Well I just read your ff chapter er episode 1 and honestly emotes are way too distracting for a fan fiction imo. Also it was really, really short and didn't even have a story set up; it seemed to me like it was just a random event with no plot. Humor is a good thing, however if you have no story then you might as well be telling a joke. >.> Write what you wish though as you're the one that should like it. ^_^ Though if you really want to get people's attention, then grab it with an interesting plot and throw in your comedy as well. Good luck =DD