Yet Another Attempt..

[Inch]

I'm still trying to get the hang of this new style..

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Any tips as to what I can do to make it less boring?

 

[Heister]

Try adding some pen tool

 

[Tsukune]

add more... light to the background

 

[Sourcactus]

looks like he's shooting a web...
add a spiderman theme

 

[Yanto]

Ok average....

 

[Inch]

Removed the layer I used to darken the stock..

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Any better?

 

[Yanto]

Ok better than before...

 

[Akademic]

not to good at giving advice but ill try lawlz, try finding a c4d or a brush set that would blend in nicely right now the render looks pretty naked you need to give it more effects same goes with the background. seems like you rushed through it rather then taking your time

 

[Inch]

not to good at giving advice but ill try lawlz, try finding a c4d or a brush set that would blend in nicely right now the render looks pretty naked you need to give it more effects same goes with the background. seems like you rushed through it rather then taking your time

That's the problem. I DID take my time on this and just couldn't manipulate the c4d and brushes I was using to really compliment the render or the BG. : \

 

[Phobos]

it seems kinda plain, try to add something- effect or some movement
top right corner miss a bit of nothing (black xd)
bottom right corner miss a bit of that light you put in there

 

[Sonne]

How about you don`t use C4D on Screen for once?
C4D sigs are for when you get the hang of it,your level requires Brush.

 

[Escorpiius]

How about you don`t use C4D on Screen for once?
C4D sigs are for when you get the hang of it,your level requires Brush.

I agree, though this one is much better than that last Urahara tag you made...
The light adjustment is a little better, though the c4D are not well-adjusted.
I repeat...just work more on style like that

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(with light effects and brushes only), then began with advanced c4Ds...