Alright! I ll try ma best!Ah! Awesome. In that case. Using what you have so far I want you to perform a three technique combo (as you would in a fight), the combo must include at least one Water Style technique.
In the same post, defend from your own attack. Same rules apply.
Okay! Let me try it another time.Hmm, while the attack was decent their are certainly ways for you to improve it... Even just using the same techniques you could create a far more effective combination. By simply using the starch syrup as the first attack the combo becomes far more threatening. The syrup sticks to the opponent, limiting their movement as well as removing their ability to perform lightning techniques. This therefore makes the devouring earth a much tougher technique to deal with... Not only because they must use something that isn't directly effective against earth, but as the earth hits the target, it too would stick to them, the syrup acting like an adhesive glue between target and earth. Unless they have the physical strength to break the earth, they are stuck in place and must defend without moving... This makes them a far easier target for your last technique.
See how just a simple switch of technique and a better worked description can give you a more fearsome combo?
From now on, when we do this drill I'd like two things to happen.
Firstly, the defence MUST include at least one water style technique.
Secondly, I want you to refrain from using direct strengths in your defence. So you can't counter earth with lightning or fire with water etc... This will encourage creativity which will only help in the future.
Go again, and whilst you do so, think. If you can defend against your combination in four seconds, so can a real opponent, if you find the second part of the test difficult... You know you did the first part correctly.
No problem at all! Make me do it until I get the combos correctly! even if it takes a 50 or even 100 tries! ^_^It was a nice idea, but unfortunately your offence doesn't work. To manipulate the ground formaing the A-rank swamp you'd have to use an Earth technique S-rank or above, the chakra in the earth would overpower the oncoming chakra and cancel it out. Also, to me the attack felt like you used Water because you had to, not because it worked. I'd like it if you could base the attack around the water, using other elements as a back up, rather than the other way around.
Sorry to be a pain, but I'd like you to try once more. This time the water technique should form the base of your combination, also try to use something other than Starch Syrup. There are a lot of other techniques that are available to you that can be used just as effectively in battle.
then obviously, because the attack doesn't work, your defence becomes irrelevant although you clearly understand the point so I'll allow you to leave the defence out of the next post if you wish. If you want to do it, go for it ^_^ it'll only improve your RP
xD okay! But templates are such a pain ya kno! >_>I'd actually like you to stick to McRazor's template for a while, I'll allow you to abandon it once I feel you're at a high enough level of understanding. Templates can help to simplify certain things so yeah!
(Mizu Bunshin) - Water Release: Water Clone
Rank: C
Range: Short
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal the user creates a clone of themselves made of water. These water clones have 1/10th of the users chakra. These clones are also limited in that they can only travel short range from the user without losing control. When a water clone take enough damage they revert back to normal water.
Note: Can only perform up to C rank Water techniques and requires a water source.
So, for this technique you first need to perform a single handseal. Once done you will create a clone from a nearby water source, the clone will possess 1/10th of your total chakra, so use it wisely. Much like an ordinary shadow clone, this clone is much like an ordinary shadow clone in the fact that it will be destroyed by minimal amounts of damage, although once destroyed it does not disperse, it turns back into water and will remain as a puddle on the ground. the clone can only ever stand short range from you and can not use anything other than D-C rank Water jutsu.
xD indeed the description was quiet hard to understand!(Suiton: Suigandan) - Water Release: Water Fang Bullet
Rank: C
Range: Short
Type: Offense
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: A technique that deals physical damage to the enemy with a liquid mass brought forth from underwater. Its power to kill and maim is augmented by adding a spinning motion to the compactly pressured water. During fights on water, taking advantage of its characteristic ability to attack from anywhere in a 360 degrees radius, in conjunction with other techniques for distraction, confusion and so forth, this technique has an extensive array of applications.
Note: Requires a water source.
So this is a little different, providing you are on a water source this is one of the most useful jutsus you will ever come across. Simply because of one thing, diversity. Basically (since the description is actually quite hard to understand in my opinion), you make a shape shoot from a water source. In the anime this was shown to be a drill (which is what the spinning part of the description above refers to) that shoots from the water beneath the target, obviously dealing physical damage. Although one could also remove the spining and ake the water rise out above the opponent, bringing the weight down on his head and throwing him under. An easy way to think of it would be to imagine you're using a water style version of the earth spikes technique.
1. In this technique the user will first perform the Hidden mist technique and block the line of sight of the opponent. Then whit the hidden mist technique active, the user will use the previous technique to and manipulate it in such a way that it will reflect the light and blind the opponent. In order to explain this technique with even more detail, The user uses the hidden mist technique which creates very thick layer of mist. The mist is nothing but tiny droplets of water that is suspended in the air. This technique makes use of the physical property of water droplets which allows sunlight to pass through them. Since the mist consist of numerous amount of suspended tiny water droplets in them, the user manipulates this water droplets present in the mist in such a way that they all sync with each other in making the sunlight pass through them and reach the side of the opponent. By this technique the opponent's line of sight will not only be blocked but also the opponent will be blinded which will put the user in a very good advantage. Sensory ninjas will be in very good advantage with this technique, as they will be exactly be able to pin point the location of the target and be able to attack him precisely after blinding him/her.Suiton: Kirigakure Shiryoku Hakudatsu) - Water Release: Hidden Mist Eye Sight Deprevation
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15(-3 each turn to keep it active)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using the hidden mist jutsu the user reflects the natural light an a way that it blinds there opponent temporarily as long as the opponent is in the mist.
Note: Must have already used hidden mist jutsu
(Suiton: Suishōha) - Water Style: Water Shock Wave
Rank: C-B-Rank
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 15-20
Damage Points: 30-40
Descripton: This technique allows the user after claping their hands together to make a spiralling vortex of water to form around them out of nowhere in a vortex like manner. The vortex then proceeds to cascade into an wave of water that rampages towards the intended target or all around. The size and power of the technique is dictated by the amount of chakra put into the technique, varying from C-rank to B-Rank.
Explain how you would use these two jutsu's.
1. I didn't need an explanation of how mist works... U_U Don't care for details like "small droplets of water". Also i don't care of useless details to make a wallie. It gets boring REALLY quick. I want complete detailed answers that covers all range where all the information that you give me is relatvent.
1. In this technique the user will first perform the Hidden mist technique and block the line of sight of the opponent. Then whit the hidden mist technique active, the user will use the previous technique to and manipulate it in such a way that it will reflect the light and blind the opponent. In order to explain this technique with even more detail, The user uses the hidden mist technique which creates very thick layer of mist. The mist is nothing but tiny droplets of water that is suspended in the air. This technique makes use of the physical property of water droplets which allows sunlight to pass through them. Since the mist consist of numerous amount of suspended tiny water droplets in them, the user manipulates this water droplets present in the mist in such a way that they all sync with each other in making the sunlight pass through them and reach the side of the opponent. By this technique the opponent's line of sight will not only be blocked but also the opponent will be blinded which will put the user in a very good advantage. Sensory ninjas will be in very good advantage with this technique, as they will be exactly be able to pin point the location of the target and be able to attack him precisely after blinding him/her.
2. I think this technique would be my most used technique in Battles. Like, first the user will clap their hands(No hand seals- A very big advantage) and a spiralling vortex of water is formed surrounding the user. This water that surrounds the user will be easily be able to put out a B rank or even a A rank incoming fire technique based on how much chakra the user puts into the technique. The vortex will serves as a defence and then the vorect is manipulate's in such a way that it proceeds to cascade into a wave of water that rampages towards the target and hits them hard. This technique is like a two in one technique and both defensive as well as offencive at the same time which makes this technique a more versatile one to make use of in battle scenarios.
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