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Genjutsu sutairu: Jaiantsuwārudo:Illusion Technique: Giants World
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user performs The dog and tiger hand seals in quick successions,and casts his Opponent under a genjutsu which creates an illusion where the opponent enemy and everything around him has drastically increased increased in size by up to ten folds, making him to appear as a dwarf and midget in contrast to his opponents and his surrounding causing him to become unease and enter a state of panic. However, in reality nothing is going as this all takes place in the opponent mind as a result of the genjutsu.
Note:Must be taught by thunderbolt to use
Note: Can only be used three times a battle
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-Declined- You can't induce a state of panic from just seeing things bigger, some ninjas have more tolerance to fear than others and that's not how normal illusionary techniques work, also you said in the description that the opponent enemy and everything around him has drastically increased in size.
Tenken: Heavenly Punishment
Rank: S
Range: Short -Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Tenken otherwise known and called “Heavenly Punishment” by friends and foes alike was the personal sword of Sajin Komamura which was created and forged by his own hands, due to his mastery and skill in blacksmithing. Unlike other shinobis, who wielded swords and weapons for the thrill of fighting and the spilling of blood, sajin forgery of his sword and his wielding of it, stems from his debt of loyalty and gratefulness towards his adoptive father Genryūsai Shigekuni Yamamoto, who not only saved his life by bringing him into his home and sheltering him, but who was the only person who accepted him for who he is and not what he is or what he looks like, but who also nurtured him to the man he is today, and as such sajin feels a huge debt of gratitude to him, going as far as being able to die or kill for him, and as such sajin decided to get stronger to be able to fulfill that dept which was owed to Yamamoto, which eventually lead him to the forging of his sword, tenken, which unlike other shinobis sword, was not wielded for the sake of bloodshed and violence, but as a form of justice to punish those who had committed hideous crimes or committed one form of atrocities or the other, and most importantly to protect his foster father Yamamoto ,who had protected him all his life and loved him as a father would love a son.
Abilities
Tenken is an ordinary shaped sword, with a length of 5 meters in height and weight of 20 kilograms in mass; it has the name “Sajin” engraved on the tip of the sword as sign of ownership of komamura, its wielder. Its cross guard is a rectangular shaped figure decorated with vertical and horizontal lines, with the longer sides sucked in towards the middle, his sword, tensen, has two forms/stages of development and progression,one called the ‘”hoop stage’” which is the initial form of the sword before its progression and then the “bankai stage” which is the second and final part of the swords progression.
Hoop Stage [Initial Stage]
This is the first form or stage of progression the sword undergoes when initially activated, thus being called the initial stage, the sword in this stage retains its original length and size being 5 meters in height and 20 kilograms in mass respectively, its only strenght in this form, is the ability to harden the body surface of the sword giving it longer durability and increased cutting prowess in the process, allowing it to be able to cut through solid matter, and earthen structures easily,[C rank And Below] along with being able to cut through regular ninja katanas, shiruken and kunais more easily.
Bankai Stage[Latter Stage]
This is the last and final stage of the progression of the sword, after which it loses its abilities and can’t not be wielded again, for an extended period of time. Unlike its initial stage the sword doesn’t retain its physical shape and size. While in this “latter stage” the user and the sword emits a purple aura that resonates from their respective bodies ,as a sign of their harmony and been one with the other, tenken, the sword in question, unlike many other ninja swords is in- capable of absorbing ninjutsu attacks or producing elemental based attacks or strikes, its only true and main prowess which it has and which was made for the sole reason of carrying out justice, is the swords ability to transform itself into a giant armored huma-being ,standing about 100 feet tall in height and weighing over 2 tons in weight, the giant armored being is linked with the wielder of the sword ,thus is capable of mimicking his movements and steps to an extent, it is known and more renowned for its defensive capabilities rather than attacks though not lacking much in the latter, through the will of the user by mimicking him the giant armored being is able to make horizontal and vertical slashes[B rank and below] towards the opponent, however, the sword being forged and created with the sole purpose of to “protect “is able to take on the force of 2 S rank Based techniques or one forbidden rank based technique after which the sword deactivates regardless of the number of turns used. Despite its defensive capabilities and prowess the usage of the sword presents the user with two main weaknesses and draw backs which is that if the armored giant is harmed in any way or any form of manner, the wounds and injuries are reflected unto the wielder of the sword, and the other being the user speed being decreased and slowed down [By One Rank] due to the sheer size of the armored giant and the difficulty it poses in its movements.
Note: Can only Be Wielded By Thunderbolt
Note: The Sword Last for Only 5 turns.
Note: The Sword Slashes/and it’s cutting Of Earthen Materials Count as a Move
Note: The Giants Ability to Withstand Damages from jutsu Counts as a Move.
Note: The User Is Reduced In Speed By One Rank.
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Shōkan tekunikku: Binturongs no neimārubosukingu: Summon technique: Neymar Da Silva Boss King Of the Binturongs
Type: Offensive and defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Neymar Da Silva Is the boss king of the binuturong, unlike his other his other fellow binturongs who are tall and broad in stature, neymar is only 5,7 in height and weighs about 75 kilograms to be exact, he speaks English and carries two long sized katanas strapped unto his back, he has mastered lightning and can use all its techniques without the usage of seals, being a binturong, a four legged creatures who mainly live on trees, neymar is well adept in swinging and jumping and can jump as high as 20 feet into in the air, he has little to no knowledge in ninjutsu and can only create shadows of himself and perform low ranking ninjutsu of [c rank and lower] his main ability and the power that earned him his boss status and distinguishes him from the other binturongs is his ability to shield him and his summoner against elemental based attacks[A rank and lower] due to his rough scaly barks and hairy furs he has on him, neymar being small in stature is unable to make a frightening impression of himself like other binturongs and thus lacks the spirit of intimidation his fellow binturong posses and is sometimes ignored when summoned, making the opponent to underestimate him and the level of his abilities, which sometimes works to his advantage.
Note: Must be taught by thunderbolt to use
Note: Last for only five turns
Note: Performing/shielding against techniques count as a move.
Note: The user must have mastered lightning for the summon to use it.
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-Declined- No to usage of ninjutsu, and restrict him to S-rank Lightning techniques not "all", and no guarding against elemental techniques of A-rank, how would he guard his summoner against an elemental technique with his fur O__O
Genjutsu sutairu: Jaiantsuwārudo:Illusion Technique: Giants World
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user performs The dog and tiger hand seals in quick successions,and casts his Opponent under a genjutsu which creates an illusion where the opponent enemy and everything around him has drastically increased increased in size by up to ten folds, making him to appear as a dwarf and midget in contrast to his opponents and his surrounding causing him to become unease and enter a state of panic. However, in reality nothing is going as this all takes place in the opponent mind as a result of the genjutsu.
Note:Must be taught by thunderbolt to use
Note: Can only be used three times a battle
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-Declined- You can't induce a state of panic from just seeing things bigger, some ninjas have more tolerance to fear than others and that's not how normal illusionary techniques work, also you said in the description that the opponent enemy and everything around him has drastically increased in size.
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Tenken: Heavenly Punishment
Rank: S
Range: Short -Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Tenken otherwise known and called “Heavenly Punishment” by friends and foes alike was the personal sword of Sajin Komamura which was created and forged by his own hands, due to his mastery and skill in blacksmithing. Unlike other shinobis, who wielded swords and weapons for the thrill of fighting and the spilling of blood, sajin forgery of his sword and his wielding of it, stems from his debt of loyalty and gratefulness towards his adoptive father Genryūsai Shigekuni Yamamoto, who not only saved his life by bringing him into his home and sheltering him, but who was the only person who accepted him for who he is and not what he is or what he looks like, but who also nurtured him to the man he is today, and as such sajin feels a huge debt of gratitude to him, going as far as being able to die or kill for him, and as such sajin decided to get stronger to be able to fulfill that dept which was owed to Yamamoto, which eventually lead him to the forging of his sword, tenken, which unlike other shinobis sword, was not wielded for the sake of bloodshed and violence, but as a form of justice to punish those who had committed hideous crimes or committed one form of atrocities or the other, and most importantly to protect his foster father Yamamoto ,who had protected him all his life and loved him as a father would love a son.
Abilities
Tenken is an ordinary shaped sword, with a length of 5 meters in height and weight of 20 kilograms in mass; it has the name “Sajin” engraved on the tip of the sword as sign of ownership of komamura, its wielder. Its cross guard is a rectangular shaped figure decorated with vertical and horizontal lines, with the longer sides sucked in towards the middle, his sword, tensen, has two forms/stages of development and progression,one called the ‘”hoop stage’” which is the initial form of the sword before its progression and then the “bankai stage” which is the second and final part of the swords progression.
Hoop Stage [Initial Stage]
This is the first form or stage of progression the sword undergoes when initially activated, thus being called the initial stage, the sword in this stage retains its original length and size being 5 meters in height and 20 kilograms in mass respectively, its only strenght in this form, is the ability to harden the body surface of the sword giving it longer durability and increased cutting prowess in the process, allowing it to be able to cut through solid matter, and earthen structures easily,[C rank And Below] along with being able to cut through regular ninja katanas, shiruken and kunais more easily.
Bankai Stage[Latter Stage]
This is the last and final stage of the progression of the sword, after which it loses its abilities and can’t not be wielded again, for an extended period of time. Unlike its initial stage the sword doesn’t retain its physical shape and size. While in this “latter stage” the user and the sword emits a purple aura that resonates from their respective bodies ,as a sign of their harmony and been one with the other, tenken, the sword in question, unlike many other ninja swords is in- capable of absorbing ninjutsu attacks or producing elemental based attacks or strikes, its only true and main prowess which it has and which was made for the sole reason of carrying out justice, is the swords ability to transform itself into a giant armored huma-being ,standing about 100 feet tall in height and weighing over 2 tons in weight, the giant armored being is linked with the wielder of the sword ,thus is capable of mimicking his movements and steps to an extent, it is known and more renowned for its defensive capabilities rather than attacks though not lacking much in the latter, through the will of the user by mimicking him the giant armored being is able to make horizontal and vertical slashes[B rank and below] towards the opponent, however, the sword being forged and created with the sole purpose of to “protect “is able to take on the force of 2 S rank Based techniques or one forbidden rank based technique after which the sword deactivates regardless of the number of turns used. Despite its defensive capabilities and prowess the usage of the sword presents the user with two main weaknesses and draw backs which is that if the armored giant is harmed in any way or any form of manner, the wounds and injuries are reflected unto the wielder of the sword, and the other being the user speed being decreased and slowed down [By One Rank] due to the sheer size of the armored giant and the difficulty it poses in its movements.
Note: Can only Be Wielded By Thunderbolt
Note: The Sword Last for Only 5 turns.
Note: The Sword Slashes/and it’s cutting Of Earthen Materials Count as a Move
Note: The Giants Ability to Withstand Damages from jutsu Counts as a Move.
Note: The User Is Reduced In Speed By One Rank.
Declined your swords abilities are nothing that hasn't been done before. Sorry. DNR
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Shōkan tekunikku: Binturongs no neimārubosukingu: Summon technique: Neymar Da Silva Boss King Of the Binturongs
Type: Offensive and defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Neymar Da Silva Is the boss king of the binuturong, unlike his other his other fellow binturongs who are tall and broad in stature, neymar is only 5,7 in height and weighs about 75 kilograms to be exact, he speaks English and carries two long sized katanas strapped unto his back, he has mastered lightning and can use all its techniques without the usage of seals, being a binturong, a four legged creatures who mainly live on trees, neymar is well adept in swinging and jumping and can jump as high as 20 feet into in the air, he has little to no knowledge in ninjutsu and can only create shadows of himself and perform low ranking ninjutsu of [c rank and lower] his main ability and the power that earned him his boss status and distinguishes him from the other binturongs is his ability to shield him and his summoner against elemental based attacks[A rank and lower] due to his rough scaly barks and hairy furs he has on him, neymar being small in stature is unable to make a frightening impression of himself like other binturongs and thus lacks the spirit of intimidation his fellow binturong posses and is sometimes ignored when summoned, making the opponent to underestimate him and the level of his abilities, which sometimes works to his advantage.
Note: Must be taught by thunderbolt to use
Note: Last for only five turns
Note: Performing/shielding against techniques count as a move.
Note: The user must have mastered lightning for the summon to use it.
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-Declined- No to usage of ninjutsu, and restrict him to S-rank Lightning techniques not "all", and no guarding against elemental techniques of A-rank, how would he guard his summoner against an elemental technique with his fur O__O
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