Finals Match For 1st Place 16: TheSiege vs halfmoonuzumaki
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[video=youtube;BYxMo9MNPzs]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BYxMo9MNPzs[/video]
(about :12)
Forgive me for what I'm about to say
But his names dr. Proof, he's not f*cking Dr. Dre
So I really don't give a damn who he is on the base!
To me he's just one more hater standing in my way
But I'm cruising in the fast lane and I ain't touching the brake
And if I run-a-f*cka-ova it won't be a mistake
I'm pushin down on full throttle
And you know i swear to God I'll
throttle this b*tch until he wobbles
And like an empty bottle he topples
and shatters on the floor
There's a piece of half, here's a piece of half, here's half o piece more
I let out half o laugh
And stomp my foot on top his ass
And he goes up into smoke like a cloud of powdered glass
You never had a chance
And there you go again, trying to explain your raps
I got the basic thing the first time, you wannabe chemist!
You tried to hit me with your knowledge but you couldn't leave a blemish
Rap is an apartment and I'm the f*cking tenant
You cant pay the bills, so leave the f*cking premise
You don't get the sick acidic sh*t I spit
You're just a cocky bitch stuck in a trip
*You think NG is the one who raised me?
Up from noobtown where you have been staying?
In his latest messages all he's been doin is praise me
I don't need advice on this trail that im blazing
Cuz I can burn through any game this child starts playing
First its Skyrim, and now it's battleship
Reality: get into it
cuz half seems like he's*losing it
He seems to think that we're in World War 2
Because he got his ass kicked then and he's losing now too
His coaching leader is gone so he doesn't know what to do
Except get shot by my words, and verbally run through
Youve got three fans! God damn, you're famous!
How much did you pay for them to stick their dicks in ur anus?
Now I know what you're gonna say,
"where's your fanbase?"
Does anyone want you to win first place?
Why yes they do!
You can see their names in the space
Where it says "Match 16 Judges"
And that's just a little taste!
Everyone in the rap group
Wants me to smack you
For thinking ur the sh*t cuz you got proof to rep you
And made alts to help you
You could say that hells blue
It doesn't mean it's all true
Your "girl" is probably a recluse
A dude who wants to get loose
Or just a random guy that's just tryna get a rep boost
And you'll also prolly talk about how I took so long
And say that thts the only reason why my rap is so strong
The truth is, I'm doin it to spite you
Took my time and wrote a haiku
Half was a missile
And he tried hard to get off
But that b*tch f*cked up
One more prediction before my last round stops
Half will start bitchin when the judgements drop
And when the judges start tellin him why he lost
He'll sit down and cry out purple tear drops.
(about :12)
Forgive me for what I'm about to say
But his names dr. Proof, he's not f*cking Dr. Dre
So I really don't give a damn who he is on the base!
To me he's just one more hater standing in my way
But I'm cruising in the fast lane and I ain't touching the brake
And if I run-a-f*cka-ova it won't be a mistake
I'm pushin down on full throttle
And you know i swear to God I'll
throttle this b*tch until he wobbles
And like an empty bottle he topples
and shatters on the floor
There's a piece of half, here's a piece of half, here's half o piece more
I let out half o laugh
And stomp my foot on top his ass
And he goes up into smoke like a cloud of powdered glass
You never had a chance
And there you go again, trying to explain your raps
I got the basic thing the first time, you wannabe chemist!
You tried to hit me with your knowledge but you couldn't leave a blemish
Rap is an apartment and I'm the f*cking tenant
You cant pay the bills, so leave the f*cking premise
You don't get the sick acidic sh*t I spit
You're just a cocky bitch stuck in a trip
*You think NG is the one who raised me?
Up from noobtown where you have been staying?
In his latest messages all he's been doin is praise me
I don't need advice on this trail that im blazing
Cuz I can burn through any game this child starts playing
First its Skyrim, and now it's battleship
Reality: get into it
cuz half seems like he's*losing it
He seems to think that we're in World War 2
Because he got his ass kicked then and he's losing now too
His coaching leader is gone so he doesn't know what to do
Except get shot by my words, and verbally run through
Youve got three fans! God damn, you're famous!
How much did you pay for them to stick their dicks in ur anus?
Now I know what you're gonna say,
"where's your fanbase?"
Does anyone want you to win first place?
Why yes they do!
You can see their names in the space
Where it says "Match 16 Judges"
And that's just a little taste!
Everyone in the rap group
Wants me to smack you
For thinking ur the sh*t cuz you got proof to rep you
And made alts to help you
You could say that hells blue
It doesn't mean it's all true
Your "girl" is probably a recluse
A dude who wants to get loose
Or just a random guy that's just tryna get a rep boost
And you'll also prolly talk about how I took so long
And say that thts the only reason why my rap is so strong
The truth is, I'm doin it to spite you
Took my time and wrote a haiku
Half was a missile
And he tried hard to get off
But that b*tch f*cked up
One more prediction before my last round stops
Half will start bitchin when the judgements drop
And when the judges start tellin him why he lost
He'll sit down and cry out purple tear drops.
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halfmoonuzumaki
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halfmoonuzumaki
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[video=youtube;Q0WLFpIQ0o0]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q0WLFpIQ0o0[/video]
(^Thumbnail is Sieges face when he reads this. xd)
35-2:30 on loop)
Alts? I dont need them. Its f*ckin clear that youre outclassed.
Thats three votes for me, meaning you are stuck in last.
I think siege is forgettin that the base counts as two judges
Its and pretty safe to say that they all think that Siege is rubbish.
And when it comes to sensei, you sould call him Master Roshi,
Cuzz im Goku and youre Krillin, Im like Mario you Yoshi.
Because when you step to me you know I always take the trophy
But when it comes to killin? Man thats sh*ts when im cozy.
Second round you droppin filled with names that aint 'ven mine
Tried to talk weak sh*t, then added in lame rhyme.
I waited all this time, for such cockamamy sh*t?
Its like tryna spit big game, then tryna use a baby d*ck
You were poppin in and out this thread since last night call you wack-a-mole
Preparin such weak sh*t, then tryna audition for the leading roll-
_And expectin to get the part like you were someone big like Swayze
Then comin in to face me to-be savig'ly-torn apart like "Crazy!"
I aint even gonn get into the sh*t NG said to me bout you,
Because im not that f*ckin lame,
I can come up with my OWN sh*t you "Noob",
Dont even need "Half" of my brain.
Call me Green Day in my prime, Right round the time
When they dropped their hit Novacane
Because im winnin over masses,
Got em hooked call me Ly-ri-co-caine
And theres a reason why im rappin odd, a logic behind all the fantasy
It really quite amusing that has you in a tiff in you see.
Because im doing it for you, and when i say this i speak honestly
I was tryna help you siege.. wish you were smart enough to concieve
That you only stood a chance, when we're rappin in terms of make-believe.
Now do you get it? You f*ckin little genin sh*t?
Stop tryna pull a konahamaru, and hop off of my d*ck.
Stop tryna front like a Hollow, when you KNOW im f*ckin Ichigo
And the words that im spitting, f*ckin sharp, call im Zanpakuto
Ive said it once before ill say it again call me Battosai
But ill do more than slice your neck, Ill f*ckin revel in your final cry.
And compare me to Goku,'cause ill eat you no doubt, call you curly fry.
Im the King of this Rap- Game, Call me rap's Yugi-Moto
Ill rip through you;... 8-gates, this finish aint need no Photo
Cuzz im faster than Super Sonic, My Rhymes, are Supersonic
Nah i didnt stutter up, Im talkin Pokemon, you moronic?
Nah you straight up confused, thats what Supersonic tends to do to ya
It gets inside ya head, and f*ckin chokes ya (im talkin uvula)
Ive laid waste to this Siege,
I F*ckin straight stomped him and his tracks
I mean it i literally, stopped Siege in his f*ckin tracks.
I f*ckin showed hes weak as f*ck, and cant spit without NaruG
I know this cuzz he wouldnt coach this match specifically
Because like me, he was curious to who was the better f*ckin Protege
And i think it's f*ckin clear, that Half's the true f*ckin Prodigy.
(^Thumbnail is Sieges face when he reads this. xd)
35-2:30 on loop)Alts? I dont need them. Its f*ckin clear that youre outclassed.
Thats three votes for me, meaning you are stuck in last.
I think siege is forgettin that the base counts as two judges
Its and pretty safe to say that they all think that Siege is rubbish.
And when it comes to sensei, you sould call him Master Roshi,
Cuzz im Goku and youre Krillin, Im like Mario you Yoshi.
Because when you step to me you know I always take the trophy
But when it comes to killin? Man thats sh*ts when im cozy.
Second round you droppin filled with names that aint 'ven mine
Tried to talk weak sh*t, then added in lame rhyme.
I waited all this time, for such cockamamy sh*t?
Its like tryna spit big game, then tryna use a baby d*ck
You were poppin in and out this thread since last night call you wack-a-mole
Preparin such weak sh*t, then tryna audition for the leading roll-
_And expectin to get the part like you were someone big like Swayze
Then comin in to face me to-be savig'ly-torn apart like "Crazy!"
I aint even gonn get into the sh*t NG said to me bout you,
Because im not that f*ckin lame,
I can come up with my OWN sh*t you "Noob",
Dont even need "Half" of my brain.
Call me Green Day in my prime, Right round the time
When they dropped their hit Novacane
Because im winnin over masses,
Got em hooked call me Ly-ri-co-caine
And theres a reason why im rappin odd, a logic behind all the fantasy
It really quite amusing that has you in a tiff in you see.
Because im doing it for you, and when i say this i speak honestly
I was tryna help you siege.. wish you were smart enough to concieve
That you only stood a chance, when we're rappin in terms of make-believe.
Now do you get it? You f*ckin little genin sh*t?
Stop tryna pull a konahamaru, and hop off of my d*ck.
Stop tryna front like a Hollow, when you KNOW im f*ckin Ichigo
And the words that im spitting, f*ckin sharp, call im Zanpakuto
Ive said it once before ill say it again call me Battosai
But ill do more than slice your neck, Ill f*ckin revel in your final cry.
And compare me to Goku,'cause ill eat you no doubt, call you curly fry.
Im the King of this Rap- Game, Call me rap's Yugi-Moto
Ill rip through you;... 8-gates, this finish aint need no Photo
Cuzz im faster than Super Sonic, My Rhymes, are Supersonic
Nah i didnt stutter up, Im talkin Pokemon, you moronic?
Nah you straight up confused, thats what Supersonic tends to do to ya
It gets inside ya head, and f*ckin chokes ya (im talkin uvula)
Ive laid waste to this Siege,
I F*ckin straight stomped him and his tracks
I mean it i literally, stopped Siege in his f*ckin tracks.
I f*ckin showed hes weak as f*ck, and cant spit without NaruG
I know this cuzz he wouldnt coach this match specifically
Because like me, he was curious to who was the better f*ckin Protege
And i think it's f*ckin clear, that Half's the true f*ckin Prodigy.
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Gaara Da Kazekage
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Bright Master
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NarutoVsGoku
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This is the part where I would say "Thread Closed For Judging"...
iight polls up guys...
judging will commence shortly (hopefully)
Judges can't vote on the polls btw
iight polls up guys...
judging will commence shortly (hopefully)
Judges can't vote on the polls btw
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NarutAwesome
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hey yo gaara da kazekage, stop c-ock blocking and dik sucking and explain why, if not don't just post my vote goes to someone, and the same for anyone else, they deserve your explanation
halfmoonuzumaki
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^^^^ Please.
Not trying to sound mean, but i want to know WHY i got your vote...know what i mean?
You guys are making ME look bad by not explaining...
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halfmoonuzumaki
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'm going first and I'm kinda scared...
I don't know what to say and I'm so unprepared...
B*TCH PLEASE!
I was born to seize
these opportunities
I make the most of those moments I guarantee
and I can see with utmost clarity
that skill like mines a rarity!
I Defenatly like the tempo of this one. You started it off with an emotion of anxiety, then you blasted out with confidence, giving a little shock to it. I think thats pretty cool. Now though these rhymes are upbeat and nice, they aren't any double rhymes, just straight up. Put some more definition in, bro.
to say anything else would be heresy
I'm addin fuel to my fire like kerosene
imma take half
and light him up like a match
and after the flash
only a half of his hair is seen
and this match doesn't even seem fair to me
cuz i pass out rhymes like I'm a charity
This is pretty awesome. You came with fire here.... Litteraly. I'm a big fan of rhymes like these, personally, so this shows volume. Now, the last two lines where a bit nursery, you should expand on your vocabulary.
you should have some! because apparently,
you're in a sad time of scarcity
it's actually embarrassing
so now do you care to see?
compared to me
everything you make is just a parody
and imma wipe you out like a cherokee
broken, smokin, perishing
hear the sound of the angels caroling
grow dim as half starts barreling
down towards hell so scarily
and I'm lost in this hilarity!
I can't lie at all, you went ham right here, starting from "Ima wipe you out like a cherokee, to im lost in hilarity"
I love destructive consistancy like that, and its not easy to hit back from.
You can go first, I'm not ready"
"your rhymes are so deadly I'm gettin kinda sweaty.."
"and this pressure is so heavy I'm sinking under the weight"
"i can't take initiative so I guess Imma wait.."
well you just made the mistake
by posting late
you gave me the first move and now I'll take first place!
so whatcha gonna do halfmoonuzumaki?
try to predict my moves as if you can use haki?
doesn't matter what you say because you still cannot block me
you can resist all you want cuz there's no way that you can top me
in fact
how you made it to the finals is actually pretty shocking
but dont worry the siege is here to expose any bullsh*t you start talking
Here,you make a pre-judgement about him, because it's not easy to dis someone before they even get a chance to go. I don't really like that dependence, you tried too hard to dis, and the timing was off.
for instance,
don't say that you are great or that you're better than me
when you have to explain every rap the judges are forced to read
and then when they vote against you, you b*tch a little fit
saying "look at this line riker accidentally bit!"
god im surprised the judges actually deal with this sh*t
if you're just gonna cry after every little crit-
tique
cuz it's just f*ck in-
weak
the way your inst-
inct
is to cry like a faucet sink!
"and omg gingka stole a few lines!"1
"how is he supposed to judge mine??"
easily.
no vote for you and one for the siege
you don't need to worry cuz imma win this with ease
in fact for the judges, this decisions a breeze!
Again, you get presumtuouis again. I personally dont feel when people get like this, because not only will this probaly bite you on the buttcheeks, you leave space for a large vocab to describe yourself. I didin't like this part, to be completlely honest, bro.
o it's your turn now, but there's no way you'll come back
cuz just like shade, no one reads your raps
Oww, that hurt a little xd
It's time to open up the gates and sound the blitzkrieg sirens,
And it's time to shut your mouth and cause this siege to suffer silence
It's time to teach this f*ckin kid some Elementry f*ckin science
Cuzz I also guaged your flow, and here the results its time to face it,
According to the pH, your rhymes are nothing more than basic.
now looky here, Its "siege the lyrical dragon".
Came looking for a battle, but didnt think this would happen
Im the rapper of prophecy, you're a lizard with a horn.
This battle bout turn to Rap Dragon 'gainst Dragonborn,
Simply put, ive come here to steal your soul.
To turn your flesh into ash, and leave your bones ina hole.
To take your essence, and use it to further my greatness.
But to say itll do me much, now that would be gracious.ly
(Apply water to burned area)
Goddamn bro! I loved the last two lines of the 1st pargraph, and every single part of the second one.
"Im the rapper of prophcy, your a lizard with a horn, this battle bout to turn to a rap dragon against the Dragonborn, simply put...."
Every word their anhilllated any thought of using the word "Dragon" in my name. You went full skyrim right here, I friggin love that game, and love how you use every refrence in defeating of it. I never would have thought about that, Props bro. I would go in more, but i got studies to catch up on so i wanna finish this.
Im gonna light Siege up, you could say im Sandy Hookin'
'Cause imma fill this kid with holes, finna leave him Swiss Lookin'
"Hey guys its CJ!" Remember your debut?
You called youself a gymnist
You more cheesy than fondue.
Now that one line there,it leaves me a bit confused
You called yourself a gymnist but cant flip..what a ruse.
I like the sandy hook refrence, though its sad how many memeories where thrashed by there....
Besides that, everything else is mediocre. you cudda did a bit better on this one.
Takin pointless shots at a n*gga you aint battlin
Simply goes to show that ive got this p*ssy n*gga rattlin
You've got "shade" on your mind, you should be thinkin of me
The way you talkin Riker, I think you might take the D
In more ways then one, in the sack and as a rapper.
'Cause your flow's nonexistent,like you've no need for a wrapper.
I like how you pointed out that he talked about people he hasin't battled (as far as I know) with.
I like hoe you followed through, and the last line.
You can say you sparked the match, cuzz without a doubt im on fire
This-like-a-fanfic-writer-tryna-match-wits-with-the-Pervy-Poet-Jiraiya
You think i wasnt ready, son you fell for my trap
First i wanted to guage the passion you were puttin in your rap
And ive seen it first hand, you lack the one thing that Ive got.
That'd be pure dark raw emotion,while your rap's are just afterthought.
Mine have heart and have soul,
Yours are weak and worth nothing.
Pullin fake quotes out the air,
Tryna act like they worth somethin
NvG made this on the base so Siege could get a public thumpin'
Because similar to Minato with FTG, its Halfmoon Siege wont be touchin.
Here you talk about how you rode off of his momentum. I don't really get why you put the second line, tho.... And the line after really says alot thinking about all of the prejudgements he made before hand.
Lmao at the second to last one, and i like how you used the last line.
(loves dee beat, btw)
Round one: HMU, mid difficulty.
When I said in round one,
That your bull would be corrected
You must've been thinkin
"challenge accepted!"
Let's start with the "basics" shall we?
And for every wrong half said lets add another tally
You said
"my rhymes are nothing more than basic"
meaning they're low on the Ph Scale
In your words I couldn't face it
But herein lies your fail
Here, your being a bit vauge, don't you think? You should give evidence on how thats a lie, and make us belive you. Your basically taking his lines and saying you don't belive him.
If my rhymes are lower than a base then that means their acidic
Oh, and yeah, that reminds me, if something on the ph scale is low, that mean its acid. Good job paying attention in science class, xd. Way to use his words against him.
So I'm shootin poison in your face whenever I spit it
And I don't HAVE to admit it cuz I got HALF to admit it
He took his own ass and kicked it then gave himself a ticket!
Goddamn, I like these lines right here, you basically said he kicked his own ass with mis-refrence of words. good ****.
The dovahkiin tried to bring it
But his sword, he couldn't swing it
If he had half a mind he'd see that
I already Shot him through the knee cap!
GOOD COMEBACK!! I said previously, that I loved skyrim, and the knee joke was strong! Nice verse, there.
Halfmoon used to be a rapper like me
Till I ripped out his throat and hung him from a tree
Cuz you're a wannabe siege you see?
You say you're dragonborn which means ur born from me!
Tryin to take my skill and actin like I'm killed
Stop poppin those pills cuz I am here still
I love this here too! I see the skyrim refreence in the 1st two lines, Its dissing him like when guards say, "I used to be an adventurer like you.... Then I took an arrow to the knee." Then the dragonborn thing, good crap here too!
I swear you lie more than those b*tches on one tree hill!
Right here, I love this, because there is a crapload of lying in that show. From the cheating girls, to peyton doin cocaine, I get what your saying here. I loved your comeback here, good work!
And it's rich, coming from a b*tch
That I'm riding Narus win while ur riding on his d*ck
Pretty personal here bro, i like this.
Aking for advice every chance that you can get
You're the dog at his kitchen table, begging for a lick!
Way to call him his bitch, bro. The personal level is increasing here!
Your egos been swelling
Since NG started telling
You
what to do
from your rhymes to ur spelling
And then after the match
Youd roll onto your back
And let him give you a pat
On the underside of your belly
Good boy!!
You can do what your told!
But it still wont be enough if you wanna go for the gold
Again, I like this! That persistancy on him being someone elses bitch.
I've been rolling in that Au,
Au, periodic table element for gold. awesome, i almost mised that!
Ever since the sieges debut,
Undefeated motherf*cker
You think I cannot take you?
Im rising to the top
And I'm never gonna stop
I'll be bashin your skull in
While singing Blitzkrieg Bop
Way to close out, you went at your oppenent, and showed what you stand for. good shuger honey iced tea here. Strong comeback!
DrProof certified, mad respect to you doc.
The smartest dude on the base said you lost, its time to check the clock-
I like how you used your complements from him to dis him, but I ersonally think he was just riding your ****. No offence to you.
Scratch that- Kid check the facts, it's like you're f*ckin retarded,
Its like you went to wikipedia and X'd out fore the page even started
My pH joke went right over your head,
I called you basic, not acidic, it's like im rappin a sped.
Strong here, you connected the stupid diss on the first and last line, by calling him a Sped. (special ed i'm assuming) Then you said he closed out before reading, making him sound even more stupid. The PH joke mighta went over my head too, xd cause I still agree with him.
And its funny you mention my tutelege under NaruG,
And its funnier that he told me you was doing the same thing
You was getting some coaching,prolly more than I was.
I went only to him for advice, bounced sh*t off him for op-in-ions
I think this Siege bout to be pushed back and get to shrinkin
Cause I know he Taught you all you knew, without him you'dve sinkin.
Good way to state his hypocracy. I feel that, you both did the same thing, but your still dissin each other about it......
And now youre sinkin, like H9 i sunk your battleship
With weak lines like that, its like you GIVIN me the cham-p-ionship
Bro, you
Two whole verses, you only addressed two things!
One was you not understanding, the other was both our teach--ings!
You're getting laid straight out,
Call siege the wet laundry.
Cuzz i'll twist him till he shouts,
And drain him dry of all his energy.
Im on that Blitzkrieg Bop swag, gonna bring it like Kristallnacht
Gonna treat you like A True-Jew-In-'42-And-Send-Your-Corpse-To-The-Body-Pot
F*ckin roast you to ashes, call me a Lyrical Nazi,
Cause Im the true Rap-Master Race, this clear,how can you not-see?
Thats right im Dovahkin,
but dont mistake me for your kin.
The only reason i am is here is to abolish this rap sin
Born from the need to slay you,
Put here to take you out,
To rap its like my coming's the end to a deserts draught
Im a full blown miracle, but I Aint talkin water to wine,
Im talkin dis-f*ckin-memberment, the removal of your spine.
The severin of your head, have you lookin Ghadaffi
You tried but failed you f*ckin sham, you're not ever gonna top me.
Im like a f*ckin missile, once i go off youll NEVER f*ckin stop1 me.
Ill leave my name on your mind, brand you Half-moon-U-Zu
I don't know what to say and I'm so unprepared...
B*TCH PLEASE!
I was born to seize
these opportunities
I make the most of those moments I guarantee
and I can see with utmost clarity
that skill like mines a rarity!
I Defenatly like the tempo of this one. You started it off with an emotion of anxiety, then you blasted out with confidence, giving a little shock to it. I think thats pretty cool. Now though these rhymes are upbeat and nice, they aren't any double rhymes, just straight up. Put some more definition in, bro.
to say anything else would be heresy
I'm addin fuel to my fire like kerosene
imma take half
and light him up like a match
and after the flash
only a half of his hair is seen
and this match doesn't even seem fair to me
cuz i pass out rhymes like I'm a charity
This is pretty awesome. You came with fire here.... Litteraly. I'm a big fan of rhymes like these, personally, so this shows volume. Now, the last two lines where a bit nursery, you should expand on your vocabulary.
you should have some! because apparently,
you're in a sad time of scarcity
it's actually embarrassing
so now do you care to see?
compared to me
everything you make is just a parody
and imma wipe you out like a cherokee
broken, smokin, perishing
hear the sound of the angels caroling
grow dim as half starts barreling
down towards hell so scarily
and I'm lost in this hilarity!
I can't lie at all, you went ham right here, starting from "Ima wipe you out like a cherokee, to im lost in hilarity"
I love destructive consistancy like that, and its not easy to hit back from.
You can go first, I'm not ready"
"your rhymes are so deadly I'm gettin kinda sweaty.."
"and this pressure is so heavy I'm sinking under the weight"
"i can't take initiative so I guess Imma wait.."
well you just made the mistake
by posting late
you gave me the first move and now I'll take first place!
so whatcha gonna do halfmoonuzumaki?
try to predict my moves as if you can use haki?
doesn't matter what you say because you still cannot block me
you can resist all you want cuz there's no way that you can top me
in fact
how you made it to the finals is actually pretty shocking
but dont worry the siege is here to expose any bullsh*t you start talking
Here,you make a pre-judgement about him, because it's not easy to dis someone before they even get a chance to go. I don't really like that dependence, you tried too hard to dis, and the timing was off.
for instance,
don't say that you are great or that you're better than me
when you have to explain every rap the judges are forced to read
and then when they vote against you, you b*tch a little fit
saying "look at this line riker accidentally bit!"
god im surprised the judges actually deal with this sh*t
if you're just gonna cry after every little crit-
tique
cuz it's just f*ck in-
weak
the way your inst-
inct
is to cry like a faucet sink!
"and omg gingka stole a few lines!"1
"how is he supposed to judge mine??"
easily.
no vote for you and one for the siege
you don't need to worry cuz imma win this with ease
in fact for the judges, this decisions a breeze!
Again, you get presumtuouis again. I personally dont feel when people get like this, because not only will this probaly bite you on the buttcheeks, you leave space for a large vocab to describe yourself. I didin't like this part, to be completlely honest, bro.
o it's your turn now, but there's no way you'll come back
cuz just like shade, no one reads your raps
Oww, that hurt a little xd
It's time to open up the gates and sound the blitzkrieg sirens,
And it's time to shut your mouth and cause this siege to suffer silence
It's time to teach this f*ckin kid some Elementry f*ckin science
Cuzz I also guaged your flow, and here the results its time to face it,
According to the pH, your rhymes are nothing more than basic.
now looky here, Its "siege the lyrical dragon".
Came looking for a battle, but didnt think this would happen
Im the rapper of prophecy, you're a lizard with a horn.
This battle bout turn to Rap Dragon 'gainst Dragonborn,
Simply put, ive come here to steal your soul.
To turn your flesh into ash, and leave your bones ina hole.
To take your essence, and use it to further my greatness.
But to say itll do me much, now that would be gracious.ly
(Apply water to burned area)
Goddamn bro! I loved the last two lines of the 1st pargraph, and every single part of the second one.
"Im the rapper of prophcy, your a lizard with a horn, this battle bout to turn to a rap dragon against the Dragonborn, simply put...."
Every word their anhilllated any thought of using the word "Dragon" in my name. You went full skyrim right here, I friggin love that game, and love how you use every refrence in defeating of it. I never would have thought about that, Props bro. I would go in more, but i got studies to catch up on so i wanna finish this.
Im gonna light Siege up, you could say im Sandy Hookin'
'Cause imma fill this kid with holes, finna leave him Swiss Lookin'
"Hey guys its CJ!" Remember your debut?
You called youself a gymnist
You more cheesy than fondue.
Now that one line there,it leaves me a bit confused
You called yourself a gymnist but cant flip..what a ruse.
I like the sandy hook refrence, though its sad how many memeories where thrashed by there....
Besides that, everything else is mediocre. you cudda did a bit better on this one.
Takin pointless shots at a n*gga you aint battlin
Simply goes to show that ive got this p*ssy n*gga rattlin
You've got "shade" on your mind, you should be thinkin of me
The way you talkin Riker, I think you might take the D
In more ways then one, in the sack and as a rapper.
'Cause your flow's nonexistent,like you've no need for a wrapper.
I like how you pointed out that he talked about people he hasin't battled (as far as I know) with.
I like hoe you followed through, and the last line.
You can say you sparked the match, cuzz without a doubt im on fire
This-like-a-fanfic-writer-tryna-match-wits-with-the-Pervy-Poet-Jiraiya
You think i wasnt ready, son you fell for my trap
First i wanted to guage the passion you were puttin in your rap
And ive seen it first hand, you lack the one thing that Ive got.
That'd be pure dark raw emotion,while your rap's are just afterthought.
Mine have heart and have soul,
Yours are weak and worth nothing.
Pullin fake quotes out the air,
Tryna act like they worth somethin
NvG made this on the base so Siege could get a public thumpin'
Because similar to Minato with FTG, its Halfmoon Siege wont be touchin.
Here you talk about how you rode off of his momentum. I don't really get why you put the second line, tho.... And the line after really says alot thinking about all of the prejudgements he made before hand.
Lmao at the second to last one, and i like how you used the last line.
(loves dee beat, btw)
Round one: HMU, mid difficulty.
When I said in round one,
That your bull would be corrected
You must've been thinkin
"challenge accepted!"
Let's start with the "basics" shall we?
And for every wrong half said lets add another tally
You said
"my rhymes are nothing more than basic"
meaning they're low on the Ph Scale
In your words I couldn't face it
But herein lies your fail
Here, your being a bit vauge, don't you think? You should give evidence on how thats a lie, and make us belive you. Your basically taking his lines and saying you don't belive him.
If my rhymes are lower than a base then that means their acidic
Oh, and yeah, that reminds me, if something on the ph scale is low, that mean its acid. Good job paying attention in science class, xd. Way to use his words against him.
So I'm shootin poison in your face whenever I spit it
And I don't HAVE to admit it cuz I got HALF to admit it
He took his own ass and kicked it then gave himself a ticket!
Goddamn, I like these lines right here, you basically said he kicked his own ass with mis-refrence of words. good ****.
The dovahkiin tried to bring it
But his sword, he couldn't swing it
If he had half a mind he'd see that
I already Shot him through the knee cap!
GOOD COMEBACK!! I said previously, that I loved skyrim, and the knee joke was strong! Nice verse, there.
Halfmoon used to be a rapper like me
Till I ripped out his throat and hung him from a tree
Cuz you're a wannabe siege you see?
You say you're dragonborn which means ur born from me!
Tryin to take my skill and actin like I'm killed
Stop poppin those pills cuz I am here still
I love this here too! I see the skyrim refreence in the 1st two lines, Its dissing him like when guards say, "I used to be an adventurer like you.... Then I took an arrow to the knee." Then the dragonborn thing, good crap here too!
I swear you lie more than those b*tches on one tree hill!
Right here, I love this, because there is a crapload of lying in that show. From the cheating girls, to peyton doin cocaine, I get what your saying here. I loved your comeback here, good work!
And it's rich, coming from a b*tch
That I'm riding Narus win while ur riding on his d*ck
Pretty personal here bro, i like this.
Aking for advice every chance that you can get
You're the dog at his kitchen table, begging for a lick!
Way to call him his bitch, bro. The personal level is increasing here!
Your egos been swelling
Since NG started telling
You
what to do
from your rhymes to ur spelling
And then after the match
Youd roll onto your back
And let him give you a pat
On the underside of your belly
Good boy!!
You can do what your told!
But it still wont be enough if you wanna go for the gold
Again, I like this! That persistancy on him being someone elses bitch.
I've been rolling in that Au,
Au, periodic table element for gold. awesome, i almost mised that!
Ever since the sieges debut,
Undefeated motherf*cker
You think I cannot take you?
Im rising to the top
And I'm never gonna stop
I'll be bashin your skull in
While singing Blitzkrieg Bop
Way to close out, you went at your oppenent, and showed what you stand for. good shuger honey iced tea here. Strong comeback!
DrProof certified, mad respect to you doc.
The smartest dude on the base said you lost, its time to check the clock-
I like how you used your complements from him to dis him, but I ersonally think he was just riding your ****. No offence to you.
Scratch that- Kid check the facts, it's like you're f*ckin retarded,
Its like you went to wikipedia and X'd out fore the page even started
My pH joke went right over your head,
I called you basic, not acidic, it's like im rappin a sped.
Strong here, you connected the stupid diss on the first and last line, by calling him a Sped. (special ed i'm assuming) Then you said he closed out before reading, making him sound even more stupid. The PH joke mighta went over my head too, xd cause I still agree with him.
And its funny you mention my tutelege under NaruG,
And its funnier that he told me you was doing the same thing
You was getting some coaching,prolly more than I was.
I went only to him for advice, bounced sh*t off him for op-in-ions
I think this Siege bout to be pushed back and get to shrinkin
Cause I know he Taught you all you knew, without him you'dve sinkin.
Good way to state his hypocracy. I feel that, you both did the same thing, but your still dissin each other about it......
And now youre sinkin, like H9 i sunk your battleship
With weak lines like that, its like you GIVIN me the cham-p-ionship
Bro, you
Two whole verses, you only addressed two things!
One was you not understanding, the other was both our teach--ings!
You're getting laid straight out,
Call siege the wet laundry.
Cuzz i'll twist him till he shouts,
And drain him dry of all his energy.
Im on that Blitzkrieg Bop swag, gonna bring it like Kristallnacht
Gonna treat you like A True-Jew-In-'42-And-Send-Your-Corpse-To-The-Body-Pot
F*ckin roast you to ashes, call me a Lyrical Nazi,
Cause Im the true Rap-Master Race, this clear,how can you not-see?
Thats right im Dovahkin,
but dont mistake me for your kin.
The only reason i am is here is to abolish this rap sin
Born from the need to slay you,
Put here to take you out,
To rap its like my coming's the end to a deserts draught
Im a full blown miracle, but I Aint talkin water to wine,
Im talkin dis-f*ckin-memberment, the removal of your spine.
The severin of your head, have you lookin Ghadaffi
You tried but failed you f*ckin sham, you're not ever gonna top me.
Im like a f*ckin missile, once i go off youll NEVER f*ckin stop1 me.
Ill leave my name on your mind, brand you Half-moon-U-Zu
Bright Master
Active member
(srry, I had 2 switch 2 my Ps3)
And now youre sinkin, like H9 i sunk your battleship
With weak lines like that, its like you GIVIN me the cham-p-ionship
Bro, I have no idea what H9 Battleships are, and google seems to be jerkn me.Still, I like the rhyme there.
Two whole verses, you only addressed two things!
One was you not understanding, the other was both our teach--ings!
You're getting laid straight out,
Call siege the wet laundry.
Cuzz i'll twist him till he shouts,
And drain him dry of all his energy.
This entire part calls for a no homo.
m on that Blitzkrieg Bop swag, gonna bring it like Kristallnacht
Gonna treat you like A True-Jew-In-'42-And-Send-Your-Corpse-To-The-Body-Pot
F*ckin roast you to ashes, call me a Lyrical Nazi,
Cause Im the true Rap-Master Race, this clear,how can you not-see?
I Like this part all the way through! everything had connection there!
And now youre sinkin, like H9 i sunk your battleship
With weak lines like that, its like you GIVIN me the cham-p-ionship
Bro, I have no idea what H9 Battleships are, and google seems to be jerkn me.Still, I like the rhyme there.
Two whole verses, you only addressed two things!
One was you not understanding, the other was both our teach--ings!
You're getting laid straight out,
Call siege the wet laundry.
Cuzz i'll twist him till he shouts,
And drain him dry of all his energy.
This entire part calls for a no homo.
m on that Blitzkrieg Bop swag, gonna bring it like Kristallnacht
Gonna treat you like A True-Jew-In-'42-And-Send-Your-Corpse-To-The-Body-Pot
F*ckin roast you to ashes, call me a Lyrical Nazi,
Cause Im the true Rap-Master Race, this clear,how can you not-see?
I Like this part all the way through! everything had connection there!
Bright Master
Active member
Thats right im Dovahkin,
but dont mistake me for your kin.
The only reason i am is here is to abolish this rap sin
Born from the need to slay you,
Put here to take you out,
To rap its like my coming's the end to a deserts draught
As you know, Im a huge fan of skyrim. The dragon connection, and letting him know your nothing alike, huge boost, bro.
Im a full blown miracle, but I Aint talkin water to wine,
Im talkin dis-f*ckin-memberment, the removal of your spine.
DAAAAAAAMN!! Bars!!! Im quotin that!
The severin of your head, have you lookin Ghadaffi
You tried but failed you f*ckin sham, you're not ever gonna top me.
Im like a f*ckin missile, once i go off youll NEVER f*ckin stop1 me.
Ill leave my name on your mind, brand you Half-moon-U-ZUMAKI!!
Good Close out! The unstoppable missle, the head servern, all good bars. Great last line, too!
Round 2: Tuff decision, but Ima have 2 say TheSiege 4 this one!
but dont mistake me for your kin.
The only reason i am is here is to abolish this rap sin
Born from the need to slay you,
Put here to take you out,
To rap its like my coming's the end to a deserts draught
As you know, Im a huge fan of skyrim. The dragon connection, and letting him know your nothing alike, huge boost, bro.
Im a full blown miracle, but I Aint talkin water to wine,
Im talkin dis-f*ckin-memberment, the removal of your spine.
DAAAAAAAMN!! Bars!!! Im quotin that!
The severin of your head, have you lookin Ghadaffi
You tried but failed you f*ckin sham, you're not ever gonna top me.
Im like a f*ckin missile, once i go off youll NEVER f*ckin stop1 me.
Ill leave my name on your mind, brand you Half-moon-U-ZUMAKI!!
Good Close out! The unstoppable missle, the head servern, all good bars. Great last line, too!
Round 2: Tuff decision, but Ima have 2 say TheSiege 4 this one!
halfmoonuzumaki
Member
halfmoonuzumaki
Member
Lol cuz he googled "H9 battleship" if he missed the initial battleship reference there's no way he'd understand that.
@Bright Shadow: Battleship is a board game where u try and sink other people's "ships" by guessing random coordinates. "H9" was just a coordinate guess that Halfmoon chose and presumably "sunk my battleship"
@Bright Shadow: Battleship is a board game where u try and sink other people's "ships" by guessing random coordinates. "H9" was just a coordinate guess that Halfmoon chose and presumably "sunk my battleship"
Gingka Uzumaki
Active member
Fucking Jesus, Thanks for the shoutout Siege.
I don't know if anyone here knows about Jay vs. NAS rap beef but Siege you're Jay and Halfmoon is NAS
And you got fucking ethered.
My vote goes to Halfmoon
I don't know if anyone here knows about Jay vs. NAS rap beef but Siege you're Jay and Halfmoon is NAS
And you got fucking ethered.
My vote goes to Halfmoon
Bright Master
Active member
Forgive me for what I'm about to say
But his names dr. Proof, he's not f*cking Dr. Dre
So I really don't give a damn who he is on the base!
Thats what the **** i'm talking about.... Thats good in the way of acnolodging how his fanbase ain't really what you would call rappers, I agree with you on this one, bro. Its really tough to shake off other perspectives like that, props, bruh.
To me he's just one more hater standing in my way
But I'm cruising in the fast lane and I ain't touching the brake
And if I run-a-f*cka-ova it won't be a mistake
I'm pushin down on full throttle
And you know i swear to God I'll
throttle this b*tch until he wobbles
Lol, I really like this rhyme here. The whole driving theme, and using it as a complement to youself, and a diss to your oppenent.
And like an empty bottle he topples
and shatters on the floor
There's a piece of half, here's a piece of half, here's half o piece more
I have no clue what this means......
I let out half o laugh
And stomp my foot on top his ass
And he goes up into smoke like a cloud of powdered glass
Pretty hard-core, the personal level keeps increasing, I like that.
You never had a chance
And there you go again, trying to explain your raps
I got the basic thing the first time, you wannabe chemist!
You tried to hit me with your knowledge but you couldn't leave a blemish
Lol, way to blow up his repitition.
Rap is an apartment and I'm the f*cking tenant
You cant pay the bills, so leave the f*cking premise
EERT! RED FLAG! A tenant is the person who pays the bills. What your thinking about is a land lord. smh lol.
You don't get the sick acidic sh*t I spit
You're just a cocky bitch stuck in a trip
Personal level at an all time high on this rap...
*You think NG is the one who raised me?
Up from noobtown where you have been staying?
In his latest messages all he's been doin is praise me
I don't need advice on this trail that im blazing
Cuz I can burn through any game this child starts playing
First its Skyrim, and now it's battleship
Reality: get into it cuz half seems like he's*losing it
He seems to think that we're in World War 2
Because he got his ass kicked then and he's losing now too
Mm, you use his words against him alot here, and I love the rhymes used. This is hard right here, bro.
His coaching leader is gone so he doesn't know what to do
Except get shot by my words, and verbally run through
Exellent way to use the "Missing leader panic" theme here.
Youve got three fans! God damn, you're famous!
How much did you pay for them to stick their dicks in ur anus?
SHHHIIIIIII.... That right there is strong. You got personal on him and his fanbase, all that exposure is addin uo, im gettin hype just reading this!
Now I know what you're gonna say,
"where's your fanbase?"
Does anyone want you to win first place?
Why yes they do!
You can see their names in the space
Where it says "Match 16 Judges"
And that's just a little taste!
Everyone in the rap group
Wants me to smack you
Speak for them bro, I really like your retalitionp here, though.
Your letting your emotion pour through, I can tell that his fanboys really hit a soft spot on you, but you keep going harder because of it.
For thinking ur the sh*t cuz you got proof to rep you
And made alts to help you
You could say that hells blue
It doesn't mean it's all true
Your "girl" is probably a recluse
A dude who wants to get loose
Or just a random guy that's just tryna get a rep boost
OMG!! The disrespect continues!! That was the illest dis against a group of people I eva seen (on the base)!!! And you dissed his girl! That was hard, *****!
And you'll also prolly talk about how I took so long
And say that thts the only reason why my rap is so strong
The truth is, I'm doin it to spite you
Took my time and wrote a haiku
Calmed down a bit here...
Half was a missile
And he tried hard to get off
But that b*tch f*cked up
One more prediction before my last round stops
Half will start bitchin when the judgements drop
And when the judges start tellin him why he lost
He'll sit down and cry out purple tear drops.
I love that ending, bro, Good **** on your part, I love every aspect of this right here, way to close out
a round and your entire rap. That was some real ****, no **** riding. I can't wait to see you rap next time.
HMN:
Alts? I dont need them. Its f*ckin clear that youre outclassed.
Thats three votes for me, meaning you are stuck in last.
I think siege is forgettin that the base counts as two judges
Its and pretty safe to say that they all think that Siege is rubbish.
See, here, you are still using your fanbase, Thats a bit too much, considering I personally have learned not to like them just from seeing this. but, lets contie, please....
And when it comes to sensei, you sould call him Master Roshi,
Cuzz im Goku and youre Krillin, Im like Mario you Yoshi.
Because when you step to me you know I always take the trophy
But when it comes to killin? Man thats sh*ts when im cozy.
Nice refrences here, bro. I especially like that last line there! I get the message xd
Second round you droppin filled with names that aint 'ven mine
Tried to talk weak sh*t, then added in lame rhyme.
I waited all this time, for such cockamamy sh*t?
Did you just make that word up? xd Thats pretty strong, here too, bro. Now you just gotta ride that momentum.
Its like tryna spit big game, then tryna use a baby d*ck
You were poppin in and out this thread since last night call you wack-a-mole
Preparin such weak sh*t, then tryna audition for the leading you just roll-
_And expectin to get the part like you were someone big like Swayze
Then comin in to face me to-be savig'ly-torn apart like "Crazy!"
Good job on noticing the things he was doing while online. (though that can be a bit creepy, lol)
And the refrence on that last line was pretty strong, too. I like it. You just need something stronger, I see you may be getting tired.
I aint even gonn get into the sh*t NG said to me bout you,
Because im not that f*ckin lame,
I can come up with my OWN sh*t you "Noob",
Dont even need "Half" of my brain.
Call me Green Day in my prime, Right round the time
When they dropped their hit Novacane
Because im winnin over masses,
Got em hooked call me Ly-ri-co-caine
ooooo, 1st line was real personal, that can really hurt a person xd. On the second line, didnt you already say that you both where already getting taught? That would be a bit controversy, would you not agree?
And the last two lines could have been stronger, though I like how you used that last line, there.
And theres a reason why im rappin odd, a logic behind all the fantasy
It really quite amusing that has you in a tiff in you see.
Because im doing it for you, and when i say this i speak honestly
I was tryna help you siege.. wish you were smart enough to concieve
That you only stood a chance, when we're rappin in terms of make-believe.
Damn, that was magical! I like this right here, how you basically just called him ignorant for not just giving up the second he met you.And that he could only win in a place where the terms of reality does not
apply! Thats good **** right there, lol.
Now do you get it? You f*ckin little genin sh*t?
Stop tryna pull a konahamaru, and hop off of my d*ck.
Stop tryna front like a Hollow, when you KNOW im f*ckin Ichigo
And the words that im spitting, f*ckin sharp, call im Zanpakuto
Ive said it once before ill say it again call me Battosai
Lot of anime refrences here, and strong dis to back up each and every one of them. I for one, really enjoy that, and your using it to complemnt yourself in contrast to siege. That was tough, bro.
But ill do more than slice your neck, Ill f*ckin revel in your final cry.
And compare me to Goku,'cause ill eat you no doubt, call you curly fry.
Im the King of this Rap- Game, Call me rap's Yugi-Moto
Ill rip through you;... 8-gates, this finish aint need no Photo
Cuzz im faster than Super Sonic, My Rhymes, are Supersonic
Nah i didnt stutter up, Im talkin Pokemon, you moronic?
Nah you straight up confused, thats what Supersonic tends to do to ya
It gets inside ya head, and f*ckin chokes ya (im talkin uvula)
****in nice ass way to close out, bro. From the refrences, to the physical dis, all of it works perfectly toghter. That was crazy, I love seeing rapping going off back to back like that.
Damn, I wish this didin't have to end so soon. I loved judging you guys, your both outstanding rappers, each of you worked your assets off to get here, and I applause both of you. We all love what we came up to do, and ya'll did it. Half moon, you had alot of people at your back, keep them close, thats a tresure not alot of rappers can say they have. Siege, you where the underdog. The hate againsrt you was so strong, I began to doubt you until I saw your bars. Your the ****, man, dont give up for nothing, So without further adu, I give my vote, 100% to
THESIEGE
But his names dr. Proof, he's not f*cking Dr. Dre
So I really don't give a damn who he is on the base!
Thats what the **** i'm talking about.... Thats good in the way of acnolodging how his fanbase ain't really what you would call rappers, I agree with you on this one, bro. Its really tough to shake off other perspectives like that, props, bruh.
To me he's just one more hater standing in my way
But I'm cruising in the fast lane and I ain't touching the brake
And if I run-a-f*cka-ova it won't be a mistake
I'm pushin down on full throttle
And you know i swear to God I'll
throttle this b*tch until he wobbles
Lol, I really like this rhyme here. The whole driving theme, and using it as a complement to youself, and a diss to your oppenent.
And like an empty bottle he topples
and shatters on the floor
There's a piece of half, here's a piece of half, here's half o piece more
I have no clue what this means......
I let out half o laugh
And stomp my foot on top his ass
And he goes up into smoke like a cloud of powdered glass
Pretty hard-core, the personal level keeps increasing, I like that.
You never had a chance
And there you go again, trying to explain your raps
I got the basic thing the first time, you wannabe chemist!
You tried to hit me with your knowledge but you couldn't leave a blemish
Lol, way to blow up his repitition.
Rap is an apartment and I'm the f*cking tenant
You cant pay the bills, so leave the f*cking premise
EERT! RED FLAG! A tenant is the person who pays the bills. What your thinking about is a land lord. smh lol.
You don't get the sick acidic sh*t I spit
You're just a cocky bitch stuck in a trip
Personal level at an all time high on this rap...
*You think NG is the one who raised me?
Up from noobtown where you have been staying?
In his latest messages all he's been doin is praise me
I don't need advice on this trail that im blazing
Cuz I can burn through any game this child starts playing
First its Skyrim, and now it's battleship
Reality: get into it cuz half seems like he's*losing it
He seems to think that we're in World War 2
Because he got his ass kicked then and he's losing now too
Mm, you use his words against him alot here, and I love the rhymes used. This is hard right here, bro.
His coaching leader is gone so he doesn't know what to do
Except get shot by my words, and verbally run through
Exellent way to use the "Missing leader panic" theme here.
Youve got three fans! God damn, you're famous!
How much did you pay for them to stick their dicks in ur anus?
SHHHIIIIIII.... That right there is strong. You got personal on him and his fanbase, all that exposure is addin uo, im gettin hype just reading this!
Now I know what you're gonna say,
"where's your fanbase?"
Does anyone want you to win first place?
Why yes they do!
You can see their names in the space
Where it says "Match 16 Judges"
And that's just a little taste!
Everyone in the rap group
Wants me to smack you
Speak for them bro, I really like your retalitionp here, though.
Your letting your emotion pour through, I can tell that his fanboys really hit a soft spot on you, but you keep going harder because of it.
For thinking ur the sh*t cuz you got proof to rep you
And made alts to help you
You could say that hells blue
It doesn't mean it's all true
Your "girl" is probably a recluse
A dude who wants to get loose
Or just a random guy that's just tryna get a rep boost
OMG!! The disrespect continues!! That was the illest dis against a group of people I eva seen (on the base)!!! And you dissed his girl! That was hard, *****!
And you'll also prolly talk about how I took so long
And say that thts the only reason why my rap is so strong
The truth is, I'm doin it to spite you
Took my time and wrote a haiku
Calmed down a bit here...
Half was a missile
And he tried hard to get off
But that b*tch f*cked up
One more prediction before my last round stops
Half will start bitchin when the judgements drop
And when the judges start tellin him why he lost
He'll sit down and cry out purple tear drops.
I love that ending, bro, Good **** on your part, I love every aspect of this right here, way to close out
a round and your entire rap. That was some real ****, no **** riding. I can't wait to see you rap next time.
HMN:
Alts? I dont need them. Its f*ckin clear that youre outclassed.
Thats three votes for me, meaning you are stuck in last.
I think siege is forgettin that the base counts as two judges
Its and pretty safe to say that they all think that Siege is rubbish.
See, here, you are still using your fanbase, Thats a bit too much, considering I personally have learned not to like them just from seeing this. but, lets contie, please....
And when it comes to sensei, you sould call him Master Roshi,
Cuzz im Goku and youre Krillin, Im like Mario you Yoshi.
Because when you step to me you know I always take the trophy
But when it comes to killin? Man thats sh*ts when im cozy.
Nice refrences here, bro. I especially like that last line there! I get the message xd
Second round you droppin filled with names that aint 'ven mine
Tried to talk weak sh*t, then added in lame rhyme.
I waited all this time, for such cockamamy sh*t?
Did you just make that word up? xd Thats pretty strong, here too, bro. Now you just gotta ride that momentum.
Its like tryna spit big game, then tryna use a baby d*ck
You were poppin in and out this thread since last night call you wack-a-mole
Preparin such weak sh*t, then tryna audition for the leading you just roll-
_And expectin to get the part like you were someone big like Swayze
Then comin in to face me to-be savig'ly-torn apart like "Crazy!"
Good job on noticing the things he was doing while online. (though that can be a bit creepy, lol)
And the refrence on that last line was pretty strong, too. I like it. You just need something stronger, I see you may be getting tired.
I aint even gonn get into the sh*t NG said to me bout you,
Because im not that f*ckin lame,
I can come up with my OWN sh*t you "Noob",
Dont even need "Half" of my brain.
Call me Green Day in my prime, Right round the time
When they dropped their hit Novacane
Because im winnin over masses,
Got em hooked call me Ly-ri-co-caine
ooooo, 1st line was real personal, that can really hurt a person xd. On the second line, didnt you already say that you both where already getting taught? That would be a bit controversy, would you not agree?
And the last two lines could have been stronger, though I like how you used that last line, there.
And theres a reason why im rappin odd, a logic behind all the fantasy
It really quite amusing that has you in a tiff in you see.
Because im doing it for you, and when i say this i speak honestly
I was tryna help you siege.. wish you were smart enough to concieve
That you only stood a chance, when we're rappin in terms of make-believe.
Damn, that was magical! I like this right here, how you basically just called him ignorant for not just giving up the second he met you.And that he could only win in a place where the terms of reality does not
apply! Thats good **** right there, lol.
Now do you get it? You f*ckin little genin sh*t?
Stop tryna pull a konahamaru, and hop off of my d*ck.
Stop tryna front like a Hollow, when you KNOW im f*ckin Ichigo
And the words that im spitting, f*ckin sharp, call im Zanpakuto
Ive said it once before ill say it again call me Battosai
Lot of anime refrences here, and strong dis to back up each and every one of them. I for one, really enjoy that, and your using it to complemnt yourself in contrast to siege. That was tough, bro.
But ill do more than slice your neck, Ill f*ckin revel in your final cry.
And compare me to Goku,'cause ill eat you no doubt, call you curly fry.
Im the King of this Rap- Game, Call me rap's Yugi-Moto
Ill rip through you;... 8-gates, this finish aint need no Photo
Cuzz im faster than Super Sonic, My Rhymes, are Supersonic
Nah i didnt stutter up, Im talkin Pokemon, you moronic?
Nah you straight up confused, thats what Supersonic tends to do to ya
It gets inside ya head, and f*ckin chokes ya (im talkin uvula)
****in nice ass way to close out, bro. From the refrences, to the physical dis, all of it works perfectly toghter. That was crazy, I love seeing rapping going off back to back like that.
Damn, I wish this didin't have to end so soon. I loved judging you guys, your both outstanding rappers, each of you worked your assets off to get here, and I applause both of you. We all love what we came up to do, and ya'll did it. Half moon, you had alot of people at your back, keep them close, thats a tresure not alot of rappers can say they have. Siege, you where the underdog. The hate againsrt you was so strong, I began to doubt you until I saw your bars. Your the ****, man, dont give up for nothing, So without further adu, I give my vote, 100% to
THESIEGE