Learning from Albel.

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As long as you have finished A-rank then there is no problem. I forgot to ask you that through PM. xD Anyways, on to the jutsu! First off, I want you to channel your chakra around both your left and right hands and then using your fire nature to turn that chakra into flames. After you have turned your chakra into flames I want you to use shape manipulation on the flames surrounding both of your hands to where they resemble two fiery claws. Once you have done this we will move onto the next part.

Oh please try to be descriptive when doing this. :)
 

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okay...
*I hold out both my hands outward and close my eyes to concentrate. I then, begin by gathering my chakra and channeling it into my left hand and right hand enveloping both hands in chakra. Once I've gathered enough chakra, I move on to the next step. I then, channel my nature type which is fire into both my hands, producing flames that envelop my left and right hand. After establishing that, I use shape manipulation on the flames that cover my hands specifically my finger tips. I extend the flames and make the flames denser similarly to a solid, making them long and giving them the appearance of long, sharp claws made of fire. I open my eyes and maintain control of the form on both hands.*
Like this?...
 
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Very good.

Now onto the next step. Using those two fiery claws you have made I want you to come at my clone at slash at him five times; however, when you hit him with the fourth slash you will jump up into the air come back down towards him making a X slashing motion with both of your claws.

Watch 0:05-0:14 to see what it looks like and how it is performed. I know in the video the person is only using one hand, but mine is with two making it twice as deadly.


*Makes clone*

Again be descriptive.
 
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Right.
*Upon hearing your words, I run towards your clone while maintaining my fire-claw infused hands. Once you clone is within range, I deliver a horizontal slash using my right hand onto his stomach, an upward slash using my left hand onto his chin ,launching him upward into the air. Using that momentum, I perform a reverse spin and turn my wrist in my right hand to face the same direction as my left hand, to deliver another horizontal slash and then, bringing in my left hand to slash your clone downward diagonally. I then, jump into the air and cross my arms while, tucking my head in ready to attack. I finish up, by dropping down onto your clone and deliver a downward X-shaped slash using both hands, causing him to disperse upon impact and releases an intense flame which levels the ground. I land on one knee and look up. I break the concentration on my claws and the flames disappear from my hands.*
How was that?....
 

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Right.
*Upon hearing your words, I run towards your clone while maintaining my fire-claw infused hands. Once you clone is within range, I deliver a horizontal slash using my right hand onto his stomach, an upward slash using my left hand onto his chin ,launching him upward into the air. Using that momentum, I perform a reverse spin and turn my wrist in my right hand to face the same direction as my left hand, to deliver another horizontal slash and then, bringing in my left hand to slash your clone downward diagonally. I then, jump into the air and cross my arms while, tucking my head in ready to attack. I finish up, by dropping down onto your clone and deliver a downward X-shaped slash using both hands, causing him to disperse upon impact and releases an intense flame which levels the ground. I land on one knee and look up. I break the concentration on my claws and the flames disappear from my hands.*
How was that?....
Not bad. Now as you know your opponent will be running around, jumping, flying, swimming, and all that other crazy crap throughout the battle when you are trying to use this jutsu(unlike my clone), so because of this I want you to tell me how would you go about keeping your opponent still or better yet distracted so you can form this jutsu and use it on them? Basically tell me what combination of moves would be best to use this move with to make sure you actually land the hit. Also, tell me how would you go about defending yourself against this jutsu if it were to ever be used against you by your opponent who is using the same combination of moves to make sure this move hits you. Feel free to give other ways of how one might use this jutsu against you as well and tell me how you would defend against it, or other combinations you would use with this jutsu to make sure it hits your target.

Again try to give me some good detailed answers.
 
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hmmm....Well I would use first Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar to blind them and them use the Inuzuka's four-legged technique to grant me high-speed movement. So, while they are blinded, I'll move in quickly while, having my hands enveloped in the fire claws and finish them off. But, I don't know this tech yet so, I'm using flash bombs to compensate for the moment. To defend, as an Inuzuka I have my other senses to aid me. My sense of smell and hearing if by chance I'm blinded and using my reflexes to evade each strike and using the four-legged technique would greatly enhance my senses and movements. Another tactic, I would use a smoke bomb to conceal my movements and make use of a shadow clone making the enemy think that's the real me and keep them occupied. While I use Earth Release: Underground Projection Fish Technique to hide before the smoke clears and carry out an ambush from behind on the target with the claws. How to counter this...With sensory or using my Inuzuka abilities to detect them and use quick reflexes to evade the slashes. If I was forced to block, I would use the same technique to clash or a kenjutsu technique of equal power. I can think of a few other ways but, I'd rather not reveal all of it.
 

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hmmm....Well I would use first Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar to blind them and them use the Inuzuka's four-legged technique to grant me high-speed movement. So, while they are blinded, I'll move in quickly while, having my hands enveloped in the fire claws and finish them off. But, I don't know this tech yet so, I'm using flash bombs to compensate for the moment. To defend, as an Inuzuka I have my other senses to aid me. My sense of smell and hearing if by chance I'm blinded and using my reflexes to evade each strike and using the four-legged technique would greatly enhance my senses and movements. Another tactic, I would use a smoke bomb to conceal my movements and make use of a shadow clone making the enemy think that's the real me and keep them occupied. While I use Earth Release: Underground Projection Fish Technique to hide before the smoke clears and carry out an ambush from behind on the target with the claws. How to counter this...With sensory or using my Inuzuka abilities to detect them and use quick reflexes to evade the slashes. If I was forced to block, I would use the same technique to clash or a kenjutsu technique of equal power. I can think of a few other ways but, I'd rather not reveal all of it.
Though blinding your opponent would be effective indeed but they would still have their hearing, so they could still tell where you are coming from and defend. Me personally, I would go with using Genjutsu that affects my opponents, vision along with his hearing, smell, taste, ect. Or maybe a binding Genjutsu or even have my shadow clone use Killing Intent on my opponent as I go in for the attack. Still the answers you have put down are nice. ^^

So I believe that is everything I want you to do...wait...nope that is everything. Now, the moment you have been waiting for! You are now allowed to use:

(Katon: Tenrai Shourisha) Fire Style: Divine Conqueror
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will first off channel katon chakra to his right and left hand, and then manipulate the chakra in the form of two fiery claws, which he then uses to slash at the opponent five times. After the fourth slash the user will jump up into the air with the claws still active and come back down towards the opponent, and swing his arms at him in an X shaped slashing motion hitting him.
~Can only be taught by AlbelTheWicked
~Can be used twice
~No fire jutsus above B rank during your next turn

Have fun with it. :)
 

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Your right genjutsu would help. Lol Although Genjutsu isn't my thing I'm all about close quarters but, Thanks Albel. I'll use it wisely.
 

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We meet again boss....

(Katon: Yaketsuku yōna Hebi Kazangan Toreiru) – Fire Release: Searing Serpent Lava Trail
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank:S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description: After creating a shadow clone, the user will form an earthen creature made and controlled by him whether it be made of mud or solid rock, while the clone focuses his fire chakra and will manifest lances along its head, back, torso, and the sides of its arms(if it has any), as well as plates that the lances on the surface of the creature. Once they combine, the users will send the creature forward and slam it into the target(s), covered in scalding mud or knocked away (blunt force) and incinerated.

-Useable twice per battle with a 2 turn cool down period in between usages.
-No S-rank and above fire techniques next turn

(Katon: Doraibu) – Fire Release: Drive
Type:eek:ffensive
Rank:D
Range:short-mid
Chakra:10
Damage:20
Description: Is a smaller and weaker version of the raging drive technique. The user creates two vertical column of fire that raise in front of him, on his left and right. The user then manipulates the column and creates an orb of fire that rises above the user and target and then turns into lances of fire from the orb, diving into the target.
Restrictions:
-Can only be taught by fang.

Any questions on these two?
 

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No questions really. Already learned the other two versions of the Drive jutsu so this one is quite simple to understand, and as for the other one that is pretty much simple as well.

Now here ya go:

(Katon : Hi no yōsei) - Fire Release : Fire Fairies
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30 (+10 Explosive tags)
Description:
The User channels their fire chakra into a small tool like a Kunai or Shuriken that they are holding or one that is within Mid-Range (Kunai that have been left on the ground etc). They can throw it at their target to begin with if they are holding the tool but after they do they will make a hand seal and the fire chakra will erupt around the tool and form a flaming aura giving them the ability to set anything the first thing on fire that it touches. The Fire also forms wings giving the ability for the user to manipulate the tool to flutter in any direction they like and when in position the user will make the fire explode and send the Kunai in a desired direction or simply disperse the fire so it drops. This can be used with explosive tagged kunai as long as they are attached with a metallic string to the kunai so it isn't affected by the fire around it nor the string - when the fire explodes however the tag will too making a larger explosion.
-Can only be taught by Albel


A pretty simple cj but very effective. Read through it and if you have any questions just ask.
 

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Questions?

(Katon: Doraibu) – Fire Release: Drive
Type:eek:ffensive
Rank:D
Range:short-mid
Chakra:10
Damage:20
Description: Is a smaller and weaker version of the raging drive technique. The user creates two vertical column of fire that raise in front of him, on his left and right. The user then manipulates the column and creates an orb of fire that rises above the user and target and then turns into lances of fire from the orb, diving into the target. These lances now have homing capabilities should the target evade them.
Restrictions:
-Can only be taught by fang.
 

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Forgot I even made this thread. Thanks for linking me.

(Katon: Reijingu Doraibu)-Fire Release: Raging Drive
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Mid (Short when using it for defense)
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user begins by weaving the tiger hand-seal and releases rising fire along the ground and is shot upward in the form of three vertical columns of fire that rise around the targets. The user then manipulates the three columns and creates an orb of fire from each one that rises above the targets and then, turn into lances of fire, one from each orb, descending onto the targets.When dealing with a close-range attack, the user can release his fire chakra and have the rising fire surround him and position the three columns anywhere he likes to block the attack and if possible, afterwards, change them into orbs before transforming them into lances. When using this method, the user can have the lances enter a ring-like formation around him, while spinning around him, and have them fly outward in different directions.

Restrictions:
-Can only be taught by fang.
-Usable only three times per battle.
 
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