Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±
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Type: Ninjutsu
Background: Being an ex-shinobi of the leaf, Loki had spent much time on the forest that surrounds the land of fire's village, becoming one with nature, so much that no animal is afraid of him and allow him to pet them at will, while in the time he spent there he discovered a way of making the forest itself or actually the leafs themselfs help him in combat, even though being from konoha doesn't allow him any special fighting style, the forrest do serve as a training source for his unique fighting style.
Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
This is a simple yet efficient and strong fighting style, where the user focusses regular chakra and followed by Wind chakra into tree's nearby by, infusing the leafs with wind chakra so that the user is able to lift and move around the leafs (this will make them useful to protect the user from incoming lightning attacks aslong as the rank is appropiate and the strength is within reason, however it also makes this fighting style more weak against fire based techniques) and coats the leafs on them in sharp or dense chakra depending on the usseage he wants to give them obviously including wind chakra aswell to increase the cutting power and control over the leafs,, becoming more like sharp small blades and not leafs, he them is able to freely manipulate them in waves of thousands of petals, depending on the amount of leafs the user can gather them together and compress them, giving them a single solid form with great strength and such. While the blades are supposedly too small to be seen normally, they reflect light in such a way as to appear as cherry blossom petals due to the extra type of chakra added by the user. The user can control the "blades" at will, allowing him to shred opponents at a distance and break through many defenses within reason. The blades are also used for defensive purposes, as they can even protect the user from an incoming sword swing, kunais, shurikens, and other regular ninja weapons. A master of this fighting style is allowed to carry a gourd full of petals already coated in his chakra, allowing him to use them, without the need of controlling the leafs of trees nearby by.
Skill levels of the style:
Creator (created the style, Dominates it)
^
Master (knows Senbonzakura and advanced techniques)
^
User (someone who knows basic techniques)
^
Apprentice (is learning basic techniques)
Examples:
Additional effects and Restrictions:
• Can only be used if there are trees around the field, or if the user carries his petal gourd.
• Must have mastery over Ninjutsu. (Due to the need of extreme chakra control)
• Only Loki may teach Senbonzakura.
• Must complete 2 training sessions to be an Apprentice.
• Must complete 3 training sessions to be a User.
• Must complete 5 training sessions to be a Master.
• Must be atleast Sannin rank to start basic training.
• An apprentice can only learn up to C rank.
• A user can only learn up to B rank.
• A master can learn up to S rank.
• Only the Creator can use F rank techinques.
• Mastery over Wind release is required.
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Declined Perhaps its just me but these last 3 submissions are basically the same worded differently and there is a quoting issue. Please clarify who is the submitter of this CFS, who actually made it and such. I mean, 3 sequenced CFS with tremendous similarities? Whats up with that? Go, talk to eachother and clarify this please.
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Type: Ninjutsu
Background: Being a shinobi of the leaf, -Castiel- has spent much time on the forest that surrounds the land of fire's village, becoming one with nature, so much that no animal is afraid of him and allow him to pet them at will, while in the time he spent there he discovered a way of making the forest itself or actually the leafs themselfs help him in combat, even though being from konoha doesn't allow him any special fighting style, the forrest do serve as a training source for his unique fighting style.
Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
This is a simple yet efficient and strong fighting style, where the user focusses regular chakra and followed by Wind chakra into tree's nearby by, infusing the leafs with wind chakra so that the user is able to lift and move around the leafs (this will make them useful to protect the user from incoming lightning attacks aslong as the rank is appropiate and the strength is within reason, however it also makes this fighting style more weak against fire based techniques) and coats the leafs on them in sharp or dense chakra depending on the usseage he wants to give them obviously including wind chakra aswell to increase the cutting power and control over the leafs,, becoming more like sharp small blades and not leafs, he them is able to freely manipulate them in waves of thousands of petals, depending on the amount of leafs the user can gather them together and compress them, giving them a single solid form with great strength and such. While the blades are supposedly too small to be seen normally, they reflect light in such a way as to appear as cherry blossom petals due to the extra type of chakra added by the user. The user can control the "blades" at will, allowing him to shred opponents at a distance and break through many defenses within reason. The blades are also used for defensive purposes, as they can even protect the user from an incoming sword swing, kunais, shurikens, and other regular ninja weapons. A master of this fighting style is allowed to carry a gourd full of petals already coated in his chakra, allowing him to use them, without the need of controlling the leafs of trees nearby by.
Skill levels of the style:
Creator (created the style, Dominates it)
^
Master (knows Senbonzakura and advanced techniques)
^
User (someone who knows basic techniques)
^
Apprentice (is learning basic techniques)
Additional effects and Restrictions:
• Can only be used if there are trees around the field, or if the user carries his petal gourd.
• Must have mastery over Ninjutsu. (Due to the need of extreme chakra control)
• Only -Castiel- may teach Senbonzakura.
• Must complete 2 training sessions to be an Apprentice.
• Must complete 3 training sessions to be a User.
• Must complete 5 training sessions to be a Master.
• Must be atleast Sannin rank to start basic training.
• An apprentice can only learn up to C rank.
• A user can only learn up to B rank.
• A master can learn up to S rank.
• Only the Creator can use F rank techinques.
• Mastery over Wind release is required.
Examples:
(Senbonzakura: Chire) - Thousand Cherry Blossoms: Scatter
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will take control of a thousand petals and scatter them across the field, maknig it look like a pink ground is what they are on top of.
• Must have several trees nearby by or carrying the user's petal gourd.
(Senbonzakura: Senkei) - Thousand Cherry Blossoms: Annihilate
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user unites the scattered petals into complete glowing swords, numbering in the thousands, that form four rows. These rows float just above the other, and circle around the user and his opponent in a continuously moving, column-like array. It abandons defense in favor of a concentrated offense. Though visually menacing, this form is not meant for attack from all sides; rather, it is to concentrate his power into fewer blades, thus increasing his attack power. While the suer can control these swords, he commonly calls them to his hands for actual melee combat. When in his hand, they lose their glow, and take the form of a katana. While they seem solid in this state, the swords can just as easily dissipate back into the multitude of tiny blades that they are made up of. It seems to take fewer blows from a Senkei blade to gravely injure an opponent than the multiple cuts needed. The Senkei also cages himself with his enemy, allowing neither combatant to move very far from each other, though the area is still large enough for maneuverability. The most effective use of the Senkei form is that it allows for use of all the swords at the same attack level, making it highly versatile as a way to effectively defeat an enemy unaware of the danger of the situation.
• May only be used 2 times per match.
(Senbonzakura: Hakuteiken) - Thousand Cherry Blossoms: White Emperor Sword
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This condenses each and every single one of his "blades" into a single, potent sword, drastically increasing its cutting power. The chakra and pressure of this form released is immense. The blade appears bright white and its aura takes the form of a bird, earning it the name Hakuteiken ("White Emperor Sword"). Pure white wings form on the user's back, as well as a halo-like circle, made of concentrated petals. The blade in this form is dangerous enough to cause aggravated injuries in one single blow. The wings are capable of being used for flight, the user can either only create the wings or only the sword, or both if wanted.
• May only be used 3 times per match.
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Now the problem is how unrealistic it is for you to be able to use this style. You describe being able to control thousands of these leaves at once. However, the amount of chakra control that it would require for you to coat each and every leaf with wind chakra and then simultaneously control all of them is basically impossible. Each one of these techniques would probably drain you of every bit of chakra. Scale down the number of individual leaves that you control (because with what you're doing with this CFS, controlling them in massive groups isn't really an option). Like, by a lot.
Type: Ninjutsu
Background: Being an ex-shinobi of the leaf, Loki had spent much time on the forest that surrounds the land of fire's village, becoming one with nature, so much that no animal is afraid of him and allow him to pet them at will, while in the time he spent there he discovered a way of making the forest itself or actually the leafs themselfs help him in combat, even though being from konoha doesn't allow him any special fighting style, the forrest do serve as a training source for his unique fighting style.
Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
This is a simple yet efficient and strong fighting style, where the user focusses regular chakra and followed by Wind chakra into tree's nearby by, infusing the leafs with wind chakra so that the user is able to lift and move around the leafs (this will make them useful to protect the user from incoming lightning attacks aslong as the rank is appropiate and the strength is within reason, however it also makes this fighting style more weak against fire based techniques) and coats the leafs on them in sharp or dense chakra depending on the usseage he wants to give them obviously including wind chakra aswell to increase the cutting power and control over the leafs,, becoming more like sharp small blades and not leafs, he them is able to freely manipulate them in waves of thousands of petals, depending on the amount of leafs the user can gather them together and compress them, giving them a single solid form with great strength and such. While the blades are supposedly too small to be seen normally, they reflect light in such a way as to appear as cherry blossom petals due to the extra type of chakra added by the user. The user can control the "blades" at will, allowing him to shred opponents at a distance and break through many defenses within reason. The blades are also used for defensive purposes, as they can even protect the user from an incoming sword swing, kunais, shurikens, and other regular ninja weapons. A master of this fighting style is allowed to carry a gourd full of petals already coated in his chakra, allowing him to use them, without the need of controlling the leafs of trees nearby by.
Skill levels of the style:
Creator (created the style, Dominates it)
^
Master (knows Senbonzakura and advanced techniques)
^
User (someone who knows basic techniques)
^
Apprentice (is learning basic techniques)
Examples:
(Senbonzakura: Chire) - Thousand Cherry Blossoms: Scatter
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will take control of a thousand petals and scatter them across the field, maknig it look like a pink ground is what they are on top of.
• Must have several trees nearby by or carrying the user's petal gourd.
(Senbonzakura: Senkei) - Thousand Cherry Blossoms: Annihilate
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user unites the scattered petals into complete glowing swords, numbering in the thousands, that form four rows. These rows float just above the other, and circle around the user and his opponent in a continuously moving, column-like array. It abandons defense in favor of a concentrated offense. Though visually menacing, this form is not meant for attack from all sides; rather, it is to concentrate his power into fewer blades, thus increasing his attack power. While the suer can control these swords, he commonly calls them to his hands for actual melee combat. When in his hand, they lose their glow, and take the form of a katana. While they seem solid in this state, the swords can just as easily dissipate back into the multitude of tiny blades that they are made up of. It seems to take fewer blows from a Senkei blade to gravely injure an opponent than the multiple cuts needed. The Senkei also cages himself with his enemy, allowing neither combatant to move very far from each other, though the area is still large enough for maneuverability. The most effective use of the Senkei form is that it allows for use of all the swords at the same attack level, making it highly versatile as a way to effectively defeat an enemy unaware of the danger of the situation.
• May only be used 2 times per match.
(Senbonzakura: Hakuteiken) - Thousand Cherry Blossoms: White Emperor Sword
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This condenses each and every single one of his "blades" into a single, potent sword, drastically increasing its cutting power. The chakra and pressure of this form released is immense. The blade appears bright white and its aura takes the form of a bird, earning it the name Hakuteiken ("White Emperor Sword"). Pure white wings form on the user's back, as well as a halo-like circle, made of concentrated petals. The blade in this form is dangerous enough to cause aggravated injuries in one single blow. The wings are capable of being used for flight, the user can either only create the wings or only the sword, or both if wanted.
• May only be used 3 times per match.
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will take control of a thousand petals and scatter them across the field, maknig it look like a pink ground is what they are on top of.
• Must have several trees nearby by or carrying the user's petal gourd.
(Senbonzakura: Senkei) - Thousand Cherry Blossoms: Annihilate
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user unites the scattered petals into complete glowing swords, numbering in the thousands, that form four rows. These rows float just above the other, and circle around the user and his opponent in a continuously moving, column-like array. It abandons defense in favor of a concentrated offense. Though visually menacing, this form is not meant for attack from all sides; rather, it is to concentrate his power into fewer blades, thus increasing his attack power. While the suer can control these swords, he commonly calls them to his hands for actual melee combat. When in his hand, they lose their glow, and take the form of a katana. While they seem solid in this state, the swords can just as easily dissipate back into the multitude of tiny blades that they are made up of. It seems to take fewer blows from a Senkei blade to gravely injure an opponent than the multiple cuts needed. The Senkei also cages himself with his enemy, allowing neither combatant to move very far from each other, though the area is still large enough for maneuverability. The most effective use of the Senkei form is that it allows for use of all the swords at the same attack level, making it highly versatile as a way to effectively defeat an enemy unaware of the danger of the situation.
• May only be used 2 times per match.
(Senbonzakura: Hakuteiken) - Thousand Cherry Blossoms: White Emperor Sword
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This condenses each and every single one of his "blades" into a single, potent sword, drastically increasing its cutting power. The chakra and pressure of this form released is immense. The blade appears bright white and its aura takes the form of a bird, earning it the name Hakuteiken ("White Emperor Sword"). Pure white wings form on the user's back, as well as a halo-like circle, made of concentrated petals. The blade in this form is dangerous enough to cause aggravated injuries in one single blow. The wings are capable of being used for flight, the user can either only create the wings or only the sword, or both if wanted.
• May only be used 3 times per match.
Additional effects and Restrictions:
• Can only be used if there are trees around the field, or if the user carries his petal gourd.
• Must have mastery over Ninjutsu. (Due to the need of extreme chakra control)
• Only Loki may teach Senbonzakura.
• Must complete 2 training sessions to be an Apprentice.
• Must complete 3 training sessions to be a User.
• Must complete 5 training sessions to be a Master.
• Must be atleast Sannin rank to start basic training.
• An apprentice can only learn up to C rank.
• A user can only learn up to B rank.
• A master can learn up to S rank.
• Only the Creator can use F rank techinques.
• Mastery over Wind release is required.
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Declined Perhaps its just me but these last 3 submissions are basically the same worded differently and there is a quoting issue. Please clarify who is the submitter of this CFS, who actually made it and such. I mean, 3 sequenced CFS with tremendous similarities? Whats up with that? Go, talk to eachother and clarify this please.
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