[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Ace]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Suiton: Gogyou Supiritto) Water Style: Water Spirit
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: (20 to user) (+ 20 to water attacks)
Description: The user gathers a vast amount of water chakra into their hand(s)and smashes them into a large body of water. The water starts bubbling, and a large body of water emerges, that looks somewhat like a monster. This body is filled with so much chakra, that it is actually visible. This body of water can be controlled by the user, and can only be frozen by ice jutsu of the same rank (since so much chakra is imbued in it). Water attacks used against this monster are futile, and water attacks used with this monster are powered up because of the surplus of chakra in it.
*Water Jutsu above A rank can't be used for 1 turn after this move*
*Can only be used once per battle*
*User must be on top of the monster to control it.*

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*Pending* Get Grimm or Rei's approval

~Decline
its a forbidden rank, u need some sideeffects. u need limits and restriction

 

[Sin]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

[Kuchiyose No Jutsu:Aisu Horimonos] Summoning Technique: Ice Sculptures
Rank: A
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will use ice and by moulding it they create a sculpture, which they put their blood on then smash into the ground, summoning the sculpture they make.
Note: Must know Ice jutsus
Note: Must be taught By ~Sin~

*Declined*How many sculptures are made? This seems more like a ninjutsu than a kuchiyose no jutsu...

[Kuchiyose No Jutsu:Glome, Sono Aisu Musha] Summoning Technique: Glome, The Ice Warrior
Rank: S
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: When Glome is summoned, he can cause ice spikes to form from the ground by slamming down onto the ground. Glome is friendly to his summoners, but is vicious to enemies, he is fast and can make easy escapes.
Note: Can only be summoned twice per battle
Note: Must be taught by ~Sin~
Picture:

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*Declined* Oped. Remove that double water and ice damage and resubmit.*

First: Um I won't resubmit.

[Kuchiyose No Jutsu:Glome, Sono Aisu Musha] Summoning Technique: Glome, The Ice Warrior
Rank: S
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: When Glome is summoned, he can cause ice spikes to form from the ground by slamming down onto the ground. Glome is friendly to his summoners, but is vicious to enemies, he is fast and can make easy escapes.
Note: Can only be summoned twice per battle
Note: Must be taught by ~Sin~
*Pending*Make Once per battle, and what do you mean by easy escapes?

 

[Goro Kaguya]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kuchiyose : Balder no Kori Kuguma)- Summoning: Balder the Black Bear
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short- Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: User summons Balder the Black bear. Balder has a nature affinity for fire element using fire jutsu up to A rank and is a skilled shinobi amongst the shinobi bear clan. Known for his taijutsu skill and his ability to release a dense chakra endow smokescreen. Being dense with chakra the smokescreen can be recalled if blown away.
~Approved

(Taijutsu Kuciyose: Seishun Genkotsu Nunchuku )- Summoning: Youthful Fist Nunchucks
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short- Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60 (+10 When used with Raiton chakra)
Description: Users summons two medium size silver spiked rods.Using chakra user creates links that connect the two rods to form nunchucks. Nunchucks can be charged with raiton chakra to cause addition damage to opponets.
~Approved

(Za Sueshijuu Ranmyaku no Mai)- The Eternal Chaotic Dance
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: N/A
Damage: 85 (-30)
Description: After unlocking the Seventh Gate: Kyomon (Gate of wonder): User will fiercely attack his opponent with a barrage of kicks and punches, leading to a uppercut sending them into the sky. User will then jump into the sky to match opponents position to assualt again with a barrage of punches knocking the opponent into the ground. User speeds are nearly untraceable by the eyes (Sharingan Doujutsu cannot trace for their is no chakra to see. The Byakugan cannot keep up with the speed of the user). After the attack users muscles are ripped to shreds from strain of The Seventh Gate.
Note: Useable Once Per battle
Requirement: 7th Gate Open
~Declined
its abit overpowered. there should be alot of side effects since its the 7th gate

(Za Sueshijuu Ranmyaku no Mai)- The Eternal Chaotic Dance
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: N/A
Damage: 85 (-30)
Description: After unlocking the Seventh Gate: Kyomon (Gate of wonder): User will fiercely attack his opponent with a barrage of kicks and punches, leading to a uppercut sending them into the sky. User will then jump into the sky to match opponents position to assualt again with a barrage of punches knocking the opponent into the ground. User speeds are nearly untraceable by the eyes (Sharingan Doujutsu cannot trace for their is no chakra to see. The Byakugan cannot keep up with the speed of the user). After the attack users muscles are ripped to shreds from strain of The Seventh Gate.
Note: Useable Once Per battle
User cannot move for the rest of the battle
Users Inner Ki balance is distrupted, disabling user from Accessing the Inner Gates.
Requirement: 7th Gate Open

~Approved

 

[Xylon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Wind Style; Blaze control (Fuuton; kaen seishi)
Rank; S
Type; Attack/Defense
Range; Short-long
Chakra cost; 40
Damage points; 80
Description; The technique allows the user to control fire, by using wind style the user maintains the density of the oxygen in the air that fits his requirement, using just a little a spark the user can create a S rank Fire attack with this or even turn an S rank fire to a spark, since the fire can't keep up if there is no oxygen to burn from.
Note; -The effect of the technique changes according to the environment (in a rain forest, the user certainly can't distinguish an S rank flame)
-This doesn't applies on Forbidden rank fire attacks that defies the normal laws of nature.
-Flames that are summoned(E.g; Ameterasu ) doesn't have effect by this either because of the less reaction time.
-Wind/fire combo's weakens defensive effects of this technique because of wind pressures colliding.
*Declined*

 

[Sin]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

First: Um I won't resubmit.

[Kuchiyose No Jutsu:Glome, Sono Aisu Musha] Summoning Technique: Glome, The Ice Warrior
Rank: S
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: When Glome is summoned, he can cause ice spikes to form from the ground by slamming down onto the ground. Glome is friendly to his summoners, but is vicious to enemies, he is fast and can make easy escapes.
Note: Can only be summoned twice per battle
Note: Must be taught by ~Sin~
*Pending*Make Once per battle, and what do you mean by easy escapes?

[Kuchiyose No Jutsu:Glome, Sono Aisu Musha] Summoning Technique: Glome, The Ice Warrior
Rank: S
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: When Glome is summoned, he can cause ice spikes to form from the ground by slamming down onto the ground. Glome is friendly to his summoners, but is vicious to enemies, he is fast and can make easy escapes.
Note: Can only be summoned once per battle
Note: Must be taught by ~Sin~

Easy escapes as in, since he is fast he can easily escape

You haven't explained anything, just merely repeated yourself... remove the easily escapes part for approval.

 

[Black Reaper]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Senpō: Gama Sukin Ijou (Sage Arts: Toad Flesh Surroundings)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: None
Description: By forming the needed hand seals and then touching the ground, the user transforms the entire ground into toad flesh.

Note: Usable once per battle.
Note: Lasts 3 turn.
Note: Must be in Sage Mode

*Approved*

 

[Seblax]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

lightening element : double lightening sabers cut tounyuu (raiton :futae raiton gontuo kire)

Type:Attack
Rank:B
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:50 ( +10 if it was hit it froma short range )
Description: by letting your ightening chakra throw your hands , and making an lightening saber each one of them you can fuse it togather in one X like slash directed at your opponent , or if you hit it directly to your oponent it will be more efective

is this better ?

Type:Attack
Rank:B
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40 ( +10 at short range )
Description: by letting your lightning chakra through your hands , and making an lightening saber each one of them you can fuse it together in one X like slash directed at your opponent , or if you hit it directly to your opponent it will be more effective

*approved*No that is better.... I sugguest you read the first page of this thread.

 

[Xylon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Fire's Fourth Shadow's secret sealing method (Yondaime Hokage no naibun fuu)
Rank; C
range; Short
Type; Supplementary
Chakra cost; 20(10 every turn to keep it active)
Damage points; N/a
Description; A seal when activated, passes a Hiraishin seal to everyone that makes a physical contact with the user, Minato uses this seal to use Flying Thunder God.
sorry i cannot edit the last post to add this jutsu =/
~Decline
well dude, the jutsu is abit off =/ the seal does not pass through contact. its not like opponent touches the user's back and the seal passes on to that person =/
u would have to touch the person inorder to transfer the seal

 

[~Nemesis~]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Name:Earth Release: Totem Pole Shot
Type:Offensive
Rank:S
Range:Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:the user does a string of hand signs and claps his hands together, from the earth: will form a Totem pole, the user will throw that pole in a very fast and accurate way like a javelin, to attack the opponent, this jutsu can be used as a close combat melee weapon and to destroy incoming projectiles
Used 2 times per battle

*make twice per battle*

Name:Earth Release: Dragon Tail Barrier
Type: Ofensive
Rank:S
Range:Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:
Description:The technique works by creating over a dozen pillars, made of earth, which are arranged by hand gestures, making them form a gigantic shield or door like barrier between the caster and the opponent. Though highly resilient to outside attacks, it retains earth's weakness to Lightning Release techniques.
Can only be used once

Edited

*Both Approved*

 

[Shig]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Repulsion Fighting Style [Sekiryouku Taijutsu]

Spoiler

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence [Can be both at the same time.]
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80 (+10 to the user each turn [total of 30 damage])
Description: The user controls the air around him, sending chakra waves into the air regularly, then, with each palm, fist or leg strike he can send strong air waves that hit the enemy.The user is also able to bring the air towards him, by strongly moving one or more limbs backwards, the air pulls the enemy towards the user, also Repulsion can be used as a defence against Taijutsu attacks, as it pulls the enemies limbs towards the direction the user wishes.
Restrictions:
- The users' muscles contract more than usual, causing some of his muscles to give in, provoking pain to the user.
- May be used once per battle.
- The effects of this jutsu last 3 turns.
- Must be at least Sannin Rank to use.
- The user is not able to use Ninjutsu during the effects of this jutsu.
- Can be used and teached only by Reido Kira [Itachi & Suigetsu].

*Declined*You'll have to remove the highlighted, makes it Oped.

 

[Shig]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Repulsion Fighting Style [Sekiryouku Taijutsu]

Spoiler

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence [Can be both at the same time.]
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80 (+10 to the user each turn [total of 30 damage])
Description: The user controls the air around him, sending chakra waves into the air regularly, then, with each palm, fist or leg strike he can send strong air waves that hit the enemy.The user is also able to bring the air towards him, by strongly moving one or more limbs backwards, the air pulls the enemy towards the user, also Repulsion can be used as a defence against Taijutsu attacks, as it pulls the enemies limbs towards the direction the user wishes.
Restrictions:
- The users' muscles contract more than usual, causing some of his muscles to give in, provoking pain to the user.
- May be used once per battle.
- The effects of this jutsu last 3 turns.
- Must be at least Sannin Rank to use.
- The user is not able to use Ninjutsu during the effects of this jutsu.
- Can be used and teached only by Reido Kira [Itachi & Suigetsu].

*Declined*You'll have to remove the highlighted, makes it Oped.

Repulsion Fighting Style [Sekiryouku Taijutsu]

Spoiler

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence [Can be both at the same time.]
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80 (+10 to the user each turn [total of 30 damage])
Description: The user controls the air around him, sending chakra waves into the air regularly, then, with each palm, fist or leg strike he can send strong air waves that hit the enemy.The user is also able to bring the air towards him, by strongly moving one or more limbs backwards, the air pulls the enemy towards the user, also Repulsion can be used as a defence against Taijutsu attacks by pushing away enemies' limbs.
Restrictions:
- The users' muscles contract more than usual, causing some of his muscles to give in, provoking pain to the user.
- May be used once per battle.
- The effects of this jutsu last 3 turns.
- Must be at least Sannin Rank to use.
- The user is not able to use Ninjutsu during the effects of this jutsu.
- Can be used and teached only by Reido Kira [Itachi & Suigetsu].

Edited.

 

[Chiryoku]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Katon: honoo urufu (Fire style: flame wolf)
Rank: A
Type: attack/defence (can be both)
Range: mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user concentrates their fire chakra in their gullet, which they then release to create a flame wolf which is movable around the field (only in Mid-range).
Note: only lasts 2 turns
Can only be taught by Ingwer Hatake
~approved

Genjutsu: heishokyoufushou (Illusionary Technique: Claustrophobia)
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user inserts his/her chakra in the opponent’s brain, which then thinks he/she is in a small, dark room. This will cause a panic attack that temporary stuns the opponent.

Note: only lasts 1 turn
Note: only 2 times a battle.
Can only be taught by Ingwer Hatake

~Pending
i am not sure dude =/ its sort of like a D rank move to me
get goro to check on it

 

[Alucard]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Taijutsu: Disuta-bu Chakra Ryuudou) - Fighting Style: Disturbed Chakra Flow

Spoiler

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Damage Points: The user will gather chakra all around his body and will fight taijutsu with the opponent. Then, each time the opponent touched the user/user thouches the opponent, he will use the chakra around him and will insert it on the opponent's body. Kinda like a gengutsu that disrupts the opponent's senses and causes them to see illusions (because the user has inserted his chakra on the opponent's chakra flow), this will disrupt the opponents chakra flow, turning it upside down, making the opponent unable to use chakra. For each time the user touches the opponent and vice-versa, the opponent wont be able to use chakra for one turn. Can only be used twice per battle and lasts two turns

this like the hyuuga clan moves, mixed wit pein's ability and ying yang (aka void element)

 

[Shig]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Void Fighting Style [Munashii Taijutsu]

Spoiler

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40 (+5 per strike)
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user hits the enemy and sends chakra waves into the enemy, creating a void in the enemies' chakra flow making the enemy go numb, or making him unable to concentrate chakra in that certain spot.Can be also used on limbs, disrupting their chakra flow, making the hit limb unable to move for one turn.
Restrictions:
- May be used once per battle.
- The user is able to use this technique for 2 consecutive turns.
- Cannot use Ninjutsu during this technique.
- The chakra emitted in the enemies' body consumes alot of the users' energy and chakra.
- Must be S-Class or higher to use.
- May be used and teached only by Reido Kira [Itachi and Suigetsu].

dude void is my custom element O_O and to learn an energy wave like that, u need to master ying yang

 

[anbu kakashi]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Majestic Mirror (Soudai Kikan)

Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Close
Damage Points: N/A (if absorbed) (-10 to user)/ Same amount (if one absorbed) (-20 to user) or Total amount (if multiple absorbed) (-30 to user)
Chakra Cost: 50
Description: The user concentrates their focus straight ahead creating a transparent round film just a few feet from where the user’s vision focuses. With this transparent film, any incoming ninjutsu attack would be absorb. If one type of ninjutsu was to be absorbed, the user can fire off the absorbed attack back at the opponent with the same damage points and effect. But if absorbed by multiple elemental ninjutsu, the absorbed attack would be fired off as a non-elemental blast that would match the same attack powers of all the absorbed ninjutsu.
Note: Must have Sharingan activated
Note: When absorbing an attack(s), it can saved to use the following turn but if not used the following turn the absorbed attack(s) would be gone and not be able to fire off unless absorbed again; but if used to attack the following turn it would still count as a move
Note: Can only be absorb three times and fire off once
Note: Can only be used by Anbu Kakashi

Lightning Style: Fortuitous Lightning (Raiton: gyoukou raikou)

Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Close/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 90
Description: The user gathers enormous lightning chakra around their body which then releases into the air as streaks of lightning bolts. This is done instantly with no required handsigns. The user can then shoot multiple of these lightning bolts at the user with great speed and the bolts travel at a zig zag pattern which makes it hard for the opponent to just block one area of their body. The bolts would highly be likely to strike any part of the opponent’s front half of the body
Note: Can only be used three times
Note: Opponent must block their entire front body to avoid being hit from the jutsu
Note: Can only be used by Anbu Kakashi
~Its a rip off the chidori storm
Phase (Sou)

Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points; N/A
Description: The user begins to shake but at a molecular level, the user is actually utilizing his chakra to causing his body cells to vibrate rapidly and spread out. As the body cells start to vibrate and spread out, the user would begin to appear like he’s fading and distorted. In this faded or distorted looking form, the user can phase through objects without harm.
Note: The user cannot perform another jutsu while the middle of using this jutsu
Note: Can only be used three times

I don't believe this is even closed to a space/time jutsu because there's no sudden increase in speed or instant time travel
~All declined

 

[Decipher]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Fire Style:Blazing Chain
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Long-Mid Range
Chakra Cost: 35
Damage Points; 50
Description:The User Focuses Their fire chakra and with their closed fists the 2 chains begin to form from the top of both hands.The user attacks the opponent and can wip them or pierce or wrap them up all causing extreme burning pain.
*If more chakra is added the chains will come out faster,will become even hotter,and bigger.
*Can only be used/taught by Sharingan09
~approved

 

[The_Empire]

Re: ? Custom Jutsu Submission ?

(Nendo Sensu:Nendo Mure Saraundo)Clay Style:Clay Swarm Surround
Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:The user rides on a bird in the air . Then the user puts alot of clay inthe mouths of their hands. Next the user will send a ocean of spiders to surround the enemy. Then the user sends out a swarm of birds to surround the spiders. The user will denoate the spiders and birds when they are ready.

~approved

 

[Eddy-kun..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Hanadzura)Kuchiyose:Chakra Muzzle
Rank: S Class
Type: Defense/Attack/Suplementary
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:
Desciption:The user after a series of hand signs places their hand on the floor .Once this has been done several chakra muzzles form shooting in the direction of the opponents companion,if the companion is caught by one of these they immediately turn against the opponent attacking them.
*Can only be used by Anbu Itachi*
*Can only be used two times*

~Decline
its like ino's kg

 

[Black Reaper]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Dropping ma hydra summon.

(Kuchiyose no jutsu: Zansatsu) - Summoning Technique: Zansatsu Massacre
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user calls forth the king of all legends- the Sasquatch, this beast has the build of Five average sized men. The Sasquatch has an affinity for taijutsu, letting him have immense speed and immense power which has even been known to overwhelm the sharingan at its best.

Can Only be summoned once per battle.

~Pending
O_O ehhh u want big foot?

 

[-Ventus-]

Re: ? Custom Jutsu Submission ?

Weapon Name:Kumori
Rank; Forbidden
Chakra cost;
Description:Taken from the chamber of the murdered demon lord,this katana can be used as an extension of the ability of the user.The katana is able to use whatever chakra the user have or use.Its blade is made from a special alloy that can't be broken down by a-class down jutsu's and has a safeguard ability that activates when the owner is not holding it. A unique ability is that it is able to have sage chakra focused into it , this makes it able to invisably alter its striking range, if this ability is used another 7 damage will be done to the user for each turn used.
*only hinaru can holds this katana*
*Does 7 damage to the user for each turn it was used*
*Last only 5 turns in battle*
*After the 5 turns it will become a normal sword*

*Declined*

(katon:Hisaki Kabe) Fire style:Wall of Flames
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description: A offensive jutsu, the user creates a fire around the oppenent using the oxygen around him and makes a dome around him leaving him no escape and the ground around him will be hot that he can't go down or else he'll be toast.
*only be used once*
*The user can't use fire jutsu for 2 turns*
*The user will have -15 damage for 3 turns*
*Only be used once in battle*
* only Hinaru can teach or used this jutsu*
*Declined*Oped.