It's good, however it did feel a bit rushed with how quickly Sasuke was able to use Kirin.
But I do like how you switched the story over to Sasuke's point of view since he's been pretty inactive these last few chapters.
And nice job incorporating Sakura, orochimaru and the Kages.
Yea , i know that its a bit rushed , especially the ending , but i'm glad that you like it
Thanks
Awesome prediction man would give you rep but apparently im not aloud stupid rules
No problem , your post is more important than the rep man =D
I liked most of this except the ending...
You're right , the ending is a bit rushed , but i'm glad that you like it.
Really good but a little too short
Its a bit short , but that's the standard for Naruto chapters , thanks for your feedback anyway
nice prediction
good story but u still need to work on dialogues
Is there something wrong with them ? please point me the problems so that i can do better next time , anyway thanks for your feedback
Guys foe one sec I thought Tobirama wants to say wow another invention of mine XD He always reacts as if he knows/invents every jutsu in the world already XD
If he says that he invented Kirin or any other Jutsu ( apart from the ones that he stated ) , then they would make a meme of him XD
Anyway thank you for your feedback
