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*stands up*

yeh

*goes a bit of distance away from you*

*I run at you,using earth techniques i create pillars for me to run up,leaping off i summon chakra in my hand creating a water spike from the molecules in the air*(imagine Krillin and destructo disc*

*Plummeting it at you*

Hows that?
 

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*makes two hand seals*
(Doton: Ganchurou)-Earth Style:Earth Pillar Prison

* Type:Attack
* Range:Short-Mid
* Chakra cost:15
* Damage Points:N/A
* Descripton: A pillar prison made from stone.
Slow it down grasshopper....

Um, not really (or at all)


Thats how it's done...

First gather the water molecules around your fist and forearm, then jump into the air.

As your jumping into the air release your charka throughout the water you gathered around your fist and forearm. This will increase the amount of water as well as enrich the water with chakra making it harder,denser more effective.

After that is done, let gravity do the rest.

Try again.:p:D
 

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meh >.>

*gathers water molecules around my arm forming what looks like a massive lance of water i jump up and drill at you*

better?:D
 

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Much, although that kind of hurt...ouchies...
xD

OMG i just got this jutsu approved and i didn't think i would im sooooooooooooo happy

(Hone Kinjutsu: Yuuen Gaikotsu Rikugun no Mai)- Forbidden Bone Release: Dance of the Grand Skeletal Army
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra: 50
Damage: N/A(-50 to user initially, -10 per turn to maintain)
Description: User bites fore fingers and makes two seals on both sides of their chest. User forces an intense amount of chakra into their bones. Suddenly bones violently erupt from all over the users body into the ground. Using the chakra inserted into the bones as well as mastery of Shikotsumyaku ability user with manipulate the bones into bone clones. The newly made clones are just as strong and fast as the user, but can only use one jutsu at a time attacking as a group. This jutsu makes ten bone clones. User must maintain a deep focus or clones stop all movement. Clones cannot perform elemental or bone jutsu.
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*Can only be used once per battle and last 3 turns*
*Clones cannot attack separately*
*User cannot use bone jutsu for the rest of the match*

what you think?
 

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Much, although that kind of hurt...ouchies...
xD

OMG i just got this jutsu approved and i didn't think i would im sooooooooooooo happy

(Hone Kinjutsu: Yuuen Gaikotsu Rikugun no Mai)- Forbidden Bone Release: Dance of the Grand Skeletal Army
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra: 50
Damage: N/A(-50 to user initially, -10 per turn to maintain)
Description: User bites fore fingers and makes two seals on both sides of their chest. User forces an intense amount of chakra into their bones. Suddenly bones violently erupt from all over the users body into the ground. Using the chakra inserted into the bones as well as mastery of Shikotsumyaku ability user with manipulate the bones into bone clones. The newly made clones are just as strong and fast as the user, but can only use one jutsu at a time attacking as a group. This jutsu makes ten bone clones. User must maintain a deep focus or clones stop all movement. Clones cannot perform elemental or bone jutsu.Note
*Can only be used once per battle and last 3 turns*
*Clones cannot attack separately*
*User cannot use bone jutsu for the rest of the match*

what you think?
yeh awesome dude only thing i would say is it kinda contradicts itself a little.This would only leave wot genjutsu and taijutsu?Am i right?
 

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Next jutsu

The A rank Earth jutsu suck so here is a personal custom

(Doton: Ri-chi Yori Yomi)- Earth Release: Reach from the Underworld
Rank:A
Type: Attack
Range:Mid-Long
Chakra:30(-10 to user)
Damage:60
Description: With a quick series of hand seals, user summons series of earth hands that, appear from underneath the opponent(s). These earth hands wrap themselves around the opponent(s) appendages( arms, legs, throat) and pulls them through the ground (several feet), creating a pit in it's wake.
Note
*Can only be used 3 times per battle*
*-2 chakra for each hand*
You can never use this jutsu against me. This is the only condition for this jutsu. Agree to this and you may use it as much as you like!

First gather an intense amount of chakra,(like usual), and remember how when you learned ant lion, you had to master the ability to send earth chakra through the ground under your opponent. Well it's the same concept of sending chakra through the ground but once the chakra is in place use your will and chakra manipulation ability to form 6 hands.

for now start with one on this clone

*makes one clone*

Grab his throat

Almost Genjutsu, Taijutsu and Ninjutsu.
 
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ok U_U

*gathers chakra,making handseals I stomp sending a shockwave through the earth,i create a hand which comes shooting outve the floor at your clones feet grabbing him by the throat and pulling him down*

hows that?
 

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*Fist rises from ground and punches clone in the nads*

O___O

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Hey kakashithunder!

Again... devlin. Aim this time please...

*thinks to himself*
Glad it wasnt' me...poor clone
 
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I meant to do that....>.>

*gathers chakra sending a shockwave through the floor,this time concentrating on where the hand comes out*

*A hand shoots out grabbing your clone by the throat*
 

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Good.

*as the hand starts to pull the clone through the ground it crumbles and breaks off*

Intensify the density of your hand(s)

*add chakra and compress*
 
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ok U_U

*does again this time gathering more chakra and making the hand denser and more compressed using my chakra*

hows that?
 

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he seems to b doin good as far as i can c 2. good job dev...but there's always room for improvement. oh im sorry g....i'll ttyl u guys later ok? im fightin jax atm
 

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No prob kakashithunder....

As for you devlin

*Walks over to clone and hand, punches it, hand turns red*

Good job.

Now time to spilt up your focus, make 4 hands for now. All same density.

No ones perfect ;) we can only strive to be :D everything can always be improved on :p
Good Point. With that said do you wanna learn Chidori or Rasengan next?

Or finish up water?
 
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ok U_U

*gathers more chakra,sending a shockwave i create for arms of the same density*

*focusing on keeping the density and condensing them i make each one of them grab an appendix of the clone*

hows that?
 

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As usual great, but as usual

I require more, pratice for the next week make 5 hands and without stomping on the ground.

Try to conseal the fact that your preforming the jutsu. Might catch some people off guard.
 

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ok U_U

*practices for a week perfecting the technique without having to stomp,to a point where i'm playing rock paper scissors with the hands*

U_U hows that?
 
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