rank. Not the other way around. Please read the first page of the CJ thread.
(Suiton/Futon: Biggufattohanībī no
sōgi) | Water/Wind Release: Funeral
Of A Big Fat Honey Bee
Rank : S
Type : Attack
Range : Short-Long
Chakra cost : 40
Damage points : 80
Description : This is one of the the application of manipulating the water present in the moisture to create bees made of water that can be used for various purposes. The user forms a single handseal to manipulate the air and moisture in the air to create 1000 bees made of water then with the combination of his wind chakra, he will give a coating of wind to it. The user may also channel his chakra in the water source and manipulate it to get the desired result. These bees have the body of regular sized bees, four small wings that enables them to fly and an inch long stinger which are as sharp as a needle thanks to the wind element. These bees are made from a total of 100 meter cube of highly viscous sticky water, that when bursted, can immobilise the opponents and reduce their area of activity. Once created, the user can form the seal of confrontation and compress the bees till they burst like an explosive, causing damage and spill the viscous liquid all over the enemy. This happens due to the wind chakra present in them, which bursts on too much compression. 5 bees are capable of causing destruction as good as a single paperbomb.
- Can only be used twice in a battle.
- Bees last 3 turns unless destroyed.
- Can only be taught by Devilicious
- No Suiton technique above S rank
in the same or next turn.
- Need one turn cool-down between
usage
- 20 bees can be used to lift the user
off the ground.
Declined: format is wrong. First type, then rank. Not the other way around. Please read the first page of the CJ thread.
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(Katon: Farukonpanchi)- Fire Style:
Falcon Punch
Type: Attack
Rank: A Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user molds a massive amount of fire chakra into his fist. With the opponent within short range, the user will punch the air releasing that fire chakra through the arm and fist shaping it into Falcon shape, which travels to the opponent scooping him up and taking him into the air. The user will then perform one hand seal causing the falcon to disperse incasing the opponent in a fiery inferno.
Note: Can only be used twice per
battle
Note: Can only be taught by Devilicious
Declined, too generic. Try to be a bit more creative in how you create jutsus. Especially if you create jutsus out of other universes. It's likely that several have been made that are just the same, or that are 90% the same.
(Ea yūbokumin no sutaffu) Staff Of The Air nomads Type: Weapon Rank: A-Rank Range: Short Chakra: 30 (to activate flight) (+5 per turn to sustain) Damage: N/A Description: A hand crafted staff created by the air nomads of old, the staff itself is made from a special type of wood that is sturdy as it is and also mixes incredibly well with chakra making it incredibly solid and dense when the user inserts his chakra into it to the point that a sharp blade infused with wind chakra or lightning chakra can not cut through it, the staff itself is crafted to match the user's specifically and is thus unique to the user and cannot be wielded by anyone else, it is just a little bigger than Kirikoe himself coming to 5,10" in height, However within this staff lies a few secrets, being that it also doubles as a glider, its ability when activated with chakra is to control the natural air currents around it which allows the user to fly due to the air currents being manipulated around the glider. This glider can be used to maneuver/stop the user if being thrown through the air to take control of himself and can use evasive manuevers in order to dodge incoming jutsu however dodging an incoming jutsu in this way counts as one of the user's 3 jutsu.
The staff/glider can be used to perform wind techniques which requires a fan however must have the glider at one end open to do so, so that it resembles a fan. It can be used to perform normal wind techs as well which do not require hand signs
Note - User can still perform jutsu whiles gliding however must still have his hands free for jutsu which require handseals
Note - User can only remain in the air for 3 turns and must wait 2 turns before taking flight again
Note - User can only take flight twice per battle
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Leaving for another mod.
☼ Declined ☼
There's a difference between flight and gliding, saying it gives you the ability to fly should be removed. The dodging needs usage limits and it needs to be clear that not all attacks are dodgeable.
(Fuuton: Suparuta-gun) | Wind Release: The Army of Sparta Type: Defensive Rank: B rank Range: Short Range Chakra: 20 Damage: 40 Description: The user starts by forming a single hand seal, then focusing a large amount of Wind based chakra around themselves. With great chakra precision, and focus, the user forms several warriors made of Wind that each don an ancient shield of a spartan warrior and a spear, all made of condensed wind. The warriors are all the normal size of an average man and form a protective phlanx around the user (a common formation used by Spartan warriors). In their initial form, the soldiers merely protect the user against outside attacks, following the strength and weaknesses of the elements.
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Once the user has been protected, the user can form a single hand seal, to cause the Wind based Spartan warriors to release their spears forward from all directions, performing an omni-directional attack. These spears range up to Short range, and can deliver blunt damage. The user can also disperse the warriors in a powerful whirlwind that blows around the user as they disperse, which would deliver blunt damage and hit back opponents.
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Note: Can only be used three times per battle.
Note: The defense can last for up to two turns
Note: Can only be taught by Detective L
Declined: Add if you can only move them simultaneously, or if you can move them separately and so on. It can be unclear if you use it in battle, and that will just lead to arguments.
Declined 
