Re: Custom Jutsu Submission
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Making the Ashura Senku into an actual jutsu. A quick description as well as a gif can be found in the link above.
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Ashura Senku|Asura Flashing Sky
Type: Defense/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A (+10 if struck while Ashura Senku is active; -10 to user when Ashura Senku is active)
Description: After activating the Satsui no Hadō, the user focuses a large amount of chakra throughout his/her body, using his rage and anger to 'warp' the chakra, so to speak, causing the characteristic red chakra flares around his/her body to bend around his body, creating a coat of chakra that manifests itself as a kind of after-image when the user moves, making it harder for the enemy to strike him head-on. The increase of chakra throughout his body also increases his speed sharply, effectively doubling it (note: this only applies if the user has not used any other jutsu/mode that enhances his strength, meaning it can't be used in conjunction to EIG, Sage Mode, etc. and only works DURING the Ashura Senku, thus making it an ideal jutsu for quick escape) during the time the jutsu is used. Once he has activated the Satsui no Hadō, the user widens his stance, and his enhanced chakra-cloak glows red. He then lifts one knee and quickly "glides" along the ground to another location with his eyes aglow. Where he glides depends on whether the user choices to move forward, backwards, or any other direction, so long as it is in a straight line from his starting position and no item (i.e. tree, giant rock, building, etc) is in his path. The glide can be used to get away from an opponent bearing down on him, to suddenly launch an attack (often from behind), or perhaps to simply psych out the opponent and keep them guessing. Due to the dark nature of the Satsui no Hadō, the red chakra around the user is imbibed with such an evil intent, that it actually hurts the user's skin and burns his skins slightly as he uses it, similar to how Naruto's skin is burned when using the 4-tailed transformation; however it works on both ends of the spectrum: as long as the Ashura Senku technique is active, the user's skin will be in intense pain but if an enemy were to strike him while it is active, they will feel the same pain, though on a greater scale when compared to the user. However, given all the perks of the jutsu, the user has much to be wary about. Only able to use the jutsu 3 times per fight, shall the user use it all three times, he runs the risk of the dark nature of the Satsui no Hadō taking over, causing him to become enraged and lose control of his sanity, making him unable to use jutsus higher than C-rank for two turns and no taijutsu for the rest of the fight due to intense physical pain. After using it, he speed is also dramatically decreased by half, causing him to severally be limited in terms of movement. Furthermore, the user is unable to use the jutsu in rapid succession. It takes a minimal of three turns in between before he is able to use the jutsu again.
Notes:
*Can only be used three times at a most, with a three turn waiting period in between.
*After using once, the user cannot use any jutsus higher than A-rank that turn and no taijutsu of A-rank and higher for two turns.
*After using twice, the user cannot use any jutsus higher than B-rank that turn and no tai of B-rank and higher for 5 turns.
*After using all three times, the user cannot use any jutsus higher than C-rank for 3 turns and no taijutsu for the rest of the fight.
*The user can only move uni-directionally, meaning he can only glide in straight lines. He also can only glide from one range to the next, meaning he can move from short range to mid range, mid range to long range and vice-versa but not short range to long range or long range to short range.
*After the technique has ended, the user's speed is severely cut in half, causing him to move at speeds that make Gaara's running speed seem fast (Gaara is used as a reference, due to him being considered one of the slowest in-manga characters). This effect only lasts the turn the user uses the Ashura Senku. However, if the user uses this technique at the end of his turn, then his NEXT turn, he will have this lowered speed the entire turn.
*Can't be used with any other mode or speed-enhancing jutsus.
*Can only be used after the Satsui no Hadō has been activated.
*Must have learned Satsui no Hadō and be at least 'User' rank within the Satsui no Hadō ranking system (See CFS for details).
*Gilding isn't the same as flying or hovering. The user "kicks/jumps" into a direction so fast that he "glides" until he reaches the destination. As such, this technique can't be used in mid-air.
±± Approved ±± I actually think you made it have too many restrictions for what it really is and how it can be avoided/countered. I added a note and removed a restriction that didn't make sense
I added as many restrictions as limits I could think of at the moment. There's a chance that it'll get declined but I'm willing to work as hard as I can to get it approved, even if it means submitting a heavily editted version where I can only jump backwards 4 feet with no chakra coating. Also, sorry for the wall of text xd.
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( Ashura Senku ) - Asura Flashing Sky
Type: Defense/Supplementary
Rank:
A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:
30
Damage points: N/A (+1
5 if struck while Ashura Senku is active; -1
5 to user when Ashura Senku is active)
Description: After activating the Satsui no Hadō, the user focuses a large amount of chakra throughout his/her body, using his rage and anger to 'warp' the chakra, so to speak, causing the characteristic red chakra flares around his/her body to bend around his body, creating a coat of chakra that manifests itself as a kind of after-image when the user moves, making it harder for the enemy to strike him head-on. The increase of chakra throughout his body also increases his speed sharply, effectively doubling it during the time the jutsu is used. Once he has activated the Satsui no Hadō, the user widens his stance, and his enhanced chakra-cloak glows red. He then lifts one knee and quickly "glides" along the ground to another location with his eyes aglow. Where he glides depends on whether the user choices to move forward, backwards, or any other direction, so long as it is in a straight line from his starting position and no item (i.e. tree, giant rock, building, etc) is in his path. The glide can be used to get away from an opponent bearing down on him, to suddenly launch an attack (often from behind), or perhaps to simply psych out the opponent and keep them guessing. Due to the dark nature of the Satsui no Hadō, the red chakra around the user is imbibed with such an evil intent, that it actually hurts the user's skin and burns his skins slightly as he uses it, similar to how Naruto's skin is burned when using the 4-tailed transformation; however it works on both ends of the spectrum: as long as the Ashura Senku technique is active, the user's skin will be in intense pain but if an enemy were to strike him while it is active, they will feel the same pain, though on a greater scale when compared to the user. However, given all the perks of the jutsu, the user has much to be wary about. After using it, he speed is also dramatically decreased, causing him to severally be limited in terms of movement. Furthermore, the user is unable to use the jutsu in rapid succession. It takes a minimal of t
wo turns in between before he is able to use the jutsu again.
Notes:
*Can only be used
four times at a most, with a t
wo turn waiting period in between.
*The user can only move uni-directionally, meaning he can only glide in straight lines. He also can only glide from one range to the next, meaning he can move from short range to mid range, mid range to long range and vice-versa but not short range to long range or long range to short range.
*After the technique has ended, the user's speed is severely
lowered, causing him to move at
half his current speed.
*Can only be used after the Satsui no Hadō has been activated.
*Must have learned Satsui no Hadō and be at least 'User' rank within the Satsui no Hadō ranking system (See CFS for details).
*Gilding isn't the same as flying or hovering. The user "kicks/jumps" into a direction so fast that he "glides" until he reaches the destination. As such, this technique can't be used in mid-air.
Approved
Attempt number 4 lol. Removed references to destroying an island, clarified a bit how hot the wave is and other small details. Also added a restriction near the end.
Kongou Kokuretsu Zan | Diamond Country Splitting Cut
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user gathers large amounts of Satsui no Hado manipulated chakra and raises his arm towards the sky and charges all the chakra into said arm, which takes around a second or two. Then, he violently slams his fist on the ground which results in an explosion of pure energy, which first takes the form of a lightning bolt and then emanates outwards in a shock wave of energy. The resulting wave has such a large amount of Satsui no Hado chakra inside it that the wave itself becomes physically harmful, destroying the terrain as it spreads outward in a destructive manner. The wave is powerful enough to force opponents backwards from the user, with the waves hot enough to slightly burn and singe the skin slightly of the opponent caught in the wave
(not hot enough to incapacitate a foe however). The point of contact, where the user's arm strikes, becomes completely shattered and leaves a crater of 6 meters deep (around 20 feet) and 10 meters wide (around 30 feet), with the user left standing in the middle. The sheer force and power of the strike is so great that it causes a slight earthquake to be felt around the field; this earthquake alone causes no damage to any opponent, unless they are under ground, of course. The wave is so great that opponents caught in it will feel great heat emanating from it, causing small first degree burns along their body. If the opponent is struck head-on, the impact will cause their body to be severely injured, the point of impact on the said enemy will have it's bones struck with enough force to shatter them almost completely,
(similar to how Gaara's sand shattered the bones in Lee's arm when they battled during the Chuunin exams), along with causing slight paralysis, not literally paralyzing the foe, but it causes their speed to become slowed to levels of Gaara's, perhaps the slowest moving canon character. Coincidentally, if they already move this slow, then their speed will be dropped even further due to the strike. Broken bones, and ruptured internal organs with slowed speed awaits a downed foe once they are struck with this jutsu. However, despite all the wonders granted by this jutsu, it also has severe drawbacks. Only capable of using it thrice, the user is only able to use one other jutsu during the turn this is used,
and it must be a Satsui no Hado natured jutsu. The user is also left with great pressure on the arm he performed the jutsu with, causing it to become severely injured and after using it, he can only use ninjutsu for the following three turns, no taijutsu nor kenjutsu with said arm. The user is only able to use one other jutsu that same turn he uses this jutsu as well.
Notes:
*No taijutsu/kenjutsu for two turns with said arm.
*Can only be used thrice with an interval of at least 3 turns
*Cannot be used with any other chakra enhancing mode such as Sage Mode or EIG or various other modes which increases the users chakra/speed
*After using, the user is left with high levels of fatigue and can only use ninjutsu for the following three turns, but no lightning ninjutsu during those turns
*Can only be used by learners of the Satsui no Hado
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±± Approved ±±
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( Kongou Kokuretsu Zan ) - Diamond Country Splitting Cut
Type: Attack
Rank:
Forbidden
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost:
50
Damage Points:
90
Description: The user gathers large amounts of Satsui no Hado manipulated chakra and raises his arm towards the sky and charges all the chakra into said arm, which takes
around the same amount of time it takes to throw a kunai. Then, he violently slams his fist on the ground which results in an explosion of pure energy, which first takes the form of a lightning bolt and then emanates outwards in a shock wave of energy. The resulting wave has such a large amount of Satsui no Hado chakra inside it that the wave itself becomes physically harmful, destroying the terrain as it spreads outward in a destructive manner. The wave is powerful enough to force opponents backwards from the user, with the waves hot
and powerful enough to s
everely burn
an opponent caught in the wave. The point of contact, where the user's arm strikes, becomes completely shattered and leaves a crater of
10 meters deep and 10 meters wide, with the user left standing in the middle. The sheer force and power of the strike is so great that it causes a
strong earthquake to be felt around the field;
spreading outwards from the user's epicenter, the earthquake is strong enough to cause an additional 40 damage to an underground opponent. The wave
of Satsui no Hado chakra itselfis so great that opponents caught in it will feel great heat emanating from it, causing s
evere second degree burns along their body. If the opponent is struck head-on
by the user, the impact will cause their body to be severely injured, the point of impact on the said enemy will have it's bones struck with enough force to shatter them completely, (similar to how Gaara's sand shattered the bones in Lee's arm when they battled during the Chuunin exams), along with causing slight paralysis,
severely slowing them down so much, they move at speeds slower than half their speed, the Satsui no Hado chakra corrupting them. Broken bones, and ruptured internal organs with slowed speed awaits a downed foe once they are struck with this jutsu. However, despite all the wonders granted by this jutsu, it also has severe drawbacks. Only capable of using it once, the user is only able to use one other jutsu during the turn this is used. The user is also left with great pressure on the arm he performed the jutsu with, causing it to become severely injured and after using it, he can only use ninjutsu for the following three turns, no taijutsu nor kenjutsu with said arm. The user is only able to use one other jutsu that same turn he uses this jutsu as well.
Notes:
*No taijutsu/kenjutsu for two turns with said arm.
*Can only be used once
*After using, the user is left with high levels of fatigue and can only use ninjutsu for the following three turns, but no lightning ninjutsu during those turns
*Can only be used by learners of the Satsui no Hado
Approved If you want this to be forbidden rank, it can only be used once.
3.
( Gakidō: Kāmaloka ) - Preta Path: Kāmaloka
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: B
Range:Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Based on similar concepts to the (Fūjutsu Kyūin) - Blocking Technique Absorption Seal and the Chakra Transfer technique, the user activates Preta Path and absorbs any chakra, regardless of any shape or nature transformation, and dispersing it within one's body by spinning the chakra within one's body in the opposite direction. As a result, this technique can absorb any ninjutsu based technique, regardless of power, without harming the user. After said chakra has been absorbed, the user keeps this chakra stored in what call be described as a "pocket", or a part of the body that allows him to call upon this chakra at a later point with ease. Should the user use a jutsu of the same nature of the one he absorbed, he is able to use the chakra absorbed in conjunction with this attack to augment the power of the attack, increasing it's mass and power. For example, should the user absorb a Katon jutsu, he is able to add the absorbed Katon chakra to the new attack, adding onto it's power equivalent to double the chakra absorbed. This allows the user to release the absorbed chakra as a "phantom" attack, releasing a second version of the released attack, equivalent to the chakra absorbed. For example, if the user absorbs an A rank Flame Pillar attack, he is able to release this excess chakra when Fireball Shower is used with the same power it had when absorbed, but in the same appearance and manner of a second released Fireball Shower. Of course, this jutsu is with it's own limitations. After the absorbed chakra has been released, the user is unable to use that same nature in the following turn and cannot use Preta Path itself for 2 subsequent turns.
Note: If a stream jutsu is used, then the user cannot release the additional chakra at the same time. This only works with projectile style attacks.
Note: Can only be used once every 3 turns and at max 5 times a battle.
Note: After using, the user cannot use that same nature for two turns.
Note: This jutsu has to be used in place of the Blocking Technique Absorption Seal in order to absorb something.
Declined Considering the benefits of the original technique and how many times it can be used already, adding this is overkill. It would allow not only more defensive power but also offensive one when the original canon technique can already defend from virtually anything.
Pending, leaving for another mod 
Both the user and herself are immune to the poison; lasts one turn if contact is made
