[Approved] Zombilaria Getsui

Zombilaria

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Basic Information
Name: Zombilaria Getsui
Nickname: Zombi
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Clan: N/A

Looks:

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Personality: Zombilaria is incredibly flippant, mouthing off to even the most powerful of people, and he generally enjoys rubbing people the wrong way. Zombilaria is seemingly unflappable, not showing fear. Zombilaria rarely shows any seriousness. He can be serious when the situation calls for it, but he still maintains a fairly laid-back demeanor during such situations and is never without a witty taunt or comeback. Zombilaria can seem at times to be uncaring or even callous, but actually has a very strong sense of justice and prefers to fight fairly. He can be counted on to do the right thing, even if he makes cynical quips about it the entire time. Unusually, while he has issues with his own demonic side, Zombilaria has little qualms about accepting people who choose the side of good. Zombilaria values family and friends very highly. He cared deeply for his mother and, despite their differences, he also cared for his elder brother. Even after all the fighting the two did, Zombilaria still tried to save him when their clan had been destroyed over their rivalry, and even went as far as to cry over losing him to a falling tower.


Village Info.
Village of Birth: The Hidden Sound Village
Village of Alliance: N/A

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: Genin
Specialty: To be discussed
Elements: Fire
Your ninjutsu:
(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)


Background Info. Zombilaria was actually born under the name of Gage Gogetsu but changed it soon after the death of his family. When Zombi was just 6 years old he began training under his father Lord Somo. He was thought to be the be the prodigy of his family until his brother showed more prowess. Zombi became infuriated with his brothers new found status; So infuriated in fact that he began battling his brother for the title of "prodigy". Their battling eventually lead to the slaughter of their family. After his entire family's demise (including his brother) Zombi disappeared.


Other Some info was taken off the game game Devil May Cry.


Theme Song and Background Music: Krypteria - When the dust begins to settle


Battles

Won: N/A
Lost:
N/A

~Approved~ have fun RPing.
 
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Nice, bio, but it in no ways follows the rules. ^_^

1. You need at least 50 posts to make a bio.

2. "Devil Trigger" would be a custom jutsu and would need to be approved in that thread before being included in the biography.

3. Your rank is determined by post count, and you're a genin.

4. Darkness would be a Custom Element and its already been created. If you wanted your character to get it you would need to be trained by whoever created the element.

5. Add the Rank E jutsu from the jutsulist for your Ninjutsu section.

6. You need to be a member for 2 months and pass a battle test for a Kaguya bio.

7. Your history really isn't a history.

8.
Zombi has shown to posses power that surpasses that of most people. He has enough superhuman physical strength to punch through stone with little difficulty, and often overpowers opponents much larger than himself. Zombi is super-humanly fast, capable of moving faster than the eye can see, and also extremely agile; able to jump to great heights or even to balance on a flying rocket. He is able to channel his power into various physical objects, ranging from his guns to the air itself. Zombi can nearly instantly heal from almost any wound; has been shown to survive wounds that would kill a normal human, such as being impaled through the chest with his own sword,or being shot point-blank in the head.
That whole quote needs to be removed as those are all special abilities.

9. You make a lot of references to guns and shooting, but guns are not a part of Naruto.
 

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1) Remove all those special skills...all of them.

2) Remove the Kaguya reference in your history. You are not a Kaguya and even if you were you can't make up their history. The Kaguya clan got destroyed by the Hidden Mist village and not you and your brother fighting.

3) Add these ninjutsu, you get them by default:

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
_____
(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
_____
(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
_____
(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
_____
(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
_____
(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)
 
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