[Predictions] Prediction: Naruto 643: SenJustu and Kurama's other half.

[VJ87G]

I liked it very good

No problem. I'm just glad you'll like it.

 

[VJ87G]

yes that's a good prediction it's believable but I feel like minato will die for some reason if he gives naruto the other half xd

Maybe, even if he's still Edo Tensei, but we'll find out when it's the right time for him to do that. And Naruto will be in full Kurama mode, in no times, flat.

 

[VJ87G]

Brilliant, you sound like sensei kishi

Well, I'm not Kishi, but at least, I'm getting there.

 

[Cursemarkedchild]

I don't think sai is that Asian "You get killed" I like this prediction though I give it 4/5

 

[ChrisWolf]

This grammar makes my eyes burn.

 

[coolcomfort]

that sakura *****! who does she think she is?

 

[VJ87G]

that sakura *****! who does she think she is?

Now, now. She was just wonder if Sasuke was gonna get killed by Obito. But Hinata told her that Naruto saved him.

 

[lazynade]

Few things you got wrong in the chapters you mentioned. i.e. (Obito wouldn't be mad at Sasuke for betraying him. He betrayed sasuke first to Kabuto, but Kabuto failed anyways. Obito sold sasuke out before Sasuke even left Akatsuki. Plus Sasuke has already joined the fight and Obito has probably noticed him by now, but hasn't said anything to him because he probably doesn't care.)
Terrible grammar too. It was painful to read.
Dialogue was pretty bad too.

I like your idea and where you were going with the story, it was just a trainwreck of bad spelling/grammar and misinformation.

 

[mr opportunist]

not a bad prediction

 

[Dreemax]

Just a heads up, the prediction was nice overall.

And it's Coup d'etat. Not coup de vat >_<

 

[jonsin19]

The 3rd hokage has mastered every jutsu in the village.Does he have some kind of Sage-monkey senjutsu? Normally, the sage power is based on what they summon. Naruto- Toads... Oro- Snakes... Jaraiya- Toads... Hiruzen could have a monkey senjutsu.. just a thought...

 

[GOODY]

nice Prediction loved the Kurama part

 

[Tera Path]

Quite a boring read.
Only the beginning and end were pretty good.

 

[IcedFox]

You made it come across that Minato doesn't know that he has the other half of Kurama's chakra...
Other than that...great read.
Grammar could be better, but wasn't that hard to read.