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This may have been posted before but repeats arent always bad.

If you could choose for a new character to be introduced, who and how would it be?
Family?
KG?
Ninja Rank?
Village?
Affiliation with any other character?

I'll post mine up later i just wanted to read some cool ideas.
 

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Name: Tagano
Family: Uzumaki
KG: Rinnegan
Ninja Rank: Sage/sannin
Village: N/A
Affiliation with any other character: nagato,s brother
 
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Name: Sinzani Uchiha
Family: Uchiha/Uzumaki (father is Uchiha,mother is Uzumaki)
KG: Sharingan, ice release
Ninja Rank: S-ranked
Village: Mist
student of Kisame Hoshigaki, after he went rogue..
 

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Name: Aoi [female]
Family: Yuki
KG: Ice release
Ninja Rank: ... Anbu >.<
Village: Kirigakure
Affilliation with any other character: N/A

Name: Saya
Family: Uchiha
KG: Sharingan
Rank:...Dead. >_>
Villiage: [Konoha]
Affiliation with any other character: Some long lost relative/cousin of Sasuke's. Maybe resurrection with Kabuto's Edo Tensei. Sigh, but that's unlikely. I just want to see another Uchiha in action.
 

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i like all these ideas so far.

(PRE-Shippuden Character)
I think mine would be
Name: Tegoya
Family: Senju
KG: Yin Seal
Rank: was a Jonin, before being kidnapped then-> becoming a Rogue Ninja
Village: Konoha
Affiliation: One of Orochimaru's victims.

Backstory:
was on an A-rank mission, retrieving intel on Akatsuki (which was not so popular in part1) while captured by Orochimaru (was in the Akatsuki at the time)

Tegoya was given a Curse Mark, and there was something so resilient about his chakra, he only felt the pain of the bite/mark for a few days, and by a week after he had stopped feeling the pain, and Oro released him, thinking since he no longer felt the pain he could not test how strong he was. *also Orochimaru did not know he was of the Senju Decent, bc his headband covered his seal.

Oro originally planned to imprison him, but everyone in the Akatsuki was suspicious of Oro and if he did anything like that he would appear to be trying grow his own forces. So Tegoya was released. Within a month he completely controlled the curse mark. the curse mark started to change Tegoya's appearance after he used it too much to fight off other villages ninja as his mark corrupted his mind into thinking that they were trying to harm him.

Tegoya felt that he could not return to Konoha because he looked demonic and he had killed innocent ninja. So he was the FIRST Ninja to easily control the Curse Mark.
While being in the Senju family, and related to Tsunade, has the Yin Seal on his forehead. So he has been living for a long time, about the same age as Tsunade. He, like Tsunade, appear in his prime.

His headband is scratched and damaged beyond recognition,
and he could play into the story by clashing into Konoha ninja or Akatsuki Ninja, or maybe even Tsunade, as he is invading the Village. (in Pre-shippuden OR shippuden) either one.

But anyways i changed alot to this, if you have any suggestions/corrections/ideas that add on to this character or story, please politely tell me.

Thanks for reading
 
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Name: Tenzo Uchiha
Family: Uchiha/Hyuga (Father is Uchiha ; Mother is Hyuga)
KG: Sharingan
Ninja Rank: S-ranked (Akatsuki)
Village: Akatsuki

Father and Mother met through unknown circumstances and had a child and were shunned for having a out of clan child. Parents were killed. Son grew up unwanted, being a reject of society. Was a genius ninja. Was raised by Itachi. Itachi couldn't kill his own "son". Was dropped off by some unknown ninja who is somehow related to teaching Itachi how to be awesome. Grew up training hard to show Konoha his stuff, especially the Hyugas. Later heard of Itachi's death by his own brother Sasuke. Vowed to kill Sasuke. Joined Akatsuki's shadows. No one knows of his existence. Not even Uchiha Madara. Is a Ninja in extreme stealth. Developed his Hyuga Techniques into his Sharingan Techniques.
 

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Name: Aoi [female]
Family: Yuki
KG: Ice release
Ninja Rank: ... Anbu >.<
Village: Kirigakure
Affilliation with any other character: N/A

Name: Saya
Family: Uchiha
KG: Sharingan
Rank:...Dead. >_>
Villiage: [Konoha]
Affiliation with any other character: Some long lost relative/cousin of Sasuke's. Maybe resurrection with Kabuto's Edo Tensei. Sigh, but that's unlikely. I just want to see another Uchiha in action.
for your first character are they related to Haku other than just family clan
 

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Name: Tenzo Uchiha
Family: Uchiha/Hyuga (Father is Uchiha ; Mother is Hyuga)
KG: Sharingan
Ninja Rank: S-ranked (Akatsuki)
Village: Akatsuki

Father and Mother met through unknown circumstances and had a child and were shunned for having a out of clan child. Parents were killed. Son grew up unwanted, being a reject of society. Was a genius ninja. Was raised by Itachi. Itachi couldn't kill his own "son". Was dropped off by some unknown ninja who is somehow related to teaching Itachi how to be awesome. Grew up training hard to show Konoha his stuff, especially the Hyugas. Later heard of Itachi's death by his own brother Sasuke. Vowed to kill Sasuke. Joined Akatsuki's shadows. No one knows of his existence. Not even Uchiha Madara. Is a Ninja in extreme stealth. Developed his Hyuga Techniques into his Sharingan Techniques.
This is a GREAT idea,
only thing is it'd make more sense for him to not be in the Akatsuki,
or at least leave the Akatsuki after finding out Sasuke worked with them and left.

OR

if he stayed in Konoha, still hated or unpopular,
and formed a friendship with Naruto (niether of them knowing the others relationship with Sasuke) and it is revealed to each other somehow

OR
maybe became a rogue ninja always hunting Sasuke's tracks. maybe he'd fight Sasuke's EMS, and stand a really good chance but lose to him.
It'd be a sad/noble death. and they could probably have a deep conversation about Itachi. Many emotions thrown onto the battlefield.

Which one do you like, or if you like yours better, tell me.
i like my third option the best.

Anyways, Great Character!
 

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This is a GREAT idea,
only thing is it'd make more sense for him to not be in the Akatsuki,
or at least leave the Akatsuki after finding out Sasuke worked with them and left.

OR


if he stayed in Konoha, still hated or unpopular,
and formed a friendship with Naruto (niether of them knowing the others relationship with Sasuke) and it is revealed to each other somehow


OR
maybe became a rogue ninja always hunting Sasuke's tracks. maybe he'd fight Sasuke's EMS, and stand a really good chance but lose to him.
It'd be a sad/noble death. and they could probably have a deep conversation about Itachi. Many emotions thrown onto the battlefield.

Which one do you like, or if you like yours better, tell me.
i like my third option the best.

Anyways, Great Character!
I liked this one the best. I'll just edit it when I come back.
 

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name:ASAD hatake
family hatake
kg:sharingan in one eye like kakashi,and eye like neji
ninja: s-jounin
affiliation:KAKASHI bro(which was lost in the land of snow,i got my sharingan frm obito uchiha when kakashi take his eye and left him dere,i went there and took his left eye and i planted it in my left eye,and i got my second eye frm a person named kenji hyuga
i killed him in a battle and took his right eye and plant into my right eye
oooo yes i got sharingan and eye like neji
sorry the name of that eye i cant remember tell me what is it
 

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name:ASAD hatake
family hatake
kg:sharingan in one eye like kakashi,and eye like neji
ninja: s-jounin
affiliation:KAKASHI bro(which was lost in the land of snow,i got my sharingan frm obito uchiha when kakashi take his eye and left him dere,i went there and took his left eye and i planted it in my left eye,and i got my second eye frm a person named kenji hyuga
i killed him in a battle and took his right eye and plant into my right eye
oooo yes i got sharingan and eye like neji
sorry the name of that eye i cant remember tell me what is it
seems a little iffy, good suggestion.
but Neji's eye is called the Byakugan :D
and also, Byakugans are well prtected, i see it hard for a Hatake to steal one (they are not of the hyuga decent they cannot be born with the KG)

and also, Kakashi took obito's left eye. and obito's right eye was crushed under a boulder. elaborate on how he managed to get it?
 
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for your first character are they related to Haku other than just family clan
Just family clan. I don't feel that Haku should have any other relations...might ruin his story/background that's already there.
I just felt that we should see more Yuki people (Haku proved how awesome they were/are).
 

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Just family clan. I don't feel that Haku should have any other relations...might ruin his story/background that's already there.
I just felt that we should see more Yuki people (Haku proved how awesome they were/are).
i agree, well done on the characters anyway
 
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