[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[Luther]

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Genjutsu sutairu: Jaiantsuwārudo:Illusion Technique: Giants World
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user performs The dog and tiger hand seals in quick successions,and casts his Opponent under a genjutsu which creates an illusion where the opponent enemy and everything around him has drastically increased increased in size by up to ten folds, making him to appear as a dwarf and midget in contrast to his opponents and his surrounding causing him to become unease and enter a state of panic. However, in reality nothing is going as this all takes place in the opponent mind as a result of the genjutsu.

Note:Must be taught by thunderbolt to use
Note: Can only be used three times a battle
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-Declined- You can't induce a state of panic from just seeing things bigger, some ninjas have more tolerance to fear than others and that's not how normal illusionary techniques work, also you said in the description that the opponent enemy and everything around him has drastically increased in size.

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Tenken: Heavenly Punishment
Rank: S
Range: Short -Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Tenken otherwise known and called “Heavenly Punishment” by friends and foes alike was the personal sword of Sajin Komamura which was created and forged by his own hands, due to his mastery and skill in blacksmithing. Unlike other shinobis, who wielded swords and weapons for the thrill of fighting and the spilling of blood, sajin forgery of his sword and his wielding of it, stems from his debt of loyalty and gratefulness towards his adoptive father Genryūsai Shigekuni Yamamoto, who not only saved his life by bringing him into his home and sheltering him, but who was the only person who accepted him for who he is and not what he is or what he looks like, but who also nurtured him to the man he is today, and as such sajin feels a huge debt of gratitude to him, going as far as being able to die or kill for him, and as such sajin decided to get stronger to be able to fulfill that dept which was owed to Yamamoto, which eventually lead him to the forging of his sword, tenken, which unlike other shinobis sword, was not wielded for the sake of bloodshed and violence, but as a form of justice to punish those who had committed hideous crimes or committed one form of atrocities or the other, and most importantly to protect his foster father Yamamoto ,who had protected him all his life and loved him as a father would love a son.

Abilities
Tenken is an ordinary shaped sword, with a length of 5 meters in height and weight of 20 kilograms in mass; it has the name “Sajin” engraved on the tip of the sword as sign of ownership of komamura, its wielder. Its cross guard is a rectangular shaped figure decorated with vertical and horizontal lines, with the longer sides sucked in towards the middle, his sword, tensen, has two forms/stages of development and progression,one called the ‘”hoop stage’” which is the initial form of the sword before its progression and then the “bankai stage” which is the second and final part of the swords progression.

Hoop Stage [Initial Stage]
This is the first form or stage of progression the sword undergoes when initially activated, thus being called the initial stage, the sword in this stage retains its original length and size being 5 meters in height and 20 kilograms in mass respectively, its only strenght in this form, is the ability to harden the body surface of the sword giving it longer durability and increased cutting prowess in the process, allowing it to be able to cut through solid matter, and earthen structures easily,[C rank And Below] along with being able to cut through regular ninja katanas, shiruken and kunais more easily.

Bankai Stage[Latter Stage]
This is the last and final stage of the progression of the sword, after which it loses its abilities and can’t not be wielded again, for an extended period of time. Unlike its initial stage the sword doesn’t retain its physical shape and size. While in this “latter stage” the user and the sword emits a purple aura that resonates from their respective bodies ,as a sign of their harmony and been one with the other, tenken, the sword in question, unlike many other ninja swords is in- capable of absorbing ninjutsu attacks or producing elemental based attacks or strikes, its only true and main prowess which it has and which was made for the sole reason of carrying out justice, is the swords ability to transform itself into a giant armored huma-being ,standing about 100 feet tall in height and weighing over 2 tons in weight, the giant armored being is linked with the wielder of the sword ,thus is capable of mimicking his movements and steps to an extent, it is known and more renowned for its defensive capabilities rather than attacks though not lacking much in the latter, through the will of the user by mimicking him the giant armored being is able to make horizontal and vertical slashes[B rank and below] towards the opponent, however, the sword being forged and created with the sole purpose of to “protect “is able to take on the force of 2 S rank Based techniques or one forbidden rank based technique after which the sword deactivates regardless of the number of turns used. Despite its defensive capabilities and prowess the usage of the sword presents the user with two main weaknesses and draw backs which is that if the armored giant is harmed in any way or any form of manner, the wounds and injuries are reflected unto the wielder of the sword, and the other being the user speed being decreased and slowed down [By One Rank] due to the sheer size of the armored giant and the difficulty it poses in its movements.

Note: Can only Be Wielded By Thunderbolt
Note: The Sword Last for Only 5 turns.
Note: The Sword Slashes/and it’s cutting Of Earthen Materials Count as a Move
Note: The Giants Ability to Withstand Damages from jutsu Counts as a Move.
Note: The User Is Reduced In Speed By One Rank.

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 Declined  your swords abilities are nothing that hasn't been done before. Sorry. DNR​

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Shōkan tekunikku: Binturongs no neimārubosukingu: Summon technique: Neymar Da Silva Boss King Of the Binturongs
Type: Offensive and defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Neymar Da Silva Is the boss king of the binuturong, unlike his other his other fellow binturongs who are tall and broad in stature, neymar is only 5,7 in height and weighs about 75 kilograms to be exact, he speaks English and carries two long sized katanas strapped unto his back, he has mastered lightning and can use all its techniques without the usage of seals, being a binturong, a four legged creatures who mainly live on trees, neymar is well adept in swinging and jumping and can jump as high as 20 feet into in the air, he has little to no knowledge in ninjutsu and can only create shadows of himself and perform low ranking ninjutsu of [c rank and lower] his main ability and the power that earned him his boss status and distinguishes him from the other binturongs is his ability to shield him and his summoner against elemental based attacks[A rank and lower] due to his rough scaly barks and hairy furs he has on him, neymar being small in stature is unable to make a frightening impression of himself like other binturongs and thus lacks the spirit of intimidation his fellow binturong posses and is sometimes ignored when summoned, making the opponent to underestimate him and the level of his abilities, which sometimes works to his advantage.

Note: Must be taught by thunderbolt to use
Note: Last for only five turns
Note: Performing/shielding against techniques count as a move.
Note: The user must have mastered lightning for the summon to use it.
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-Declined- No to usage of ninjutsu, and restrict him to S-rank Lightning techniques not "all", and no guarding against elemental techniques of A-rank, how would he guard his summoner against an elemental technique with his fur O__O

 

[Selendrile]

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(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Majoreru Ryōshi)- Summoning Technique: Majorelle the Huntress
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: After drawing blood from any part of the body onto their palms, the user will clasp both hands together, summoning Majorelle in sky above them, or at any place short range from the user. Majorelle is a large sized Blue Heron, capable of carrying up to two people with no difficulty flying, being comparable in size to Pein’s bird summon. Apart from her elemental ability, she has a special ability just like the other Herons. Utilizing her feathers, she can launch them individually from her body. She can either disengage these feathers from her body, or keep them attached to her using a selective, adhesive chakra cord. She can crisscross these adhesive chakra cords, creating web-like structures that can trap large objects or individuals. These chakra cords can capture up to one S-rank or two A-rank tangible (earth, water, etc) elemental techniques per battle and count as a single move of the user. Majorelle is also capable of using up to S-rank water techniques that the user knows that do not require hand seals.
Note: Must have signed the Great Blue Heron contract
Note: Any technique performed by Majorelle counts as a move of the user
Note: Majorelle remains summoned for five turns; Once per battle
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-Declined- Can she use Water Technique that don't require a water source? Also a problem with the summoning ritual, you have to either use handseals after drawing blood, or running the blood across a tattoo design of the animal contract, you can't do it simply by clapping your hands, apart from that i don't have a problem with it.

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(Samurai Shisso Suta no Jutsu)- Samurai Hurtling Star Technique
Type: A
Rank: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This technique is similar to the Samurai Sabre Technique, where the user channels chakra into their sword, and then releases it in a crescent shape. However, in the Samurai Hurtling Star Technique, the user will rapidly pump their arm(s) back and forth, performing multiple forward thrusts with their sword. This action releases a maximum of four, five foot long beams of chakra at any desired location. This technique can also be used with two swords.
*Note: Can only be taught/used by Selendrile
*Note: Must possess a Samurai biography
*Note: Usable three times per battle

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(Shisso Suta no Jutsu)- Hurtling Star Technique
Type: A
Rank: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This technique is similar to the Slicing Crimson Wave technique, where the user channels chakra into their sword, and then releases it in a crescent shape. However, in the Hurtling Star Technique, the user will rapidly pump their arm(s) back and forth, performing multiple forward thrusts with their sword. This action releases a maximum of four, five foot long beams of chakra at any desired location. This technique can also be used with two swords.
Note: Can only be taught/used by Selendrile
Note: Usable three times per battle
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[Seblax]

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(Shippuusuka Tatakai no Jutsu: Kazedama) - Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: Wind Bomb
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Close(Send the user/effected enemies to mid range)
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: Whilst using Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater, the user manipulate the wind twisting below his skater and cause it to explode sending himself flying in the direction he balanced the skater against at a speed slightly higher than his rank's top speed. Once the user get close to the floor again, the hurricane will be reformed below the skater keeping the user flying in his new location. If this technique was preformed at close range of an enemy/enemies, he will suffer multiple minor cuts and be blown away of the user from the blast which doesn't harm the user for his skater would protect him.
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-Must have used Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater before forming this technique.

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 Declined  There is no such thing as "Close" range. I don't like the "throwing the enemy back to mid range" thing nor do I think this should do damage to anyone.

Art of the Jade Warp: You, My Muppet - Tamamayu no Jutsu: Yu, Mai Muppet
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user manipulate the strings of the Jade Warp using his chakra to reach something or a person to tie itself from multiple parts of its body giving him the ability to pull any of the strings at will to drag that body partly or completely from place. The strings can be hard to notice until they actually reach a close range of the enemy and and visible to them. The user of this technique have the freedom to choose how the strings transport from his side to the opponent which can also be through underground. The string is enhanced with the user's chakra however it can easily be cut by a blade separated and by weak technique that commonly overpower this technique.
-Can only be used thrice per battle.
-The user must be wearing the Jade Warp.

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 Declined  DNR. done before

Yamanaka Clan's Secret Art: The Second Conscious - Yamanaka Hidan no Jutsu: Shunkan Konshasu
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: -
Description: The Yamanaka Clansman with mastery over Shadow Clone Technique preform the special handseal for the Shadow Clone Technique then follow it with the ram handseal. After that, the user creates a second conscious within him, a clone with no physical form or chakra separation but just a second mind working deliberately from the user's. The clone can be used for Yamanaka's Mind Body Switch Technique, to take over the body when the user is being mentally restrained by a genjutsu or jutsus such as killing intent and act deliberately with the user's body and chakra. However, this clone doesn't jam the user with their ideas and only reach him with the telepathy technique or take over control and say what they think. The clone can focus the user chakra into preforming techniques that doesn't require handseals, making the user able to preform combos that can only be preformed with others or actual clones.
-Can only be preformed twice per battle.
-Can only be used by a Yamanaka clan member.
-Counts as one of the Shadow Clone usages.

X-Pending-X Leaving for someone else

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 Declined  Its clear you don't understand the Yamanaka clan techniques. DNR.

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(Shippuusuka Tatakai no Jutsu: Kazedama) - Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: Wind Bomb
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: Whilst using Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater, the user manipulate the wind twisting below his skater and cause it to explode sending himself flying in the direction he balanced the skater against at a speed slightly higher than his rank's top speed. The wind explosion includes compressed wind lines in it which give it its offensive proprietaries of cutting. Once the user get close to the floor again, the hurricane will be reformed below the skater keeping the user flying in his new location.
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-Must have used Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater before forming this technique.

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Yamanaka Art: Earth Clone - Yamanaka no Jutsu: Tsuchibunshin
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: -
Description: The Yamanaka Clansman his preform two handseals then places palm on the ground. The land will then raise in the form of a human of rocks standing on all four from beneath the user, resembling the user's figure. The scenery of his creation looks similar to the Inuzuka clan's Beast Human Clone technique. The clone cannot move from his position at all as if he was a statue. All the clone can do is preform up to A rank earth techniques without forming handseals, The user have a direct contact with his mind, commanding him to preform techniques with their telepathy connection. Even tho the clone does not preform handseal, it takes him the same amount the handseals for a certain technique take to preform, however that is affected by the user's affinity to earth element. The user isn't required to use the telepathy technique to communicate with the clone and their connection is always on until the clone is destroyed.
-Can only be used by a Yamanaka clan biography.
-Can only be used twice per turn.
-Counts as a clone technique usage regarding the rules.
-The clone puffs in five turns if not destroyed before that.

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 Declined  Sorry, but this isn't in any way a Yamanaka clan technique, only an attempt to get a clone that can use Earth techniques without handseals. DNR.​

Water Style: Water/Oil Transformation - Suiton: Gogyou/Abura no Henkan
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20(+15 per turn)
Damage points: N/A(+20 damages to combined fire techniques)
Description: The user add chakrra into the water jutsus he uses after activating this technique changing the proprieties of the water used for this technique to transform it into flammable oil, much like the oil from the toads can generate. This technique only effect the water techniques where he molds and knead his chakra into forming water and not the water jutsus that requires an already existing body of water. The oil is similar to olive oil except it's transparent and much more flammable. The water techniques effected by this technique can perfectly be combined with fire techniques, increasing their strong by one rank as it becomes a combination of water/fire techniques.
-The rules of combinational technique applies to any fire/water combo used with the effect of this technique.
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-This technique can effect the user's water techniques that fit the requirements for three turns maximum per use.
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-Declined- How can you change the properties of Water into Oil? o_o it can't be done through chakra alone, not to mention there's an Oil Release CE out there which this technique collides with.

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 Declined  Sorry but this exact same technique was attempted before. DNR.​

 

[Ndlovu]

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(Katon - Sentou Kaijin Bakuhatsu ) - Fire Release : Spire Ash Eruption
Type:Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A-Rank
Range:Short - long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: An advanced variation of the technique Fire Release: Ash Pile Burning. The user will make four handseals and slam their hand on the ground, which releases spires of heated ash which can be aimed at the opponent to erupt out of the ground. Just like it's origin jutsu, if the user clicks their teeth the ash will ignite creating an explosion.

Note: The user must already know Fire Release: Ash Pile Burning in order to use this technique.
Note: This technique can only be used three times in a battle.
Note: The user cannot use any fire jutsus next turn.
Note: The user can only make up to five spires of ash at a time.
Note: This technique can only be taught by Ndlovu

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 Declined  How will you ignite this by cliking your teeth if you aren't spitting the ash? *facepalm*

(Katon - Sentou Kaijin Bakuhatsu ) - Fire Release : Spire Ash Eruption
Type:Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A-Rank
Range:Short - long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: An advanced variation of the technique Fire Release: Ash Pile Burning. The user will make three handseals and slam their hand on the ground, which releases spires of heated ash which can be aimed at the opponent to erupt out of the ground. Similar to it's origin jutsu, if the user forms an additional tiger handseal the ash will ignite creating an explosion.

Note: The user must already know Fire Release: Ash Pile Burning in order to use this technique.
Note: This technique can only be used three times in a battle.
Note: The user can only make up to five spires of ash at a time.
Note: This technique can only be taught by Ndlovu

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(Hiru Sensu : Tekishutsu Gihou) - Leech Style: Extraction technique
Type:Offensive/Defensive
Rank:S – Rank
Range: Short to Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage:N/A
Description: Nin-leeches are known for their ability to absorb/suck/extract chakra. This is one of the highly skilled techniques a nin-leech can perform. A summoned nin-leech will open its mouth widely and widely flush a large amount of evenly spread chakra into the air and top layer of earth around it. (The chakra it releases in the air will help form a medium in which the leech can perform the rest of the technique, similar to how a water source needs to be present to be catalystic and perform a certain jutsu or clouds need to be formed in order for kirin to be used.) The nin-leech (Once it’s chakra has made contact with the foreign chakra.) will then move its head around absorbing all the freestanding chakra in front of it's mouth. (This includes the users freestanding chakra, the user is no exception.) In a similar fashion as to how absorbing, transferring or taking in chakra in manga happens this also creates no physical difference in the atmosphere and effects chakra only. This technique only affects the chakra in stationary and seemingly non-moving state. Example: If the opponent uses (Suiton: Ukojizai no Jutsu) - Water Style: Rain Tiger at Will Technique and then this technique is used the Nin-leech will extract the freestanding chakra from the clouds making the clouds dissipate. Another example: If the opponent uses (Doton: Yomi Numa) - Earth Style: Swamp of the Underworld the chakra that keeps the swamp a swamp will be extracted reverting it back to solid earth because of its lack of chakra and nature manipulation. But if the opponent uses (Katon: Gōka Mekkyaku) - Fire release: Great Fire Majestic Annihilation the extraction won’t be strong enough to extract the chakra from the moving jutsu. This technique does not work/extract from stationary life forms .i.e people, animal summons, etc

Note: This jutsu can only be used three times in a battle
Note: Jutsu above S – Rank cannot be extracted
Note: Dojutsu users can see this technique as it happens
Note: The user must have signed the leech contract
Note: A Nin-Leech needs to be summoned onto the battlefield in order for this technique to happen
Note: The user cannot use any leech jutsus above A-Rank for the next two turns
Note: The summoned leech becomes bloated for a turn and is unable to release any form of jutsu or extract any chakra
Note: This technique can only be taught by Ndlovu

Signed the leech contract here..

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 Declined  Sorry but this collides with existing techniques, but cannon and custom since you're talking about absorbing techniques through an inherent ability to absorb chakra and ninjutsu. DNR.​

 

[Perception]

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Summoning Animal: Hare
Scroll Owner: Perception
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
Description and Background: Hares are leporids belonging to the genus Lepus. Hares can be easily identified by their long ears, fur, hind legs, and slender body. Despite common misconceptions a hare is different than a rabbit. Unlike the rabbit they don't live in burrows. Instead they live above grounds in nest made of grass and other materials. They are also larger and faster than rabbits, and have distinguishing black marking on their fur. Hares are around 2 ft in size and typically weigh 10-12 lbs. Due to their large hind legs hares are great jumpers and incredibly fast. Hares can reach speeds up to 45 mph and jump up to 10 ft at a time. Their are several species of hare some of which are defined by their terrain such as forest, snow, and mountain hares. Hares are typically brown but can also be white and black. Being a common food source the hare has developed incredible senses. In particular they have incredible hearing showing the ability to hear even the most minute sounds. They also have a very accurate sense of smell. The hares primary mode of escape from predators is running. Since they don't burrow this is their only option. The only elemental jutsu not effected are those that state that an element source is not required, i.e. the jutsu manipulates parts of the human body.

Throughout history hares have been associated with trickeration. When a hare feels threatened it activates it's ability to mask elemental chakra. Jutsu performed using elemental chakra is dependent upon the ability of a person to use their own chakra to manipulate the elements around them. Normally this is second nature to people with chakra affinities. However, hares have the ability to interfere with this process. First the hare uses it precise hearing to lock onto the chakra signature of a particular element. The hare then builds up chakra in it's body. With one loud thump of its hind legs the hare releases the chakra thorough chakra points in it's feet. The chakra then expands outward spherically. Through this process the chakra is stretched over and fills a spherical volume. This chakra then acts as a buffer between a persons chakra and an element. For a elemental jutsu to be performed, strong concentration is now needed to flow chakra through the buffer and reach the element. Thus the time needed to perform elemental jutsu inside the sphere is increased. This also has the same effect on people using chakra to maintain balance on a surface, i.e. walking on water if water is masked or walking on a tree if earth is masked.

The radius of the sphere and amount of masking is a function of the amount of chakra used when summoning the hare. The more an element is masked the longer it takes for a jutsu to be performed. This also effects weapons that make use of elemental chakra. The sphere moves with the hare until the summoning is over. Chakra masking doesn't inhibit the summoners jutsu in any way. When a person signs this contract their chakra is forever linked with the hare. That person becomes subconsciously aware of the chakra frequency of the hare and vice versa. This makes it impossible to mask chakra from the summoner. The hares originally developed this technique as a means to slow down predators. In battles near hares this has lead to the untimely death of many shinobi. Intentional or not this is why the hare has long been associated with trickeration.

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Note: A contract exists for the rabbit, but as stated above a hare has fundamental differences from a rabbit. It is recognized as a scientifically distinct animal from the rabbit.
Note: Can only be taught by Genkai.

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 Declined  Even if its not the exact same animal, I will not approve this contract without the permission of the owner of the Rabbit contract. Its too similar and in the end, for the purposes of our RP its the same as the whole Toad and Frog discussion. So unless the owner of rabbit says you can, it won't be approved. Resubmit with proof of such permission or try another contract.​

 

[Robot Boy]

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(Chimeiteki Keiteki) - Fatal Horn
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short-mid
Chakra: N/a
Damage: N/a
Description: Is a hammer with the appearance of a Ram's head as the hammers face and has a chain linked to a spiked metal ball. The head is gold in color, and the 'horns' of the head have a silver color, while the ball's 'shell' is blue with white spikes. The weapon is made of a sturdy, durable metal and has the ability to crush Ice and Earth techniques up to B-rank. The spiked ball is placed/rested on top of the hammer like the Kendama. Originally it belonged to a famous warrior from Sunagakure who participated in the third ninja war and died fighting. When the hammer and ball are together, the weapon is used by bouncing the ball on the Hammer's sides before batting the ball towards the target. The Hammer and ball can be disconnected to perform separate attacks. The hammer's handle has a built-in mechanism that allows it to extend to mid-range(6 meters) to 'Ram' the target and send them backward or to smash them.

Restrictions
-Can only be wielded by Fang.
-Each hammer-based technique counts as a move.
-The hammer and ball cannot separate and form back on the same turn.
-Only one hammer technique per turn.
-The user can separate and connect up to two times.
-Extending the Hammer can be used up to three times.
-When separated the Hammer & ball are both A-rank.
-When the hammer is used to extend and knock the target backward or to smash them it is only C-rank.

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 Declined  Why does it defend from earth and ice and nothing else? how can each be A-Rank when separated?

(Kuchiyose: Main Mōru) - Summoning Technique: Mine Mole
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/a
Description: Mine is the leader of the moles. He is the size of Gamatatsu from part 2 when he had grown and wears a helmet and carries a pickaxe as a weapon. He can perform lightning techniques up to A-rank. He is physically strong enough to smash a man's head to through solid rock and is considered the best digger among the moles. He gets cranky when he is in the middle of something important and is interrupted for assistance when the summoner calls for him.

Restrictions:
-Must have signed the mole contract.
-Can only be summoned once per battle.
-His lightning counts as a move.
-Lasts for five turns.

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 Declined  Summons that can use techniques can only be on the field for 4 turns tops. I don't get the whole smash a mans head through solid rock. Best digger? How does that translate into a battle ability? Also, seems weird that a mole uses lightning but ok...your contract.

mole technique
(Bouhatei Kuro-n) - Mole Clone
Type: Supplementary
Rank: D
Range: short
Chakra: 10
Damage: N/a
Description: The user weaves two hand-seals, summoning two standard moles. The moles then fuse together to form a clone of the user. They can't perform techniques that the user can do but, can perform standard forms of attack and defense. They serve as a decoy/distraction for their target. When the target is about to strike them, the moles can undo the technique and split, going in opposite directions to launch a counter attack from the opponents sides.

Restrictions:
-Only one clone at a time can be created.
-Must have signed the Mole Contract.

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(Kuchiyose: Main Mōru) - Summoning Technique: Mine Mole
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/a
Description: Mine is the leader of the moles. He is the size of Gamatatsu from part 2 when he had grown and wears a helmet and carries a pickaxe as a weapon. He can perform earth techniques up to S-rank. He is considered the best digger among the moles meaning he is very skilled in using the hiding-like a mole technique. He gets cranky when he is in the middle of something important and is interrupted for assistance when the summoner calls for him.

Restrictions:
-Must have signed the mole contract.
-Can only be summoned once per battle.
-His earth counts as a move.
-Lasts for four turns.
-Requires a ground source.

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(Chimeiteki Keiteki) - Fatal Horn
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short-mid
Chakra: N/a
Damage: N/a
Description: Is a hammer with the appearance of a Ram's head as the hammers face and has a chain linked to a spiked metal ball. The head is gold in color, and the 'horns' of the head have a silver color, while the ball's 'shell' is blue with white spikes. The weapon is made of a sturdy, durable metal that can deflect regular weapons (kunai, shuriken, wind mill-shuriken, regular swords etc.) without receiving so much as a scratch. Fatal Horn has the ability to crush/break through 'solid' techniques such as ice, steel, and earth techniques up to B-rank. The spiked ball is placed/rested on top of the hammer like the Kendama. Originally it belonged to a famous warrior from Sunagakure who participated in the third ninja war and died fighting. When the hammer and ball are together, the weapon is used by bouncing the ball on the Hammer's sides before batting the ball towards the target. The Hammer and ball can be disconnected to perform separate attacks. The hammer's handle has a built-in mechanism that allows it to extend to mid-range (6 meters) to 'Ram' the target and send them backward or to smash them.

Restrictions
-Can only be wielded by Fang.
-Each hammer-based technique counts as a move.
-The hammer and ball cannot separate and form back on the same turn.
-Only one hammer technique per turn.
-The user can separate and connect up to two times.
-Extending the Hammer can be used up to three times.
-When the hammer is used to extend and knock the target backward or to smash them it is only C-rank.

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~New submission~

(Misairu Renda)-Missile Barrage
Type: offensive
Rank: B
Range: short-mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: After using underground missile, the user will summon three more standard moles each holding a hammer and appearing above the target as he rises from the previous attack. The moles then proceed to deliver a three hit combo onto the target sending them crashing down into the ground.
Restrictions:
-Can only be used after using underground missile.
-Must have signed the mole contract.

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[Khallil]

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(Ichigo Haineko) - Strawberry ash cat
Type: Weapon
Rank:S
Range: short-long
Chakra: 40(+10 each turn the blade is dissolved)
Damage: N/A
Description:Haineko is a large sword in the shape of a flat strawberry, with the leaves as "tips". It has very rough texture and smooth sharp edges, and it could be used as a fan because of the shape and size. The user grabs the handle and simply channels their chakra into the sword (so not infusing the sword with chakra), and the blade of the sword will break down into many grey little pieces of sharp blades. To the opponent, it would look like as if the blade itself is dissolving in thin air. The blade particles can become a grey cloud, and with the handle, the user can control/manipulate the particles as little blades by swinging it. Depending on the direction the wielder swings the handle, the cloud of blade particles will move in that direction. If the particles happen to be within close range of the opponent when the user swings the handle, the small blades will begin slicing into the opponent, shredding them. The user can also reform the blade back to normal simply by canceling his chakra flow from the handle.
Restrictions:
- Only ~Khallil-Sama~ and those who he allows may only use this weapon.
- The blade can stay in its "dissolved" form for up to a maximum of two turns.
- Once the blade has returned back to its original form, the user must wait two turns before they can use its ability again.
- The ability can be used only three times per battle.
- The user will spend an extra 10 chakra each turn while using the swords ability.
- The cloud of blade particles move at the speed of the handle that is swung. Ex: If the handle is moved to the left in a slow manner then the cloud will move to the left in a slow manner; if the handle is moved in a fast horizontal slashing motion, then the cloud is moved in a fast horizontal slashing motion.

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(Ichigo Haineko) - Strawberry ash cat
Type: Weapon
Rank:S
Range: short-long
Chakra: 40(+10 each turn the blade is dissolved)
Damage: N/A
Description:Haineko is a large sword in the shape of a flat strawberry, with the leaves as "tips". It has very rough texture and smooth sharp edges, and it could be used as a fan because of the shape and size. The user grabs the handle and simply channels their chakra into the sword (so not infusing the sword with chakra), and the blade of the sword will break down into many grey little pieces of sharp blades. To the opponent, it would look like as if the blade itself is dissolving in thin air. The blade particles can become a grey cloud, and with the handle, the user can control/manipulate the particles as little blades by swinging it. Depending on the direction the wielder swings the handle, the cloud of blade particles will move in that direction. If the particles happen to be within close range of the opponent when the user swings the handle, the small blades will begin slicing into the opponent, shredding them. In that state the blade will always act and behave as a cloud and will not be invisible, forming a greyish cloud. The user can manipulate the shape of the cloud and send the particles straight at the enemy. If the whole cloud is together, it would be like approximately 6 by 6 by 3 meters, just like a normal sized chamber. The cloud could be pushed back with B rank wind.The user can also reform the blade back to normal simply by canceling his chakra flow from the handle which will cause the cloud to return to the handle reforming the blade.
Restrictions:
- Only -Khallil- and those who he allows may only use this weapon.
- The blade can stay in its "dissolved" form for up to a maximum of two turns.
- Once the blade has returned back to its original form, the user must wait two turns before they can use its ability again.
-In the cloud form, the sword will be have an A rank strength, but it could be pushed back with B rank wind, as it acts as a cloud.
- The ability can be used only 5 times times per battle.
- The user will spend an extra 10 chakra each turn while using the swords ability.
- The movement of the cloud is linked to the movement of the handle of the sword and is controlled by it. Moving the cloud counts as a move each time.

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(Mokuton: Mori no disuku) - Wood Release: discs of the forest
Type: offensive/supplementary
Rank: A
Range: short-long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user performs the snake>monkey handseals and causes 10 pretty sharp discs of wood to erupt out of the ground or such. The discs are soaring at the height of the chest, and the user is able to manipulate and control each disc. With simple movements of the hand, the user can control the wooden discs and send them at the user, an object or at the ground. The wooden discs are compacted with mokuton chakra and and "life energy", so whenever the wooden discs hit something, the chakra bursts out and the disc transforms into a big tree and get stuck to whatever they hit. The user could cause the trees to either trap the opponents, attack them to defend themselves or simply support.

~Can only be taught by -Khallil-
~Could only be used twice per battle
~you have to wait at least one turn to perform the technique again

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 Declined  So the user sends them at the user? Life energy? whats that? So they burst into a tree...ok...what strength is this tree? And 10 discs is too much.​

(Katon: Ringu o tojiru) - Fire Release: Closing ring
Type: offensive
Rank: A
Range: short-long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user performs the Horse handseal and blows a ring of fire out of his mouth, just like he is blowing a smoke ring. The ring is small (size of an open human mouth), and it will soar in the mid-air. With moving their dominant hand the user is able to manipulate and control the fire ring. The user can send it towards the opponent, or somewhere next to him, and the fire ring will expand to a ring with a maximum diameter of 20 meters. While the ring is expanding it, the ring itself (the edge) won't burn the objects it's touching while expanding, or deals just a small amount of damage, because the fire ring itself is very thin, and because of the great speed of the expanding, it doesn't really have time to burn anything. Then the user will perform the Tiger handseal and the fire ring will turn into a fire disk, burning everything that was trapped inside the empty Fire ring. The user could also control the fire ring after having become a disk with moving his dominant hand.

~Can only be taught by -Khallil-
~Can only be used twice per battle
~If this technique is used on short range, the ring can't be larger than 5 diameters (except if the ring is placed vertically), as it'd burn the user
~If this technique is used on mid range, the ring can't be larger than 15 diameters (except if the ring is placed vertically), as it'd burn the user

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 Declined  Sorry, similar to existing techniques. DNR.​

 

[Typhon]

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(Suna gijutsu no shīringu) - Sealing Sand Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: This technique was developed by Gaara so that the need to carry scrolls into battle could be bypassed and sealing techniques could be used more rapidly. The user will control their sand to mimic the form of an opened scroll and then engrave that "scroll" with the necessary seals needed for the technique. Once the technique is completely the sand will harden into rock ending the sealing process. This cannot be used for techniques that release something from a scroll, such as lightning blade creation, but rather for techniques take seal something away such as fire/earth/wind/water/lightning sealing technique.
-Can be used 3 times per battle.

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(Shukaku no akuma supōn) - Demon Spawn of Shukaku
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: 90
Description: This technique can only be used by Gaara upon entering either his complete transformation. Taking advantage of Shukaku's sand body, Gaara will break it down into dozens of miniature versions of Shukaku using its own body. Each replica carries the exact appearance of the beast, but stands just as tall as a normal person. As the Jinchuriki's body still exists within the transformation, they will remain within one of the many copies making them more vulnerable to attacks, though their location can only be determined by either a Byakugan or Sharingan. A sensory technique would be unable to pin point the user's location as they would just sense a mass of Shukaku's chakra throughout the battlefield. Simply destroying these spawn is not enough to dispose of them. As they're made of sand they can simply reform, thus the sand itself needs to be incapacitated. Using their numbers and durability the spawn swarm the enemies and overwhelm them. While this is going on the main body (the one housing Gaara) can still perform techniques, though its limited to A-rank or below.
-Can only be used once per battle.
-Lasts at most two turns.
-Once it runs out the transformation ends.

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[Ciberr]

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Fire style Spark Up | Katon Hibana Appu
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: After releasing a wind release technique or technique which carries similar properties to that of a wind release technique the user will generate a strong spark of fire which will combine with the wind justu and turn into a combination attack following the justu ranking guidelines. The spark can be generated in 2 ways, some of which include "Snapping the fingers or cringing of the teeth".

-Can only be used 4 times per battle.
-Must be taught by Ciberr

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 Declined  Sorry but this is similar to existing techniques and is also quite illogical in the way its worded. Also, wrong same format. DNR​

Illusionary arts | Inverse connection. (Genjustu | Abekobe Enko)
Type: Offensive | Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage:
Description: The user will preform 3 handseals and send his chakra into his opponents chakra network. Casting his opponent into an elaborate illusion where the target's vision will turn into a blackened state for a slight moment(1 second) followed by regaining of vision. But with that the target will feel and see everything backwards. The movement of his right arm is now linked with the actual movement of his left leg. The movement of the left arm is linked with the movement of the right leg, and the movement of his head will link up with his butt and the respective inverses. Causing the opponent to be unable to properly move until the understanding of movement is figured out or the genjustu is broken.

-Genjustu lasts 2 turns if not broken.
-Only usable twice per battle and cannot be used back to back.
-Must be taught by Ciberr

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 Declined  Sorry but this was already made and attempted countless times. It happens everytime someone goes and watches Bleach anime. DNR.​

Dark release: World of Unlimited Darkness | Meiton: Seken Of Kagirinai Yami
Type: Offensive | Defensive | Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90(30 to self)
Description: The ultimate dark release justu, only usable by masters of the art. After absorbing two justu's of any kind by utilizing the dark release's absorption abilities, the user will release the converted chakra throughout the battlefield quickly surrounding the entire battlefield in a world of darkness by slamming their absorption hand onto the ground. The dark chakra will form a box of complete darkness. The chakra spreads through the ground and forming the box, completely removing the ability to use ground related earth release justu while the box is up. The box is in fact made with special dark chakra which carries the properties of dark release but is not a matter based box like most dark justu's, the box is solid. All attacks directed towards the box(Which don't have the strength to break it) is absorbed and dispersed outside of the box, in some cases generating widespread damage outside the box. While inside the box the user can manipulate dark chakra to that of a greater extent, he can manipulate the box and attack his opponent from blind sides and also shift the walls of the box around to shield him from attacks all of which carries the strength of an A rank dark release attack. The dark matter that's in the air also grants a boost of +10 to dark release matter based attacks, but this comes with a heavy downfall. In order to sustain the box the user must pay a hefty loss of 20 chakra a turn for 4 turns and can only use Fire, lightning, and dark release justu's while inside. No basic ninjustu, genjustu, or chakra enhanced taijustu can be used by the user. After the box falls the user cannot use his absorption arm for 2 turns due to the extreme amount of chakra exerted through the arm in order to sustain the box.

-Only usable once per Battle.
-Must have absorbed two justu prior to use and those two justu could not have been utilized in a separated attack like "Dark Release: Judgement"
-User loses the ability to use his or her absorption arm after box falls and will not regain it's power for two turns.
-Justu lasts 4 turns.
-Must be taught by Ciberr

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[Crutch Kaguya]

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(Genjutsu: Anaume) Illusion Technique: Filling in the Blanks
Type: Supplementary/Illusion
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: A very basic visual illusion that takes advantage of the brain's natural tendency to fill in blanks, and in filling in the blanks the illusion forces the actions of basic visual reflexes. It is scientific evidence that the brain predicts what cannot be seen by drawing on previous experiences to build up an accurate picture. The brain does not rely on only direct sight to show what we "see" in our eyes, but actively uses images that our brain already remembers to make the image in our mind. This illusion uses the images already in the opponent's brain with the addition images that the user of the technique inserts into the opponent's mental visual imaging center to ultimately cause a reflex of the opponent's actual eyes and their true vision (not what they see in their mind but what their eyes actually see). By manipulating the opponent's true vision and their mental images, the user can create a very brief moment where the opponent's attention is drawn to that specific object. This illusion does not draw power from its overwhelming persuasion that will force the opponent to view something, but instead is very deceptive in almost making the opponent passively view it as if it was their own choice to glance toward the object. This technique does not require any hand seals because of the very ephemeral nature of the illusion, the user must still have clear sight of the opponent for the technique to be performed. The illusion happens almost passively, though it still counts as a move, because the user only acts as a guide to the end result, not the actual end result itself. As such the user can almost seamlessly combine this illusion with other physical actions. There is also one very important requirement for this technique to be used: the opponent must have prior knowledge of the existence of a specific object, this can either be by the opponent clearly stating that they acknowledge that an object or "image" is specifically present in the surrounding area even if they are not directly perceiving it, or it can be an object that is clearly in the opponent's sight which the user can then draw the opponent's vision into, and the opponent needs to have clear sight to that object. The basic mechanics and steps which the illusion uses to attain its goal are very simple. The user will first begin by altering the opponent's chakra to insert visual images into the opponent's mind. The visual image can be of anything, but the larger the object the easier it is to break out of the illusion or to understand the they are in an illusion. This image will flash in the opponent's mind and they will also begin to start seeing the image flash in their eyes as well. This is where the opponent's brain begins to fill in the blanks. The opponent's brain sees the image and also recognizes the image from its previous knowledge, this is why the opponent must have knowledge of the existence of the object prior to the usage of this technique otherwise the brain would not be able to make this natural leap using pure mental reflex. Because the brain has prior knowledge of the object, the user will know where the object is located and where they can look to find it. The brain while mentally filling in the blanks, will cause the eyes to physically fill in the blanks. This is because when an individual remembers something in their mind, their first tendency is to try to find it with their eyes. So the opponent will do just that and will almost immediately after the illusion is started will find that object and look at it. At this point, the illusion is further enhanced to make the opponent continue to view that image both physically and mentally. But because of the nature of this technique, making the opponent look at the same object for extended periods of time is very unlikely. The maximum length of time this technique can last for is only 1 second. During that second the opponent's gaze is fixed on that object, but afterward, the opponent will simply try to look away and can from this realize that they have been trapped in an illusion. From here on, the opponent can take the necessary steps to break out of the illusion as any other. But the true importance of this technique is that 1 second, that in a battle is precious.

Examples of how the illusion can work: The user of the illusion can throw a kunai away from everything else into open space, the opponent though does not care about the kunai, does see it in their line of vision and understand where it is going, the user of the illusion can draw the opponent's vision to the kunai for that brief instant to make them follow the kunai. The purpose of this is that because of the opponent's vision is altered and their attention is also altered to be completely focused on that object, if the opponent is trying to use a technique that is small and precise in nature the user can use this technique to draw the attack toward that object almost fluidly by creating this short opening. The user must either have way to sense the technique or be able to see it before it is used, other wise the illusion cannot work. This can also work on techniques that require constant manipulation as the opponent will accidentally manipulate the technique to that location because they are drawn to it and not the user. Large scale techniques would be unaffected as the sheer size of those technique would cause them to hit the user regardless. The technique can also be used to manipulate the opponent's attention to specific parts of the user's body. If the user has nail polish on their feet, and they are wearing open-toed sandals in which their feet can easily be seen and recognized, when the user of the illusion is approaching close range, he can use the illusion to draw the opponent's vision to the user's feet for that brief instant by flashing images of their feet inside the opponent's mind. This can create an opening for the opponent to attack the opponent using their upper body that the opponent is not paying attention to at that moment. The usefulness of this technique is given by its preciseness. The user is able to flash images of anything that is smaller than the size of a human body and bigger than the size of a small stone. Immediately after the opponent is trapped into the illusion, they will make direct visual contact with the object in question, as this is the first product of the illusion and the opponent won't even be able to perceive that it is an illusion without this step. During the time that the opponent makes visual contact, the user is able to use other techniques immediately afterward to take immediate advantage of their the opponent's focus on a specific object or part of their body. Techniques that utilize that object or part of the user's body can be used almost instantly to make it seem as it happens at the same time as the opponent is looking at it. After the visual contact is made, the opponent can treat is as an ordinary visual illusion and justify their reason to break out. The technique cancels out after 1 second as it cannot last longer.
~The user may only use this illusion three times per battle and must wait at least one turn before the user can use it again.
~The strain this technique causes the user prevents him from using any elemental techniques on the same turn requiring the user to take a large sacrifice on the versatility of their following attacks.
~The user cannot use genjutsu above S-rank on the following two turns after this technique is used.

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 Declined Sorry but I cannot approve such a technique. The application of this in battle are ridiculously overpowered. Its not the rank, its not the effect you keep mentioning, its the fine print (so to speak) that is hidden in the description of the technique. You are also breaking the limit of Genjutsu. In Genjutsu, you cannot force your opponent to do a voluntary action in an involuntary way. Looking at something is not an involuntary action. While some people might have a reflexive action to look into something in a given situations, others might close their eyes or look away or not even care. Non Doujutsu Genjutsu is limited in the sense that it cannot take control over your will. It cannot force you to do something. It presents your senses with an Image (auditory, visual, etc). You however are free to react to that image in any way you deem reasonable or want to. The only exception is, for example, if you made a genjutsu where an opponent would be facing a foreign object which would be almost entering his eye. The opponent would need to react based on the reflexes known to the human body and would close his eye, even if he didn't want to. However, in your description, what you're trying to use is not a reflex but actually a mental process which you cannot manipulate to that degree. The description you use for filling in the blanks is also a bit taken out of context. Its actually something that happens where if your brain reads Huose he'll still be able to read House at first glance. It doesn't pertain to the minds inclination to look towards something and even if it did, the simply notion that you can force your opponent to look away without any handseals, while, according to the wording, being able to chain other techniques and effects simultaneously is unapprovable. You even describe it as almost a passive technique. One that requires no time or almost effort. This in itself breaks the Genjutsu rules which clearly state that you need to fuel the illusion for a few moments before attacking the target as to enable the technique to work. Genjutsu isn't something you trigger and then its done in 1 second. Its something you trigger instantly but need to focus and control for it to actually be fully triggered. Sorry but this technique cannot be approved and the concept itself is too over the top to be resubmited. DNR.​

 

[The_Empire]

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Wind Release: Crow Claw (Fuuton: Kuroukurou)
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user channels wind chakra in their forarm(s) or shin(s). The user releases the chakra out and forms a scythe like blade of wind chakra. The user releases the chakra out of their forearms or shins and using shape manipulation, shapes the released chakra into a blade similar to a scythe. The blade is grey in color and can be as long as the user's arms. The blade is very sharp and dense enough to cut through the same rank attacks and below attacks. The difference between this and Chakra Scalpel for medical ninjas is that this technique does external damage and internal when slicing and can be used as a defense in some cases. Also Crow Claw can be used against elemental jutsus which Chakra Scalpel can't do.

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(Genjutsu: Sukuriyu Motte Temae)-Illusionary Arts: Screw With You
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user holds their hands together and takes over the opponent's mind(not literally). The opponent is sent into a genjutsu where chains released from the ground and a chair comes from behind the opponent where the chains are coming from. The chains retrace into the chair and wraps around the opponent scraping him/her to the chair. The opponent then sees a clone of the user beside them. The clone holds a giant(in the spoiler) screw in his hand. The clone starts to push the screw in the opponent's head. In reality, the opponent is immobilize. The opponent also suffer from mental pain and have their body be fooled into passing out.
-Only used twice per battle and only every two turns
-No other genjutsu used in the same turn and following turn
-Immobilize for one full turn

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Drunken Fist Style: EST For Life (Suiken: Seikatsu no tame no suto)
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user after entering the Drunken Fist state, raises his hands in the with it in a "L" shape. The user yells out "EST For Life" and takes off towards the user by doing a jump, run(straight or around) or cutting flips(variety) or mix and match. The user once in range of the opponent, does a forward punch but also does another forward punch to the opponent with the opposite hand the user uses the first time. These punches are launched at different spots on the opponent and the last punch uses the Drunken Fist unpredictable ability and speed. The user does a headbutt to the opponent but the headbutt also knocks the user back into reality and out of the Drunk Fist state.
-Only used four times per battle

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Crow Claw (Kuroukurou)
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user channels raw chakra in their forarm(s) or shin(s). The user releases the chakra out and forms a scythe like blade of chakra. The user releases the chakra out of their forearms or shins and using shape manipulation, shapes the released chakra into a blade similar to a scythe. The blade is blue in color and can be as long as the user's arms. The blade is very sharp and dense enough to cut through the same rank attacks and below attacks because it is shape manipulation on another level so it is equal to A rank elemental ninjutsu jutsus. The difference between this and Chakra Scalpel for medical ninjas is that this technique does external damage and internal when slicing and can be used as a defense in some cases. Also Crow Claw can be used against elemental jutsus which Chakra Scalpel can't do.

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Wind Release: Crow Claw (Fuuton: Kuroukurou)
Rank: B
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20 (-10 per turn to sustain)
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user channels wind chakra in their forarm(s) or shin(s). The user releases the chakra out and forms a scythe like blade of wind chakra. The user releases the chakra out of their forearms or shins and using shape manipulation, shapes the released chakra into a blade similar to a scythe. The blade is grey in color and can be as long as the user's arms. The blade is very sharp and dense enough to cut through the same rank attacks and below attacks.
Note: Usable 5 times per battle

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(Genjutsu: Sukuriyu Motte Temae)-Illusionary Arts: Screw With You
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user holds their hands together and releases a pulse of chakra and takes over the opponent's mind. The opponent is sent into a genjutsu where chains released from the ground and a chair comes from behind the opponent where the chains are coming from. The chains retrace into the chair and wraps around the opponent scraping him/her to the chair. The opponent then sees a clone of the user beside them. The clone holds a giant(the size Franken Stein from Soul Eater has in his head) screw in his hand. The clone starts to push the screw in the opponent's head. In reality, the opponent is bleeding from their mouth because of the pain and recieves fifteen damage.
-Only used twice per battle and only every two turns
-No other genjutsu used in the same turn and following turn


±± Declined ±± You can't make your opponent bleed without physically doing something to him. Its an illusion. It may cause mental stress, mental pain, it may fool his body into breathing faster or passing out, but it can't make him bleed in reality. That requires something that would physically harm him.

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(Genjutsu: Sukuriyu Motte Temae)-Illusionary Arts: Screw With You
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user holds their hands together and takes over the opponent's mind(not literally). The opponent is sent into a genjutsu where chains released from the ground and a chair comes from behind the opponent where the chains are coming from. The chains retrace into the chair and wraps around the opponent scraping him/her to the chair. The opponent then sees a clone of the user beside them. The clone holds a giant(in the spoiler) screw in his hand. The clone starts to push the screw in the opponent's head. In reality, the opponent is immobilize. The opponent also suffer from mental pain and have their body be fooled into passing out.
-Only used twice per battle and only every two turns
-No other genjutsu used in the same turn and following turn
-Immobilize for one full turn

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 Declined  Sorry, but it can't be approved as your wording simply means that the moment you use it, your opponent passes out. Thats an obvious no as well as the whole Take over opponents mind, even if you say its not in a literal sense. This becase, off course, in Genjutsu, you don't take over anyones mind, you take over their senses. Only Doujutsu Genjutsu can control ones mind. DNR.​

Drunken Fist Style: EST For Life (Suiken: Seikatsu no tame no suto)
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user after entering the Drunken Fist state, raises his hands in the with it in a "L" shape. The user yells out "EST For Life" and takes off towards the user by doing a jump, run(straight or around) or cutting flips(variety) or mix and match. The user once in range of the opponent, does a forward punch but also does another forward punch to the opponent with the opposite hand the user uses the first time. These punches are launched at different spots on the opponent and the last punch uses the Drunken Fist unpredictable ability and speed. The user does a headbutt to the opponent but the headbutt also knocks the user back into reality and out of the Drunk Fist state.
-Only used four times per battle

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 Declined  Sorry, collides with existing techniques. DNR.​

 

[Shady Doctor]

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(Suiton: Kaze gatoringu o bakuhatsu ) -Water Style: Exploding Mist cloak
Rank: S
Type: Attack/defense/supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description:
The user begins by simply doing the serpent hand seal and focusing a fair amount of water chakra within their body. They will then begin exhaling a large amount of mist, as if they were performing the hidden mist technique. As the mist leaves the user's mouth, he will manipulate the mist particles to converge onto his body, so that the mist is staying exactly one inch away from contact with his body similar to creating a suit. The mist will then take on the form of a Bijuu like cloak similar to the shape of the one Minato Namikaze possess. The cloak will take on an aquatic state and shape of unique form, where the cloak will wave in the wind as if it was an actual cloak, and the shape and size of the cloak depends solely on the user himself, being highly condensed to the point that the mist can do physical damage just like a normal human body. The damage dealt through close combat with this cloak is still the same as before. Yet the defensive proves has increased when the mist cloak is capable of converging on one single area on the users body to prevent the damage of a technique. With the mist cloak activated, the user when in close range can manipulate the mist to explode outwards from any point on the cloak, dealing a great amount of damage to whatever it hit. The outwards explosion is wide, thus making it hard to avoid in close range.

~ Only teachable by Shady Doctor
~ only usable 2x
~ Lasts 3 turns per use
~ needs 1 turn gap between uses
~ The blast can only reach the point between short and mid-range
~ The explosion created counts towards the move count
~ The explosion is equivalent to that of a B-rank blast
~ When the mist converges to one area to protect the user, it is capable of defending against a B-rank fire technique
~ the defense will result in the cloak dispersing

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 Declined  If this is S-Rank, wrong chakra and damage. Or is it A-Rank? Also, the explosion...take it out. Its already too powerful as it stands. Also, this mist, how does it fair against wind? Off course, you need a chakra cost to sustain it.If its beeing sustainted, then you can only use Water Release while sustaining it. If physical damage is unchanged and it behaves as a normal body, why does it have a 60 damage? Why does it have damage at all? Should be N/A since the cloak itself doesn't do much besides coating you to protect you. Also, I want a limit in what size you can accomplish. And can you mold this cloak into something? I mean, can you create an arm or something out of it? Because its already getting too similar to Bijuu cloaks as it is...​

 

[Frozenstein]

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(Ninjutsu: Yoroi Kussetsu) - Ninja Arts: Armor Bending
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user makes a swinging motion with his arm or hand and send chakra inside the opponent's clothing. He then changes the structure of it, make it stronger and finally manipulate it. This manipulation can be made in 2 ways. He can make the clothing to completely wrap around the opponent and crush him, or wrap around in certain parts like arms, legs, upper/lower body, etc. Using either means to crush the opponent, the technique has the same power. It can squeeze and crush the opponent really fast, break his bones and deal internal damage to him. This technique can be used not only on regular clothes, but armors and generally everything that is worn on the body.
- wrapping happens extremely fast and when it start to squeeze the opponent, it can force him to release his grasp on weapons or cancel techniques that needs direct control
- ninjas with extreme strength such as Tsunade or Raikage may break out from the tech
- can only be used 3 times per battle
- can only be taught by Frozenstein

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 Declined  I like the concept. A lot. Good thinking. Though I need this to be of lower rank (B-Rank) and require either a sequence of 3 handseals (at least) or direct physical contact to happen. I also need you to put a note saying that Custom Weapons cannot be affected by this; only generic, non specific pieces of clothes. Good job.


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(Ninjutsu: Yoroi Kussetsu) - Ninja Arts: Armor Bending
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: B-rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user performs a set of 3 hand seals and send chakra inside the opponent's clothing. He then changes the structure of it, make it stronger and finally manipulate it. This manipulation can be made in 2 ways. He can make the clothing to completely wrap around the opponent and crush him, or wrap around in certain parts like arms, legs, upper/lower body, etc. Using either means to crush the opponent, the technique has the same power. It can squeeze and crush the opponent really fast, break his bones and deal internal damage to him. This technique can be used not only on regular clothes, but armors and generally everything that is worn on the body. In addition to the offensive usage, the user can also use this technique to move the clothes through simple hand movements. By doing this, he sacrifices the offensive damage of the technique but gains more usage versatility.
- wrapping happens extremely fast and when it start to squeeze the opponent, it can force him to release his grasp on weapons or cancel techniques that needs direct control
- ninjas with extreme strength such as Tsunade or Raikage may break out from the tech
- can only be taught by Frozenstein

Dropped the rank to B-rank, added the exceptions on the affected stuffs, increased the usage limit (tho I think B-rank techs normally doesn't have ) and a question. By non specific you mean, like a Nekura cloak can't be affected by it? Tho that is just a cloak that can defend from physical attacks.

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 Approved  Added a small cool usage for you and removed the limit. B-Ranks don't need limits. Also, Nekura's cloak as well as for example a Binkan's saber depend on how they are described. A binkan saber is defined as a basic weapon so it falls under the Kunai, Shuriken, etc category: basic tools. A Nekura's cloak I don't know as its not defined in any category. Still, beneath the cloak, they should have clothes. No need to focus on the cloak when you know for a fact you can even crush their testies with their own underwear. *hint hint*​

(Raiton: Raikou Rensa-tou) - Lightning Release: Lightning Chain-sword
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user releases lightning chakra into the ground and spread it out equally. When the chakra is in the ground, the user uses this chakra to electroduce the iron sand found in the earth and once an enough amount is electroduced, raise and collect it above the ground, creating a sword from it. The sword is only made of this iron sand and lightning chakra, where the lightning chakra flutters/vibrates the iron sand grains inside the sword, making it work like a chainsaw. Due to this effect the sword can cut solid objects easily. Advantage of this technique is that the iron sand can be manipulated as the user wishes due to the sword has no solid form. If the user wishes, he can reshape the sword into a long, but thin whip, what he can control using his lightning chakra presented in the sword/whip.
- can only be used 2 times per battle
- sword/whip lasts 3 turns before the chakra runs out
- re-shaping the sword/whip counts as a move
- can only be taught by Frozenstein

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X-Declined-X Its alright, but define the extent of your manipulation of this iron sand. Make sure to mention that it doesnt hinder a magnet release technique.

(Raiton: Raikou Rensa-tou) - Lightning Release: Lightning Chain-sword
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30 (-10 per turn)
Damage: 60
Description: The user releases lightning chakra into the ground and spread it out equally. When the chakra is in the ground, the user uses this chakra to electrify metallic impure minerals found in the earth and once an enough amount is electroduced, raise and collect it above the ground, creating a sword from it. The sword is only made of these impure metallic minerals (which are in a sand-like form) and lightning chakra, where the lightning chakra flutters/vibrates the impure metallic mineral grains inside the sword, making it work like a chainsaw. Due to this effect the sword can cut through solid objects easily. Advantage of this technique is that the impure metallic minerals can be manipulated as the user wishes due to the sword has no solid form, except the hilt, what is compressed to be solid so the sword can be wielded easily by the user. The manipulation of the minerals can be done in 2 ways. The first one is the shape, meaning if the user wishes, he can reshape the sword into a long, but thin whip, what he can control using his lightning chakra presented in the sword/whip. The second one is the control of the whip. It can be used just like any other whips by swinging the arm and can be controlled directly by the user. When it's controlled by the user, he can control it like it was a tail. He can stab the opponent with the tip and move it around in the vicinity of the tip. However it can only be done relatively close to the tip, so the user still has to move around if he wants to attack targets in different directions (like behind him or on his sides, etc.).
- this technique doesn't hinder magnet release techniques, but works against them as any other lightning based technique
- can only be used 2 times per battle
- sword/whip lasts 3 turns before the chakra runs out
- re-shaping the sword/whip counts as a move
- can only be taught by Frozenstein

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 Approved  The iron sand part collides with normal Iron Sand techniques. To gather Iron sand from the ground you need Magnet Release. I editted to make sure it doesn't collide.​

(Raiton: Fukusuu Raikou Issou) - Lightning Release: Multiple Lightning Escape
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: A stronger and improved version of Lightning Escape. This jutsu works the same way as the original technique, but instead of creating a single lightning bolt from his body, the user can create several lightning bolts up to a total of 6. When creating more lightning bolts, the user hides his body in one of these lightning bolts (have to state in which one) and use the rest as diversions or to attack/defend. All of these lightning bolts have the power of a B-ranked lightning attack and can be controlled separately. If the user decides to only make a single lightning bolt which contains his body, he can pierce through S-rank or lower earth techniques, destroy them and continue his way toward his destination. However his speed is dropped to half of the previous speed. If the opponent uses a Forbidden-rank earth jutsu, the technique can be destroyed, but the user turns back to human form afterward. When the user uses more lightning bolts, he can redirect them freely, but if they are hit with the appropriate technique(s), they get destroyed. Also if there are several lightning bolts, the user's main lightning bolt can only pierce through and destroy 1 B-rank or lower earth tech and he turns back into human form afterward. He also turns back into human form if hit an A-rank earth tech.
- the user can only travel high in the air up to mid range
- speed decreasing only occurs when S-rank earth jutsus are used against the user and there is only 1 lightning bolt
- if turned back into human form, the user can still control the other lightning bolts and attack or defend with them, but can't use jutsus that requires chakra
- user can't use lightning jutsus in the same turn he uses this technique
- can only be used 2 times per battle
- can only be taught by Frozenstein

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(Raiton: Raikou Issou) - Lightning Release: Lightning Escape
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short (Short-Long when moving)
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A (60 if direct contact occurs)
Description: The user performs a single hand seal and turn his body into lightning. Once turned into lightning he can move with high speed (a bit above the speed of an average lightning attack) in every direction and even change directions freely. He can travel high into the air or move close to the ground. If the user turns into lightning he can’t see or hear anything around him, but can sense chakra up to mid range, allowing him to react to incoming attacks. In lightning form he can’t even attack or use jutsus, however if the enemy touches the user, he becomes paralyzed. User can't travel through earth, but if the opponent uses an earth jutsu (A-rank or lower) against the user, it can be destroyed and the user can still travel toward his destination with half of the previous speed, but if the opponent uses an S-rank earth jutsu, the technique can be destroyed, but the user turns back to human form afterwards.
- the user can only travel high in the air up to mid range
- speed decreasing only occurs when A-rank earth jutsus are used against the user
- can only be used 2 times per battle
- can only be taught by Frozenstein

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 Approved  Please don't abuse it.​

 

[ReXii]

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(Hiraishin: Reivurifutosurasshu) Flying thunder god: Rave rift slash
Type:Offensive
Rank:S
Range:Short-Mid (Up to long range for kunai attraction)
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description: This is a unique variation of the space time barrier technique used by Minato Namikaze, this technique begins through the use of one of his unique flying thunder god kunai, focusing chakra in to the kunai as he slashes allows Minato to open something of a doorway, but this opens in mid air as a unique looking rift. When this "doorway" is opened on contact it causes all kunai marked with the seal of the flying thunder god to be attracted to that location instantly, causing them to perforate the opponent through the doorway creating a considerably lethal attack from a single swing of his kunai, extremely useful to Minato's fighting style since it requires no handseals.
*Note* May only be used twice
*Note* May only be used by Minato Namikaze and taught by ReXii

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 Declined  Sorry but I cannot accept this. DNR​

(Fuuinjutsu: Fantomu ken'nomai) Sealing technique: Dance of the phantom swords.
Type:Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank:A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description: The user of this technique will have pre placed several seals on his body before the fight, the seals contain condensed chakra similar in design to a rasengan in concept of chakra, however the shape of these chakra weapons are usually that of a large broadsword like weapon, appearing a deep blue colour similar to the rasengan, these chakra blades can be summoned from any of the seals by merely tapping on the seals location, each seal has ten of these swords sealed inside and the user may only have up to four of these seals on his body. The swords when summoned either act as a defensive technique spinning around the users body to block incoming attacks, or can be used offensively to pierce an enemy causing considerable damage, a unique feature of this technique is by double tapping the seal in quick succession it causes all ten swords in the seal to be summoned combined in to one large katana that can be fired at an enemy with speed nigh untrackable to the naked eye, or wielded offensively by the summoner.
*Note* May only be used four times in battle.
*Note* Double tapping the seal removes the defensive capability of the sealing swords.
*Note* May only be taught by ReXii

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 Declined  Sorry but this isn't really a sealing technique. Its simply a ninjutsu technique. And as a Ninjutsu technique, it collides with existing techniques.​

(FuuinKunaijutsu: Shikō otoko no gukō) Sealing kunai technique: The thinking man's folly.
Type:Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank:A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:30
Damage:-60 chakra to the opponent per turn
Description: This unique kunai technique is a form of extremely advanced chakra control, a combination of ninjutsu and a kunai, it is used by focusing a considerable amount of chakra in to a kunai extending it's length up to a meter, then by slashing with the chakra blade of the kunai the user will hit an opponent with the blade causing no actual damage to the opponents body but establishing a link between the kunai's chakra blade that becomes a long chakra strand, slowly this strand of chakra draws the opponents very energy from his body sealing it inside the kunai itself via a unique fuuinjutsu, and unless the chakra strand is severed the opponents chakra and the users remain connected via the kunai and the drain continues every turn.
*Note* May only be used twice in battle.
*Note* May only be taught by ReXii

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 Declined  A) you cannot do this without certain KGs and abilities B) its oped C) extending the kunai through infusing it with chakra is something anyone can do, perhaps not to one meter but still and D) there is no such thing as Kunaijutsu; correct name is Bukijutsu as its basically techniques with revolve around the usage of unspecified weapons such as a Kunai.​

 

[Bloo]

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(Kuchiyose no Jutsuerira Reitō kōgō) Summoning Technique : Dalila The Frozen Empress
Type:Summon
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 60
Damage:
Description:The user will bite there thumb, drawing the blood or by using blood from any other way (must still be there own), then by slamming there hand on the ground the user will summon Dalila The Frozen Empress. She stands 3 meters tall. Her fur is a light blue color. Dalila's attitude is that of a caring mother often being the one to look after the other deers. She has no antlers due to her being a female, she is able however to use Water up to A-Rank. She can manage on her own, moving at speeds equal to a Taijutsu Specialist at S-Class rank. She is very intellegent and is very friendly with people allowing 2 people to ride on her back. She is also capable of standing on 2 feet, though she prefers 4 legs.

-Dalila can remain for 4 turns
-Dalilia can only be summoned once per battle.
-Water Moves used by Dalila counts towards 3 jutsu limit.

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 Declined  Ok...on two feet...and using water...does she have the ability to make hand seals? If so, how?

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(Kuchiyose no Jutsuerira Reitō kōgō) Summoning Technique : Dalila The Frozen Empress
Type:Summon
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 60
Damage:
Description:The user will bite there thumb, drawing the blood or by using blood from any other way (must still be there own), then by slamming there hand on the ground the user will summon the deer Dalila The Frozen Empress. She stands 3 meters tall. Her fur is a light blue color. Dalila's attitude is that of a caring mother often being the one to look after the other deers. She has no antlers due to her being a female, she is able however to use Water up to A-Rankwithout having to do handseal but still needs a water source for those that require it. She can manage on her own, moving at speeds equal to a Taijutsu Specialist at S-Class rank. She is very intellegent and is very friendly with people allowing 2 people to ride on her back. She is also capable of standing on 2 feet, though she prefers 4 legs.

-Dalila can remain for 4 turns
-Dalilia can only be summoned once per battle.
-Water Moves used by Dalila counts towards 3 jutsu limit.

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[Reaper]

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(Furiko Sono Shinja) Pendulum Of The Sacred
Type: Weapon
Rank: S Rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40 (+10)
Damage: 80
Description: Pendulum of the sacred is a special pendulum crafted by the people from Takumi village,well known for their specialty in making advanced weaponry.The pendulum consist of a special chakra thread unable to be cut by a blade,an indestructable crystal and a ring that is hollow on the inside.The ring is ingraved with the word "Reaper" into it.The long chakra thread is located in the hollowness of the ring and located at the end of the thread is a special crystal.Through the chakra thread the user sends his chakra into the crystal and is able to manipulate the pendulum allowing him to move it freely through the air.The chakra thread can extend to long range.The pendulum,specificly the chakra thread has the ability to suck out chakra out of the opponent and solid attacks.This is accomplished by either piercing the opponent/solid attack or squizeing it with the thread.The sucked out chakra travels through the thread and enters the user of the pendulum giving him a chakra increase.The amount of chakra sucked out is 20(The amount used to perform a regular B rank jutsu).The user can also send his elemental chakra across the thread releasing an attack coresponding with the chakra type.With earth chakra he can solidify the opponent in earth removing all oxygen and hindering their movement basicly turning them into a statue..With fire chakra he can encase them in fire burning them alive.With water he can encase them in a water prison slowly drowning them.With lightning chakra he can cause short paralysis making the opponent unable to move for a turn.With wind chakra the user can encase the opponent in a small sharp whirlwind that cuts them continuosly making them bleed out over time.

- For evrey turn the pendulum stays in the air the user uses 10 more chakra
- All of the elemental chakra attacks are of C rank strength
- All of the elemental chakra attacks require 20 chakra
- Evrey elemental chakra attack counts as one of the 3 jutsu used per turn
- To use any of the elemental attacks the user must first pierce the opponent
- While the pendulum is in the air the user cannot perform any 2 handed seals.
- The pendulum can suck out the chakra out of solid B rank attacks and lower

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 Declined  Sorry but all of the abilities you have here have already been made into other custom weapons. This isn't, as well, a weapon...actually I don't even understand what it really is. A thread, ring and crystal form a pendulum? I don't get it. Anyway, because the abilities have been made, its a DNR I'm afraid.​

 

[Lord of Kaos]

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1. ( Senkugoshoha ) - Flashing Vacuum Strong Thrust Wave
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user, releasing a short burst of Raiton chakra from beneath his feet, surges forward with the chakra, delivering a low jab to the enemy's solar plexus, throwing his center of balance off, as the user then follows up with a powerful punch to the chin, sending the target into the sky. With the surge of chakra, the user can move considerable fast while surging forward, but with decreasing distances as the distance moved expands. From short range, the user moves at optimum speed, effectively doubling the speed of the user as they jump forward to strike. However, should the user attempt to move forward to mid range, it would take the user roughly the same time it takes to run to mid range.
*Doubled speed only applies to forward surge from to anywhere within short range*
*Can only be used once every two turns*
*Can only be used 4 times a fight*

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 Declined  Sorry but I find this collides with Raikage's Nintaijutsu. It uses not only lightning to increase damage and add the electrifying effect but also to move at blazing speeds, specially upwards to intercept the airborne enemy. And for some reason, you don't have damage points.​

2. ( Guren Senpukyaku ) - Crimson Lotus Whirlwind Leg
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Based upon the original Tatsumaki Zankuukyaku, the user channels Katon chakra to his legs as he crouches low, lunging out quickly, spinning and releasing the Katon chakra in a torrent of spinning flaming kicks, setting the enemy ablaze as the user spins. Sending the enemy into the sky with the last kick, the user jumps into the air to strike the enemy with a severe spinning leg strike to the body with the fiery limb.
*Can only be used 3 times a fight*
*Must know the Tatsumaki Zankuukyaku jutsu*

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Tatsumaki jutsu for reference:

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Tatsumaki Zankuukyaku|Hurricane Scythe Kick
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user jumps and, while in the air, rotates his or her legs, causing himself to spin in circles, kicking the opponent 3 times with rapid succession. The power behind the strikes increase with each spin, due to the user's momentum increasing. This attack can also be used against a standing target or while already in the air.

3.( Shinryuuken ) - Divine Dragon Fist
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description: Based upon the Shoryuken, the user gathers Katon chakra to his fist as he crouches low, in anticipation for a strike. As he lunges out and uppercuts the enemy, he quickly spins and begins delivering several leg based attacks at the enemy's chest and upper/mid body. After delivering 6 kicks, the user spins low with the last strike and pivots quickly, rising with the blow and delivering a fiery torrent as he performs a spinning Shoryuken, dealing several punches in a spiral pattern.
*Can only be used three times*
*After using, the User cannot use any taijutsu of A rank and higher the next turn*
*Requires a two turn break in between usages*

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(Shouryuken) - Rising Uppercut
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The move is a jumping uppercut in which the user spins and rockets upwards with some horizontal movement as well, knocking the opponent to the ground with much damage. This move is an excellent anti-air move, where using the spinning motion helps to offset the targets attack (physical based attacks).

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 Both Declined  Problem here is that both these submissions collide with two CFS which pertain to the usage of Taijutsu + Fire.​

 

[Detective L]

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(Doton:Hasai Surabu) - Earth Release: Crushing Slabs
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description:After performing the Snake → Ram → Dog handseals,the user will manipulate the earth and soften it,causing holes to form at the opponent's feet which would trap them .These holes would be the size of the opponent's feet,and after pulling them in,the earth closes.Then,by performing the Rat handseal,the user will manipulate two slabs of earth that will come from the opponent's front and back side.These slabs will then crush the captured opponent.

Notes and Restrictions
-Can only be used three times
-Can only be taught by Detective L

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 Declined  while smart the problem you have with this, I'm afraid, is that someone has made it first. Actually, not this exactly but both the feet trapping aspect and the slab crushing aspect. Sorry but your techniques becomes only a combination of existing techniques. DNR.​

(Kage Bōru) - Shadow Ball
Type: Defense
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description:By performing the Rat handseal,the user will manipulate their shadow to form a ball of materialised shadow around them.This ball of Shadow will protect the user from incoming elemental attacks of up to B rank.This shadow ball stays active for three turns or can be canceled by the user by performing the Snake handseal.

Notes and Restrictions
-Can only be used by Nara clan
-Only shadow techniques can be performed while ball is active
-Lasts for 3 turns
-Can only be taught by Detective L
-After Shadow Ball has been de-activated,no Shadow techniques can be used for two turns
-Link to Nara Shadow training and Nara biography

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 Declined  Sorry but this already exists. DNR.​

 

[Gutsy]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Suiton: Kaio-Ken) – Water Release: World King Fist
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This is a unique technique where the user will gather an enormous amount of chakra within their body and will then convert it all into water chakra in one swift motion which will then flow in their body while being released in a controlled manner through their skin and their entire body. This will result in the user to gain a blue like appearance, as their eyes will glow a bright blue color while their body will emit a sea blue liquid like substance which will begin to drip from their body. During this state the body undergoes a transformation where the user will seem to have a fish like appearance through the chakra flowing on his body, their face will gain the slight glance of fish skin while there will grow a thin layer of skin between their fingers half way up. During this state the user has greatly increased flexibility and reflexes while also having gained a tremendous brute force residing in their arms. These are the side effects of using this so called mode, though one of the most interesting side effects to this mode is that the chakra which is emitted from the user instantly turns to a liquid state like water, which the user will be capable of performing techniques off of. Finally the true skill behind this technique, is that when in this mode, the user is capable of performing water techniques at blazing speed without the need to think of a water source, due to the user being capable of releasing an enormous amount of water chakra into the open which will then instantly be turned into water and be used for the users liking. When the user enters this state, he will gain an enormous strain on his chakra flow and in the end suffer by losing an immense amount of chakra in the process. When this stage ends, the user will be left in a weakened state and greatly exhausted due to the usage of such an amount of chakra.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: During this stage the user is capable of performing any water technique without a water source
Note: Lasts for 4 turns
Note: After the technique deactivates the user is incapable of performing Water techniques for 2 turns and is incapable of molding chakra above S-rank for 3 turns.
Note: Must be taught by Gutsy Jiraiya

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 Declined  Sorry but this is simply a mode for the sake of a mode. DNR​

(Fūton: Kokyu-ho) - Wind Release: Breath Control
Type: Defensive
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique is unique though rather simple. This technique allows the user to keep his breath for a very long time. This happens through the user utilizing his lungs and lung capacity to the utmost while using their own chakra to gather oxygen. The technique works through the user holding their breath while utilizing their wind chakra to block their nose and other entrances into their body, while also using their chakra to gather the oxygen in the air and transfer it through the user’s body and into their lungs where it will be distributed into the users system, which results in that the user does not need to breath to survive. This technique requires a substantial amount of chakra which needs to be poured and continuously used to block the entrances and gather the oxygen which means the user needs great focus to sustain it though they can still perform other techniques, just not techniques related to either Fire or Wind Release. Also due to the user holding their breath and blocking all entrances, the user is capable of staying underwater for a prolonged time, while also capable of keeping airborne toxics or anything offensive which needs to go inside their body, from entering their body and essentially defending them from unique attacks.
Note: Only usable trice per battle
Note: The user is incapable of using any other technique during this techniques duration
Note: Must be taught by Gutsy Jiraiya

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 Declined  You cannot do soemthing like this without medical expertise. And its also higly illogical as thats not something you can do with simple wind release nor is it how Oxygen is used by the body. If you overstaturate yourself with so much pure oxygen bad things would happen. Sorry but its a DNR.​

(Chiripeppā no bakudan danmaku) – Chili Pepper Bomb Barrage
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Here the user will take out 5 kunai where a single Chili Pepper Bomb is attached to each of them. The user will then follow up by throwing the kunai at different angles towards the opponent, and while they are traveling, the user will at the precise moment perform the shadow clone hand seal, resulting in the kunai and the Chili Pepper Bombs attached to multiply into 50 kunai which will come down upon the opponent like a barrage cutting them, while the Chili Pepper Bombs will explode on contact and make the opponents eyes drowsy while the cuts they had received from the kunai will begin to have a burning sensation due to the chili pepper entering the wound.
Note: Can only be performed thrice per battle
Note: Must be taught by Gutsy Jiraiya

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 Approved  Good job! Awesome custom! Honestly!​

 

[Summer]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

shishi toku ( patriot shield )
Rank: S Rank
Type: weapon/denfensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80 (+10 for taijutsu usage)
Description:
This is a very symbolic shield that was used by some of the greatest heroes of the past. It is a round and very dense metal made shield formed from an asteroid, this shield is 4 foot in diameter with a strap on the back for carrying, pertains to have no special attacking ability but can be used to add extra damage during use with taijutsu based attacks hitting the enemy in any way with the shield, this will add more durability then using a fist or leg without the chance of breaking your own bones in the process. Being a blocking type of weapon first, it is still able to attack using taijutsu and throwing the shield (which is all explained better on my Cfs).
This shield can be used normally as well and does not require elemental spchakra to use normally, blocking kuni shuriken and explosions blasts( only slightly). The user will be able to channel chakra to the front of the shield thus adapting it making it even stronger, also giving it more dynamic when used with taijutsu.

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Restrictions: does not afford any actual special ability besides helping do extra damage with taijutsu.
: can be used to block and or taijutsu attacks as much as the user wants.
: can only be used by Roju.

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(Kessho no Yoroi) - Crystal mirror shifting
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage: N/A
Description:the user once covered in crystal armour is able to subjugate herself into the platform and can rise up and sink into the platform anywhere. This jutsu can only be used after crystal platform jutsu, and also the crystal armour jutsu. The reason why you must use crystal armour jutsu is because you need your body to be coated in crystal to be able to properly phase through the crystal platform making it a faster way of transporting through crystal.

Restrictions: can only be used five times in battle.
:can only be used one crystal platform and crystal armour have been used.
: cannot be used twice in the same turn.
Can only be used by guren.
Can only be taught by juha.

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(Kessho: purattoho-mu) - Crystal: platform
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40 ( 20 for rebuilding)
Damage Points: NA
Description:
The user does three handsigns begins by building up there crystal chakra and proceeds to turn the top 3 feet of the ground into crystal making it so the enemy's are no longer touching the ground and able to manipulate the ground itself. This also can be used as a focus point for making crystal jutsu's rise up from the platform faster as there is already a crystal source to draw from. The platform can be damaged but it will take a jutsu equal in power to do so. That being said the jutsu can also be reformed with less effort and just by repairing the already existent crystal platform.
The user also has the ability to control how far the range of the technique will work but has to state during the jutsu process which ranges are being effect. Speed reference for building the platform is similar in speed to crystal labrynth.

Restrictions: can only be used once every four turns and only twice during battle..
: the rebuilding of a damaged portion cost 1/2 the chakra used to perform the technique.
: earth cannot be manipulate from the ground as long as this jutsu is on the field for either the user or the enemy.
: no other crystal jutsu's can be used in the same turn.
: this jutsu stays on the field for 4 turns.
: only guren can use this jutsu.

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(Kesshou: yuka) - Crystal: floor
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: NA
Description:
The user does three handsigns begins by building up there crystal chakra and proceeds to turn the top 3 feet of the ground into crystal making it so the enemy's are no longer touching the ground and able to manipulate the ground itself. This also can be used as a focus point for making crystal jutsu's rise up from the platform faster as there is already a crystal source to draw from. The platform can be damaged but it will take a jutsu equal in power to do so, following elemental interactions. The user also has the ability to control how far the range of the technique will work but has to state during the jutsu process which ranges are being effect. Speed reference for building the platform is similar in speed to crystal labrynth.

Restrictions: can only be used once
: earth cannot be manipulate from the ground as long as this jutsu is on the field for either the user or the enemy.
: no other crystal jutsu's can be used in the same turn.
: this jutsu stays on the field for 4 turns.
: only guren can use this jutsu.

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shishi toku ( patriot shield )
Rank: S Rank
Type: weapon/denfensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: - (+10 for taijutsu usage)
Description:
This is a very symbolic shield that was used by some of the greatest heroes of the past. It is a round and very dense metal made shield formed from an asteroid, this shield is 4 foot in diameter with a strap on the back for carrying, pertains to have no special attacking ability but can be used to add extra damage during use with taijutsu based attacks hitting the enemy in any way with the shield, this will add more durability then using a fist or leg without the chance of breaking your own bones in the process. Being a blocking type of weapon first, it is still able to attack using taijutsu and throwing the shield (which is all explained better on my Cfs).
This shield can be used normally as well and does not require elemental spchakra to use normally, blocking kuni shuriken and explosions blasts( only slightly). The user will be able to channel chakra to the front of the shield thus adapting it making it even stronger, also giving it more dynamic when used with taijutsu.

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Restrictions: does not afford any actual special ability besides helping do extra damage with taijutsu.
: can be used to block and or taijutsu attacks as much as the user wants.
: can only be used by Roju.

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 Declined  Question: it adds +10 to Taijutsu....which taijutsu? There is no Taijutsu moves in narutoverse which encompass the usage of a Shield... So there is no technique for it to power the damage off.​

(Kesshou no Yoroi) - Crystal mirror shifting
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage: N/A
Description:the user once covered in crystal armour is able to subjugate herself into the platform and can rise up and sink into the platform anywhere. This jutsu can only be used after crystal platform jutsu, and also the crystal armour jutsu. The reason why you must use crystal armour jutsu is because you need your body to be coated in crystal to be able to properly phase through the crystal platform making it a faster way of transporting through crystal.

Restrictions: can only be used five times in battle.
:can only be used one crystal platform and crystal armour have been used.
: cannot be used twice in the same turn.
Can only be used by guren.
Can only be taught by roju.

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 Declined  Sorry but this is simple a copy of mayfly for crystal and tons of questions remain. Can you be sensed while travelling with it? Which speed can you achieve? Can you rise unoticed? Can you be seen when travelling? Also, I don't think you made the platform technique thick enough to use this. What if the platform is destroyed while you're merged with it? Will you die?​