[Romance] Without a title.

[Byron123]

As I walk in an empty room
I see a light, which reminds me of your beauty.
Not clearly, I can only feel its warmth on my skin
while it takes away all of my fears.

Yet, this room is empty, it has no windows.
So, from where this light comes?

Is it a dream, a nightmare in disguise?
No, it's my innermost passion for life.

This room, this emptiness, such a similarity!
This warmth! What a foreign feeling!
A frightening and terrifying one!
I want to become ashes in these flames!


But when I'm just about to set ablaze, you disappear!
And ,thus, my safety is regained.


With this coldness in my heart
And this sadness of my spirit
I will, finally, enjoy the rest of my time.

 

[Darkdro]

Did You Make This?

- I Like It

 

[Byron123]

Did You Make This?

- I Like It

Yes, I did, thank you

 

[Goetia]

Its alright. The lack of rhyming and structure detracts a little from it, but it's not bad.

 

[Byron123]

Its alright. The lack of rhyming and structure detracts a little from it, but it's not bad.

Yeah, I guess you're rigth, I didn't really spend much time on it, although I should. As for the rhyming, sometimes, in order to get it like that, there is a risk of losing what you're trying to say so I avoid it.

 

[johnaudiba]

As I walk in an empty room
I see a light, which reminds me of your beauty.
Not clearly, I can only feel its warmth on my skin
while it takes away all of my fears.

Yet, this room is empty, it has no windows,
so, from where this light comes?

Is it a dream, a nightmare in disguise?
No, it's my innermost passion for life.

This room, this emptines, such a similarity!
This warmth! What a foreign feeling!
A frightening and terrifying one!
I want to become ashes in these flames!


But when I'm just about to set ablaze, you disappear!
And ,thus, my safety is regained.


With this coldness in my heart
And this sadness of my spirit
I will, finally, enjoy the rest of my time.

:T_T: :T_T: ...so sad when someone lonely is about to fall in-love to someone then they leave... :T_T: :T_T:

 

[Ryóma]

Pretty good bro!

 

[Byron123]

:T_T: :T_T: ...so sad when someone lonely is about to fall in-love to someone then they leave... :T_T: :T_T:

Pretty good bro!

Glad you liked it guys

 

[Six Paths]

Let em be honest, I am not the kind of guy that can write any kinds of these poems considering I am a wafflehead for literature..But i clearly enjoy reading and trying to understand it all. I do love this work, for the sheer fact it left me thinking about it for quite a while. I can't believe how amazing it is. Great work

 

[Byron123]

Let em be honest, I am not the kind of guy that can write any kinds of these poems considering I am a wafflehead for literature..But i clearly enjoy reading and trying to understand it all. I do love this work, for the sheer fact it left me thinking about it for quite a while. I can't believe how amazing it is. Great work

Thanks man, I really appreciate it =D

 

[Mr Hiru]

As I walk in an empty room
I see a light, which reminds me of your beauty.
Not clearly, I can only feel its warmth on my skin
while it takes away all of my fears.

Yet, this room is empty, it has no windows.
So, from where this light comes?

Is it a dream, a nightmare in disguise?
No, it's my innermost passion for life.

This room, this emptiness, such a similarity!
This warmth! What a foreign feeling!
A frightening and terrifying one!
I want to become ashes in these flames!


But when I'm just about to set ablaze, you disappear!
And ,thus, my safety is regained.


With this coldness in my heart
And this sadness of my spirit
I will, finally, enjoy the rest of my time.

As I walk in this thread
I met with a familiar dude.
Byron123 as thy nickname
I get near thou, wrapped in my fortitude.

The reason of why my presence cometh
Justified by the poem he hath presented
And as I analyze thy evidence
Truth shines due its absence

But! Oh alas... it was that mistake! That of mine all the way!
That evidence of thee nere at all!
Thou nere trying to give proof
Thou were tricking this heart of mine.

<3
xD

 

[Zealous Sparks]

Very nice work I had to read it over several times to analyze the meaning.

 

[Byron123]

As I walk in this thread
I met with a familiar dude.
Byron123 as thy nickname
I get near thou, wrapped in my fortitude.

The reason of why my presence cometh
Justified by the poem he hath presented
And as I analyze thy evidence
Truth shines due its absence

But! Oh alas... it was that mistake! That of mine all the way!
That evidence of thee nere at all!
Thou nere trying to give proof
Thou were tricking this heart of mine.

<3
xD

Loved it man XD

Very nice work I had to read it over several times to analyze the meaning.

I'm glad you liked it

 

[guts2nevergiveup]

It's beautiful T_T

 

[Byron123]

It's beautiful T_T

Thanks