[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Yagura]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kuchiyose: Curtana ) - Summoning: Sword Of Mercy
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user summons his sword, Curtana. Curtana can infused with elemental chakra to be used for offensive and defensive forms. Curtana can also transform into a shield of titanium to block incoming weapon attacks.

-Declined: poor description and the pink parts needs changing-

(Kuchiyose: Curtana ) - Summoning: Sword Of Mercy
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user summons his sword, Curtana. Curtana can infused with elemental chakra to be used for offensive and defensive forms. Curtana can also transform into a shield of iron to block incoming weapon attacks.
~Declined~ Poor Description

(Curtana - Shinzo) - Sword Of Mercy: Divine Spear
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user releases Raiton chakra and slams his palms on the ground and spears of Lightning appear on the ground surrounding the user and impaling the opponent. This jutsu can only be used 3 times. The user can't use Curtana's power for the next 2 turns.

(Curtana - Zangetsu) - Sword Of Mercy - Cutting Moon
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user infuses Katon chakra on Curtana and the user makes a slashing attack on the opponent and the Katon chakra releases fire like a moon and ranges up to mid range and can burn the opponent severely. This jutsu can only be used twice and cannot be used again.

-First get Curtana approved and then re submit those-

(Curtana - Shinzo) - Sword Of Mercy: Divine Spear
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user releases Raiton chakra and slams his palms on the ground and spears of Lightning appear on the ground surrounding the user and impaling the opponent. This jutsu can only be used 3 times. The user can't use Curtana's power for the next 2 turns.

(Curtana - Zangetsu) - Sword Of Mercy - Cutting Moon
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user infuses Katon chakra on Curtana and the user makes a slashing attack on the opponent and the Katon chakra releases fire like a moon and ranges up to mid range and can burn the opponent severely. This jutsu can only be used twice and cannot be used again.
~Declined~ was told to wait till Curtana was approved

(Satetsu no Gosunkugi Tama) - Iron Sand Spike Shell
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Defensive
Range: Close-Mid
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: 90
Description: The user, after summoning the 3rd Kazekage puppet, release huge amounts of Iron Sand around him and forms an encampment wall with spikes around him. The spikes can destroy/block/neglect any Earth jutsu but the user can't use any jutsu until he releases the shell. Then after releasing the shell, the user can't use Iron Sand jutsus for 3 turns.
Note: Only Yagura can use/teach this jutsu

-Declined: Forbidden jutsus need to have side effects to the user-

(Satetsu no Gosunkugi Tama) - Iron Sand Spike Shell
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Defensive
Range: Close-Mid
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: 90
Description: The user, after summoning the 3rd Kazekage puppet, release huge amounts of Iron Sand around him and forms an encampment wall with spikes around him. The spikes can destroy/block/neglect any Earth jutsu but the user can't use any jutsu until he releases the shell. Then after releasing the shell, the user can't use Iron Sand jutsus for 3 turns. After this jutsu is performed the user turns weak and can only use 2 jutsus for the next turn.
Note: Only Yagura can use/teach this jutsu
~Declined~ Side effects should be something like damage to the user instead of weak attacks and lose of an attack

 

[-Ventus-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(hyouton:hi kouu)Ice release:Ice Rain
Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:after performing handseal,the user will make the sky ,rain of ice needles that is directed at anywhere under the user's will.the needles will stay for 2 turns
-only shinn a use this or teach the jutsu-
-3x per battle-
~Declined~ Needs better description
(hyouton:hi supea)Ice release:Ice spear
Type:Attack
Rank:s
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:after performing handseal,the user will make tice spera that are totall of 4 floating around the user then at his command the ice spears will then be directed to the opponent.
-only shinn a use this or teach the jutsu-
-3x per battle-
~Declined~ Add more restrictions and a better description

 

[TOBI!]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kugutsu Kuchiyose:airon datesha ) Puppet Summoning: Iron dude
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defense/supplumentary
Range: short medium
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage:N/A
Description: A large puppet similar to a large suit of armor, it stands nearly 10 ft tall.
It is not made out of wood like most puppets but of Iron covered in a very high grade fire retardant
reducing all fire damage to it. it also uses joints made out of thick rubber. making it extreamly slow
and hard to use.
~Declined~ OP for an A rank
Raiton: Hikaru (Lightning Style: Shine )
Type: Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 0 (10 if opponent makes contact)
Description: The user creates an octagon of lightning chakra moulded to something like a personal forcefeild. The
forcefeild can reflect all energy based attacked of A rank or lower and signifigantly decrease damage taken by S
and higher rank energy based attacks. Anything that comes into contact with the forcefeild is shocked with high voltage.
This jutsu can last up to 5 seconds after being cast.
~Declined~ Add Restrictions and a Better Description

 

[Adachi]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

One more try with some help.


Wood Style: Tiny Seeds (Mokuton: Chippoke Za-men)
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user creates several tiny chakra seeds the size of a grain of rice. *They then send these seeds towards his/her opponents. *If a seed touches the skin of the opponent, they immediately respond to their chakra, sticking to the victim's skin and sprouting into a poisonous flower. This slowly numbs and kills the victim with spreading it's poisonous chakra their bloodstream. *It also slows down his attacks.

Note: *Kills opponent in three turns if they do not get rid of it*
*can only be used one time a battle*
*can only be taught/used by Tenzo*
~Approved~

Lightning Style: Body Shock (Raiton: Karada Dageki)
Rank: A-Rank
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: None
Description: The user sends raiton chakra quickly throughout his body and the air around him to get rid of any foreign materials that may be in and around him. *These includes things on the microsopic level, minor poisoning, and viruses.

*can only be used four times per battle*
*can only be taught/used by Tenzo*

~On Hold~ I want to talk to a medical expert (Rei or Nexus) about this
Sorry for the trouble Rag. Hope this is an improvent xd

 

[Ben-sama]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kuchyose : Katana No Sumiyaka) Summoning Jutsu : Blade Of Speed

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Rank : A
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short
Chakra : 30
Damage : 60
Description : The Blade Itself Has Chakra Within It, Which Once In Touch With It's Owner Starts Sending The Chakra Throughout The User's Muscles Giving Them Greater Speed
Effect : The User's Speed When Using This Blade Is Doubled
Note : Only Benazz Posesses This Blade
Note : This Blade's Effect Lasts For 5 Turns

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(Kuchyose : Katana No Sutamina) Summoning Jutsu : Blade Of Stamina

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Rank : B
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short
Chakra : 25
Damage : 50
Description : The Blade Itself Has Chakra Within It, Once In Touch With Its Owner It Begins Sending It's Chakra Into The Lungs Of The User And Then Makes Them Works At The Same Rate, And Expands Them, Therefore With Expanded Lungs The User Can Hold His Breath Longer And The Due To The Same Lung Rate The User Can Keep Up His Running Speed At All Time
Note : Only Benazz Posseses This Blade
Note : This Blade's Effect Lasts For 3 Turns

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~ Over week's limit, resubmit next week ~

 

[Emperor]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Bachiatari no Za-men: Zen'taikou) - Seeds of the Damned : Complete Resistance

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Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user goes underground, and spreads a system of roots covering the whole area underground. These roots bind the soil tightly and seep the user's chakra into the ground. This prevents the opponent from manipulating/forcing chakra into/layering the ground with chakra. The user is able to move through these roots like Mayfly whenever required.
However, this technique has major side effects. Due to the user's chakra completely mixing with the ground and resisting the opponent's influences, the user cannot use anything except Ninjutsu (those in the jutsu list under Ninjutsu or the user's customs which are Ninjutsu labelled ; NO Genjutsu, Taijutsu, Elements, Plant Techniques of Zetsu, Fuuinjutsu etc. ) The user has to come out at the beginning of each turn for twenty seconds. Aside from that, the user can only come above ground for ten seconds per turn.
~ Can only be used once per battle
~ Can only be used by Zetsu

~Approved~ Commence the Mayfly Rapage xd

 

[Crutch Kaguya]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kaeru: Kaeru Shou Ganbutsu) Frog Arts: Frog Call Imitation
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: All
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80(-10 to the user)
Description: During times when Shima and Fukasaku are not present, the user will imitate Shima and Fukasaku by collecting chakra into their voice and then the user will let out a loud screech from their mouth. The opponent will be paralyzed, confused, and distracted, leaving them unable to move as soon as it is heard, but this jutsu will give out the users position immediately. To use this jutsu you must know how to summon toads and have activated Sage Mode.
~Once per battle.

~ How long will the effects last ? ~

Rei wants one of you guys to check the one above, this is not a resubmission its just a reminder to get it checked

(Raiton: O-ba-ro-do) Lightning: Overload
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: All
Chakra cost: 50
Damage: 90(-30 to the user)
Description: The user will send their own chakra into an opponents lightning jutsu, this will cause the lightning jutsu to become highly unstable and powerful, and cause the opponent to have no control over it now, the lightning jutsu will overload with power and explode causing damage to the opponent.
~Can only be used once per battle.
~User cannot use lightning jutsu for the next 3 turns.

~ Declined, unrealistic. Most lightning jutsus are extremely fast; you will not be able to overload them before they hit you ~

(Fuuton: Kaze o Yofun) Wind: Winds of Rage
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: All
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will cause the wind around the opponent to spiral creating a tornado with the opponent in the middle, the wind is clear and is able to be seen thru, but has increadible pressure and will rip anything that comes in contact with it, user will then cause it to shrink and crush the opponent in the middle.

~ No restrictions ? O_O ~

 

[Anbu578]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Katon:kujo nami(Fire style:destuction wave)

Type: Attack
Rank:A
Range: Mid-Long-range
Chakra:30
Damage points: 55
Description: The user must concertrate thieir chakra through two parts of the body(both hands and mouth)then the is to spit out a blob of stange Fire substance.Now the user must wait for a few minutes for the substance to start seeping in the ground then the user will let out a outburst of chakra at the substance therefore giving it more strenght.Then finally the user takes out a double-weielded blade and slashes it into the ground therefore shooting the incereased strength substance at the advesary.The opponent will be severely burned by the substance.

Requirements*A double-weielded blade

Note*Anbu578 can only train this jutsu

( I slightly edited the jutsu )
~Approved~

 

[Axle]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(di Squalo dageki) The Shark Blow

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Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user concentrates chakra into their blade, and when it comes in contact with another object, the chakra flows out of the sword like a current, and goes into the opponent thus stunning the opponent for 1 turn
Note: can only be used once per battle
Note: can only be taught by Axle

~Approved~
(Shigure Souen Ryu)

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Rank: B
Type: supplementary
Range: short
Chakra: none
Damage: N/A
Description: an ancient Japenese sword style in which some say is the most unbeatable style in the world the user picks up thier sword and holds it close to their eyes with one hand as this technique the user needs to be able to use only 1 hand to control the swords movements, the users feet are spread shoulder length apart, this sword style has 7 totally different forms
Note: while in this form the user can use no Gen or Ninjutsu unless used before the technique
Note: can only be taught by Axle
Note: only lasts 3 turns

~Approved~
(Shajiku no Ame) - Axle of Rain

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Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: short
Chakra: 25
Damage: 40
Description: the user focuses their chakra in their feet and pushes off, holding the blade with 2 hands in a thrusting motion
Note: the user can only use this technique while in Shigure Souen Ryu
Note: can only be taught by Axle

~Declined~ Needs better description
(Saka ma ku ame) - Rolling Rain

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Rank: B
Type: supplementary
Range: short-mid
Chakra: 25
Damage: N/A
Description:The user puts the tip of their sword in the water focusing their chakra into the tip, the user then lifts up the blade swiftly, causing a 2 giant water typhoons to form, this water typhoon can only defend the user, the reflection of the water off the user can cause illusions for the opponent and giving the user time to escape if necessary and hide the user's whereabouts giving them the advantage to counter attack
Note: the user can only use this technique while in Shigure Souen Ryu
Note: can only be taught by Axle
Note: Water source needed

~Declined~ OP for a B rank
(ya ra zy no ame) - Last Minute Rain

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Rank: A
Type : Offense
Range: short-mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user drops their sword with the blade facing toward the enemy, then the user focuses their chakra in their foot, and kicks the sword with incredible power in speed, and as soon as the sword hits the mark, the user is there holding the sword again (the sword causes a distraction giving the user time to rush in toward the opponent)
Note: the user can only use this technique while in Shigure Souen Ryu
Note: can only be taught by Axle

~Declined~ Add restrictions

(Saka ma ku ame) - Rolling Rain

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Rank: A
Type: supplementary
Range: short-mid
Chakra: 25
Damage: N/A
Description:The user puts the tip of their sword in the water focusing their chakra into the tip, the user then lifts up the blade swiftly, causing a 2 giant water typhoons to form, this water typhoon can only defend the user, the reflection of the water off the user can cause illusions for the opponent and giving the user time to escape if necessary and hide the user's whereabouts giving them the advantage to counter attack
Note: the user can only use this technique while in Shigure Souen Ryu
Note: can only be taught by Axle
Note: Water source needed

~Declined~ Incorrect Chakra Cost

(Shajiku no Ame) - Axle of Rain

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Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: short
Chakra: 25
Damage: 40
Description: the user focuses their chakra in their feet,then releases in an instant causing the user to charge towards the opponent like the user was shot out of a cannon,and while charging the user is holding the blade with 2 hands in a thrusting motion
Note: the user can only use this technique while in Shigure Souen Ryu
Note: can only be taught by Axle

~Declined~ Still a poor description. Any special effects if it hits the opponent?

(ya ra zy no ame) - Last Minute Rain

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Rank: A
Type : Offense
Range: short-mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user drops their sword with the blade facing toward the enemy, then the user focuses their chakra in their foot, and kicks the sword with incredible power in speed, and as soon as the sword hits the mark, the user is there holding the sword again (the sword causes a distraction giving the user time to rush in toward the opponent)
Note: the user can only use this technique while in Shigure Souen Ryu
Note: can only be taught by Axle
Note: can only be used once per battle

~Approved~

 

[Axle]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Saka ma ku ame) - Rolling Rain

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Rank: A
Type: supplementary
Range: short-mid
Chakra: 25
Damage: N/A
Description:The user puts the tip of their sword in the water focusing their chakra into the tip, the user then lifts up the blade swiftly, causing a 2 giant water typhoons to form, this water typhoon can only defend the user, the reflection of the water off the user can cause illusions for the opponent and giving the user time to escape if necessary and hide the user's whereabouts giving them the advantage to counter attack
Note: the user can only use this technique while in Shigure Souen Ryu
Note: can only be taught by Axle
Note: Water source needed

~Declined~ Incorrect Chakra Cost

(Shajiku no Ame) - Axle of Rain

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Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: short
Chakra: 25
Damage: 40
Description: the user focuses their chakra in their feet,then releases in an instant causing the user to charge towards the opponent like the user was shot out of a cannon,and while charging the user is holding the blade with 2 hands in a thrusting motion
Note: the user can only use this technique while in Shigure Souen Ryu
Note: can only be taught by Axle

~Declined~ Still a poor description. Any special effects if it hits the opponent?

(ya ra zy no ame) - Last Minute Rain

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Rank: A
Type : Offense
Range: short-mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user drops their sword with the blade facing toward the enemy, then the user focuses their chakra in their foot, and kicks the sword with incredible power in speed, and as soon as the sword hits the mark, the user is there holding the sword again (the sword causes a distraction giving the user time to rush in toward the opponent)
Note: the user can only use this technique while in Shigure Souen Ryu
Note: can only be taught by Axle
Note: can only be used once per battle

~Approved~

(Saka ma ku ame) - Rolling Rain

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Rank: A
Type: supplementary
Range: short-mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description:The user puts the tip of their sword in the water focusing their chakra into the tip, the user then lifts up the blade swiftly, causing a 2 giant water typhoons to form, this water typhoon can only defend the user, the reflection of the water off the user can cause illusions for the opponent and giving the user time to escape if necessary and hide the user's whereabouts giving them the advantage to counter attack
Note: the user can only use this technique while in Shigure Souen Ryu
Note: can only be taught by Axle
Note: Water source needed

(Shajiku no Ame) - Axle of Rain

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Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: short
Chakra: 25
Damage: 40
Description: the user focuses their chakra in their feet,then releases in an instant causing the user to charge towards the opponent like the user was shot out of a cannon,and while charging the user is holding the blade with 2 hands in a thrusting motion, this attacks power is equivalent to one of Tsunade's punches.
Note: the user can only use this technique while in Shigure Souen Ryu
Note: can only be taught by Axle

~ Over week's limit, submit next week ~

 

[Crutch Kaguya]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

This is my last submission of the week

(Kaeru: Kaeru Shou Ganbutsu) Frog Arts: Frog Call Imitation
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: All
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80(-10 to the user)
Description: During times when Shima and Fukasaku are not present, the user will imitate Shima and Fukasaku by collecting chakra into their voice and then the user will let out a loud screech from their mouth. The opponent will be paralyzed, confused, and distracted, leaving them unable to move as soon as it is heard for 1 turn, but this jutsu will give out the users position immediately. To use this jutsu you must know how to summon toads and have activated Sage Mode.
~Once per battle.

~ Approved ~

 

[Deidara...]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Summoning Animal: Wyverns
Contract (Scroll Owner): Iseris...
Users who have signed contract: n/A
Summoning Boss:

Amphisbaena (amphisbyna): Queen of the wyverns

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(Kuchiyose: hachuu kouhi Amphisbaena)- Summoning: wyvern queen Amphisbaena
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range:All
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: the user makes the required seals for summoning and then presses a palm to the ground summoning the queen of wyverns. amphisbaena considerably smaller than katsuyu. Amphisbaena like typical wyverns has one set of wings and one set of legs, and is incapable of elemental releases. her strength lies in her ability to cast illusions, through sigt and through the sense of touch. her blinding speed and immense physical power make up for her slightly smaller size. and her name means two headed, as she has a head at both ends of her body

Note: can only be summoned once per battle

Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:

cloud of darkness

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(Kuchiyose: hachuu cloud of darkness) summoning: Wyvern cloud of darkness
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range:All
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: the user makes the required seals for summoning and then presses a palm to the ground summoning cloud of darkness.n he stands about 8 feet tall and his body length is about 12 feet in total. he has an aditional set of wings for increased agility. he is not built for endurance but is a speed demon. his areo dynamic shape allows him to cut through most wind attacks
(up to B rank, unless they are cutting)

-Declined: No mythical creatures are allowed not to mention that Grim holds the dragon contract-

i'm not understanding the basis for declination
there are already plenty of mythical creatures on the summons list already

griffins
hydras
basilisk(s)
dragons
phoenix(es)

~ Point is wyverns are almost similar to dragons, so declined ~

 

[Caliburn]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Katon: Karyuu no Enchu) - Fire Style: Fire Dragon's Flame Elbow -

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Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short (can medium/long in combination with another jutsu)
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user focuses katon-based chakra into his elbow(s) and releases it in an instant like a booster jet from his elbow(s). As a result the speed and strength of the users punches are increased dramatically. The booster makes the punch so fast it’s nearly impossible to block/dodge it without having a special technique to do it(IG for example). The result of the speed is that internal damage the punch does is increased (as more speed means more power is released upon contact through the opponents body). The booster can be used for multiple strikes with both arms, though it’s mainly used as a one-hit attack.
This jutsu can also be used in combination with a katon-jutsu that is released from the users hand(s). As this jutsu’s doesn’t require any handseals(it just releases an amount of chakra), it can be used at the exact same time when performing the katon-jutsu, giving it a +20 damage boost (it still counts as one of the three jutsu’s).

*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*Can only be used in combination with a katon-jutsu released from the hands*

-Pending: how many times you can use this?-


(Katon: Karyuu no Guren Bakuenjin) - Fire style: Fire Dragon's Red Lotus Flame Exploding Blade -

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Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra cost: 60
Damage points: 120
Description: The user collects a huge amount of katon-based chakra in his arms and releases it as a massive, large scale torrent of blade-shaped flames that strike the enemy in a spiral formation. Every time the enemy (or anything else for that matter) is hit with one of the blades it explodes with enormous force. As it are blades they make a slashing motion and blow up on contact, taking parts of the surface of the earth with it.
Because a large amount of blades is released, the entire battlefield is engolved in exploding flames and the make the battlefield full of large craters. It also evaporates watersources.

*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*Can only be used once per battle*
*-10 damage to the user*

-Pending: needs stronger side effects-

(Shishi Sonson) - Lion's Song -

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Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user must have unleashed Ken Ki to use it. Placing a sheathed sword upright and listening to the "breath" of his opponent. The user then goes in a straight line to the opponent, using the speed from Ken Ki(=4 IG), making it look like he completely disappears and reappears behind the opponent. The attack rapidly unsheathes, attacks once, and sheaths the sword again when the user is past the opponent. The attack itself consists only from one straight slash that attacks the part between the shoulders and chest, slashing so deep it makes the arm that was hit disfunctional and making the opponent bleed to death. The technique is back-handed as opposed to from the waist with a standard grip on the sword. The slash is not completely full as the tip of the blade leaves the blade when the it slashes and then is put back into the scabbard.
Utilizing the speed of Ken Ki at it max and focusing it all in one slash it makes it nearly impossible to dodge block, unless the opponent itself has Ken Ki activated. Even then it’s almost it requirs skill.
It's strong enough to cut through steel.

*Can only be used when released Ken Ki*
*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*Can only be used twice per battle*
A gif of the attack:

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-Declined: OP. Ans sharingan of 3 tomoes can detect the speed of all gates-

As it is an A-rank move and it's nothing more than a powered-up punch, I see no reason to restric the amount of uses it can normally be used. However I restricted it that it can only be used twice as a combo per battle.

(Katon: Karyuu no Enchu) - Fire Style: Fire Dragon's Flame Elbow -

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Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short (can medium/long in combination with another jutsu)
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user focuses katon-based chakra into his elbow(s) and releases it in an instant like a booster jet from his elbow(s). As a result the speed and strength of the users punches are increased dramatically. The booster makes the punch so fast it’s nearly impossible to block/dodge it without having a special technique to do it(IG for example). The result of the speed is that internal damage the punch does is increased (as more speed means more power is released upon contact through the opponents body). The booster can be used for multiple strikes with both arms, though it’s mainly used as a one-hit attack.
This jutsu can also be used in combination with a katon-jutsu that is released from the users hand(s). As this jutsu’s doesn’t require any handseals(it just releases an amount of chakra), it can be used at the exact same time when performing the katon-jutsu, giving it a +20 damage boost (it still counts as one of the three jutsu’s).

*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*Can only be used in combination with a katon-jutsu released from the hands*
*Can only be used twice in a combo*

~ Approved ~

I increased the amount of damage it does to the user and added a restriction that the next two turns no fire jutsu's can be used.

(Katon: Karyuu no Guren Bakuenjin) - Fire style: Fire Dragon's Red Lotus Flame Exploding Blade -

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Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra cost: 60
Damage points: 120
Description: The user collects a huge amount of katon-based chakra in his arms and releases it as a massive, large scale torrent of blade-shaped flames that strike the enemy in a spiral formation. Every time the enemy (or anything else for that matter) is hit with one of the blades it explodes with enormous force. As it are blades they make a slashing motion and blow up on contact, taking parts of the surface of the earth with it.
Because a large amount of blades is released, the entire battlefield is engolved in exploding flames and the make the battlefield full of large craters. It also evaporates watersources.

*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*Can only be used once per battle*
*-20 damage to the user due to it uses an enormous amount of fire chakra*
*The user can't use any fire juts's the next two turns*

~ Still slightly OPed, remove the entire battlefield part ~

I deleted the Sharingan-part and added a restriction of -10 damage to the user. Don't forget Ken Ki has to be activated to use it >.>

(Shishi Sonson) - Lion's Song -

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Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user must have unleashed Ken Ki to use it. Placing a sheathed sword upright and listening to the "breath" of his opponent. The user then goes in a straight line to the opponent, using the speed from Ken Ki(=4 IG), making it look like he completely disappears and reappears behind the opponent. The attack rapidly unsheathes, attacks once, and sheaths the sword again when the user is past the opponent. The attack itself consists only from one straight slash that attacks the part between the shoulders and chest, slashing so deep it makes the arm that was hit disfunctional and making the opponent bleed to death. The technique is back-handed as opposed to from the waist with a standard grip on the sword. The slash is not completely full as the tip of the blade leaves the blade when the it slashes and then is put back into the scabbard.
Utilizing the speed of Ken Ki at it max and focusing it all in one slash it makes it nearly impossible to dodge block, unless the opponent itself has Ken Ki activated. Even then it’s almost it requirs skill.
It's strong enough to cut through steel.

*Can only be used when released Ken Ki*
*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*Can only be used twice per battle*
* -10 damage to the due to the enormous strain it puts on the body*
A gif of the attack:

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~ Restrict it to once per battle and add more side effects ~

 

[NEMEXIS]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Hasu doragon hoi-ru) Lotus Dragon Wheel
Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short-Long
Chakara Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:To use this technique, the user must be proficient in using the Katon element. Before executing the jutsu, the user must perform the following handseals: Boar, Dragon, Serpant, Monkey. The user will concentrate katon chakra around their arms. They will then stick them out the way one would do if he was pretending to be an airplane. Two Lotus dragons, described above, will begin circling each arm. When the user shoots his arms forward the dragons are released and cause and when the dragons make contact with the target a large explosion of flames will come about.
*Can Only Be Performed Twice*
*Only Nemexis Can Teach

~ Lotus Dragons described above ? Where ? ~

(Genjutsu:Mira-Hei)Mirror Wall
Type:Supplementary
Rank:B
Range:Short-Long
Chakara Cost:25
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Once The Target Looks At The User The Target will be Locked In A Genjutsu That Will Change Everything Around Him Look Backwards Like A Mirror, so If He Is Looking Forward It Shows What Is Going On Backwards Instead Of whats Forward Making The Target Confused.So If You Throw A Kunai The Target Will Not Be Aware Because It Is Showing What is On The Back Of Him.
*Note Can Only Be Used Twice*
*Only Last 1 Turn*

~ Approved ~

 

[Deidara...]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

i'm not understanding the basis for declination
there are already plenty of mythical creatures on the summons list already

griffins
hydras
basilisk(s)
dragons
phoenix(es)

~ Point is wyverns are almost similar to dragons, so declined ~

if wyverns are not approved because they are almost similar, what of basilisks and snakes which have even less differences than dragons and wyverns

~ Actually they do; but I'm not going to be arguing with you - Rei declined it and you are advised to make a new summoning contract because this one is not going to be approved ~

 

[NEMEXIS]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Hasu doragon hoi-ru) Lotus Dragon Wheel
Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short-Long
Chakara Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:To use this technique, the user must be proficient in using the Katon element. Before executing the jutsu, the user must perform the following handseals: Boar, Dragon, Serpant, Monkey. The user will concentrate katon chakra around their arms. They will then stick them out the way one would do if he was pretending to be an airplane. Two Lotus dragons, described above, will begin circling each arm. When the user shoots his arms forward the dragons are released and cause and when the dragons make contact with the target a large explosion of flames will come about.
*Can Only Be Performed Twice*
*Only Nemexis Can Teach

~ Lotus Dragons described above ? Where ? ~

(Genjutsu:Mira-Hei)Mirror Wall
Type:Supplementary
Rank:B
Range:Short-Long
Chakara Cost:25
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Once The Target Looks At The User The Target will be Locked In A Genjutsu That Will Change Everything Around Him Look Backwards Like A Mirror, so If He Is Looking Forward It Shows What Is Going On Backwards Instead Of whats Forward Making The Target Confused.So If You Throw A Kunai The Target Will Not Be Aware Because It Is Showing What is On The Back Of Him.
*Note Can Only Be Used Twice*
*Only Last 1 Turn*

~ Approved ~

what does that mean

 

[Seblax]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

summoning white tigers ministers ( Kuchiyose no jutsu : jouin shiro tora )

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: short-mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: this is a summoning of the three huge tigers that fight with the summoning boss " tiggara " they are huge enough to get any summoning together and wears an defensive armor especially wind that protect them from any attack and there speed is brilliant, they are faster then snakes and there claws and teeth is huge enough to cut throw almost everything

~ i know white tiger summoning

~ Declined, too OPed ~

raiton : doragon-ken ) lightning style : dragon blade

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost: 40 ( - 15 for each turn its in use )
Damage Points: 80
Description: by charging the user's lightning chakra, he shall focus it in an blade like huge dragon shaped lightning from his hand " like an dragon chidori spear " but it can be moved like huge link to so that its flicks able if the user want to, and can make huge damages to the opponent , and perfect against others earth jutsus.

~ can only be user 1 times in a battle ..
~ cant stay more then two turns
~ - 10 for each time its in use for the user's health " because it injures his hand

~ Approved, but I changed it to only once per battle ~

( toko kusari ) endless chains

Rank: a
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost: 30 ( -4 for each chain that has been released over each turn )
Damage Points: 60
Description: this is 7 chains that spins around the users arm with a kunai at it's end and its so long that can never been fully released , ans its controllable by the over user's chakra and its faster then any other attack of kunai or shuriken and can be powered with other elemental attacks , and can protect from others attack
- can be used 5 times each battle
- doesn't effect the user's speed

~ Explain it better please ~

those are the same justus in the quota~

 

[NEMEXIS]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

My last one for the week:

(Tenma Kusari)Demon Chains
Type:Supplementary/Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short-Long
Chakara Cost:30
Damage Points:60(If Used With Fire)
Description:To use this technique, some hand seals are needed: Boar, Dragon, Horse, Serpent. After the seals have been performed the user will either pound their hands on the ground or stomp with their feet.About 5 plethora of iron chains will appear beneath the user and will grip the opponent and bring them to their knees. They can be broken with hard work, but it helps if your chuunin or higher. This jutsu is used to contain people and hold them still.You May Also Add Katon Chakara To Make The Chain burn The Opponent while they Are Hold Still.
*Note Can Only Be Used Once*
*Only Nemexis Can Teach*

~ Declined, Iron chains from the ground ? How ? ~

 

[anbu kakashi]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Illusion Technique: Distorted Reality (Genjutsu: Ibitsu Riariti)

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user would cast an illusion immediately and unknowingly when the opponent have suffer any kind of pain, cut, wound etc. (it can be minor or life threatening). The illusion causes the opponent's pain, wound, cut etc. to becoming extremely painful and have the opponent severely afraid of their wounds which causes them into a state of complete horror-struck
Note: Can only be used twice

~You still haven't said how its activated - eye contact, sound, line of sight , what ? ~

Earth Style: Earth Drill (Daton: Tsuchi Doriru)

Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user turns the a portion of the earth into a mud puddle which begins to swirl. From the swirling, it instantly begins to rise into a rapid rotating drill and hardens immediately. The drill is hard enough to penetrate through most dense materials and travel at an almost instant speed.
Note: Can only be used three times
Note: Can only be used by Anbu Kakashi

~ Declined, sounds like Mud Release ~

Water Style: Hydro Pump (Suition: Haidoro Panpu)

Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user begins to gather water chakra within their chakra until they can't hold any more. Once the user gathers enough water chakra, he/she then lets out a huge force of water from the mouth which is shot off at the opponent. The speed and force is so tremendous that it can tear a hole or crater on almost whatever it hits. No handsign required
Note: Can only be used three times
Note: Can only be use by Anbu Kakashi

~ Over week's limit ~

Doujutsu: Kuroheru (Eye Technique: Dark Hell)

Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This is Kakashi's alternative verison of the Uchiha's Amaterasu. Unlike the Amaterasu, the color of this flame is white and only burns for several hours. Can only be put out if converged by a huge body of water of higher rank.
Note: Unblockable
Note: Burns for one turn
Note: Must have Kakashi's Mangekyou Sharingan
Note: Can only be used once
Note: -45 chakra to the user

~ Over week's limit ~

 

[Alucard]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Houkei Keisei Disuta-bu Chakra Shiyou) - Square Formation of Disruption Chakra Method

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Rank: S
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: At least four ninjas (including summons and clones) are needed to do this technique. They will surround the enemy forming a square, then they will do the handseals and chakra lines will appear, connecting the 4 people. All of them will then send their chakra through the ground and air to inside the square and they will make their chakra to mix with the opponent's chakra flow, but isntead of disturbing the opponent mind like in a gengutsu, they will disturb the opponent's chakra system and can even make them unable to move. To this jutsu to be successfuly used, none of the users can be interromped, otherwise the jutsu will faill. The drawback of this jutsu is that the users's need to be still and can't move while they do this so they can focus their chakra on the opponent and because of that, the users can be an easy target for an opponent. Can only be used once per battle, lasts 2 turns.

~ Declined. Extremely unrealistic. All you are doing is focusing your chakra into the air and ground, How will this affect the opponent's chakra flow ? How can you force your chakra into the opponent's system ? Even a Hyuuga can only do so on contact. Furthermore, is your chakra some sort of special power that seals off other's chakras ? Do you have some sort of chakra that works like a Hyuuga's Jyuuken ? Even the demonic chakra of the Kyuubi no Kitsune cannot seal off other's chakra flows. If you are allowed to use Fuuinjutsu, then submit this as a Fuuin, when it might be approved ~