master of the sharingan
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this fanfiction is my opion of wat would have ahppened if the uchihia clan and the senju clan never made the treaty. the world is still in a state of constant battle. there are no villages just clans and there leaders. madaa is still alive and is the leader of the clan do to the external mangekyo sharingan.
heres chapter one, tell me if i should countinue it.
1) green eyes
*sasukes pov*
i was never positive on when the dreams started, it could of been when i was old enough to fight. it could of been the first time i killed a man. it could of been the first time i watched a family of children and women murder. But they've been here for as long as i remeber.
it always started in the same way. in the mist of battle. blood everywhere, scream echoing. some the enemie, some my allies. but strangly the blood never bothered me. i would be making my way through the weaker soldiers or pawns as i called them trying to reach the higher ups. this one pawn was huge. it took me two swings to fully kill him. but when i did i saw a shadow. from the shape i could tell it was girl. she was around my age. but the only thing i could make out was her eyes. green. they seemed to illuminate it the moon light.
but thats were it ended. every night.
i knew today was one of are big battles. so i got up and got dressed. baggy black pants, white boots, white long slleve shirt which i never cared to button up, and a big black belt which closed part of my shirt and held my katana. besides getting dressed i never bothered doing anything else with my looks. my hair was no longer spiked, it had grown longer and hung in my face.
as soon as i walked out of my tent i knew that battle was near for everyone was either nervous or excited. only when we fought the senju were we ever nervous.
good morning little brother..
itachi walked over from his tent in his armor similiar to leader-samas.
"are you ready for the battle??", he said in a way wich made me think he didnt care.
"when have you known me to not be ready??", i said
"hn", he replyed.
leader-sama wishes for me, you, and father to meet with him before you eat.
"im sure he does", i said as we walked to his tent.
as we walked in he was murmuring to the comander of the fifth unit obito uchihia.
besides me and my brothers units his was one of the higher ups in are militia.
"ah, sasuke-chan, how are you this morning?", he said from the table he ate at.
"cut the small talk, lets just get this over with", i said. i guess i was a little nervous. but that would change after i killed afew people.
*later that day on the battle feild*
as i stabbed my sword through a pawn i noticed he was to young to be in the battle.
he couldnt have been more then 9 years old. then i realised he wasnt wearing armor and his only weapon was a carved up tree branch.
why was this kid out here???
i had just killed a little kid on reflex.
this battle was worping my mind to the point i couldnt tell the difference of who i was attacking. or should i say killing. no one ever really put up a match to me.
then i heard a scream.
i looked out and i was instantly paralised.
there was the scream from my dreams.
were did it come from??!!
i started to search around killing anyone near me out of frustration.
i know i heard it.
wear was it?
*hours later*
i never found the green eyed girl...
it annoyed me to the point that after the senju had signaled the retreat and madara had signaled my unit back to the campground i found myself running after them. alone.
i had to settle this anger that had haunted me for to long.
i had to.
then i saw a shadow leaning over a body.
i ran at the shadow ready to strike. my blade swung and at the last minute i saw them.
the green eyes.
my blade stop right next to her neck and created a shallow wound.
i was frozen again.
i looked closer, the girl from my dreams was crying.
i had frightened her?
no she was leaning over a body to familiar.
it was the boy i had killed on accident.
i brought her pain.
i saw a blur.
it was obito.
madara had sent him after me.
i saw his blade drawn.
why was he ready to attack.??
there was no enemie near me.
wait, the girl was senju.
i couldnt think for a second and then i saw blood.
i had killed obito.
blood splatered over me, her, and the dead bod she overed over.
for the first time i heard her voice.
"they say on a battle feild it rains blood", she stated.
"you truly make it rain blood", she said as she got a blank look in her eye.
then sh efell forward.
oh no. was i to late and obitpo had injured her?
i looked her over and saw none of her blood.
i guess she feinted.
i heard a horn and then the moon light shown from behind the clouds and illuminated her face.
pale with pink hair. odd. but she wasnt senju or atleast she didnt look it.
i picked her up bridal style and ran towards camp.
i saw itachi run towards me.
"what happened?" he said in a worreid tone
"i was saving this girl from a senju and one jumped me, obito saved me but he lost his life", i sated as emotionless as possible.
he looked me over for awhile, i guess he thought i sounded strange because obito died.
"madara is angry at you and wishes to talk" he said.
"ill talk to him in the morning" i said.
"what of the girl?? you should give her to the men, they need intertainment" he said without emotion.
out of instinct i naturally growled. weird.
"no" i stated angrily," she is mine"
"well then... enjoy yourself" he said with a smirk.
i growled again.
i normally would have hit him in the face but with her in my arms that would be hard.
i walked to my tent and layed her in my bed.
i would have slept to but i knew i wouldnt be able to fall asleep.
end of chapter one
tell me wat yall think!!
heres chapter one, tell me if i should countinue it.
1) green eyes
*sasukes pov*
i was never positive on when the dreams started, it could of been when i was old enough to fight. it could of been the first time i killed a man. it could of been the first time i watched a family of children and women murder. But they've been here for as long as i remeber.
it always started in the same way. in the mist of battle. blood everywhere, scream echoing. some the enemie, some my allies. but strangly the blood never bothered me. i would be making my way through the weaker soldiers or pawns as i called them trying to reach the higher ups. this one pawn was huge. it took me two swings to fully kill him. but when i did i saw a shadow. from the shape i could tell it was girl. she was around my age. but the only thing i could make out was her eyes. green. they seemed to illuminate it the moon light.
but thats were it ended. every night.
i knew today was one of are big battles. so i got up and got dressed. baggy black pants, white boots, white long slleve shirt which i never cared to button up, and a big black belt which closed part of my shirt and held my katana. besides getting dressed i never bothered doing anything else with my looks. my hair was no longer spiked, it had grown longer and hung in my face.
as soon as i walked out of my tent i knew that battle was near for everyone was either nervous or excited. only when we fought the senju were we ever nervous.
good morning little brother..
itachi walked over from his tent in his armor similiar to leader-samas.
"are you ready for the battle??", he said in a way wich made me think he didnt care.
"when have you known me to not be ready??", i said
"hn", he replyed.
leader-sama wishes for me, you, and father to meet with him before you eat.
"im sure he does", i said as we walked to his tent.
as we walked in he was murmuring to the comander of the fifth unit obito uchihia.
besides me and my brothers units his was one of the higher ups in are militia.
"ah, sasuke-chan, how are you this morning?", he said from the table he ate at.
"cut the small talk, lets just get this over with", i said. i guess i was a little nervous. but that would change after i killed afew people.
*later that day on the battle feild*
as i stabbed my sword through a pawn i noticed he was to young to be in the battle.
he couldnt have been more then 9 years old. then i realised he wasnt wearing armor and his only weapon was a carved up tree branch.
why was this kid out here???
i had just killed a little kid on reflex.
this battle was worping my mind to the point i couldnt tell the difference of who i was attacking. or should i say killing. no one ever really put up a match to me.
then i heard a scream.
i looked out and i was instantly paralised.
there was the scream from my dreams.
were did it come from??!!
i started to search around killing anyone near me out of frustration.
i know i heard it.
wear was it?
*hours later*
i never found the green eyed girl...
it annoyed me to the point that after the senju had signaled the retreat and madara had signaled my unit back to the campground i found myself running after them. alone.
i had to settle this anger that had haunted me for to long.
i had to.
then i saw a shadow leaning over a body.
i ran at the shadow ready to strike. my blade swung and at the last minute i saw them.
the green eyes.
my blade stop right next to her neck and created a shallow wound.
i was frozen again.
i looked closer, the girl from my dreams was crying.
i had frightened her?
no she was leaning over a body to familiar.
it was the boy i had killed on accident.
i brought her pain.
i saw a blur.
it was obito.
madara had sent him after me.
i saw his blade drawn.
why was he ready to attack.??
there was no enemie near me.
wait, the girl was senju.
i couldnt think for a second and then i saw blood.
i had killed obito.
blood splatered over me, her, and the dead bod she overed over.
for the first time i heard her voice.
"they say on a battle feild it rains blood", she stated.
"you truly make it rain blood", she said as she got a blank look in her eye.
then sh efell forward.
oh no. was i to late and obitpo had injured her?
i looked her over and saw none of her blood.
i guess she feinted.
i heard a horn and then the moon light shown from behind the clouds and illuminated her face.
pale with pink hair. odd. but she wasnt senju or atleast she didnt look it.
i picked her up bridal style and ran towards camp.
i saw itachi run towards me.
"what happened?" he said in a worreid tone
"i was saving this girl from a senju and one jumped me, obito saved me but he lost his life", i sated as emotionless as possible.
he looked me over for awhile, i guess he thought i sounded strange because obito died.
"madara is angry at you and wishes to talk" he said.
"ill talk to him in the morning" i said.
"what of the girl?? you should give her to the men, they need intertainment" he said without emotion.
out of instinct i naturally growled. weird.
"no" i stated angrily," she is mine"
"well then... enjoy yourself" he said with a smirk.
i growled again.
i normally would have hit him in the face but with her in my arms that would be hard.
i walked to my tent and layed her in my bed.
i would have slept to but i knew i wouldnt be able to fall asleep.
end of chapter one
tell me wat yall think!!
