[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[Korra.]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Want a fire version too if I could possibly o.o
[Katon : Gurandofaiyāfenikkusu ] - Fire Release : Grand Fire Phoenix
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short- Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Just like Korra's Grand Water Phoenix Jutsu but with fire the user will focus all their fire chakra into the sky. When they have enough chakra in the sky they start to create a giant phoenix that is the half the size of Gamabunta made of fire. When the phoenix is form it will explode into a large barrage of mini phoenixes that are the size of Abumanre bugs (and as such completely visible) and will come down onto the opponent with such great force that even if they were underground up to 3 meters underground the phoenixes would still break through and do minor damage like breaking a little into the skin but not do faultily damage. Although the small phoenixes don't actually move that fast, they pact great momentum.
Note: Cannot use any fire jutsus for the next turn
Note: It takes 2 jutsu moves to form.
Note: Has to be taught by ~Korra~
Note: Every mini phoenix isnt S rank.
Note: If the user does not find a way to defend them self or avoid the attack the jutsu will hurt the user.
Declined
Reminds me of Selendrile's fire birds and also Kage Phoenix's technique. Too similar.

Link to Reaper Scythe Arts Approval

You must be registered for see links

(Sishen Liandao Yishu: Shinigami wa u~iru) Reaper Scythe Arts: The Grim Reaper's Will
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Though it was develop form the elemental infusion, Korra was able to intensify the jutsu to create scythes made out of pure chakra non-elemental and elemental chakra. These chakra scythes are able to cut sharper then normal scythes. When using chakra the chakra scythes each have different effects.
Katon: The scythe is made up of a dark reddish chakra and when in contact with an opponent can produce a burning effect upon contact.
Suiton: The scythe is made up of a dark blue chakra, making the scythe more flexible and can increase the length up to 3 feet.
Raiton: The chakra made up of yellow chakra increasing the scythes penetration and to have a numbing effect upon impact.
Doton: The scythe made up of brown chakra can have its weight either increased (3 times as much) or decreased (3 times as much) to either increase impact or speed, depending on the situation (only one weight change per use, meaning either use this infusion for more weight or less with each use)
Futon: The blade is made up of green chakra increasing its cutting power.
Normal Chakra: The scythe is made up of light blue chakra and can be dense enough to stop ninja tools and ninjutsu (Up to B rank)
Note: Usable 3 time a match
Note: Must know Reaper Scythe Arts and must be taught by ~Korra~
Note: Can only have one infusion active. With earth infusion, each changing of weight counts as a use.
Note: Each infusion can stop/cut in half the element its stronger then(depends on the opposing jutsu size) and can be broken by their weakness chakra by an A rank or higher.

Declined
Alright, let's break this down, mate, as I am very hesitant about you using each of the scythes like that.
First off, the scythe itself. How large is it, and how does one generally grasp it? It should also last a certain amount of time, as you are utilizing each of the elements.
Katon: The scythe is made up of a dark reddish chakra and when in contact with an opponent can produce a burning effect upon contact. How does one expect to wield scythes of fire? They are intangible, and can easily be blown out by Wind jutsus.
Suiton: The scythe is made up of a dark blue chakra, making the scythe more flexible and can increase the length up to 3 feet. Alright, I can relate this to D-Rank Water canon jutsu, but the way it works is a bit iffy. You can increase the length up to three feet? Does this make this mid range? And also, how might the attack of this differ from regular scythes? It can't be just water.
Raiton: The chakra made up of yellow chakra increasing the scythes penetration and to have a numbing effect upon impact. The scythe's penetration? You need to be more specific here. And alright, I understand the numbing effect, however, you need to state a limit on that, and where exactly it numbs the opponent. Entire body? Certain limbs where the scythe makes contact?
Doton: The scythe made up of brown chakra can have its weight either increased (3 times as much) or decreased (3 times as much) to either increase impact or speed, depending on the situation (only one weight change per use, meaning either use this infusion for more weight or less with each use). This makes sense, but you need a limit on how many times you can increase or decrease its weight.
Futon: The blade is made up of green chakra increasing its cutting power. Hm...well, Wind would at least be the most emphasized upon, wouldn't it? There's much more you can do with Wind than just increase its cutting power, but alright.
Normal Chakra: The scythe is made up of light blue chakra and can be dense enough to stop ninja tools and ninjutsu (Up to B rank) I grasp the concept of this, but Ninjutsu is a generic concept and I don't know how it can generally stop all Ninjutsu up to B-Rank. How would you stop killing intent or haze clones? But alright...

Snake Signing Thread

You must be registered for see links

(Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Arbok) -Summoning Technique-Arbok
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Arbok is a purple cobra that is slightly smaller than the snakes Orochimaru summons in the manga/anime. Arbok has the ability to use Genjutsu up to B rank. Arbok is most used to carry dead bodies for Korra and other people that can summon him. Arbok can carry upto 10 dead or unconscious bodies in his stomach. If he tries carry any more the 1st body that was swallow will be lost due to it being get kick out and move to Arbok stomach.(Sorry about the graphicness o.o).
Note: Must have snakes
Note: Must be taught by ~Korra~
Note: Can be summon twice a battle and can be on the field for 5 turns.

How he looks like:

Spoiler

You must be registered for see images

Declined
Alright, summons that can use Genjutsus are extremely sly. First off, ensure that this is the ONLY ability your summon can have. Secondly, can only be on the field for four turns.
Also, when your summon uses Genjutsus, you need to state the range and how many times it can use Genjutsu in a match.

Resubmitting Grim Reaper's Will but changing the concept a little bit and the name
Link to Reaper Scythe Arts Approval

You must be registered for see links

(Sishen Liandao Yishu: Shinigami no Gifuto) Reaper Scythe Arts: The Grim Reaper's Gift
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40 (-10 to sustain per turn)
Damage Points: 80
Description: Though it was develop form the elemental infusion, Korra was able to intensify the jutsu to create scythes made out of an elemental themselves. These element scythes are able to cut sharper than normal scythes. When using chakra the chakra scythes each have different effects. Theses scythes are also the length of normal scythes.
Katon: The scythe is made up of complete fire and when in contact with an opponent can produce a burning effect upon contact. The user is unaffected by the fire by covering their body in a layer of chakra to protect themselves.
Suiton: The scythe is made up water, making the scythe more flexible and can increase the length up to 3 feet. When hit by this scythe it causes irregular breathing to an opponent.
Raiton: The chakra made up of complete lightning making the scythe’s penetration greater and causes a numbing effect upon impact. User creates a protective layer of chakra to protect them.
Doton: The scythe made up of rocks which can have its weight either increased (3 times as much) or decreased (3 times as much) to either increase impact or speed, depending on the situation (only one weight change per use, meaning either use this infusion for more weight or less with each use) The scythe can also cause broken bones when being hit by.
Futon: The blade is made up of pure concreted wind increasing having an increased cutting power than normal scythes.
Note: Usable 3 time a match
Note: Must know Reaper Scythe Arts and must be taught by ~Korra~
Note: Can only have one infusion active. With earth infusion, each changing of weight counts as a use.
Note: The user can create either 1 or 2 scythes at a time but if creating two the scythes are the same element. If the user creates 1 but then wants to create another right after it still counts as another use. The scythes last while the user is holding them (dispersing if they leave his grasp) during which they consume his chakra to be sustained.

X-Pending-X Link this to Adachi, let him check to see if you've made the changes he wanted.

---

 Approved ​

Link to my Korra bio who has Snakes

You must be registered for see links

(Sunēku no shūen ) -Snake's Demise
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short- Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: The user will slam their hand on the ground that summon two snakes (the size of a normal anaconda) that come out of the ground underneath the opponent and wraps around them. The two snakes will then bite the opponent then will send a contentious pulse of lightning chakra that will make the opponent numb and finally paralyze them.
Note: The paralyzing effect kicks in after 1 turn but the numbing effect will start right away.
Note: The snakes must be biting the opponent to keep the effects lasting. If the opponent breaks free the effects wear out in 2 turns.
Note: Must be able to summon snakes.
Note: Usable 4 time a match.
Note: Must be taught by Korra

X-Declined-X Elemental snakes? why not just use a paralysing venom or something?

 

[Saikyokami]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Genjutsu : Shi no Sakkaku) - Illusionary Arts: The Illusion of Death
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Everyone, before dying see's their entire life flash before their eyes. This is what my genjutsu technique does. After forming the hand seals Dog → Rabbit → tiger, the user with begin focusing their chakra into the victim and take over the their senses, placing them in an illusion in which their entire life flashes before their eyes, all the worst memories that the vicitim had buried deep within their mind resurface, causing them to have a mental breakdown from the stress, leaving their real body incapacitated.

Restrictions:

- Only teachable by Another
- Only usable 3 times per battle.

X-Declined-X Same as murderous intent

 

[Method]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Shikotsumyaku: Kozo shifuto |Dead Bone Pulse: Structure Shift
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: -
Description: This technique allows the user to alter their skeletal structure, this is done by mixing both calcium & chakra throughout the bone & around the joints of each one to increase the amount of bone tissue produced within the layers, helping to expand in either width or length, following a similar process as to when regenerating bone but without having to build upon any damaged bone or rely on cells to remove any unnecessary tissue, instead continues to layer on around the base.
Length: The user, by continuously layering bone tissue over their joints, extends the length of their limbs by 50cm(0.5m). The user takes on a taller & slender form to their original build, having the advantage of reaching further due to the extended length of their arms & traveling distances at a somewhat quicker pace, due to the length extended around the user's legs. Having a slender build & Lengthening their structure allows the user's combat ability to rise in speed (including their reaction timing), enough to be able to catch any non doujutsu user off guard with little time to react , but strength & defense are decreased(Strength -5)(Opponent's Taijutsu +5).
Width: By layering bone tissue around the whole of the user's bones they take on a much broader build, with their chest & shoulders only slightly widening but arms & legs having a more significant change. The user's strength increases dramatically (Strength +10) & opponent's Taijutsu decreases(-10), but while in this form the user moves at a much slower pace than average, being able to mainly react to attacks from a frontal assault & having to stay purely focused on their surroundings to attempt to react from behind(if noticed). Expanding the width of limbs & manipulating the density of the bone allows normal weapons to have no affect against the bones.
With either form taken Kaguya melee jutsu also alter in size or shape e.g in length Kaguya techniques such as those that create swords, spears, whips or protruding bones extend by the same length as that of the limbs, but also take on a thinner form to "match" the user's speed(Kaguya melee Jutsu used decrease by -5), while in width Kaguya techniques expand to a larger size but also match the user's decreased speed (Kaguya melee Jutsu noted increase by +10). Partial shifting allows The user to only manipulate certain limbs described rather than the whole body, having only the said limb effected.
Having a vast amount of chakra spread throughout the body (not including Partial Shifting), the user, while in either form, may only use jutsu A Rank & below.
The user is able to shift their whole structure from either length or width but still counts as 1 move & cannot combine affects together.
- Using a partial shift still counts as a whole jutsu.
- Only usable once
- lasts 5 turns
- After 5 turns the user is unable to use S/F Rank jutsu for 2 turns.
- Only usable by Kaguya bios.
- Only teachable by Method

X-Declined-X Bolded region is vague. Remove partial shifting and make it a seperate technique if you want. How does it improve reaction time?

 

[Tsuki]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Katon: Uragiri kasai) - Fire release: Betraying fire
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user manipulates a portion or the entirety of an already existing fire, draining from its power making it form, shape and move as the user wants. The power of the fire manipulated is drained from the already existing fire, this means that if the already existing fire is of S-rank then using this technique would lower the already existing fire to become of C-rank power. If the already existing fire is of B-rank then the user basically manipulates all of it. The already existing fire must be of a distance of up to mid range from the user, however, the manipulated fire can only move to short range from its original source. This means that the manipulated fire can reach up to to long range from the user.

Note: The already existing fire cannot be C-rank or below
Note: Only usable twice per battle
Note: Must be taught by -Tsuki

________________________________________________
 Declined  DNR.

(Jishuteki kage) - Independent shadow
Type: Defensive/Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user performs the rat handseal then separates their own shadow from themselves which allows the shadow to no longer be linked to the user’s body. The shadow keeps a humanoid form and the user manipulates the shadow to move around the terrain for their own advantage. During the process of manipulating it, it will be up to the user weather the shadow will have shape (using shape manipulation on it so that it becomes physical) or keep it in the form of a non-shaped shadow. When having shape it can also use freeform.
Because of the user being separated from their own shadow, they will not be capable of using any shadow technique that requires them to extend their own shadow. They will still be capable of using techniques such as Shadow Imitation Shuriken because it does not rely on extending the user’s shadow. While the shadow is separated from the user’s body, it can use shadow techniques that requires it to extend its own shadow such as Shadow Imitation.
When the user does not have his shadow attached to him then no shadow binding techniques can be used against him because he doesn’t have any shadow (bound to him). This jutsu ends when the independent shadow uses 3 shadow techniques, when it gets defeated or if the user simply decides to return it back to himself. It will then get back to the user as it should be (= as a normal shadow anyone has).

Note: Lasts for up to 3 turns (with the conditions in the jutsu description included)
Note: Techniques used by the independent shadow counts as a move to the user
Note: Only usable once per fight
Note: Must be taught by -Tsuki

________________________________________________
 Declined  link to Nara clan bio and training?

(Futon no joryoku) - Wind Release of assistance
Type: Defensive/Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: C-rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: Creates minor shields of condensed wind chakra and small tools made by using condensed wind chakra. If they are made to be stationary and non-movable from their place in the air then they must only be at short range from the user. This technique is similar to Suton no Jutsu and Doton no Jutsu but with wind. Things made by this technique will be possible to see with normal eyes but will require the person focus more when looking at them

Note: Usable once every second turn
Note: Must be taught by -Tsuki

________________________________________________
 Declined  DNR. Made already

Resubmitting Independent shadow (with link to the nara clan bio and training thread).
Link to Nara clan bio:

You must be registered for see links

Training thread:

You must be registered for see links

(Jishuteki kage) - Independent shadow
Type: Defensive/Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user performs the rat handseal then separates their own shadow from themselves which allows the shadow to no longer be linked to the user’s body. The shadow keeps a humanoid form and the user manipulates the shadow to move around the terrain for their own advantage. During the process of manipulating it, it will be up to the user weather the shadow will have shape (using shape manipulation on it so that it becomes physical) or keep it in the form of a non-shaped shadow. When having shape it can also use freeform.
Because of the user being separated from their own shadow, they will not be capable of using any shadow technique that requires them to extend their own shadow. They will still be capable of using techniques such as Shadow Imitation Shuriken because it does not rely on extending the user’s shadow. While the shadow is separated from the user’s body, it can use shadow techniques that requires it to extend its own shadow such as Shadow Imitation.
When the user does not have his shadow attached to him then no shadow binding techniques can be used against him because he doesn’t have any shadow (bound to him). This jutsu ends when the independent shadow uses 3 shadow techniques, when it gets defeated or if the user simply decides to return it back to himself. It will then get back to the user as it should be (= as a normal shadow anyone has).

Note: Lasts for up to 3 turns (with the conditions in the jutsu description included)
Note: Techniques used by the independent shadow counts as a move to the user
Note: Only usable once per fight
Note: Must be taught by -Tsuki

________________________________________________
 Declined  DNR.


(Taibu Kage mane Shuriken) - Greater Shadow Imitation Shuriken
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Similarly to Shadow Imitation Shuriken, the user infuses their kunai with shadow chakra but with a greater amount then throws it at a shadow, hitting it, causing that shadow's owner to be trapped. As the kunai lands on the targeted shadow the user performs one handseal causing the majority of the shadow chakra infused in the kunai to take control over the trapped shadow. This allows the user to manipulate that shadow in a similar manner as Shadow Sewing, forming shadow needles that can move the opponent or impale them.

Note: Usable 3 times per battle
Note: The shadow infused kunai can only be thrown up to mid range while the trapped shadow can move up to mid range from its original place. This means that the jutsu in general can reach up to long range if the kunai is thrown to mid range from the user.
Note: Must be taught by -Tsuki

Link to Nara clan bio:

You must be registered for see links

Training thread:

You must be registered for see links

________________________________________________
 Declined  DNR.

Summoning Animal: Roadrunner
Scroll Owner: -Tsuki
Other Users who have signed contract:
Summoning Boss if existing:
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:
Description and Background: Roadrunners are speedy ground birds who lives in deserts, grasslands, and woodlands. It does not fly very often, prefering to run at great speed. When the roadrunner senses danger or is traveling downhill, it flies, revealing short, rounded wings with a white crescent. But it cannot keep its large body airborne for a long time, and so prefers walking or running.
The feathers on the top part of its body are greenish- and bluish-brown streaked with white; on the bottom part, they are completely white. The head has a crest of feathers. Behind each eye there is a patch of bare skin that is partly bluish and partly reddish. On the roadrunner's back there is a dark patch of skin that the bird exposes to the sun to warm its body during cold weather.
Well-adapted to arid habitats, the roadrunner has glands near its eyes that it uses to secrete excess salt. It can survive without drinking water, as long as it consumes prey with high water content.

Anyone who signs the contract will receive this tattoo:

You must be registered for see images

X-Pending-X Leaving for scorps

________________________________________________
 Approved  Nice animal

 

[Ciberr]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Suiton: Tsubo) - Water Release: Pressure Points

Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Type: Supplementary
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: Once the target is caught in a water prison, or any water technique that traps the target within it, the user would perform 2 hand seals and focus his chakra to certain points in the water to increase the pressure and density of that certain points, for example the user could increase the pressure of the water at set points like around the neck, putting pressure on the neck to choke the target, this technique could also be used to increase points in a jutsu like water bullet to increase its power and force.

Note - Can only be used 3 times per battle
- Gives a +10 damage when the points are used to increase the power and force of a technique
- The maximum size of the points are the size of a clenched fist
- Can only be taught by Ciberr

X-Declined-X Be real

(Suiton: Shishi ya shi seifuku ) - Water Release: Beast Palm subjugation

Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Type: Offensive
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user performs a set of 3 hand seals and focuses water release chakra along the sides of his opponent, water would then materialize in the shape of large beast paws ranging from 2 meters to 5 meters all round, then with the clicking of the users fingers the claws would come together rather quickly, trapping the target and imprisoning him/her within the water and restricting their movements, the impact of paws colliding would feel like 2 concrete blocks colliding.

Note - Can only be used twice per battle
- The impact of the beasts paws coming together is rather powerful, so it might knock the target out cold before trapping them
- Lasts as long as the user focuses on the technique
- No water above A Rank in the same turn and the following
- Can only be taught by Ciberr

X-Declined-X Requires a water source

(Suiton: Jishin Shinku Ana)- Water Release: Seismic Sink Hole
Rank: A Rank
Range: Short - Mid
Type: Offensive
Chakra:30
Damage: 60
Description: The user performs 3 hand seals while in contact with any water surface spreading his water chakra throughout the water. After the hand seals are completed the user stomps his foot causing a powerful vibration to erupt from beneath the water surface in the ground below. By displacing the user's water chakra in multiple places through the water source. The user will clap his hands creating multiple pockets of water under within the water. This pockets are extremely deep and act as sink holes when a vibration or direct movement crosses it's radius. The pockets are about 5 meters in diameter and there range stretches about 2 meters in every direction. Picking up movement in all directions and collapsing in all directions. Sucking the opponent or who ever is on the pocket or within it's range to fall to the depths of that water source. The pockets are easily detectable by their darkened color do to the direct passage to the bottom of the water source
Note: Only works on water sources. (Lakes, Oceans, Rivers)
Note: Can affect the user
Note: Maximum of 4 pockets can be created per turn
Note: Pockets last 2 turns
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle and can't be used consecutively
Note: Only works on water surfaces
Note: Can only be taught by Ciberr

X-Declined-X Rivers will simply overflow with water, Lakes i get, but oceans? Improve the description a bit as well

 

[Black Butler]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Ranton: Shisso kame bōei ) - Storm Release: Spartan Tortoise Defense
Rank: S
Type: Defense/ Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:
Using the advanced nature of Storm Release, the user will swiftly complete 2 handseals while manipulating their Storm chakra. An assortment of Storm will start to release from their hands quickly surrounding the user forming an almost impenetrable bubble of sort at first glance. This part of the jutsu can be used to defend the user from attacks or blunt force from all around the user. If necessary, the user can complete another handseal as in a sequence, causing the bubble to shape itself into that of an assortment of Spartan shields that forms 360 degree protection around the user or they can manipulate it to a desired section around them. Along with the shields also comes an assortment of Spartan spears that erupt stabbing anything within close range of the jutsu. This gives off the total defense of a Spartan army that specializes in rare combat, that defends first with a blunt attack, then counterattacks with precision and speed.
Note: The first stage of this technique gives the user complete protection from all angles at the cost of not being able to move or do any other jutsu
Note: The second stage of this technique attacks and gives defense to all angles except for the ground
Note: the user must stay stationary in order for this technique to work or they’ll be interrupted
Note: If only using the first part of the jutsu, the user cant use any Storm Techniques A-rank or above next turn, if the second part is used, the user can’t use B-Rank or above Storm Techniques for the next 2 turns
Note: Usuable 2 times per battle
Note: Must be taught by Darui..

You must be registered for see images

X-Declined-X A bubble of laser? and it cant be impenetrable

 

[Never]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Resubmitting :

(Kage no monsutā) - Shadow Monster
Type: Offense/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:
The user focuses their shadow and manipulates it into the shape of a huge monster (usually an animal or creature that suits themselves) behind them that is about three times bigger than the user. The shadow can move and make attacks at their enemy by reaching over the user by stretching the shadow and making simple physical attacks that are more powerful than a human, the monster can punch the ground and is able to make small craters in the ground and it is able to perform simple jabs and hook attacks at the enemy or other objects, the huge monster is able to do this because instead of it having the arms of an animal they have the arms of a human and so have fists.
The shadow does not have legs but only connects with the users shadow so can only move wherever the user moves. It can defend the user by using it's own body as a shield, of course damaging it's self.

-No Shadow techniques can be used whilst this is active
-Can only be used twice a battle
-The Shadow Monster lasts three turns
-Can only be taught by LonelyAssassin

Spoiler

You must be registered for see images

________________________________________________
 Declined  Description is a mishmash. Use sentences and not only "and x, and Y, and z, and and and and, , , , , , ,". The concept of it being connected to the user also limits its a lot but ok...but you need a chakra cost per turn!

New Submissions :

Summoning Technique : Itaku the Swift
Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description:
Itaku is a lot bigger than most Fishers, though he isn't the biggest. He is about the size of the average human, but a lot faster and spends most of his time standing up. Like Buck, Itaku carries a weapon with him a Katana that is strapped to his back, he also has a Bamboo Baton strapped to his back. Itaku has light brown fur and long spiked back grey hair, he wears clothing unlike other Fishers and he also wears a traditional attire which consists of a standard grey martial arts like uniform, consisting of a Jibei Top and Hakama Pants. Over this he wears a dark blue sleeveless Haori which is tied to a fitting with a black obi sash. On his arms, he wears armguards which protect his forearms in battle, as well as a purplish bandanna on his left arm, similar to the one tied around his head. He can communicate clearly with his master and is very respectful.

Itaku is a master of Kenjutsu and Ninjutsu, though he knows no Elemental Ninjutsu.
-Can only be summoned once per battle
-Can only be on the battlefield for 4 turns

You must be registered for see links

Spoiler

You must be registered for see images

________________________________________________
 Declined  Incorrect chakra cost.

(Futon : Ken koramuburasuto) - Wind Release : Sword Column Blast
Type: Offense
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description:
The user channels their wind chakra into their sword, it can be stored there until released. When the wind is released it is blasted out of the volume of the whole blade of the sword, this can be utilized in a way to deflect incoming projectiles. The problem this technique may have is when the user is holding it and can blast themselves if the blade of the sword isn't angled properly. This can also be used for a final kill when the blade is stabbed into their opponent they can blast the wind to make them explode from the inside out.

Restrictions :
-This technique can only be used once per turn

________________________________________________
 Declined  Similar to existing techniques. DNR

Resubmitting :

Summoning Technique : Itaku the Swift
Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description:
Itaku is a lot bigger than most Fishers, though he isn't the biggest. He is about the size of the average human, but a lot faster and spends most of his time standing up. Like Buck, Itaku carries a weapon with him a Katana that is strapped to his back, he also has a Bamboo Baton strapped to his back. Itaku has light brown fur and long spiked back grey hair, he wears clothing unlike other Fishers and he also wears a traditional attire which consists of a standard grey martial arts like uniform, consisting of a Jibei Top and Hakama Pants. Over this he wears a dark blue sleeveless Haori which is tied to a fitting with a black obi sash. On his arms, he wears armguards which protect his forearms in battle, as well as a purplish bandanna on his left arm, similar to the one tied around his head. He can communicate clearly with his master and is very respectful.

Itaku is a master of Kenjutsu and Ninjutsu, though he knows no Elemental Ninjutsu.
-Can only be summoned once per battle
-Can only be on the battlefield for 4 turns

You must be registered for see links

Spoiler

You must be registered for see images

X-Declined-X He cant use all ninjutsu, specify the type of ninjutsu it could use. Like Clone techniques, hair techniques etc

(Kage no monsutā) - Shadow Monster
Type: Offense/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40 (+10 each turn active)
Damage Points: 80
Description:
The user focuses their shadow and manipulates it into the shape of a huge monster (usually an animal or creature that suits themselves) behind them that is about three times bigger than the user. The shadow can move and make attacks at their enemy by reaching over the user by stretching the shadow and making simple physical attacks that are more powerful than a human, the monster can punch the ground and is able to make small craters in the ground, it is able to perform simple jabs and hook attacks at the enemy or other objects, the huge monster is able to do this because instead of it having the arms of an animal they have the arms of a human and so have fists.
The shadow does not have legs but only connects with the users shadow so can only move wherever the user moves. It can defend the user by using it's own body as a shield, of course damaging its self.

-No Shadow techniques can be used whilst this is active
-Can only be used twice a battle
-The Shadow Monster lasts three turns
-Can only be taught by LonelyAssassin

Spoiler

You must be registered for see images

X-Declined-X This wont work mate...
New Submission :

(Doton : Asashinsupaiku) - Earth Release : Assassin's Spikes
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description:
The user channels his doton chakra into the ground and creates long thin sharp spikes behind the opponent, though they rise from the ground at a slow rate, making no kind of noise or change in the earth. Three spikes are created, the main spike is aimed at the opponents back of neck and when it reaches a couple of centimetres away from it, the spike shoots forward with a quick burst of speed, skewering the neck and killing the opponent. The other two spikes do the same but aimed at the back of the knee and skewer straight through immobilizing the target; the bottom two spikes skewer the opponent first to immobilise them.

-Can only be used twice per battle.

X-Declined -X Existing technique

 

[Mockingbird]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Fuuton: Materiaru Hai) Wind Release: Material High
Rank: A
Type: Offensive / Defensive
Range: Short – Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will begin by imbuing their chakra into the surrounding air, compressing and manipulating it to take on different shapes and forms including but not limited to circles, triangles, cubes, cylinders, so on and so forth. This technique is similar to the Wind Style: Rasengan in that it also emphasizes power, rotation and containment. The wind used in this technique is composed of innumerable razor sharp, microscopic wind blades packed together in such a way that they move in multiple directions and grind against each other in a continuous flux, all while maintaining a specific form; The difference between the two lies in the emphasis on shape transformation. Because Material High can take on several forms, it can be applied in battle in several ways, and considerably more often than the Rasengan. To emphasize, depending on the user’s style, one could create and maneuver circular, paper thin wire like blades to slice through or bifurcate certain obstacles. Additionally, one could form cubes or prism’s to use as jumping blocks, stepping stones or even a defensive shield. These shields can also just as easily be used as a cage or prison to hold enemies of varying sizes. The shapes can be hollow, ‘solid’ through and through, or a combination in between where it is hollow in the center but solid the rest of the way through. These constructs can be materialized and manipulated in all ranges; However they produce a loud, roaring sound, like the howling of un-tamed wind and as such, are easily noticeable through hearing. The wind used in this technique is also transparent, but is easily visible to the naked eye and is recognized as having a light, grayish color. As a result of being so compressed, the wind takes on a more “solid,” tangible state than is ordinary, and can therefore tear through stone and a majority of solid objects, including doton jutsu up to A Rank. This is similar to the way that concentrated fire can punch through concrete walls. When used offensively, the constructs can be used as projectile weapons to deal powerful concussive or blunt force damage – For example, forming a large cylindrical construct above an enemy and having it fall on them would squash them flat. When used defensively, the constructs can be formed in such a way that the winds spread and re-distribute oncoming force along the faces of said construct, virtually absorbing damage. As a result, the barriers are practically impervious to damage from attacks of a weaker rank (with the exception of fire based attacks). The constructs are easily capable of mincing whatever they come into contact with when used either offensively or defensively – It is a quality this jutsu possesses regardless of how it is used. There is no minimum size for the objects; However the maximum size is equivalent to that of a grown Gamakichi. Additionally, there is no specific amount of constructs that can be formed. This technique follows the same guidelines as the Earth Flow Spears technique in that the amount of constructs created will always remain within reason for the rank of the technique. However, this also means that the size of each object is proportional to how many there are. Therefore the more objects that the user creates the smaller and weaker each individual one.

*This technique can be used five times per battle.
*The user must wait two full turns in between uses of this technique.
*The user cannot use any other Fuuton jutsu in the same turn and cannot use Fuuton above A Rank in the following turn.
*While the user can create a variety of forms, these forms are limited to basic geometric shapes.

X-Declined-X And if Rasenshuriken requires the assitance of clones. How does this work without any?

(Ototon: Noizu Kyanseringu) Sound Release: Noise Cancelling
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will begin by releasing relatively weak, omnidirectional sound waves from their body that propagate throughout the surrounding area. These sound waves are of a low frequency and are not initially physically harmful, even sounding like a melodious sonata. Instead the sound waves appeal to the opponent(s) sense of hearing and being laced with the user’s chakra, instigate a controlled synesthetic reaction. The opponent’s brain with automatically, involuntarily register the sound and associate it with relaxed feelings of happiness and euphoria. As a result, the sound will lull anyone who hears it into a peaceful, lethargic, trance like state. This is similar in principle to Genjutsu and the way chakra can be used to appeal to and manipulate an opponent’s senses, though this technique should by no means be confused with Genjutsu. As time goes on, the ubiquitous sound waves periodically change frequency, becoming increasingly powerful and more compressed as time goes on. As a result of the compression they undergo, the sound pressure becomes so great that it actually produces significant shock waves that strike while the opponent is without the energy to defend. The produced shockwaves eventually accumulate enough power to break down even the most resilient of solid barriers. Although the shockwaves break through solid obstacles, it should also be noted that the sound can propagate ‘through’ objects as well. For example, if an opponent was protected by an armor of some sort, the pressure waves would compress that very armor around their body and crush them to a pulp inside as opposed to physically breaking through said defense. Additionally, if the sound were to encounter a water source (specifically a large one) it would create massive waves as a result of the sound pressure. The process of effectively using this jutsu is relatively swift, contrary to the impression given off by the description. After five seconds, the released sound waves will undergo compression and become physically harmful.

*This technique can only be used twice per battle.
*The user cannot use any techniques above S Rank in the same turn.
* The user cannot utilize any other Ototon techniques in the same, or following two turns.

X-Declined-X Overpowered.

(Doton/Katon: Moyuru Daichi no Gō) Earth/Fire Release: Karma of the Burning Land
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid - Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 [-15 to the user]
Description: The user will begin by slamming their hands on the ground, channeling and pooling their Katon chakra and creating a fissure in the earth. The chasm spews powerful, condensed flames that as a result of the produced heat, cook the ground through and through – As a result, anyone who flees underground during the duration of this technique will also burn alive. The high temperatures sub-sequentially ignite the rock and other minerals in the earth resulting in the formation of an extremely hot ball of flames above the chakra focal point. The user will employ shape transformation to compress and maintain the fireball, which unlike ordinary fire, does not smoke as a result of its combustion. Instead, because of the burning earth, it creates oxides that are less dense that the surrounding air as it burns, resulting in the formation of a natural vacuum that ‘sucks’ the surrounding air into itself. As a testament to its strength, the fire is capable of uprooting and pulling trees – and anything else within short range radius - into itself as well as being large enough completely incinerate something as big as a boss level summon; Albeit the bigger something is, the longer it takes to burn. Because of the suction, the user themselves must be careful to maintain a safe distance at all time. The heat produced by the burning of the earth is such that it will evaporate surrounding water sources and is completely unaffected by suiton jutsu of A Rank and below. The flames burn for one full turn if not extinguished prior. After burning out, the fire leaves behind a large crater and scorches the earth immediately surrounding it.

*This technique can be used once per battle.
*The user can only use one other technique in the same turn and can't use techniques above S Rank in the following turn.
*The user cannot use Katon or Doton in the following turn.

X-Declined-X Existing technique

 

[Delta]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Long Sword of the Demon Blacksmith (Muramasa no tachi)
Type: Weapon
Weapon rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost(s):
-30/turn the sword is unsheathed.
-30/Quickdraw used
Damage Chart:
Quickdraw(Short range)-A rank, 60
Quickdraw with a movement enhancing technique-S rank. 80
Description: Muramasa no tachi (Muramasa for short), is a modern sword named after the famous blacksmith, Muramasa. Although not crafted by Muramasa himself, the sword is his living legacy heavily emphasizing on attack strength. Opposite of most weapons, the blade is not ancient neither imbued with any magical forces. Instead it combines the Muramasa’s own sword crafting skills with a hint of modern ninjutsu & kenjutsu techniques to generate effective strikes with overwhelming damage output.
The sword is a “Tachi” not a Katana, with chakra receptors all around the hilt that manage inflow and outflow of energy across the sword and the user (general electrical energy from lightning release, but may involve other elements if used with a Custom jutsu). The hilt includes a switch the activates the receptors allowing the user to freely channel energy across the sword and his body. The sword is a vibroweapon, a high frequency blade similar to the ones used by Kirabi and Sasuke, meaning that it uses electrical energy to generate molecular vibration which, on physical contact, breaks the molecular bonds of other matter allowing the blade to effortlessly cut through objects. Murasama’s ancient sword development techniques were used to design the blade which makes it highly conductive, the different layers of alloy makes use of the peltier effect to keep the heat energy at the swords core without radiating any outside, the reduced loss of energy combined with the continuous supply of lightning chakra from the user soon charges the blade, changing its color to red. The sword leaks out electrical electrical energy of red wavelength, the red color is an indicator of the abnormal amount of energy flowing through the blade which allows Muramasa to cut objects better more easily than any other weapon known. The cutting potential of the sword could be defined with examples, Flying Swallow technique and both Sasuke and B’s vibroblades are able to pierce through steel with their weapons, Muramasa only takes this ability further effortless piercing through diamond, further more making it extremely lethal for person if hit directly by blade.
However this attack strength, abnormal as it may be, isn’t Muramasa’s primary ability. Muramasa’s main feature is its sheath: where the sword helps maximize the cutting ability, the sheath helps the user muster enough strength, this means while Muramasa has the potential to cut through diamond, it is unable to without the proper input of force. Unique to the sheath is its ability to store energy for burst damage when unsheathed, its features a trigger which when released would launch the blade outside for a single “Quickdraw” technique, which provides the necessary strength to perform such a powerful slash. The Quickdraw technique is Muramasa’s signature skill, when released the blade is launched out of the sheath like a ballistic shot which allows a swift Iaido strike extremely difficult to track within close proximity. The technique would however possess a downside in precision, because of the speed of this technique the single strike wouldn’t land if used either a second early or a second late. Quickdraw skill generates great force, combined with the piercing ability of the blade it allows great feats for both offense and defense. I.e. If the Quickdraw ability is used to slice through an earthen projectile aimed at the user, Muramasa would slice cleanly through the projectile, but the force granted by the sheath will be enough to alter the trajectory of the projectile and divide it to move past the user without harm. For intangible objects, such as Wind or Water, the strike force will distort the shape. The Quickdraw skill ensures that the blade destroys anything with the potential to be harmed (With the exception of Indestructible objects and anything else within reason, the ability is not absolute), the damage is further enhanced if combined with techniques that allow extreme movement such as the Lightning release armour or Swift release Shadowless Flight technique due velocity multiplying force. The sheath is capable of holding other forms of Chakra and electric isn’t the only type of energy that can be channeled through the sword allowing it to be used for the user's other elemental CJ.
Note: The sword is indestructible. Quickdraw skill may only be used in alternating turns allowing a cooldown time for sheath to recharge.
-Appearance:

You must be registered for see links

&

You must be registered for see links

.

X-Approved-X Do me a favor ._. Summarize the details next time.
EDIT: Pending. I'll edit
EDIT AGAIN: Changed pieces of description, when reading it again i releazied it really isnt as abusive as it might appear at first glance never the less, the parts that were vague and showed potential of abuse have been clearified. The weapon is overall nerfed, wont be changed, no exceptions. However if you wish to spend an additional CJ slot of yours, you're free to retry the original version of Quickdraw as a form of advanced version to the technique linked to this sword. Given that you could carefuly phrase that reaction time thing and explain it better.

(Meiton: Kuro Baindingu) Dark Release: Dark Binding
Type: Offensive
Rank: B rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will begin by channeling his dark chakra into the ground. This can be done with direct contact with the ground or by using a medium like a sword or a large rock, as long as the item is connected directly to the ground and the users dark release symbol. Once done the user will form dark tendrils to form in the ground beneath the opponent. Shortly after formed they will silently and quickly rise up from the ground and wrap around the opponents ankles, wrists and neck. The tendrils look like a long chain of diamonds linked at the tip. Once they grab the opponent they will begin to burn the users body parts if they are exposed. By using chakra manipulation the user will then cause the tendrils to lift the opponent into the air hold their arms and legs apart from each other. the tendrils will then begin to sap the opponents chakra, as this is happening the tendrils will become stronger and increase their hold on the opponent, if left unstopped the tendrils can in time snap the opponents bones or break there neck with ease.

Can only be used 3 times per battle
Doesnt require constant connection to the ground.
Can only be taught by Delta

X-Declined-X Diamond tipped? How will the tendrils strengthen? an improvement in rank? At what rate do they suck chakra

 

[Lucifer]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Katon: Ryūjin no Kōen) - Fire Style: Dragon God's Brilliant Flame
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: This technique permits the user to generating a highly destructive blast that is capable of destroying a large area, due to the highly unstable concentration of chakra utilized. This technique is performed by engulfing one hand in flames, and the other as well. While engulfing both hands in flames, the user will jump into the air and combine both of the flames together, the highly unstable flames after making contact with each other expand torwards the desired target. The expansion of this technique is very swift it happens in a single motion, which is hard to counter. Thus after guiding the combined force of the unstable flames torwards the targets, the practitioner will clap both of their hands together to create an highly explosive combination of both flames that engulf the targerts from right & left. After bringing both hands together, the two combined flames will make an massive explosion leaving a huge crater behind. It also evaporates any substance(s) present on the battlefield from, such as water, mud, slim etc. due to the high amount of heat utilized by this technique, being even greater than Zukokku.

Note: This technique can only be taught by Lucifer.
Note: The user cannot perform any fire techniques the following two turns.
Note: The user cannot use any wind techniques in the same turn as this jutsu.

‡ Declined ‡ why must people always say "very fast" or some variation, but not give a workable explanation, if you want this approved, state how long it takes to form, or give a comparison to a cannon jutsu

Re-submission: gave a comparison to a cannon jutsu.

(Katon: Ryūjin no Kōen) - Fire Style: Dragon God's Brilliant Flame
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: This technique permits the user to generating a highly destructive blast that is capable of destroying a large area, due to the highly unstable concentration of chakra utilized. This technique is performed by engulfing one hand in flames, and the other as well. While engulfing both hands in flames, the user will jump into the air and combine both of the flames together, the highly unstable flames after making contact with each other expand torwards the desired target. The expansion of this technique is very swift it happens in a single motion, which is hard to counter. Thus after guiding the combined force of the unstable flames torwards the targets, the practitioner will clap both of their hands together to create an highly explosive combination of both flames that engulf the targerts from right & left. After bringing both hands together, the two combined flames will make an massive explosion leaving a huge crater behind. It also evaporates any substance(s) present on the battlefield from, such as water, mud, slim etc. due to the high amount of heat utilized by this technique, being even greater than Zukokku. This technique is roughly on the same scale as the Chou Oudama Rasengan, thought after the expansion has been made.

Note: This technique can only be taught by Lucifer.
Note: The user cannot perform any fire techniques the following two turns.
Note: The user cannot use any wind techniques in the same turn as this jutsu.

________________________________________________
 Declined  Description doesn't make sense...The part about surrounding the enemy and what not and how this is ultra fast and etc...no

 

[Penguin]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Name: Nyoi-bō - Power Pole
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The Power Pole is a pole made of the hardest wood on earth, and it was tempered with so it would have insanely high durability. Then after it was tempered with, someone painted the pole red but the person who did it has died so no one knows who he is. The abilities of the Power Pole are quite rare some would say. While only being 2 meters in length, the wielder can infuse some of his chakra in the pole to make it extend to 10 or 25 meters in length, about medium or long range from the opponent.

- Can only be used/taught by Penguin2640


Name: Nyoi-bō Nobasu - Power Pole Extend
Rank: S
Type: Offensive / Supplementry
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80 (short range) | 60 (med range) | 40 (long range)
Description: When one wields the Nyoi-bō and infuses his/her chakra into it, the pole grows longer at an alarming rate, barely visible to the naked eye. Since it is extended at such speed, the impact is enough to injure an opponent severely when hit in short range which also pushes the opponent into medium range, when hit in med range the opponent will feel some internal damage but not lethal and the opponent will be pushed back in long range, and if hit in long range the opponent will get minor bruises and scrapes.

- Can only be used/taught by Penguin2640

________________________________________________
 Both Declined  DNR.

 

[Rozzy]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Katon&Doton: Dekai Iwa-Nenshou Torune| Fire&Earth Style style: Colossal Cinder Torando
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Medium - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: After a fire has been doused and cinders are remaining. The user builds up and channels his fire chakara into the cinders to increase the heat. If the user does not manipulate these burning cinders within 2 turns the cinders will cool, crumble and will not be able to use them. The cinders size vary from pebbles to rocks the size of a fist. Once the fire chakara increase the heat the user then stops channeling his fire chakara and uses his earth chakara manipulate the cinders movements as they are composed of earth, then preforms the Snake, Bird, Ox and Ram hand signs to create a huge cinder tornado (about the same size as Gamabunta) directed towards the target.
-Can only be used twice per battle
-User cannot use S rank fire and earth techniques on the same and next turn
-This jutsu counts as two of the three moves

Spoiler

Katon: Putto-Auto | Fire style: Douse
Type: Fire
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A (30 if falls on)
Description: If a static fire is lingering nearby on the ground. The user preforms the tiger hand-sign and channels his chakara into the fire and releases most of its entities through great chakara control and douses the fire in one second leaving burning cinders, also known as red-hot rocks, laying on the ground from the fire. If someone falls on these it deals moderate burns. This may only be used if the fire is not being manipulated by anyone on the battle field. The user cannot use this technique to douse an incoming fire attack.
Note: Can only be taught be ShikamarUchiha10
Note: The fire can only be put out if its caused by a A rank or lower fire attack

You must be registered for see links

________________________________________________
 Declined  in detention

 

[Gutsy]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Tenpi-Faia Ke-pu) – Sunfire Cloak
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This black cloak is a very unique construction of special fibers and special metal. This cloak is not only designed to cover the user’s body and face, and conceal their movements, it is also created with a unique ability; it can “catch” fire. The cloak itself was created with a very unique fiber material which is incredible durable and strong, essentially making the cloak able to resist and prevent the user from catching fire, due to the cloak being constructed with the unique and tightly made fiber which literally suffocates the fire, by taking out all the oxygen which fuels the fire, and essentially extinguishing the fire. The tightly made fiber material also makes it more difficult for regular weapons such as kunai and shuriken to cut through the cloak itself. Besides the cloak being constructed of such a unique fiber, it has thin square symbols all around it; these are all thin lines of special metal which has been specially made for the purpose of absorbing heat. This makes the cloak able to gather a large amount of heat, whereas the thin lines of aluminum will begin to glow a bright yellow color, and due to the super heat on the outside of the cloak, it will when coming into contact with an opponent be able to deliver third degree burns to the area which it touches. In worst case scenarios, the super-heated cloak can deliver a devastating blow in the form of setting the opponent on fire when it touches them, though the cloak has to be fully heated to do so.
Note: The Cloak is indestructible
Note: The small fiber glass is capable of absorbing the heat comparable to an A-rank fire technique
Note: The Cloak itself is capable of suffocating a fire technique equal to that of C-rank
Note: When the cloak is super-heated it will when coming into contact with a water technique of equal to B-rank or below, turn the entire water source into a cloud of steam
Note: The super-heated cloak gives the user a distinct advantage within taijutsu, as his cloak will hurt the opponent when they touch it.
Note: The absorption of a fire technique counts towards the users 3 moves
Note: Can only be wielded by Gutsy Jiraiya

Dropping (CW - First post):

You must be registered for see links

________________________________________________
 Declined  And indestructible fire cloak? >_> How can a cloak be a weapon? Tempted to DNR this...

Resubmitting:
Note: Removed the indestructibility, and I changed the type of the CW to an Armor seeing it is a cloak yet it protects the user with the way it is created with metal and such. Do not quite understand if there is any other issues besides that.

(Tenpi-Faia Ke-pu) – Sunfire Cloak
Rank: S
Type: Armor
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This black cloak is a very unique construction of special fibers and special metal. This cloak is not only designed to cover the user’s body and face, and conceal their movements, it is also created with a unique ability; it can “catch” fire. The cloak itself was created with a very unique fiber material which is incredible durable and strong, essentially making the cloak able to resist and prevent the user from catching fire, due to the cloak being constructed with the unique and tightly made fiber which literally suffocates the fire, by taking out all the oxygen which fuels the fire, and essentially extinguishing the fire. The tightly made fiber material also makes it more difficult for regular weapons such as kunai and shuriken to cut through the cloak itself. Besides the cloak being constructed of such a unique fiber, it has thin square symbols all around it; these are all thin lines of special metal which has been specially made for the purpose of absorbing heat. This makes the cloak able to gather a large amount of heat, whereas the thin lines of aluminum will begin to glow a bright yellow color, and due to the super heat on the outside of the cloak, it will when coming into contact with an opponent be able to deliver third degree burns to the area which it touches. In worst case scenarios, the super-heated cloak can deliver a devastating blow in the form of setting the opponent on fire when it touches them, though the cloak has to be fully heated to do so.
Note: The small fiber glass is capable of absorbing the heat comparable to an A-rank fire technique
Note: The Cloak itself is capable of suffocating a fire technique equal to that of C-rank
Note: When the cloak is super-heated it will when coming into contact with a water technique of equal to B-rank or below, turn the entire water source into a cloud of steam
Note: The super-heated cloak gives the user a distinct advantage within taijutsu, as his cloak will hurt the opponent when they touch it.
Note: The absorption of a fire technique counts towards the users 3 moves
Note: Can only be wielded by Gutsy Jiraiya

________________________________________________
 Declined  You changed it to an armor yet there is no "armor" in the type section of the template of a CJ. You still kept what it is as a cloak which is the part that doesn't make a shred of sense. DNR.

(Suiton: Ion no Jokyo) – Water Release: Removal of Ion
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique is a highly advanced water jutsu which was created to fight users who have specialized in lightning release. When the user has performed a water jutsu for offensive or defensive use, or there is an existing water source, the user will aim his hand out releasing his chakra into his own technique or water source. The user will then while focusing on the water and its particles, make the chakra he poured into the water attach to the very particles within the water, more specifically the Ion particles. After the chakra have attached to the Ion particles, the user will pull his arm back, ripping his chakra out of the water that he just implemented into it, and when ripping the chakra out, the chakra will force the Ion particles to leave the water. This is called deionization, which results in the removal of Ions from the water, which causes the water’s resistivity to be increased. When the water’s resistivity is increased, the water will be deionized which allows it, to be used as a coolant in direct contact with high voltage electrical techniques. Because of the waters newly gained high relative dielectric constant, it is incapable of conducting lightning.
Note: May only be used twice per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Gutsy Jiraiya
Note: This technique can only be used on S-rank and below water techniques
Note: This technique makes any water jutsu or source it is performed on unable to conduct lightning of up to A-rank
Note: The water technique or source that this technique is used upon is unable to conduct lightning for the following two turns of the opponent.

________________________________________________
 Declined  To paraphrase a former moderator "Unrealistic and OPed. DNR".

(Suiton: Jūsui) – Water Release: Heavy Water
Rank: C - S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 15 - 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After studying the water element and its components, a shinobi came upon the knowledge of heavy water. This heavy water is actually regular water which contains a larger amount of hydrogen isotope deuterium than normal. Therefore, some or most of the hydrogen atoms in heavy water contains a neutron, which causes the hydrogen atom to be twice as heavy as a normal hydrogen atom, which eventually makes the water heavier and denser. This technique is based off this knowledge, as the user will generate a large amount of water chakra within their body and as he will expel the water chakra into an existing water source, this water chakra will add the missing neutron molecule to the water source or technique. This will result in the water technique or water source to be denser and even heavier. Thus if performed upon one’s own technique at the right time it will make the technique even more powerful, especially if you used techniques such as the Water Release: Stormy Blockade, whereas it will result in the water becoming denser and heavier making its brute force even more devastating. In turn if an opponent uses a water jutsu such as the Water Release: Gushing Water Imprisonment, the user will be capable of adding the missing neutron to the technique thus making it heavier to the extent where the water is incapable of rising upwards and will drop to the ground without harming the user. Due to the technique adding the neutron to the water molecules it also changes the whole properties within the water, thus resulting in the waters freezing point to be changed to the extent of where water freezes slower than usual and the waters boiling point will also be changed thus the water will have slightly greater resistance to fire.
Note: This technique increases the users own water technique by one rank
Note: This technique can only be used on S-rank and below water techniques
Note: Usable trice per battle
Note: Must be taught by Gutsy Jiraiya

________________________________________________
 Declined  "Unrealistic and OPed. DNR"

 

[Reaper]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Katon: Kaji Sanpo ) - Fire Release: Fire Walk
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user channels katon chakra to his feet covering them in fire.As the user moves he leaves a trail of fire behind him.Once the user reaches his desired destination he slams his foot onto the ground setting off the fire chain causing a big fire explosion that hurts anyone standing near it.The fire hurts the user aswell if he does not take precaussion and steps away from the chain before setting it off.To avoid taking damage from the technique the user needs to stop channeling chakra into his feet thus not creating the fire trail and once he gets to a safer distance he channels fire chakra into his feet one more tme for the detonation.

- Can only be used three times.
- No other fire jutsu can be used in the same turn by the user.
- Can only be taught by Reaper

________________________________________________
 Declined  Done before. DNR.

(Raiton: Raikou Kobushi ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Fists
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30 (+10 for each turn kept active)
Damage: 60
Description: The user channels raiton chakra into his hands creating lightning fist that extend to mid range.The increased range of the lightning fists allows the user safer way of hand to hand combat and if the user manages to grab the enemy he can channel lightning through them paralyzing the enemy for a single turn.Cause of lightnings intense heat a direct attack from this techinque can fry the opponent leaving him incapacitated.

- While the lightning hands cover the users hands he cannot perform any hand seals.
- The technique stays active for 3 turns.
- Once the user cancells the technique he cant use it for 3 turns.
- Can only be used 2 times in a battle.
- Once the technique wears off the user cant perform any A Rank or above lightning jutsu for 2 turns.
- Can only be taught by Reaper

________________________________________________
 Declined  DNR. Done before.

 

[Flash]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Guardians Of Malice
Type: Summon
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user summons 12 spiritual snakes from his tattoo. These snakes, known to be amongst the oldest of all snakes, have the ability to manipulate mind (genjutsu) by mere hissing. Like Fukasaku and Shima, these snakes perform genjutsus with their harmonic hissing or rattling. One of their signature genjutsu is that these snakes all surround the opponent in a mid range (or lower) distance from all sides. Then, the snakes start their rattling- hissing and buzzing- made by the rattles at the tip of their tail which releases a strange sound vibration. These vibrations cause neurotic imbalances in the brain and thereby putting the opponents in an illusion. The opponent(s) trapped in between the snakes suffer the maximum damage. The effects of this genjutsu take over 3 turns. This genjutsu inducing sound vibrations cause the opponent(s) to slow down considerably as he feels extreme sweating and in next turn, freeze in place as he starts hallucinating mildly. His vision will start to blur. He will feel uneasy as his heartbeat will increase. He'd find it difficult to move his muscle. His involuntary movements will stop.
In the third turn, all his 5 senses will fool him, making him see, hear, smell, feel and taste things which are not present.
After this, the snakes are all free to attack as the opponent will be completely fooled until he releases himself out of the genjutsu.
- Can only be used once in a single battle.
- The snakes last for 5 turns on the field.
- Can perform any genjutsu that the user knows.
- The user is immune to the genjutsu as he will be used to the rattling.
- Can only be taught by Flash07.
_________________
-Leaving for Xylon-

You must be registered for see links

________________________________________________
 Declined  Make an unique Genjutsu for them to use and reduce their numbers to 5 tops. Also, make sure to say that all 5 must be on the field for them to use the genjutsu. Allowing them to surround your enemy and use any genjutsu you know by hissing is a cheat. It means you transform any genjutsu you know, regardless of its "requirements" into a Sound Triggered Genjutsu. So no. However, I won't DNR it allowing you to make an unique genjutsu for them to use. The theme and the overall idea is cool, just not the level to which you're trying to boost it.

Guardians Of Malice
Type: Summon
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The Guardians of Malice are the 5 rattle snakes of the Ryuchi Caves. They are one of the wisest snakes known in the ninja world and have the size of a real-world anaconda. These snakes, known to be amongst the oldest of all snakes, have the ability to manipulate mind (genjutsu) by mere hissing. Like Fukasaku and Shima, these snakes perform genjutsus with their harmonic hissing or rattling. They perform their signature genjutsu by rattling- hissing and buzzing- made by the rattles at the tip of their tail which releases a strange sound vibration. These vibrations cause neurotic imbalances in the brain and thereby putting the opponents in an illusion. The opponent(s) trapped in between the snakes suffer the maximum damage. The effects of this genjutsu take over 3 turns. This genjutsu inducing sound vibrations cause the opponent(s) to slow down considerably as he feels extreme sweating and in next turn, freeze in place as he starts hallucinating mildly. His vision will start to blur. He will feel uneasy as his heartbeat will increase. He'd find it difficult to move his muscle. His involuntary movements will stop.
In the third turn, all his 5 senses will fool him, making him see, hear, smell, feel and taste things which are not present.
After this, the snakes are all free to attack as the opponent will be completely fooled until he releases himself out of the genjutsu.
- Can only be used once in a single battle.
- All 5 should be on the field for their signature attack.
- The snakes last for 5 turns on the field.
- The user is immune to the genjutsu as he will be used to the rattling.
- Can only be taught by Flash07.



________________________________________________
 Declined  Ok...you described the effects the hissing produces but not what the illusion is... Ok he feels uneasy...why? uneasy is an emotion...how can you manipulate that by manipulating his senses? Because that is what Genjutsu is...

(Suiton/Genjutsu: Minzoku no kōbō) Water/Illusion: Rise of the Nation
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user manipulates the molecules in the air all around the battlefield and uses it to his advantage. The user makes the molecules burst to create tiny, smaller molecules that eventually becomes mist in the battlefield. These molecules get thicker if there is a nearby water source (or water from the previous technique) and the user can control the bursting of these molecules. This mist, which has the user's chakra in it, has special property. It affects the senses of the opponents who inhale the air containing these molecules and thereby putting then in an illusion. The opponent will see (after dispersing the mist), hear, smell, sense (if possible), and feel the presence of a large army all around him. The army containing the most terrifying Giants and trolls, and warriors of the entire nation, attack him from all sides, crushing him, breaking down his defences, and leaving him in the brink of death, which in reality results in his mental torture.
-Will affect anyone (except the user) who inhales it.
-Effect last for 3 turns
-Can only be taught by Flash07


________________________________________________
 Declined  Elemental Genjutsu is a no unless you can su

(Bakuton: Eden no geijutsu no mori) - Explosion Release: The Artistic Forest of Eden
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Deidara first releases a C2 Garuda sized clay figure that can be manipulated into any form and can be used for attack or defence. Once done, with a single handseal, he bursts the clay figure, thereby creating smaller, fist sized clay that get spread out over the entire battlefield. These small clay pieces act as 'seeds', i.e. when Deidara performs another two handseals Ram+Tiger, these 'seeds' suck out energy from the earth or whatever they fall on, to grow into huge trees and thereby end up creating a huge forest in the entire battlefield. Further, by manipulating the chakra in his clay trees, Deidara can manoeuvre it as he sees fit for attack and defence; and furthermore, this omnipotent technique even allows him to capture the enemy at the same time. These trees, being made of explosive clay, can be exploded in parts or entirety according to Deidara's wishes.
- Can only be used Once per battle.
- No other Clay technique above A rank in the same or next turn.
- Can only be taught by Flash07

________________________________________________
 Declined  Suck out energy from the ground or wtv? =_= This needs TONS of spelling and description rewording before I can even consider it feasible...

(Bakuton: Eden no geijutsu no mori) - Explosion Release: The Artistic Forest of Eden
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Deidara releases a giant C2 Garuda sized clay figure that can be manipulated into any form and can be used for attack or defence. Once done, with a single handseal, he bursts the clay figure into smaller, fist sized clay that gets spread out over the entire battlefield. As soon as these clay pieces come in contact with a physical object (earth, water etc.), they inflate and grow into huge trees and thereby end up creating a huge forest in the entire battlefield. Further, by manipulating the chakra in his clay trees, Deidara can manoeuvre the trees as he sees fit for attack and defence. and furthermore, this omnipotent technique even allows him to capture the enemy at the same time. These trees, being made of explosive clay, can be exploded in parts or entirety according to Deidara's wishes.
- Can only be used Once per battle.
- No other Clay technique above A rank in the same or next turn.
- Can only be taught by Flash07

________________________________________________
 Declined  Description is a mess and you don't even know what this does tbh. Manipulating the trees...ok...foreveR? passively? You do know you will be creating a gigantic explosive forest... That will basically obliterate you too right? Because you seem to be completely oblivious of what clay based blast release is all about. Also, exploding one part or it all is a no go. Its it all or nothing. You don't have that ability. One more go then its DNR.

 

[-Cobalt-]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Change: The Weapon Without a Face | Hensen: Buki Nashide Omote
Type: Weapon
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Change, The Weapon Without a Face is not a normal weapon. It is a weapon without permanent shape, always warping from form to form. This weapon is made of chakra imbued and chakra sensitive metal which is very easily bent and reformed making it fit for creating things such as a whip for example. The wielder of this tool can make it turn into basically anything they wish just by imagining it. It cannot however copy powerful weapons and their abilities (7SM both cannon and custom) or other custom weapons. It can however copy their looks but never their abilities. The user can even use his own imagination to design a completely new form of weapon (while keeping it realistic, no guns, technology etc.). This makes this weapon extremely versatile. Even though it is a light metal it is undestructible by any kind of matter, energy, force or chakra. The weapon has three main "stances" so to say.

Stance of the Tiger | Sutansu No Tora: The stance of the tiger is the weapons offensive stance, and activating it allows the user to create offensive weapons and these include but are not limited to swords, axes, claws, hammers, spears etc. The user can basically create any melee weapon he desires (no projectiles).

Stance of the Turtle | Sutansu No Kame: The stance of the turtle is the weapons defensive stance, and activating it allows the user to create defensive tools and these include and are limited to shields and armors. The shields and armors can block only one S-rank jutsu of any kind (even genjutsu) once per battle. After using this defense, the user can use only A-rank and below techniques for the following two turns and is limited to only two techniques per move.

Stance of the Ape | Sutansu No Saru: The stance of the monkey is the weapons supplementary stance, and activating it allows the user to create supplementary tools and these include and are not limited to grappling hooks, foot spikes. Using the stance of the ape the user can create everyday items and use them however he seems fit.

Restrictions and abilities:
-Each ability of the weapon counts towards the users 3 moves per turn.
-Switching between stances counts as a move and only one stance can be active at a time.
-The defensive properties of the Turtle Stance can be used once per battle and the user can use only up to two A-rank and below techniques per move for the following 2 turns. After using the defensive technique, cannot change stances for 2 turns as well.
-Cannot copy abilities of other weapons, only its looks.
-Undestructible and unwieldable by anyone else but -Cobalt-.
-When a stance is activated, changing the form of the weapon does not cost a move but is done through description.
-Upon the start of the battle, "Stance of the Tiger" is activated passively unless stated otherwise.

________________________________________________
 Declined  Nice idea but...how does the weapon present itself in its original, untransformed form? A ring? an orb? a sword? what? Also, defend from genjutsu...how? You do realize you can't actually perceive a genjutsu is coming and thus you are unable to actually use something to defend from it? And you still didn't explain how this is achieved. It can defend from anything S-Rank...how? I mean, what about size? or techniques that happen all around you? or techniques you can't see or perceive? I mean, saying a shield can defend from anything up to S-Rank regardless is not very smart as its an obvious decline. When you claim a defense on a weapon you need to explain how you achieve such defend. is it a seal? a disruptive effect of the weapon? what?

Resubmitting, changes are in bold, removed genjutsu defense:

Change: The Weapon Without a Face | Hensen: Buki Nashide Omote
Type: Weapon
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 40 (per stance)
Damage: N/A
Description: Change, The Weapon Without a Face is not a normal weapon. It is a weapon without permanent shape, always warping from form to form. This weapon is made of chakra imbued and chakra sensitive metal which is very easily bent and reformed making it fit for creating things such as a whip for example. The wielder of this tool can make it turn into basically anything they wish just by imagining it. It cannot however copy powerful weapons and their abilities (7SM both cannon and custom) or other custom weapons. It can however copy their looks but never their abilities. The user can even use his own imagination to design a completely new form of weapon (while keeping it realistic, no guns, technology etc.). This makes this weapon extremely versatile. Even though it is a light metal it is undestructible by any kind of matter, energy, force or chakra. The weapon has three main "stances" so to say. Initially, without invoking any of the stances, the weapon presents itself as a simple small orb (similar in size to a regular sized chicken egg) which the user carries around with him.

Stance of the Tiger | Sutansu No Tora: The stance of the tiger is the weapons offensive stance, and activating it allows the user to create offensive weapons and these include but are not limited to swords, axes, claws, hammers, spears etc. The user can basically create any meelee weapon he desires (no projectiles).

Stance of the Turtle | Sutansu No Kame: The stance of the turtle is the weapons defensive stance, and activating it allows the user to create defensive tools and these include and are limited to shields and armors. The shields and armors can block only one S-rank elemental and basi ninjutsu of any kind once per battle. After using this defense, the user can use only A-rank and below techniques for the following two turns and is limited to only two techniques per move. After creating something with the Stance of the Turtle, a invisble chakra shroud is created around the user which serves as the actual defensive mechanism and it is ever present until used. The chakra shroud works in a manner that the chakra disrupts the foreign chakra in a technique by targeting the weak point in it. At point blank range the shield activates automatically, dispelling it effectively and leaving the user unscathed but with a chakra drainage which leaves the user weakened for a period of time.


Stance of the Ape | Sutansu No Saru: The stance of the monkey is the weapons supplementary stance, and activating it allows the user to create supplementary tools and these include and are not limited to grappling hooks, foot spikes. Using the stance of the ape the user can create everyday items and use them however he seems fit.

Restrictions and abilities:
-Each ability of the weapon counts towards the users 3 moves per turn.
-Switching between stances counts as a move and only one stance can be active at a time.
-The defensive properties of the Turtle Stance can be used once per battle and the user can use only up to two A-rank and below techniques per move for the following 2 turns. After using the defensive technique, cannot change stances for 2 turns as well.
-The defensive chakra shroud is visible by Dojutsu and Sensory ninja.
-Cannot copy abilities of other weapons, only its looks.
-Undestructible and unwieldable by anyone else but -Cobalt-.
-When a stance is activated, changing the form of the weapon does not cost a move but is done through description.

________________________________________________
 Approved  Editted severely.

 

[Strawberry]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Genjutsu: Ichigo Kuchini) - Illusion : Strawberry Devouring
Type: Supplementary
Rank: D
Range: Midrange
Chakra: 10
Damage: 20
Description: The user make an ox hand seal and points at the target channelling their chakra through. Manipulating the victims chakra slightly. The victim thinks that they are now a strawberry, with legs, hands and a face being very slowly eaten by a kid. The target is able to move but the kid will give chase, slowly. The jutsu does very little mental harm, nor does it paralyse the foe, but is rather meant to buy a few seconds of time, tamper with the foe to through their concentration off.
Note: Can only be taught by strawberry ninja

________________________________________________
 Declined  DNR.

(Doton: Joushou Ken Peretto Arashi) - Earth Release : Ascending and Descending Pellet Storm
Type: Offensive
Rank: D
Range: Mid
Chakra: 10
Damage: 20
Description: The user place his / her hand on the ground, channelling their chakra underground beneath the target. Molding the earth into 10 small sharp pellet shaped earth pieces which are launched out of the ground which travel straight up to a height of 10 meters which fall back down over a small radius.

Note:Can only be taught by Strawberry ninja

________________________________________________
 Declined  DNR. done before.

(Doton: ashi kabi) - Earth Release : Foot Mold
Type: supplementary
Rank: D
Range: Midrange
Chakra: 10
Damage: 20
Description: The user gathers his chakra, places his hands on the ground, channeling chakra through the ground, manipulating the earth making it rise up and wrap around the victims feet. This makes the victim immobile from the feet.

Note: Can only be taught by strawberry ninja

________________________________________________
 Declined  DNR. Cannon technique.

 

[Better]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Raiton: Okasen) - Lightning Release: Yellow Fire Flash
Type: Offensive
Rank: A rank
Range: Short to Mid (with sword as a median it can extend to Long )
Chakra: 30
Damage: 50
Description: The user takes their sword and hold across their chest. The hilt should be in their dominate hand while the goes across the body in front of them, other hand on the back of the blade. The user focuses his raiton chakra and generates a yellow orb which widens itself along the length of their sword. The lightning is gathered and controlled than released in a concentrated burst of lightning that viciously travels towards the opponent just as fast as chidori spear. The user can use this without a sword with the users hand but the length in which it will go is shortened.

Note: Can only be used 4 times per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Better.

Spoiler

You must be registered for see images

________________________________________________
 Declined  Incorrect damage info.

(Karen Ago Ongaku)- Sweet Chin Music
Type: Offensive
Rank: B rank
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: 40
Description: The user will stand next to his opponent and extend his dominate leg up at the targets chin. He will kick the target right under the chin targeting the jaw. The force of hitting the target there will cause vibrations to go throughout his head. (try biting your teeth together really fast, you'll feel a little vibration, now imagine with a kick) When done correctly, the vibration would be so great that one kick would knock out the target and break their jaw.

Note: Can only be taught by Better
Note: unconsciousness last one turn

Spoiler

You must be registered for see images

________________________________________________
 Declined  Yeah but no...you cannot knockout an opponent just because of that with taijutsu in Narutoverse. May I suggest a bit of stagger and "dizziness" and additional hindering effects?


(Hebi Taisan) - Snake Dismemberment
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: A signer of the snake contract can disperse themselves into a 100 white snakes to avoid on coming techniques. The snakes all go in different directions and the user can pick a single snake to be and reform from that snake.

Note: Can only be used 2 times
Note: there is no telling which snake is the user and which snake isn't even with a dojutsu
Note: Must have signed the Snake Contract
Note: Can only be taught by Better.

________________________________________________
 Declined  DNR.

 

[Mathias]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Goken: Ni-Chi Toshidoshi Zetsumei) - Strong Fist: 2,000 Years of Death
Type: Attack
Rank: C
Range: Short - Long (Zig-Zag)
Chakra: N/A
Damage: 30
Description: The user will thrust himself towards their desired target, continuously shifting their body from left to right (Or vise-versa) in a zig-zag manner by pushing themselves off of the ground. Upon nearing the target's close range, the user will get in a very low or natural stance, aiming to strike the target with a vertical kick or punch, sending them flying into the air. The user is also able to semi-circle around the target's side, delivering the strike from the flank.

Notes:
- The distance between each shift is dependent on the user's current speed.
- Must be taught by Mathias

________________________________________________
 Approved  Editted. Taijutsu doesn't cost chakra unless its Chakra Enhanced taijutsu or special techniques.

 

[-Blade-]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(RKO)- RKO
Type: Offensive
Rank: A rank
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: 60
Description: The user jumping towards the opponent grabs the opponent head in a three-quarter facelock while parallel to the ground, and then slamming the opponent's face to the ground in a cutter. Usually hit from out of nowhere taking a split second to execute. The user can in fact cover himself with lightning chakra to increase the speed and power of the RKO.

Note: Can only be taught by Blade

Spoiler

You must be registered for see images

________________________________________________
 Declined  *facepalm* you do know that if you actually do that in a normal ground and for real (not in make believe wrestling, trampolin arenas) you'll actually slam you back on the ground as hard as your opponent? Not only that but you can yourself be knocked out by hitting your head on the ground... Wrestling is not a good choice for this since, guess what, its all fake >_>