[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[Beifong]

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(Doton: Chikyū bijon) - Earth Style: Earth Vision
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short-Mid Range
Chakra: 40 Chakra
Damage: N/A
Description:by concentrating doton chakra in his feet the user is able to sense the existence of everything around him by sensing the vibration passing through them into the ground and into his feet. by using this jutsu the user is able to locate and sense everything around even if he was blind.
note: once activated, lasts the entire battle.
note: requires mastery over doton
note: cannot be used by a dojutsu user
note: only Pain... can teach this jutsu

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-Declined- similar techniques exist.

 

[Method]

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Raiton:Kaseki no shokku|Lightening Release:Limb Shock
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Contact
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user begins by building up their Raiton chakra within themselves, enough to keep chakra flow at a stable level without disrupting it. When engaged in close combat, the user upon striking their opponent(either by free form or a Taijutsu technique) lets off a quick burst of an electrical current throughout either their arm/fist or leg/foot, the shock numbs the opponent's targetted area for 1 turn. If used on the opponent's arm or leg, they still have enough strength to move said area(still able to perform handseals) but at a slower pace & not enough to add force behind their strike. Due to the user building upon their chakra before performing this, Doujutsu user's are aware of the jutsu.
- Not able to cancel Genjutsu
- Leaves targetted area numb for 1 turn

X-Declined-X Will you believe me when i say it is underpowered? You could either reduce the rank to make the technique usable and less restricting or slightly improve the effects.

Raiton: Kaseki no shokku|Lightning Release: Limb Shock
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user begins by building up their Raiton chakra within themselves, enough to keep chakra flow at a stable level without disrupting it. When engaged in close combat, the user upon striking their opponent(either by free form or a Taijutsu technique) lets off a quick burst of an electrical current throughout either their arm/fist or leg/foot, the shock numbs the opponent's targeted area for 1 turn. If used on the opponent's arm or leg, they still have enough strength to move said area(still able to perform handseals) but at a slower pace & not enough to add force behind their strike. Due to the user building upon their chakra before performing this, Doujutsu user's are aware of the jutsu.
- Not able to cancel Genjutsu
- Leaves targetted area numb for 1 turn
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-Approved- Edited the range.
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Raiton: Eraba reta Geitsu|Lightning Release: Chosen Gates
Type:Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description: The user performs 4 handseals and places both hands against the ground, as he does this 4 gates made of lightning originally emerge from the ground 2 of which stand on both sides of the opponent & 1 behind, they are all mid range from the opponent(7 meters), the 4th is formed within a 4 meter radius of the user(The user's gate). When all 4 gates are fully formed they all connect by a chakra wire which travels underground & meets in the middle of the gates location. The user is able to use the gate in each type of way:
Offensive - Each gate being made up of Lightning chakra have the ability to shoot out as large claws & strike the opponent into the ground/Mid Air, severely burning on contacting & paralyzing them, this can be done simultaneously & is treated as a S Rank or separately & each claw is treated as a B Rank they move at a fast pace but can easily be followed without the use of a Doujutsu.
Defensive - The user can create the gates anywhere within a radius of 5 meters & in any formation, each gate is treated as a B Rank gate & can be used to a similar effect of the Rashamon gates & if used in a row the blockade is treated as an S Rank.
Supplementary - The user is able to target Lightning jutsu(A Rank & below) toward the gate placed within their radius & has it travel through the gate & along the chakra wire & has a choice of which gate the jutsu emerges from.
In any of these forms the gates separately are treated as B Rank Gates & when used together are treated as an S Rank, they each are 3 meters high & 2 meters in width. If 1 gate has been dispelled the rest are still functional, the user is able to change the location of any gate by having it draw back into the ground & emerge at the desired area. The gates do block off either person's vision when placed between the two opponents.
- Only Lightning chakra can travel through the gates/wires.
- The user's gate will dispel if they step out of the 4 meter radius
- Lasts 4 turns
- Can only be used twice with a gap of 3 turns after the first use
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-Declined- Too OP, it's many techniques crammed in one.

Raiton: Chakurarasshu|Lightning Release: Chakra Rush
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: -
Description: The user begins by performing the Snake, Hare & Horse handseals while building up a large amount of Lightning chakra into either arm, they then thrust said arm forward releasing a wave of electricity that enters the opponent's body leaving them unharmed, their chakra is spread throughout the opponent's nervous system in a continuous stream of electricity & causes their chakra to travel at a faster pace, due to this, any abnormal state (CM, EIG & other modes that rely on the person's own chakra) the opponent is in accelerates cutting down the amount of time they have (shown below).
The stronger the mode the opponent is in, the quicker their chakra circulates leaving them with a shortened time within that mode: Modes A Rank or lower would lose 2 turns, S Rank lose 3 turns & F Rank would end the following turn.
Sage Mode being a different process compared to other modes has Senjutsu chakra react in a different manner, the link between physical energy, spiritual energy & natural energy becomes unbalanced causing the opponent to force more of their own chakra when maintaining Sage mode & using any Senjutsu technique, diminishing an opponent's time in Sage mode.
Sage mode after being affected by this jutsu would be cut down to 4 turns & if frog kata is used while in effect, it's drawback (Note:if user uses Frog Katas length of Sage mode is cut by two turns.) turns to three turns, having Sage mode left with 1 turn left.
- Does not effect any person in a normal state
- Usable once
- lasts 3 turns
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-Declined- Won't allow something like this, DNR.

 

[Ciberr]

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(Genjustu: MizuGeshuku) Illusionary Arts: Water boarding.
Type: Offensive.
Rank: S ranked.
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40.
Damage: 70.
Description: The user will preform one handseal and cast his opponent under a gruesome illusion. In this Illusion the target will fall unconscious and appear inside of a interrogation room chained to a cold steel bed with a thick cloth wrapped around his head. He then will feel gallons of water being poured onto the cloth over top of his face causing him to feel like he's drowning causing gag reflexes and the feeling of possible brain damage due to the loss of Oxygen. In the real world the target is completely immobilized due to believing he is chained down to a bed being drowned. While in reality the user is free to attack the immobilized Target. But cannot use A rank or above attacks in the turn this justu is used due to the intake of chakra needed to preform this illusion.

-Can only be used twice per battle.
-Cannot use Genjustu for the next turn following this Justu.
-Cannot use genjustu above A rank for the rest of the battle due to the concentration it takes to preform such an elaborate illusion.
-Must be taught by Ciberr.

X-Declined-X Damage again?

(Genjustu: MizuGeshuku) Illusionary Arts: Water boarding.
Type: Offensive.
Rank: S ranked.
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40.
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will preform one handseal and cast his opponent under a gruesome illusion. In this Illusion the target will fall unconscious and appear inside of a interrogation room chained to a cold steel bed with a thick cloth wrapped around his head. He then will feel gallons of water being poured onto the cloth over top of his face causing him to feel like he's drowning causing gag reflexes and the feeling of possible brain damage due to the loss of Oxygen. In the real world the target is completely immobilized due to believing he is chained down to a bed being drowned. While in reality the user is free to attack the immobilized Target. But cannot use A rank or above attacks in the turn this justu is used due to the intake of chakra needed to preform this illusion.

-Can only be used twice per battle.
-Cannot use Genjustu for the next turn following this Justu.
-Cannot use genjustu above A rank for the rest of the battle due to the concentration it takes to preform such an elaborate illusion.
-Must be taught by Ciberr.
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-Declined- How would the user be unconscious at the start of the illusion? i realize that you mean in the illusion itself, but even in illusions the user can't be unconscious unless there's a reason behind it, like being smacked on the head, also not complex enough to be an S-rank, seems like a B-rank to me.

(Genjutsu: Sono Maimu Kounou.) Illusionary Arts: The Mime Effect.
Type: Offensive | Supplementary
Rank: A ranked.
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage:
Description: The user will preform two handseals and create a square with his hands(Like how Muu and Oonoki's hands are when the preform Jinton) and send his chakra into his opponents chakra flow. Causing a disturbance resulting in the target to fall under an illusion. In the illusion the target will feel he's encased in a very small constantly shrinking invisible box. The target will feel that the box will never stop getting smaller resulting in the eventual feeling that he's been crushed in that box. Though the box is formed and the target is unable to properly move around and form handseals, the box won't get small enough to have to target fall unconscious until a entire turn has passed. While in reality the target will stop all movement, and appear standing still, somewhat lifeless.

-Only Usable once per battle
-No A rank or Above Genjustu for the next 2 turns
-No S rank attacks in the same turn
-Must be taught by Ciberr
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-Declined- Wrong chakra info for an A-rank, also no long ranged illusions will be approved.

(Suiton: Denpun Shiroppu Sawa) Water Release: Starch Syrup Swamp
Type: Offensive.
Rank: A rank.
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage:N/A
Description: The user will preform two handseals then by changing the surface of an object beneath an enemy into a sticky pool of chakra infused water. Very similar to the properties carried on by syrup. The pool will sink the target into itself, while restricting movement of the target. Making it very hard to escape.

-Only usable thrice per battle.
-Creates its own water source, though the water will carry the properties of the sticky syrup.
-Must be taught by Ciberr.
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-Declined- Rip off of the Swamp of the underworld technique.

 

[Vex]

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Snake summoning: Atlas
Type: Summoning
Rank:S
Range:short
Chakra:40
Damage:N/A
Description:The user wipes blood along his snake tattoo, and summons Atlas. This snake is extremely durable, being able to take up to A rank techniques without being damaged. It would take a direct hit from an S rank or above jutsu to disperse him. He is about the size of an elephant, but he moves extremely quickly. It would be difficult, but not impossible to see his movements, even without a dojutsu. He moves at the speed of Rock Lee without weights. This snake is a master of taijutsu. He is able to use his body in the place of arms and legs, being able to use canon taijutsu up to A rank. Of course, he is unable to use anything requiring clones, or elemental chakra. He can also shed his skin once per battle in the place of a substitution jutsu (A rank ability). Also, he is slightly poisonous to humans. If he bites you, the opponent would begin to feel slightly dizzy, and nauseous. He however, cannot go underground or use any ninjutsu.

-Restrictions-

He can only be summoned once a battle
He lasts for 3 turns once summoned
Can only be taught by PB
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-Declined- Well the resistance to A-rank techniques is a bit much, only Manda out of all summons has that, the shedding skin ability also although i might let that slide, the real issue for me is how would he be able to use Taijutsu with a body that has no hands nor legs, and the taijutsu techniques involve using both hand and legs, or separately for a variety of effects and maneuvers, a snake using Taijutsu won't be possible.

Web Shooters
Type:Weapon
Rank:S
Range:Short
Chakra:40
Damage:N/A
Description: The web shooters are basically two gauntlets, one on each hand. They are made of a steel-like material that is a silver color. They are virtually indestructible and can only be worn by PresidentBush and those he allows. The gauntlets were created by a young genius named Peter Parker. Peter was a technical genius, and developed the gauntlets, and infusing them with water. They can shoot out an adhesive fluid, similar to that of the Water Style: Starch Syrup Capture Field jutsu. They shoot them by absorbing a small amount of water chakra from the user, and converting it into the adhesive material. On contact with air, the material knits and forms an extremely tough, flexible fiber with extraordinary adhesive properties. (This ability is A ranked) This material has been nicknamed "web". This is because if the user presses a small button on the gauntlets, the material can be shot as a web will stick and act as a defense. The web however is thin, and is water based. So it has the strengths and weaknesses of a C ranked water wall. Finally, the last ability is that the user can coat his hands in a small amount of web. This allows the user to stick to walls and surfaces. However, it does not allow him to stand on water. This ability is E ranked. If a stranger tried to wear the gauntlets, without the permission of PB...they would become extremely heavy. The person would be unable to lift them, and unable to take them off. So they would become extremely weighed down.

-Restrictions-

Lasts for five turns
Can only be used once
Can only be used by PB and those he allows
Web can only be shot twice a turn
Web wall can only be used once a turn
Sticking to surfaces ability can only be used on solid surfaces like rocks or trees
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-Declined- you can't form Fiber out of water, it's a material of it's own.

 

[Howard]

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(Tekubi Joumae) - Wristlock
Type: Defense/Offense
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user intercepts a punch, a palm strike or an offensive arm movement by grabbing the opponent's hand, and bending and/or twisting it. The user releases chakra throughout this motion, causing his arm to move fast enough to intercept even chakra infused strikes, the chakra is then forcibly channeled into the opponent's joint causing additional pain. The wristlock is a technique that can be applied from a stand-up, crouching or even a sitting position, simply by grabbing the opponent's hand and twisting and/or bending it in a non-natural direction; if applied suddenly and/or forcefully, a wristlock can cause ligament tears as well as breaking of the forearm and dislocation of the shoulder. The wrist joint does not allow the opponent to perform rotating motions with the hand and trying to move the arm only causes further pain, as the force is transferred into the forearm causing radioulnar rotation, eventually resulting in a joint lock on the radioulnar joint. The wristlock is often accompanied by the opponent instinctively and willingly throwing him or herself to escape or alleviate the lock.
Notes:
-Can only defend against taijutsu punches, palm strikes and offensive arm movements up to B rank
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-Leaving for Scorps-

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 Declined  I cannot approve this because this is already part of free form Strong Fist... Even if I did, this means nothing and you wouldn't be able to simply "overpower" a member doing the same thing with freeform. Its a wristlock. Its like trying to make a patent for "uppercut" or "axe kick". It can't be done as it affects all of the community. DNR.

 

[Never]

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(Kusaribe no yubiwa) - Rings of Kusaribe
Type: Weapon
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description:
The user can wear a maximum of three of these rings, they can go on any finger on the hand. These Rings have their own power source of Raw Chakra, but because of this only have a limited amount of uses and cannot be recharged (Given Chakra By User) whilst in battle only before or after in their spar time (If in a war it has to end before being able to recharge rings). The rings are plain grey with some patterns or decals on them.

Each Ring has four uses that are used to make a blue shield that can range to be as large as the user, but not any bigger. The shields can be used for all manners of things :

Personal Shield
The Rings can make simple instant shields that can protect the user by them holding out their ringed hand and making the shield in front of them directly from the ring or wherever they point it. Shield breaks after enough damage is taken. These shields can also be used if the user is falling, they make the shield appears facing and hitting the ground they're about to fall on to push them back off it.

Weapon Shield
You are able to make a shield around one of your weapons, this decreases piercing damage but massively increases impact damage. If the weapon with the shield around it's blade is slammed onto the ground, it will cause the ground to break and send small rocks flying. Also the weapon is able to easily overcome ordinary weapons and has the ability to block small, weak, projectile techniques.

Octopus Shield
The Final type of shield that can be made is the octopus shield, though this is different and takes up all the power from one ring (all four uses). The shield is a transparent blue dome which the user is in, the surface of the dome has four tentacles coming off it, though these tentacles can only stretch short range they are powerful enough to hit the opponent away from the dome and block any projectiles before reaching the main dome.
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~Declined~ You do realize that you just made a CW with no drawbacks nor limits on it's usage at all? so this can defend you from anything, i was about to DNR honestly, because it's ridiculous but i'll give you one more go to make it reasonable.

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(Kusaribe no yubiwa) - Rings of Kusaribe
Type: Weapon
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description:
The user can wear a maximum of three of these rings, they can go on any finger on the hand. These Rings have their own power source of Raw Chakra, but because of this only have a limited amount of uses and cannot be recharged (Given Chakra By User) During war time you can recharge the ring before you enter a battle but not in a battle thread The rings are plain grey with some patterns or decals on them.

Each Ring has four uses that are used to make a blue shield that can range to be as large as the user, but not any bigger. The shields can be used for all manners of things :

Personal Shield
The Rings can make simple instant shields that can protect the user by them holding out their ringed hand and making the shield in front of them directly from the ring or wherever they point it. Shield breaks after enough damage is taken. These shields can also be used if the user is falling, they make the shield appears facing and hitting the ground they're about to fall on to push them back off it.

Weapon Shield
You are able to make a shield around one of your weapons, this decreases piercing damage but massively increases impact damage. If the weapon with the shield around it's blade is slammed onto the ground, it will cause the ground to break and send small rocks flying. Also the weapon is able to easily overcome ordinary weapons and has the ability to block small, weak, projectile techniques.

Octopus Shield
The Final type of shield that can be made is the octopus shield, though this is different and takes up all the power from one ring (all four uses). The shield is a transparent blue dome which the user is in, the surface of the dome has four tentacles coming off it, though these tentacles can only stretch short range they are powerful enough to hit the opponent away from the dome and block any projectiles before reaching the main dome.

Restrictions :
-Only Four rings can be worn at a time, each one has 3 uses unless the type of shield says otherwise.
-Weapons shield doesn't take up a jutsu slot in your turn, the other two do.
-The shields are made of raw chakra so are weak to elemental ninjutsu, except for fire, they have a strength against that and can go par with S-Rank. The rings special solid nature prevent fire from spreading around the shields and can douse it out.
-Shields stay active until destroyed or the user deactivates them
-If the rings aren't on the users person, they cannot be used and the rings themselves can be destroyed and so all the uses for that ring are taken away at once.

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-Declined- DNR

(Kage no monsutā) - Shadow Monster
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:
The user focuses their shadow and manipulates it into the shape of a huge monster (usually an animal or creature that suits themselves) behind them that is about three times bigger than the user. The shadow can move and make attacks at their enemy by reaching over the user by stretching the shadow and making simple physical attacks that are more powerful than a human, by punching the ground or swiping across making a hook attack, the shadows strength being extremely powerful and able to cause small craters in the ground with it's fist.
The shadow does not have legs but only connects with the users shadow so can only move wherever the user moves. The shadow can also defend against attacks and if hit enough times it will retract back into the users shadow

-No Shadow techniques can be used whilst this is active
-Can only be used once a battle
-Can only be taught by LonelyAssassin

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~Declined~ This should have a duration limit, and what do you mean by "hit enough times"? keep in mind that it can only attack someone who's in short range of the user, and why do you mention that it can attack, and mention in the type of the technique that it's only supplementary?

(Kaze Tejun) - Shadow Step
Type : Supplementary
Rank : A
Range : Short - Long
Chakra Cost : 30
Damage Points : N/A
Description :
A user of the Nara's shadows may cover himself and his shadow or a shadow with his chakra and step into it, he is then aloud to emerge from another objects shadow straight away. He cannot lurk within the passage from one shadow to another; it is literally a doorway to another object's shadow. The user can Shadow step to another allies shadow, but not an enemies.

-Cannot Shadow Step into opponents Shadow
-Cannot use any shadow above A rank next turn.
-Can only be taught by LonelyAssassin
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~Declined~ do not resubmit, really? this is space-time ninjutsu, and techniques like this are strictly prohibited.

X-Both Pending-X Leaving for someone else

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(Kage no monsutā) - Shadow Monster
Type: Offense/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:
The user focuses their shadow and manipulates it into the shape of a huge monster (usually an animal or creature that suits themselves) behind them that is about three times bigger than the user. The shadow can move and make attacks at their enemy by reaching over the user by stretching the shadow and making simple physical attacks that are more powerful than a human, by punching the ground or swiping across making a hook attack, the shadows strength being extremely powerful and able to cause small craters in the ground with it's fist.
The shadow does not have legs but only connects with the users shadow so can only move wherever the user moves. It can defend the user by using it's own body as a shield, of course damaging it's self.

-The Shadow monster can survive one S-Rank technique, unless it's Lightning (in that case it can survive one A-Rank Lightning Technique). This only matters once.
-No Shadow techniques can be used whilst this is active
-Can only be used twice a battle
-The Shadow Monster lasts three turns
-Can only be taught by LonelyAssassin

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-Declined- No to surviving an S-rank, if hit by an S-rank it will be destroyed, also explain the colored part a bit more.

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(Fūton : Tokage no sanpu) - Wind Release: Lizard Scatter
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description:
The user focuses Futon Type chakra to their sword and swing it back behind their head whilst the wind spins around the blade, they then slash downward whilst releasing the wind into multiple lizard heads that are connected to the sword, they can be scattered around to intercept multiple targets. The Lizard heads can also stay in short range still connected to the sword and attack later from it.

-Only taught by LonelyAssassin
-The lizards stay active for 3 turns.
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-Declined- Technique is fine on it's own, apart from that whole connecting to the blade thing.

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(Raiton : Denryū yusō) - Lightning Release : Current Transport
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description:
The user turns his body into lightning, travelling through a technique that is a Lightning Release technique that connects itself to the user. The User travels through the connection and out of the other end of the technique; for example if the user uses Chidori sharp spear they would turn to lightning and travel through the extended spear, and then the user would form on the other end of the spear with the chidori and the end of the chidori sharp spear would be where the user previously was.
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-Declined- Yeah not going to be allowed, and when submitting an A-ranked technique it's mandatory that it has proper restrictions, or it will be declined on the spot.

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(Fūton : Tokage no sanpu) - Wind Release: Lizard Scatter
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description:
The user focuses Futon Type chakra to their sword and swing it back behind their head whilst the wind spins around the blade, they then slash downward whilst releasing the wind into multiple lizard heads that are shot out of the sword, they can be scattered around to intercept multiple targets.

-Only taught by LonelyAssassin
-The Technique is usable twice

(removed lizards staying connected to blade)

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-Approved- Edited.

 

[Shirou Emiya]

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Summoning Animal:woodpeckers
Scroll Owner:bobisacoolguy
Other Users who have signed contract:n/a
Summoning Boss if existing:n/a
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:n/a
Bg info: a long time ago a young shinobi was walking in the forests around amegakure. While he was walking he heard a very peculiar noise. Peck..peck...peck..peck.. The young shinobi followed the noise all through out the Forrest until finally stumbling apon a little red headed bird that constantly hit the tree with his beak. The shinobi noticed a much greater bird far more massive begin to swoop down and the shinobi let out a blade of wind to stop the bigger bird. From there the bird eyed the young shinobi and poof a scroll appeared from the smoke. The scroll had kanji writing that said contract on it. The bird ten told the shinobi in thanks for his gratitude he would let him sign a contract.. A blood pact so that if ever in need all he had to do is draw blood and perform the handsesls and a woodpecker would aid him in battle.
Woodpeckers are birds that range from many different sizes, smallest being the size of a hand the biggest big enough to carry 2 shinobi. Woodpeckers have white underbellies with black wings and red heads. All woodpeckers have different variations of those colors.
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-Approved-

 

[-Blade-]

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Summoning Animal: Scorpions
Scroll Owner: -Blade-
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
Description and Background: Scorpions are predatory animals within the class Arachnida. They have eight legs and are easily recognized by the pair of grasping claws and the narrow, segmented tail, often carried in a characteristic forward curve over the back, ending with a venomous stinger. Scorpions range in size from 9 mm to the size of Gamabunta. All known scorpion species possess venom and use it primarily to kill or paralyze their prey so that it can be eaten. In general, it is fast-acting, allowing for effective prey capture. It is also used as a defense against predators.
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-Declined- Already exists.

Lightning Release: Lightning Racing HawkRaiton: Rai Zoku Taka
Type:Offence
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user creates a vast amount of lightning chakra into their palm and release a larger amount of lightning chakra causing it to form a sharp point resembling a birds beak. The lightning begins spreading around the user giving the perception that he has wings made of lightning(he doesnt) the user can run the technique into an enemy similar to Chidori or cause it to race towards the enemy and control the jutsu and have it chase after an enemy while controlling it via lightning chain that the user maintains on his hands.
-Only -Blade can teach
-Useable only 5x per battle
-If the lightning chain is broken the bird continues in the direction it is currently going

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-Declined- This technique won't be able to function as a Chidori because it lacks the concentration, and no to controlling it via the lightning chain.

 

[Reborn]

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Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Khafra (Summoning Technique: Khafra)
Type: Summon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Description: The Great Pharaoh Khafra, is the leader of all the caracals in the sanctuary. He was hand picked by the Sages of the Caracal Sanctuary and revered by his subjects. Only the great Sages of the Sanctuary surpass Khafra in skill and power. Khafra's personality is one befitting of royalty; he's poised, level headed, and has a very high degree of regard for proper etiquette. As the Pharaoh, he holds himself at a higher regard and grace than others which makes him appear arrogant to those who don't know him, however, his sense of self importance and worth are only agents of his upbringing and his culture. That being said, Khafra can be very condescending in attempts to display his own importance and scold others who don't treat him as he's supposed to. Khafra is also much larger than normal caracals. Khafra's physique is the equivalent to a rather small Bengal Tiger weighing in about 350-400lbs. His fangs are also larger, the equivalent to a tiger yet he has a shiny cream colored coat. Though caracals aren't generally as big and strong as this, Kharafe is the exception and he can destroy C-ranked earth techniques with his powerful claws.

Khafra is summoned as any other normal summon (With the five seals of the summoning technique), it only requires more chakra and control in order to summon him specifically. Khafra's prowess in genjutsu surpass most humans. Despite the fact that he rarely leaves the Sanctuary, having proved himself early in his life and maintaining his throne and authority for centuries, Khafra has developed extremely refined genjutsu abilities. Unlike most in the Sanctuary, Khafra can preform A-ranked genjutsu with ease. Also, Khafra has mastered Genjutsu Release to such an extent, he no longer needs to make physical contact with his summoner or others in order to release them from genjutsu, he only needs to release his chakra through his throat as he would for ordinary genjutsu, which would act as means for channeling his chakra into others to release genjutsu.
~As Khafra is the Pharaoh of the Caracal Sanctuary, he possesses 700 Chakra, half the total of a Kage's chakra.
~Through his training and being revered as the strongest caracal next to the Sages, Khafra can stay on the field until 90% of his chakra is drained (630) at which point he'll disperse and return to the Sanctuary (this is provided he is not injured in a way that would otherwise be fatal or critical enough for him to be forced to return).
~Once per battle, Khafra can perform an S-ranked genjutsu technique, however, the high ranked technique will cost him an additional 10 chakra making the drainage of chakra the equivalent to an F-ranked. Otherwise, Khafra can preform A-ranked and below genjutsu
~Khafra's genjutsu kai technique can be used once per turn (counts to one of the three jutsu) and, since it is merely genjutsu kai from a distance through the use of his voice as a medium, it can dispel any genjutsu (if he's using it to release others from genjutsu) so long as he's short-mid-range of the person(s) he's releasing, up to A-ranked if the users are long ranged from Khafra. Khafra can also use this method to release himself from genjutsu, however, only up to A-rank. The chakra consumption is the equivalent to the rank of technique he is trying to release.
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[Naruto Uzumaki Bijuu Sage]

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(Shoton: Koi Hari)-Crystal Release: Dense Crystal
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: Guren preforms a single hand seal, Releasing her chakra in the form of a wave which travels extremely fast towards a previously created crystal technique, The wave of chakra causes the previously created crystal technique to become extremely compressed increasing it's offensive and defensive capability's, Due to the compression the crystal technique becomes slightly smaller than it's original size.

Note: Increases crystal techniques by one rank.
Note: Can only be used three times per battle.
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-Declined- Why would the compression increase the technique's offensive capabilities?

(Shoton: Hari Furagumente)-Crystal Release: Crystal Fragmentation
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: After preforming "Crystal Release: Dense Crystal" Guren will preform a single hand seal, Causing the compressed crystal to release in form of a violent explosion, Sending crystal fragments in every direction, reaching up to short range of the explosion. The crystal fragments travel extremely fast and are extremely small.

Note: Can only be used three times per battle.
Note: The user must preform "Crystal Release: Dense Crystal" before this technique can be used.
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-Declined- Crystal Release: Dense Crystal is declined.

 

[Vincent]

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Ring of Ouroborus (Uroborosu no wa)
Type: Supplimentary
Rank: S
Range: Personal
Chakra: 40
Damage: -
Description: This ring is forged of a chakra conductive metal in the fashion of a dual headed snake, one head devouring its own tail, the other crowned with flowing sealing script carved into the design. In its center piece is a large jewel. This jewel is the key part of this ring's construction. The ring was forged to act as a way for the owner to cheat the limits of his own power, the ring is infact the vessel of a powerful kinjutsu that saps the lifeforce and soul of the owners victims, and uses these as victims to transfer the negative effects of the owners own techniques onto these fragments inside the ring, leaving the user unharmed. It also means the user has a readily usable number of souls and dna for kinjutsu techniques at all times.
Restrictions:
-This custom weapon is bound to the bio and cant be removed.
-Unless posted in the bio, counts a technique to summon it
-The ring absorbs the soul and blood from any shinobi the user kills
-Aslong as the ring has recently absorbed a victim, the user can transfer the recoil damage of the users techniques onto the imprisoned soul, thereby leaving the user unharmed.
-The souls and dna bound in the ring can be channeled into the edo tensei technique, thereby eliminating the need to gather and store genetic material manually.

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 Declined  DNR. Kinjutsu customs are not allowed.

Sage technique: Mirror Wall (Senjutsu: Mirā kabe)
Type: Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: -
Description: The user makes a single seal and manipulates the pure natural energy around him to condense into a powerful barrier around themselves, protecting them from a single s-rank technique, or multiple lower rank jutsu. The kinetic stress of another technique is equally distributed across the entire barrier that covers the user. This keeps the user away from all kinds of harm as the barrier is purely composed of energy.
-Usable Twice per battle
-Usable by valentines or in Sage Mode only

Sage Technique: Silent Blades (Senjutsu: Sairentoburēdo)
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user makes 3 seals and molds the natural energy around them, forming four blades from pure, condensed natural energy. These blades are then fired at the target(s) consecutively, the blades are sharp and dense enough to slice through flesh and bone with ease.
-Usable Twice
-Usable by Valentines or in SM only

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 Both Declined  This is cheating the CCJ limits by making customs that can be used as basically clan techniques. Remove the "valentines" reference. The first one needs definition. Natural energy is, as far as we know, capable of interacting "physically" with the world but we don't know how it interacts with intangible things such as fire or lightning. Instead of Natural energy, the barrier should be made out of Senjutsu Chakra, visible and basically enhanced chakra. However, either application has been done before in other elements, almost if not all. Second one is a no. Either make it Senjutsu Chakra or its a DNR. No invisible natural energy blades flying towards your helpless enemies. Not only that but its a concept we haven't see so far. When precise and minute shape manipulation was needed, natural energy was always molded with chakra. I don't feel a Frog Kata to be evidence that while in Sage Mode you can manipulate pure natural energy to the extent you seem to believe it can be manipulated. Blunt blasts? unfocused hits? ok, feasible, we've see it. Sharp, thin blades? pure, static barriers? No.

 

[Flash]

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(Bakuton: Geijutsu no niwa) Explosion Release: Garden of Art
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: NA
Description: Deidara slams his hands on the ground and channels his chakra into the ground, to make all the natural clay to rise up to the surface. He can then use this clay as an additional source of clay or can manipulate it to create various tools, small or large, over the entire battlefield to aide him. The user creates these tools from the clay source and its limitations are only set by the users own imagination and the chakra put into the technique.
- Can only be taught by Flash07
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-Declined- DNR, Deidara has his clay infused with his explosion release chakra through a Kinjutsu technique, that's the only clay he can use as a medium for his attacks, he can't make clay grow from the ground.

(Genjutsu: Ferōshippu no dentō-tekina kōru) | Illusionary Technique :Traditional song of the Fellowship
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Mid (from the snakes)
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The jutsu starts with the user releasing 12 rattle snakes from his body towards the opponent. These snakes all surround the opponent in a mid range (or lower) distance from all sides. Then, the snakes start their rattling- hissing and buzzing- made by the rattles at the tip of their tail which releases a strange sound vibration. The opponent(s) trapped in between the snakes suffer the maximum damage. The effects of this genjutsu take over 3 turns. This genjutsu inducing sound vibrations cause the opponent(s) to slow down considerably as he feels extreme sweating and in next turn, freeze in place as he starts hallucinating mildly. His vision will start to blur. He will feel uneasy as his heartbeat will increase. He'd find it difficult to move his muscle. His involuntary movements will stop.
In the third turn, all his 5 senses will fool him, making him see, hear, smell, feel and taste things which are not present.
- Can only be used once in a battle/thrice in a war.
- The user is immune to the genjutsu as he will be used to the rattling.
- Can only be taught by Flash07.

X-Declined-X Make this a summoning technique. Remove damage and show a link that proves you possess snakes.

Guardians Of Malice
Type: Summon
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user summons 12 spiritual snakes from his tattoo. These snakes, known to be amongst the oldest of all snakes, have the ability to manipulate mind (genjutsu) by mere hissing. Like Fukasaku and Shima, these snakes perform genjutsus with their harmonic hissing or rattling. One of their signature genjutsu is that these snakes all surround the opponent in a mid range (or lower) distance from all sides. Then, the snakes start their rattling- hissing and buzzing- made by the rattles at the tip of their tail which releases a strange sound vibration. These vibrations cause neurotic imbalances in the brain and thereby putting the opponents in an illusion. The opponent(s) trapped in between the snakes suffer the maximum damage. The effects of this genjutsu take over 3 turns. This genjutsu inducing sound vibrations cause the opponent(s) to slow down considerably as he feels extreme sweating and in next turn, freeze in place as he starts hallucinating mildly. His vision will start to blur. He will feel uneasy as his heartbeat will increase. He'd find it difficult to move his muscle. His involuntary movements will stop.
In the third turn, all his 5 senses will fool him, making him see, hear, smell, feel and taste things which are not present.
After this, the snakes are all free to attack as the opponent will be completely fooled until he releases himself out of the genjutsu.
- Can only be used once in a single battle.
- The snakes last for 5 turns on the field.
- Can perform any genjutsu that the user knows.
- The user is immune to the genjutsu as he will be used to the rattling.
- Can only be taught by Flash07.
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 Declined  Make an unique Genjutsu for them to use and reduce their numbers to 5 tops. Also, make sure to say that all 5 must be on the field for them to use the genjutsu. Allowing them to surround your enemy and use any genjutsu you know by hissing is a cheat. It means you transform any genjutsu you know, regardless of its "requirements" into a Sound Triggered Genjutsu. So no. However, I won't DNR it allowing you to make an unique genjutsu for them to use. The theme and the overall idea is cool, just not the level to which you're trying to boost it.


(Ninjutsu: Saigo no negai) Ninja Arts: Last Wish
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Self
Chakra: 30
Damage: Death to user
Description: This is a jutsu learnt by some people in their last moments, who have defeated the death god by accepting their death without any fear. On being defeated by the opponent, and when the user is at his last moments of life, he channels his pure chakra all over his body and activates this jutsu (which needs no handseals). The user simply disintegrates and turns himself into mud/water such that not even the smallest part of his DNA is left and he becomes one with nature.
- Can only be taught by Flash07
- Can only use this if the user has the required chakra.
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-Declined- Very similar to the Reverse Four Symbols Sealing Technique, which can do the very same thing.

 

[Korra.]

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Summoning Animal: Gharial
Scroll Owner: Korra
Other Users who have signed contract: None yet
Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A yet
Description and Background: The gharial (Gavialis gangeticus) is a crocodilian of the family Gavialidae. It is one of the longest of all living crocodilians. The gharial is characterised by its extremely long, thin jaws, and it is dark or light olive above with dark cross-bands and speckling on the head, body, and tail. The well-developed laterally flattened tail and webbed rear feet provide tremendous manoeuvrability in deepwater habitat. Korra was able to find the summoning scroll in the Kage office of Takigakure and learn to summon these creatures herself.
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-Declined- it's a subspecies of crocodiles, and you can't get it approved unless with the permission of the crocodile contract owner.

(Since its techincally not an alligator or crocodile Im sure this can get approved)


Desusutorōku no Sutoraiku | Strike of Deathstroke
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will start of by striking the opponent with a diagonal downwards cut with a sword then do an upwards diagonal strike the same way throwing the sword into the air. The user will then throw 4 kunai at the opponent hitting him in the chest. The user will then do a back flip into the air kicking the sword at the opponent which then will strike them. The user will the release a barrage of ninja tools (shurikens, kunais, senbons) at the opponent.
Note: Can only be taught by Korra
Note: Usable 4 times a match
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-Approved-

Just for reference so dont mind the use of guns in the video xD

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[Akuma]

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[Hyouton: Sefiroto] - Ice Release: Sephiroth
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: Using one's ability of mixing both water and wind natures, the user can wave a single hand seal and create seeds of ice in his palm (up to 4 per use) which can be planted in any spot to "take root". The seeds can also be dropped into a surface to grow vines, which can then be used as a trap to entwine the opponent or as stepping stones to cross unwalkable areas. The seeds also have the power to grow into trees so as to use many tree-like forms for attack and defense. To do the latter, the user must toss the seed into the are targeted, and then the seed will grow into small trees of ice with sharp branches, the tree(s) produced are slightly bigger than a regular human body. When using the vine variation, the user does not have to wave them himself, but rather toss them into the area from where they will grow and wrap around the nearest target, the torns on the vines are highly sharp, and can pierce human skin.

# May only be used x4 per battle.
# May not be used in consecutive turns.
# Must have an approved Yuki clan bio.
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[Hyouton: Sefiroto Keburā] - Ice Release: Sephiroth Gevurah
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Using advanced ice skills, the user can create a full grown ice-like tree with sharp and long branches of ice at any location he desires from the ground which pierces human flesh with ease. This attack does not have to grow completely into a tree in order for the user to utilize its power as he can release just a few branches let it be from ground level or from his body. He can grow the tree as high as his mind will allow for others to see and follow to his location or extend the length to reach its target from mid range. The Sephirot: Gevurah branches can also be used to wrap around the user, creating a sphere-like defense around his body that can block most attacks. Branches from the tree can be reformed if broken or more can be extended from other branches with the means of a hand seal (bore).

# May only be used x3 per battle.
# May not be used in consecutive turns.
# Must have an approved Yuki clan bio.
# No other A rank ice can be used in the same turn or the next.
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-Both Declined- Is it me or is this Ice Release being used like Wood Release? this isn't applicable to Ice Release, you'll have to shape transform it yourself, but no seeds of Ice will do that, unless with the use of Fuinjutsu.

[Raiton: Braugrai] - Lightning Style: Bragi's Laughter
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: B
Range: Short (self)
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: A simple yet very useful technique where one exploits their ability to control lightning natured chakra. The user first focusses the required amount of chakra into both legs (or one) and bursts it outwards briefly so that it creates a spiral cylinder of lightning to surround the user's leg(s) from the bottom of their foot (where a flat surface is, from where the cylinder starts) up to the knee. This technique is meant to defend the user from ground based earth technique as the lightning cylinder will not only prevent the earth from reaching the user, but also rip apart the earth that comes in contact with it. If the user is wet at the moment of this technique being used, the user will take damage and remain stunned for a brief moment.
# May only be taught by Loki
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-Declined- Similar to Akisha's Lightning shoes technique.

 

[Shady Doctor]

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(Fuuton: Ten to ji no same) - Wind Style: Heaven and earth sharks
Type: Attack/Defense/supplementary
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:
The user begins by focusing a massive quantity of Fuuton chakra within the soles of their feet. Once that is done, the user stomps or taps their foot on the ground (or can do it in mid air) which allows him to form within the ground (or beneath their feet in mid air) a full sized shark who's body consists of nothing but condensed wind. The sharks top fin would be visible above ground and extremely sharp. The shark can be used to race around underground in order to slice the enemies with its fin, or can even emerge from the ground and used to attack the enemy full on. It's teach would be razor sharp and capable of grinding the victim into pieces with relative ease. The shark is capable of flight due to Its wind nature thus allowing the user to fly around whilst standing on its back.

~ Can only be taught by Shady doctor
~ usable twice per battle
~ multiple sharks can be created but the more sharks created, the weaker they are.

‡ Declined ‡ how can you ride on it if its a technique designed to kill? also give definite values for how many can be made and the strength they have

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(Fuuton: Ten to ji no same) - Wind Style: Heaven and earth sharks
Type: Attack/Defense/supplementary
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:
The user begins by focusing a massive quantity of Fuuton chakra within the soles of their feet. Once that is done, the user stomps or taps their foot on the ground (or can do it in mid air) which allows him to form within the ground (or beneath their feet in mid air) a full sized shark (size of a full grown great white) who's body consists of nothing but condensed wind. The sharks top fin would be visible above ground and extremely sharp, Though majority of its body (other than the teeth and fins) is compressed wind thus will only deal blunt damage instead of cutting. The shark can be used to race around underground in order to slice the enemies with its fin, or can even emerge from the ground and used to attack the enemy full on to break bones due to sheer force. It's teeth would be razor sharp and capable of grinding the victim into pieces with relative ease. The shark is capable of flight due to Its wind nature thus allowing the user to fly around whilst standing on its back.

~ Can only be taught by Shady doctor
~ usable twice per battle
~ multiple sharks can be created but the more sharks created, the weaker they are. I.e. 1 shark = S-rank. Creating 2 sharks = A-rank each, creating 3 sharks = high B-ranks.
~ Can only create 3 sharks max
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-Declined- Too similar to black uchiha's Lightning Shark CJ.
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(Katon: Zanka no Tachi, Higashi: Kyokujitsujin ) - Fire style: Longsword of the Remnant Flame, East: Rising Sun Edge
Type: Attack/defense
Rank: S-rank
Range:Short-Long (dries up air and evaporates water up to long range)
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:
The user first weaves in 3 hand seals ending with the dragon seal, followed by unsheathing a sword and flowing Katon chakra into it as It's being unsheathed, thus activating the technique. Upon activation, extremely high amounts of heat is focused throughout the blade and It incorporates the full power of the Sun's flames into the blade. Legend has it that The flames within the blade burn anything it cuts out of existence, thus implying the the sword gains lethal cutting abilities (S-rank). Zanka no Tachi has the side-effect of depleting the moisture in an entire area (at least 20 meter radius) causing the air and the water to dry up. Over a significant period of time, even small lakes can be completely evaporated by the heat. While the technique is activated, water jutsu that are B-rank and below will be evaporated upon use, within seconds.

~ Can only be used by Shady doctor
~ Only usable once per battle and lasts 4 turns.
~ Can only use Wind, Earth and Fire techniques while this is active
~ After deactivating, the user can't use Katon jutsu for 3 turns

X-Both Pending-X Leaving for Roku or Scorps, Not checking complete copies of bleach techniques.

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(Katon: Zanka no Tachi, Higashi: Kyokujitsujin ) - Fire style: Longsword of the Remnant Flame, East: Rising Sun Edge
Type: Attack/defense
Rank: S-rank
Range:Short-Long (dries up air and evaporates water up to long range)
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:
The user first weaves in 3 hand seals ending with the dragon seal, followed by unsheathing a sword and flowing Katon chakra into it as It's being unsheathed, thus activating the technique. Upon activation, extremely high amounts of heat is focused throughout the blade and It incorporates the full power of the Sun's flames into the blade. Legend has it that The flames within the blade burn anything it cuts out of existence, thus implying the the sword gains lethal cutting abilities (S-rank). Zanka no Tachi has the side-effect of depleting the moisture in an entire area (at least 20 meter radius) causing the air and the water to dry up. Over a significant period of time, even small lakes can be completely evaporated by the heat. While the technique is activated, water jutsu that are B-rank and below will be evaporated upon use, within seconds.

~ Can only be used by Shady doctor
~ Only usable once per battle and lasts 4 turns.
~ Can only use Wind, Earth, lightning and Fire techniques while this is active
~ After deactivating, the user can't use Katon jutsu for 3 turns
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-Declined- Problem is, the sword's blade will melt when being exposed to this much heat, you need an indestructible sword to do that, and indestructible swords are only exclusive to CWs.
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( Katon: Zanka no Tachi, Minami: Kaka Jūmanokushi Daisōjin ) - Fire style: Longsword of the Remnant Flame, South: Great Burial Ranks of the Ten Trillion Fire Dead
Type: Attack/defense
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description:
The user begins by focusing an abundance of Katon chakra into the tip of his sword and then impales the tip of his sword into the ground. With that done, he uses the concentrated Katon chakra to create super heated ash below the surface of the the earth. The extremely heated ash would then quickly be molded and manipulated in such a way that an army of 100 warriors made of the ash would emerge from the ground all around the terrain. Each warrior would be heated to the point that they can turn objects to ash themselves by simply landing a blow on them. I.e. an ash warrior punches a wall of some sort and the area it punched would turn into ash due to the high amounts of heat being produced from the warriors. Each warrior is armed with a Spartan shield and a full length spear, all made of the same super heated ash. The beings let off so much heat that it begins to get very difficult to breath around them (close range), even for the user himself, thus putting him in harms way if he stays near them too long. Each warrior will automatically regenerate any lost limb with ash from the rest of its body, making extremely difficult to get rid of them.

~ Can only be used by Shady doctor
~ Usable once and lasts 3 turns
~ No water jutsu while active
~ User is limited to A-rank jutsu for 6 turns due to chakra depletion


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X-Both Pending-X Leaving for Roku or Scorps, Not checking complete copies of bleach techniques.

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 All Declined  get Roku's permission then resubmit.
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( Katon: Zanka no Tachi, Minami: Kaka Jūmanokushi Daisōjin ) - Fire style: Longsword of the Remnant Flame, South: Great Burial Ranks of the Ten Trillion Fire Dead
Type: Attack/defense
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description:
The user begins by focusing an abundance of Katon chakra into the tip of his sword and then impales the tip of his sword into the ground. With that done, he uses the concentrated Katon chakra to create super heated ash below the surface of the the earth. The extremely heated ash would then quickly be molded and manipulated in such a way that an army of 100 warriors made of the ash would emerge from the ground all around the terrain. Each warrior would be heated to the point that they can turn objects to ash themselves by simply landing a blow on them. I.e. an ash warrior punches a wall of some sort and the area it punched would turn into ash due to the high amounts of heat being produced from the warriors. Each warrior is armed with a Spartan shield and a full length spear, all made of the same super heated ash. The beings let off so much heat that it begins to get very difficult to breath around them, even for the user himself, thus putting him in harms way if he stays near them too long. Each warrior will automatically regenerate any lost limb with ash from the rest of its body, making extremely difficult to get rid of them.

~ Can only be used by Shady doctor
~ Usable once and lasts 3 turns
~ No water jutsu while active
~ User is limited to A-rank jutsu for 6 turns due to chakra depletion
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-Declined- Too OP, not to mention objects don't turn to ash like that, when heated, every substance has a different reaction to heat, rocks become molten, plastic melts, water evaporates etc.

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[Shinta]

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(Okurinushi Ni Hensō) Return to Sender
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: E-A
Range: Short to Mid-range (Target is sent back to Mid-range)
Chakra: 05/10/15/20/30
Damage: 10/20/30/40/50/60
Description: A simple Taijutsu move where the user side-steps a Taijutsu attack, or steps inside the effective reach of the the attack and performs a powerful round-house kick or short punch to the opponent's gut, sending them flying backwards to mid-range. The technique can also be used to knock back earthen (or other solid objects such as steel) projectiles to a similar distance, aiming them at the opponent if need be.
Notes:
- The target being knocked back must be within striking distance,
- This can only be used four times a match,
- This will not work against electrified or flaming objects including lava,
- Objects sent backward will be sent back at much the same speed they carried before being intercepted,
- Can only be taught by Shinta.

X-Declined-X Pick a single rank



This submission is based off a prior approved Jutsu of mine.

(Doton: Roku chō shizen ken no jutsu) Earth Release: Six Supernatural Fists Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Charging their Doton chakra into their back and armpits, the user will use there chakra to 'grow' four extra arms from their shoulder blades and from their sides just under their normal arms. The back arms are slightly longer than the users original arms in such a way that the users normal wrists are in line with the back arms wrists when holding them out in front of them. The arms grown from the side of the body, are the same length as the users normal arms. These arms can be used in a multitude of ways as they are controlled by the user as if they were their normal arms, they also become incorporated into the users chakra network, using them to support Kenjutsu, Taijutsu and even Ninjutsu. These arms can be used to perform hand seals for other jutsu in the event the normal arms become occupied. These arms give; a +20 damage boost to all kenjutsu attacks if they are used to support the hands in the swing or action with the sword; they also give a +30 damage boost to all taijutsu punches by adding two extra fists to each hit; and finally these arms can create rasengan and remove the need for shadow clones when using (Tsuin Rasengan) – Twin Spiralling Sphere by using the arms to add the necessary rotation to the rasengan.
Notes:
- Can only be taught by Shinta,
- Can only be used twice,
- The arms remain for two turns or until the user cancels the jutsu and they cannot be formed on successive turns,
- As the earth chakra is only requires to initially create the arms, incorporating them temporarily into the users chakra network, the user is able to perform all jutsu as per normal with the exceptions of full body lightning jutsu,
- The parent jutsu (Doton: Yottsu Chō Shizen Ken no Jutsu) cannot be used on the following turn this jutsu is deactivated/cancelled nor can this jutsu be activated while the parent jutsu is in effect,
- No S-rank lightning jutsu can be used while these arms are active.

X-Declined-X Parent technique A while this is B?

(Okurinushi Ni Hensō) Return to Sender
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short to Mid-range (Target is sent back to Mid-range)
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60 (If used to strike a person)
Description: A simple Taijutsu move where the user side-steps a Taijutsu attack, or steps inside the effective reach of the the attack and performs a powerful round-house kick or short punch to the opponent's gut, sending them flying backwards to mid-range. The technique can also be used to knock back earthen (or other solid objects such as steel) projectiles to a similar distance, aiming them at the opponent if need be.
Notes:
- The target being knocked back must be within striking distance,
- This can only be used four times a match,
- This will not work against electrified or flaming objects including lava,
- Objects sent backward will be sent back at much the same speed they carried before being intercepted (Same rank),
- Can only be taught by Shinta.
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-Declined- The colored portion is easily exploitable, that's why i won't approve it, not to mention that the colored is similar to Nirvana's Half Step Technique.

(Doton: Roku chō shizen ken no jutsu) Earth Release: Six Supernatural Fists Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Charging their Doton chakra into their back and armpits, the user will use there chakra to 'grow' four extra arms from their shoulder blades and from their sides just under their normal arms. The back arms are slightly longer than the users original arms in such a way that the users normal wrists are in line with the back arms wrists when holding them out in front of them. The arms grown from the side of the body, are the same length as the users normal arms. These arms can be used in a multitude of ways as they are controlled by the user as if they were their normal arms, they also become incorporated into the users chakra network, using them to support Kenjutsu, Taijutsu and even Ninjutsu. These arms can be used to perform hand seals for other jutsu in the event the normal arms become occupied. These arms give; a +20 damage boost to all kenjutsu attacks if they are used to support the hands in the swing or action with the sword; they also give a +30 damage boost to all taijutsu punches by adding two extra fists to each hit; and finally these arms can create rasengan and remove the need for shadow clones when using (Tsuin Rasengan) – Twin Spiralling Sphere by using the arms to add the necessary rotation to the rasengan.
Notes:
- Can only be taught by Shinta,
- Can only be used twice,
- The arms remain for two turns or until the user cancels the jutsu and they cannot be formed on successive turns,
- As the earth chakra is only requires to initially create the arms, incorporating them temporarily into the users chakra network, the user is able to perform all jutsu as per normal with the exceptions of full body lightning jutsu,
- The parent jutsu (Doton: Yottsu Chō Shizen Ken no Jutsu) cannot be used on the following turn this jutsu is deactivated/cancelled nor can this jutsu be activated while the parent jutsu is in effect,
- No S-rank lightning jutsu can be used while these arms are active.
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-Declined- similar techniques exist.

Fixed rank for both of them.

Secret Nanabi Art: Carapace Shedding Rebirth
(Nanabi Hijutsu: Koukaku Dappi Kousei)
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Rank: Forbidden
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 60
Damage: N/A
Description: After sustaining heavy damage the Nanabi will shed its outer layer of its carapace regrowing the damaged areas. It will remain without an outer shell leaving it without its normally strong defense and susceptible to any attack. The shedding of the outer layer also allows the Nanabi to reach speeds of the fourth gate thanks to losing the heavy armor. The major drawback of this technique is that once used, the full transformation can only be sustained for three more moves (not turns) no matter what and techniques that rely on its strong outer layer can no longer be used.
~Can only be used once per battle.
~The user is limited to 3 moves before the full transformation wears off.

~ Approved ~

By transformation I was referring to the full bijuu transformation, not the "transformation" of shedding the carapace. So after using this I would have 3 moves before I reverted back to normal ol' Fu.

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Secret Nanabi Art: Carapace Shedding Rebirth (Nanabi Hijutsu: Koukaku Dappi Kousei)
Type: Supplementary/Defence
Rank: Forbidden
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 60
Damage: N/A
Description: After sustaining heavy damage the Nanabi will shed its outer layer of its carapace regrowing the damaged areas. It will remain without an outer shell leaving it without its normally strong defence and susceptible to any attack. The shedding of the outer layer also allows the Nanabi to reach speeds of the fourth gate thanks to losing the heavy armour. The major drawback of this technique is that once used, the full transformation can only be sustained for three more attacks (Jutsu) no matter what and techniques that rely on its strong outer layer can no longer be used.
Notes:
- Can only be used once per battle.
- The user is limited to 3 moves before the full transformation wears off.
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-Leaving for Scorps-

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 Declined  needs definition, needs to abide by the technique template (chakra info is wrong), needs restriction and I don't get why its a Forbidden rank. One more go.

 

[Gutsy]

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Suiton: Setsuna Tori Gyakujou | Water Release: Instant Bird Frenzy
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Tobirama Senju will perform the Bird hand seal, whereas he will release his chakra high into the sky above the field almost instantly creating a large volume of water which will be formed into a hundred small birds of water, the size of hummingbirds, these birds will then come diving down upon the opponent from above while they are spiraling in the air, giving them a drilling effect when they strike.
Note:
- This technique may only be used by a Tobirama Senju bio
- This technique can only be performed twice per battle
- This technique may only be taught by Gutsy Jiraiya
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-Declined- no to the colored, also it won't have a drilling effect when the water has the shape of birds, they would inflict physical blunt damage at best, unless they are pretty compressed and have pointed tips all over.

Suiton: Sankōryū | Water Release: Three Rain Dragons
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will perform the Ram – Tiger – Ox – Bird hand sequence, which is then followed by him creating a large portion of water high in the sky, and then manipulating it into three serpentine dragons, which can then be manipulated according to the user’s will for attack purposes. These three dragons have great striking force, which can cause massive internal and external damage to their target.
Note:
- This technique can only be performed trice per battle
- This technique may only be taught by Gutsy Jiraiya
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-Declined- No to the colored, too broad.

 

[Goddess]

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(Palantir) - Palantir
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: N/A
Description: Palantir is a sphere intended for pure evil and trickery. Palantir is the epitome weapon of bloodlust and hatred. Palantir is made of an indestructible glass made of strong chakra fibers within the glass. Palantir is a black sphere with a feint red interior that gives off a glow. Due to being created out of chakra, Palantir has its own chakra signature separate from the owner and that chakra it can use to constantly levitate around her/him. Palantir does come with special abilities only unique to the sphere. When the user uses genjutsu, Palantir takes the chakra that would be applied to the user and absorbs it. It adds its own chakra to the users chakra then expels the genjutsu to the original target. When Palantir absorbs the users chakra, the red core begins to grow intensely. The chakra added by Palantir to the genjutsu, the genjutsu's strength increases by a rank. The sphere can only be used as a blunt object weapon when it makes contact with the opponent injects chakra into them to disrupt them but not putting them under a genjutsu. The disruption is just to stop the person from molding chakra for those few seconds.
Note: Can only be used my -Karin-
Note: the orb/sphere can be kept in a scroll and summoned for battle.
Note: The summoning of this technique will count as a move in a turn
Note: Palantir can only increase the rank of a genjutsu 5 times per battle and there needs to be a 2 turn cool down between uses.
Note: When used as a blunt force weapon, Palantir can only disturb an opponents chakra system to stop the molding of chakra twice per battle.
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-Declined- I don't get it, does the sphere increase the genjutsu by 1 rank or dispel the user out of it? because either way it's not going to be approved based on those abilities.

Genjutsu: Bentoge) - Illusion Technique: Crown of Thorns
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Range: Short- Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user injects their chakra into their opponent's chakra flow and disrupting it placing them in a genjutsu. This specific genjutsu attacks the opponent's mental state. The opponent's image goes blurry and suddenly imagine a crown of thorns to be applied to their head. After a while the crown of thorns is pressed down into the opponent's skull causing blood to drip down from their face. In reality, the opponent suffers a large headache and mental stress causing them damage as the user's chakra is concentrated around the base of the skull. Eventually, the pain they sustain is too much and causes them to pass out which then would automatically dispel the genjutsu.
Note: Can only be taught by Karin
Note: Can be used twice per battle
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-Declined- First of all it needs handseals, and a B-rank genjutsu is too weak to cause unconsciousness, also you need to give a duration in which need to pass for the opponent to be unconscious.

(Genjutsu: Haritsuke) - Illusion Technique: Crucifixion
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short to Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user injects their chakra into the enemy's chakra streams placing them under a genjutsu. An earthen pillar rises up from the ground behind the user and lifts them up into the air about 30 meters above the ground. The ground below disappears into a swamp of blood and the only thing that is left unchanged is the large pillar itself and the opponent. Two horizontal rocks come out the side of the pillar and wraps itself around the opponent's arms by spreading them out latitudinal. Their legs come together and over lap one another. Suddenly earthen screws appear and drill their way into the opponent's palms and feet nailing them to the pillar. In reality, the opponent is paralyzed and also feels the great extension of pain from the illusion itself. This works because the brain sends electrical signals to the nervous system to react to pain. Since the brain is being fooled into thinking that the body is currently receiving pain it sends electrical signals to the nervous system to experience that pain for the body. After snapping out of the genjutsu, the opponent will still feel pain in the center of their palms and feet making each step and handseal they make hurt.The paralyzation lasts for one turn. The pain after the genjutsu lasts 2 turns.
Note: can only be taught by Karin
Note: can only be used once per battle
Note: No genjutsu in the same turn
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-Declined- I didn't read it yet, but no long range genjutsus are going to be approved, and it needs handseals.

 

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(Genjutsu: Heki Kukyou)-Illusionary Arts: False Predicament
Type: Offensive
Rank: S Rank
Range: Short-Mid Range
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user first cast a genjutsu on the enemy. When the genjutsu is successfully used, the enemy will see the user simply standing there looking at him with a normal and emotionless look on his face(or what ever the mood is at the moment for the user, will be reflected on to him), then he will lift his left hand and point towards the enemy, then the enemy will see the user running at him in a zig zag manner to him. In reality, the victim of the genjutsu is completely immobilize from the moment the user raises his arm. Unable to move his body in reality, but in the illusion he can clearly move, and can act normally. By the time the user of the genjutsu is seen reaching close to the enemy in the illusion, its because the user has already earn enough seconds to to reach short range of the immobilize enemy

Notes:
-May Only be taught by -Venom-
-No A rank or above Genjutsu the next turn

X-Declined-X In essence there is nothing in this illusion that you cannot already do using another technique. What is unique is the part where you add that you will be close range to the victim < That is something uncertain.

(Genjutsu: Heki Kukyou)-Illusionary Arts: False Predicament
Type: Offensive
Rank: A Rank
Range: Short-Mid Range
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user first cast a genjutsu on the enemy, by streaming his chakara into the opponent's mind.. When the genjutsu is successfully used, the enemy will see the user of the genjutsu simply standing there looking at him with a normal and emotionless look on his face(or what ever the mood is at the moment for the user, will be reflected on to him), as if nothing is happening, and the user of the genjutsu make it seems as if he is waiting on something. Then he will lift his left hand and point towards the enemy. The enemy will then see the user starting to run at him. Running at him in a zig zag manner to him. In reality, the victim of the genjutsu is completely immobilize from the moment the user raises his arm. Unable to move his body in reality, but in the illusion he can clearly move, and can act normally, and even "counter" the person from reaching him.. By the time the user of the genjutsu is seen reaching close to the enemy in the illusion, its because in reality, enough time have passed making the the user to already earn enough seconds to reach short range of the immobilize enemy, or perform 8 hand seals.

Notes:
-May Only be taught by -Venom-
-No A rank or above Genjutsu the next turn
-Can only be used twice per battle
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-Declined- A lot of things wrong with this, other than it can be made using another technique, it needs handseals, and you can't restrict someone in reality without him being restricted in the illusion, everything happens for a reason, the opponent has to be chained or have something that prevents him from moving to be paralyzed in reality, this needs complete rewording and it's not looking up, i suggest that you give up on it.

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(Raiton/Katon: Sen Higyou)-Lighting/Fire: Buster Beam Strike
Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden Rank
Range: Short-Long Range
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90
Description: The user first does 3 hand seals, place both hand togther and begins to release lighting chakara around both hands. With the lighting chakara out, it begins to circulate a very fast pace. Due to the frictional force of the lighting, it begins to heat up, and begins to set the user hand a blaze, causing severe pain to both of the user's hand. Then, the user focuses his fire chakara into the lighting that was previously created, then extends his/her hand out and release all of it in a quick burst. A beam of lighting/fire chakara will be release, it will be shot out very quickly, leaving little to no time for the enemy to counter it. The force of this blast has high cutting potential, due to the lighting chakara. This is also strong enough to go through something with mass as big as gamabunta or the gedo statue with little ease. Once the beam has been release, the user can then bring both his hand apart to separate the beam to cut other things on the field, which will having strength of a A rank Lighting/Fire Elemental jutsu

Notes:
-Due to the lighting chakara creating a massive amount of heat, the user hand will be severely burnt after use, making him unable to use his hand for two turns after.
-The user may not use any forbidden rank jutsu for 5 turns after the use of this jutsu
-No S rank jutsu lighting or fire for the next two turns
-User may not use any jutsu after this one (in the same turn that is)
-May only be used twice per battle
-May only be taught by -Venom-

Video of the jutsu:

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-Declined- DNR, look at the colored and judge for yourself.

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(Doton:sawa matsuri) Earth Style: Swamp Body
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Self
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/a
Description: This is a very simple earth jutsu, The user will gather large amounts of earth chakra into their body, Once done the user will do 1 handseal turning their body into a mud/swamp state, Making them intangible. Causing Physical attacks to phase through the body going right through the body not causing no harm to the user. This jutsu can stay active for the users turn only, Once its the opponents turn their body goes back to a physical state

Note: Cant Use No Jutsus While In this form
Note: Can Use 2 Times
Note: Must Wait 1 turn before using this jutsu again
Note: Double the damage from Lightning Attacks
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-Declined- DNR

 

[Excālibur1]

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(Sumi Heiki) Ink Weapons
Type:Weapons
Rank:C
Range:Short
Chakra:10
Damage:N/A
Description:The user unravels his scroll and dips his brush in the Chakra filled Ink Jar. Then he draws several Weapons on the scroll and performs single hand and manipulates the Ink to create Desired Weapons they require.

Notes
~Can be Used/Taught by Sasuke56
~Can range from 20 Kunai to 5 Swords / Multiple Chains to Several Huge Balls
~Reachable upto Mid-Range if thrown
~Must Have Sai Bio
~Can be Pre-Drawn in Scroll
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-Declined- If it's reachable to Mid range, then the range must be Short - Mid, also lol at the colored, give the weapons a limit in their size.

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(Sumi Zou Hitonami) Ink Elephants Stampede
Type:Attack/Defense
Rank:S
Range:Long
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:The user unravels his scroll and dips his brush in the Chakra filled Ink Jar. Then he draws 5 to 10 Elephants on the Scroll and performs a Single Hand Seal while manipulating the Ink to create Elephants. These Elephants can rush towards the Opponent causing Stampede.

Notes
~Can be Used/Taught by Sasuke56
~Can range from 5 to 10 Elephants
~Must Have Sai Bio
~Can be Pre-Drawn in Scroll
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-Declined- mention the size of each elephant.

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(Sumi Tei Rakka) Ink Air Drop
Type:Attack
Rank:B
Range:Short Range
Chakra:20
Damage:40
Description:The user First draws a Ink Bird on a Scroll and manipulates Ink while performing a Single Hand Seal to make a Single Bird appear before the User. Then The User will fly into the Mid-Air exactly under the Opponent and takes out his Scroll and starts to draw Few Animals or Weapons and manipulates it while performing a Single Hand Seal to make a Physical Shape of the Desired Animal or Weapon. These Animals or Weapons can be used to drop on the Opponent.

Notes
~Can only be Used/Taught by Sasuke56
~Must Fly into the Mid-Air above the Opponent or very near to him in Mid-Air
~Can range from One Elephant to Several other Animals / Can range from 25 Kunais to 10 Swords / Can range from Several Chains to Several Huge Balls
~Can be Pre-Drawn in Scroll
~Must Have Sai Bio
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-Declined- Look at the colored.

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