WTF Naruto:Help me make it better!

[maxhawk91]

Help Me. What would you want to happen?
Do you like when I use :naruto:

 

[soulless uchiha]

.............

 

[EnvyMyApex]

"what would you want to happen" WTF? Wouldn't that defeat the purpose of making your own fanfiction?

 

[zombiejesus]

what are you talking about man? lol

 

[MacMiller]

Too vague, what are you talking about?

 

[Colonel Armstrong]

i cannot even explain how lost i am right now...

 

[OhReary]

Help you?

 

[maxhawk91]

I mean should I use :naruto: or Naruto:

 

[MacMiller]

I mean should I use :naruto: or Naruto:

Use that for what?

 

[Narutohokage7]

Guys I believe he means when a character speaks. OP it is up to you, whatever feels right when you are writing it, will look forward to checking this story out

 

[maxhawk91]

Okay I feel like people dont like it. Do people like when people die? Do people want more humor?
Do people like adventure?!
Also if people want to be in the fanfiction I'll make you a character. Izoki is actually Tsukiyoumi93 !

 

[Hipster Madara]

i didnt like ur fanfiction much....tbch
also, yes, please just use naruto

 

[Shinobi Train]

Haters...I hate haters, say something useful instead of just hating.

Okay, lesson #1: More content.

#2: Find what you're good at, if comedy isn't your thing, then move on and go for something else.

#3: Read your signature...now read it again...keep reading it until you understand it. Now stand up and show them they're wrong! xd

 

[Seffy]

Well I just read your ff chapter er episode 1 and honestly emotes are way too distracting for a fan fiction imo. Also it was really, really short and didn't even have a story set up; it seemed to me like it was just a random event with no plot. Humor is a good thing, however if you have no story then you might as well be telling a joke. >.> Write what you wish though as you're the one that should like it. ^_^ Though if you really want to get people's attention, then grab it with an interesting plot and throw in your comedy as well. Good luck =DD