[Other] Your Last Breath

[Cyanide Addiction]

Death is never the answer
But it is always the end
It doesn't care what your plans are
It takes lovers, family, and eventually you my friend

The sound of silence can be deafening
While the sound of life can be silent
People die for other lives their defending
At least their lives made noise that may never relent

Do you live in the silence of death?
Or do you live every day like it's your last?
Will you regret taking your last breath..
Or will you spend it remembering your life's past?

If you want to enjoy the second one
Then make every day a memory for that breath
If you should choose to ignore every setting sun..
Then you may be lonely and lost in your own death

Though it is always the answer to life
It doesn't have to be so bad
If you try you'll have it all, even a husband or a wife
It is the end, but it's not always truly sad...​

 

[God Of Destruction]

OT: nice work

 

[Nocturnal]

It's not bad, but it seemed as if you were just throwing things in there so you could rhyme. Other than it forcing rhymes, it's not too bad.

 

[EVlL]

not bad man!

 

[Rayxoour]

nice piece

 

[vipcool7]

nice one bruh...

 

[Cyanide Addiction]

It's not bad, but it seemed as if you were just throwing things in there so you could rhyme. Other than it forcing rhymes, it's not too bad.

Only part I can see a forced rhyme, is the first verse. Couldn't find anything that rhymed, and made sense, with "Answer".