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Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user performs one hand seal placing their target in a genjutsu. It will then appear to the target as if the user disappears into the ground via the hiding like a mole jutsu. Then new clouds will appear in the sky that are 0.001 m in length at 1 sec intervals. Even though the clouds are clearly part of the illusion and more appear every second, they are almost impossible to detect by eyesight due to their short length. The illusion will show the battle field minus the user and the newly forming clouds until the genjutsu is broken or one full turn has passed.
Note: Illusion lasts for one full turn.
Note: Can only be used two times a battle.
Note: Can only be taught by Perception.
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-Declined- So What the opponent will see is you going into the earth via hiding like a mole technique, then what exactly is the use of the clouds if the opponent can't see them, it's like they are not even there. so this brings a new dimension here, i need to know some stuff first, like does this also hide techniques you use? the sound of the techniques? or only hide you from the vision of your opponent
New:
(Ketsu~āru Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Barron, Majesutikku) - Quetzal Summoning Technique: Barron, the Majestic
Rank: S-Rank
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will smear their hand with a small amount of their own blood and perform the Boar → Dog → Bird → Monkey → Ram hand seals. After slamming their hands together Barron the Resplendent Quetzal is summoned in a puff of smoke. Barron is the leader of all Quetzals and the oldest among them. Barron stands at 16 in tall and has light blue eyes, a small yellow beak, and three 2 ft long tail feathers extruding from his backside. He wears a coat of bright green and blue feathers and his chest is blood red. The attire is completed with a small crown of gold feathers adorning his head. Barron's birth is placed sometime during the first human settlement of the Land of Fire. With the passing of time he has experienced the extinction and rise of several generations. In his old age he has become battle hardened and wise through war. He is a proud and majestic being both in appearance and action. Barron like all Quetzals has thin feathers that are easily torn. As such like the rest of the Quetzals he has developed a thick plumage to protect himself. The plumage is thick enough to protect from impact forces and can be shed apart to protect against cutting/burning/shocking effects. This allows Barron to withstand the equivalent of 1 B-Rank elemental or other ninjutsu. By inhaling and gathering a massive amount of wind chakra Barron can expel a large S-Rank wind blast in the shape of a Quetzal from its mouth. The wind Quetzal is 10 m in length and wing span, and travels at the speed of the jutsu Wind Style: Pressure Damage. Due to its size and quick speed this wind Quetzal can't be controlled. Barron is also capable of producing an A-Rank wind Quetzal that is half the size of the S-Rank form. While not as powerful or as fast as the S-Rank form a great deal of control can be exerted over the A-Rank Quetzal, and it can be directed and redirected to fly to specific locations. Barron can use his long tail feathers as a sight medium to induce Genjutsu. The tail feathers are long with respect to the rest of Barron's body and are nearly impossible to avoid seeing when looking at Barron. Becoming well versed in Genjutsu through battle experience and as the leader of the Quetzal, Barron can use all normal genjutsu. In addition using the same sight based medium Barron can cast a unique doubled layer genjutsu on a target. In this genjutsu a target is placed under an A and S Rank genjutsu. The genjutsu are cast at the same time, but the S Rank illusion acts on the target first followed by the A Rank illusion. In the S rank illusion 4 ancient warriors from the first settlement of the land of fire will appear instantaneously around the target. 1 warrior will appear on the left and right of the target out of thin air and grab the target's arms. At the same time the other 2 warriors will simultaneously appear from the ground below the target and grab the target's legs. This makes it so the target will see themselves as being immobilized and will not be able to move in reality. After the warriors grab the target the A rank illusion will begin and a Quetzal will come flying from the sky and hover in front of the target's heart. The Quetzal will then proceed to dig into the target's chest with it's beak and claws and rip out the target's heart. The Quetzal will grab the target's heart with its claws and land on the ground. Then the Quetzal will proceed to eat the target's heart in front of him. This illusion causes mental damage to the target equivalent to an A-Rank jutsu.
Note: Wind and genjutsu abilities count as a move towards the user's turn.
Note: Wind jutsu has a two turn cool down and can be used twice per battle.
Note: Normal genjutsu has a two turn cool down and can be used twice per battle.
Note: The doubled layer genjutsu can only be used once a battle. After it is used Barron's tail feathers fall out and he can no longer use genjutsu for the rest of the battle.
Note: Barron can stay on the field for 4 turns.
Note: Can only be summoned once.
Note: Must have signed Quetzal contract.
Note: Can only be taught by Perception.
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-Declined- Remove the genjutsu, it's too much, also the blast it can use is too big, and while i have a technique that lets a crow release a wind/lightning blast in the shape of a crow making this technique a rip off, i'll allow it to you, but what do you mean that it's 10 meters? width or hieght, or both? if both then it's too big, also can he use wind techniques other than those? also notice the bold and fix it.
New:
(Tsumasaki no kanban) - Toe Signs
Rank: NA
Type: Supplementary
Range: NA
Chakra cost: NA
Damage points: N/A
Description: Ninja perform jutsu that often require the manipulation of chakra. This process sometimes involves the use of hand seals. Hand seals are used to further focus a person's chakra. The basic premise of a hand seal is that a person's hands come together to form a closed structure. Through years of research however ninja have found ways to focus chakra using their toes. They have accomplished this by rigorously training their toes to move completely independent of each other. By moving their toes up and down or weaving them together ninja can emulate the formation of hand seals with their toes. This process is different in that it doesn't form a closed structure (i.e. the feet don't come together to form a seal). Since a closed structure focuses chakra more than a non-closed structure, toe signs take a longer time to focus chakra than hand seals. To achieve the same effect of a hand seal manipulation of toes on both feet are required, and one toe sign can be formed at the rate of two hand seals. Toe signs can be used in conjunction with hand seals and this process is explained below.
Suppose a jutsu requires the hand seals: Snake → Ram → Horse → Hare → Ram → Horse → Hare
By using toe signs in conjunction and simultaneously with hand seals this can be performed as follows,
Hand Seals: Snake → Ram → Hare → Ram → Hare
Toe Signs:----------------Toe Sign---------Toe Sign
So the toe sign was used to perform the 3rd hand seal (Horse) and 6th hand seal (Horse). This is done between the formation of the 2nd-4th hand seal (Ram → Hare) and 5th-7th hand seal (Ram → Hare). By doing this the jutsu is performed at a speed of 5 hand seals instead of 7. Toe signs are not visible by the opponent if the user is wearing shoes and toe signs can't be performed when wearing sandals. 1 hand seal jutsu can be performed using a single toe sign. The toe sign in this case will still be at the speed of 2 hand seals. Toe signs can't be performed while walking or running, but they can be performed while in the air.
Note: Toe signs must be listed as a specialty on a person's bio in order to be used. When toe signs are listed as a specialty a person can still have a 1 hand seal specialty, but may not have a faster hand seal specialty.
Note: A individual move separate from a jutsu is not required to perform toe signs as is the case with hand seals.
Note: Can only be taught by Perception.
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-Declined- DNR.
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(Genjutsu - Shōshitsu) Illusionary Arts - Disappearance(Genjutsu - Shōshitsu) Illusionary Arts - Disappearance
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user performs one hand seal placing their target in a genjutsu. It will then appear to the target as if the user disappears into the ground via the hiding like a mole jutsu. Then new clouds will appear in the sky that are 0.001 m in length at 1 sec intervals. Even though the clouds are clearly part of the illusion and more appear every second, they are almost impossible to detect by eyesight due to their short length. The target will see nothing but the battlefield and the newly forming clouds minus the user until the illusion is broken.
Note: Can only be used two times a battle.
Note: Can only be taught by Perception.
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-Declined- Needs a duration limit, also you say that it's impossible to detect the clouds by eyesight, then in another sentence you say the opponent will see nothing but the battlefield and the newly formed clouds, make up your mind lol.
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user performs one hand seal placing their target in a genjutsu. It will then appear to the target as if the user disappears into the ground via the hiding like a mole jutsu. Then new clouds will appear in the sky that are 0.001 m in length at 1 sec intervals. Even though the clouds are clearly part of the illusion and more appear every second, they are almost impossible to detect by eyesight due to their short length. The illusion will show the battle field minus the user and the newly forming clouds until the genjutsu is broken or one full turn has passed.
Note: Illusion lasts for one full turn.
Note: Can only be used two times a battle.
Note: Can only be taught by Perception.
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-Declined- So What the opponent will see is you going into the earth via hiding like a mole technique, then what exactly is the use of the clouds if the opponent can't see them, it's like they are not even there. so this brings a new dimension here, i need to know some stuff first, like does this also hide techniques you use? the sound of the techniques? or only hide you from the vision of your opponent
New:
(Ketsu~āru Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Barron, Majesutikku) - Quetzal Summoning Technique: Barron, the Majestic
Rank: S-Rank
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will smear their hand with a small amount of their own blood and perform the Boar → Dog → Bird → Monkey → Ram hand seals. After slamming their hands together Barron the Resplendent Quetzal is summoned in a puff of smoke. Barron is the leader of all Quetzals and the oldest among them. Barron stands at 16 in tall and has light blue eyes, a small yellow beak, and three 2 ft long tail feathers extruding from his backside. He wears a coat of bright green and blue feathers and his chest is blood red. The attire is completed with a small crown of gold feathers adorning his head. Barron's birth is placed sometime during the first human settlement of the Land of Fire. With the passing of time he has experienced the extinction and rise of several generations. In his old age he has become battle hardened and wise through war. He is a proud and majestic being both in appearance and action. Barron like all Quetzals has thin feathers that are easily torn. As such like the rest of the Quetzals he has developed a thick plumage to protect himself. The plumage is thick enough to protect from impact forces and can be shed apart to protect against cutting/burning/shocking effects. This allows Barron to withstand the equivalent of 1 B-Rank elemental or other ninjutsu. By inhaling and gathering a massive amount of wind chakra Barron can expel a large S-Rank wind blast in the shape of a Quetzal from its mouth. The wind Quetzal is 10 m in length and wing span, and travels at the speed of the jutsu Wind Style: Pressure Damage. Due to its size and quick speed this wind Quetzal can't be controlled. Barron is also capable of producing an A-Rank wind Quetzal that is half the size of the S-Rank form. While not as powerful or as fast as the S-Rank form a great deal of control can be exerted over the A-Rank Quetzal, and it can be directed and redirected to fly to specific locations. Barron can use his long tail feathers as a sight medium to induce Genjutsu. The tail feathers are long with respect to the rest of Barron's body and are nearly impossible to avoid seeing when looking at Barron. Becoming well versed in Genjutsu through battle experience and as the leader of the Quetzal, Barron can use all normal genjutsu. In addition using the same sight based medium Barron can cast a unique doubled layer genjutsu on a target. In this genjutsu a target is placed under an A and S Rank genjutsu. The genjutsu are cast at the same time, but the S Rank illusion acts on the target first followed by the A Rank illusion. In the S rank illusion 4 ancient warriors from the first settlement of the land of fire will appear instantaneously around the target. 1 warrior will appear on the left and right of the target out of thin air and grab the target's arms. At the same time the other 2 warriors will simultaneously appear from the ground below the target and grab the target's legs. This makes it so the target will see themselves as being immobilized and will not be able to move in reality. After the warriors grab the target the A rank illusion will begin and a Quetzal will come flying from the sky and hover in front of the target's heart. The Quetzal will then proceed to dig into the target's chest with it's beak and claws and rip out the target's heart. The Quetzal will grab the target's heart with its claws and land on the ground. Then the Quetzal will proceed to eat the target's heart in front of him. This illusion causes mental damage to the target equivalent to an A-Rank jutsu.
Note: Wind and genjutsu abilities count as a move towards the user's turn.
Note: Wind jutsu has a two turn cool down and can be used twice per battle.
Note: Normal genjutsu has a two turn cool down and can be used twice per battle.
Note: The doubled layer genjutsu can only be used once a battle. After it is used Barron's tail feathers fall out and he can no longer use genjutsu for the rest of the battle.
Note: Barron can stay on the field for 4 turns.
Note: Can only be summoned once.
Note: Must have signed Quetzal contract.
Note: Can only be taught by Perception.
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-Declined- Remove the genjutsu, it's too much, also the blast it can use is too big, and while i have a technique that lets a crow release a wind/lightning blast in the shape of a crow making this technique a rip off, i'll allow it to you, but what do you mean that it's 10 meters? width or hieght, or both? if both then it's too big, also can he use wind techniques other than those? also notice the bold and fix it.
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(Tsumasaki no kanban) - Toe Signs
Rank: NA
Type: Supplementary
Range: NA
Chakra cost: NA
Damage points: N/A
Description: Ninja perform jutsu that often require the manipulation of chakra. This process sometimes involves the use of hand seals. Hand seals are used to further focus a person's chakra. The basic premise of a hand seal is that a person's hands come together to form a closed structure. Through years of research however ninja have found ways to focus chakra using their toes. They have accomplished this by rigorously training their toes to move completely independent of each other. By moving their toes up and down or weaving them together ninja can emulate the formation of hand seals with their toes. This process is different in that it doesn't form a closed structure (i.e. the feet don't come together to form a seal). Since a closed structure focuses chakra more than a non-closed structure, toe signs take a longer time to focus chakra than hand seals. To achieve the same effect of a hand seal manipulation of toes on both feet are required, and one toe sign can be formed at the rate of two hand seals. Toe signs can be used in conjunction with hand seals and this process is explained below.
Suppose a jutsu requires the hand seals: Snake → Ram → Horse → Hare → Ram → Horse → Hare
By using toe signs in conjunction and simultaneously with hand seals this can be performed as follows,
Hand Seals: Snake → Ram → Hare → Ram → Hare
Toe Signs:----------------Toe Sign---------Toe Sign
So the toe sign was used to perform the 3rd hand seal (Horse) and 6th hand seal (Horse). This is done between the formation of the 2nd-4th hand seal (Ram → Hare) and 5th-7th hand seal (Ram → Hare). By doing this the jutsu is performed at a speed of 5 hand seals instead of 7. Toe signs are not visible by the opponent if the user is wearing shoes and toe signs can't be performed when wearing sandals. 1 hand seal jutsu can be performed using a single toe sign. The toe sign in this case will still be at the speed of 2 hand seals. Toe signs can't be performed while walking or running, but they can be performed while in the air.
Note: Toe signs must be listed as a specialty on a person's bio in order to be used. When toe signs are listed as a specialty a person can still have a 1 hand seal specialty, but may not have a faster hand seal specialty.
Note: A individual move separate from a jutsu is not required to perform toe signs as is the case with hand seals.
Note: Can only be taught by Perception.
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-Declined- DNR.
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