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Or you can just analyze this lol.

(Ototon: Levicorpus) - Sound Release: Levicorpus
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A rather weak Sound jutsu, this is used to cause a foe small annoyance by lifting him in the air. This works by the user speaking a Sound (Levicorpus) and causing a set of waves to form around the opponent's leg, isolating the lower leg with a powerful wave. The purpose of this isn't to deal damage, however; after forming the wave, the user then causes it to move, the isolated leg moving with it, flipping him upside down in the process. Causing no damage, this hindering Sound jutsu is used to cause annoyance to the opponent as it lifts him into the air, slowly hoistering him higher and higher. This is ideal to use against an opponent as they perform handseals, interrupting them and forcing a momentary pause in their actions as they are flipped upside down. The user must also accompany this phrase with a jerking movement, done with their hand or a held item.
 

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After speaking a certain word, one will cause the opponent's leg to grabbed by a wave of sound, harmless in nature. This lifts the opponent into the air, upside down. This is done to interrupt a sequence of hand seals, or just to annoy an opponent. It's also quite sudden, so that makes it pretty bad ass, can be used to make the opponent mess up.
 

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Pretty much the same haha.


Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: A powerful Sound jutsu, the user points his arm or a weapon forward while speaking the word "Sectumsempra". Upon speaking the words, the user triggers the gathered Ototon chakra to be released, following the user's arm movements. Upon contact, the waves create deep and profuse gashes across the foe's body, seeming like an invisible sword strike has afflicted the foe's body. Due to the depths of the cut, the victims run the risk of dying from blood loss if treatment is not applied in time, if the wounds are not instantly fatal. The user is also able to use this as a means to sever obstacles in his way as well as sever certain parts of the opponent's body.

Notes:

-Can only be taught by Detective L
-Can only be used 3 times at max.
-After using, the user cannot use S rank and above Sound jutsu the next turn.



Just analyze it for me, please.
 

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Following the pointing of ones arm/weapon and speaking of the word Sectumsempra, the gathered sound chakra will be released in the form of waves that follow the movement of the hands and upon contact, leave deep gashes that resemble a sword strike. It is also capable of severing objects and certain body parts of the opponent.

I have a a question. What obstacles exactly can it sever? Rock slab? Golems Head? Or just objects that don't contain chakra?
 

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Yo yo, here you go.


Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will passively apply a seal with the Kanji for "Madness" on their body. This technique will both distort how their body but also their techniques appear. A barrier of chakra will form over their body in the form of a black haze of chakra cloaks the user's body without obscuring their sight. The haze casts anyone who looks upon it in an external genjutsu (A-Rank) that constantly shifts the user's outline like an off-focus photograph, thereby obscuring any discerning marks or features. The mist-like illusion also causes his image to double or triple randomly, making him appear to be a hallucination. It essentially creates the effect of the user's body flickering from side to side across a one-meter area too fast for the eyes to track without the creation of after-images. This isn't to be confused with the user moving back and forth, this effect can solely be attributed to the genjutsu induced by the haze and will occur even if the user is standing still. This throws off techniques which require a clear line of sight or concentration on the user's position. This effect will occur regardless of the opponent's tracking speed. As for the user's techniques, their distorted image will depend on it's state of matter. Solid techniques will appear pitch black with red lines of light across them, liquid techniques will appear as blood, gaseous techniques will appear as a black smog and energy-based techniques will appear a dark-red colour. This lasts until deactivated.

Notes:
-Can only be taught by Detective L
-Can only be used twice per battle



Analyze it for me.
 

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Ayo. So analysis lol.

You passively apply this seal on your body which in turn creates a black haze (actually chakra) around your body. This haze will cast anyone who looks at it in an external Genjutsu wherein they see the user distorted, making the opponent think that the user is moving too fast or its a mirage. The best part doe, is it makes techniques that require a clear line of site or concentration on the users position nearly impossible to pull off, Genjutsu and Amaterasu being examples. Oh yeah, it will also make your elemental techniques take on a different appearance (s/o bloody water lol).

(Fuuin/Ototon: Tenrai Kainyū) - Sealing/Sound Release: Divine Intervention
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20 (-5 per turn if used on techniques such as Stone Golem, etc)
Damage: N/A (+20 to Suiton)
Description: A technique created specifically to counteract the weaknesses of Water and Earth techniques, allowing them to become neutral to said weaknesses when this is used. The user will perform an additional handseal at the end of a Suiton/Doton technique, creating a seal upon said technique. Once created, the seal will release Sound waves that the user is capable of controlling in order to give his technique, depending on the element, different properties.

Suiton - having activated the seal, the user will create low frequency, high amplitude sound waves that pass through his technique, giving it destructive properties, that allow it to fight on equal terms with Doton. These waves vibrate faster by passing through the water while simultaneously 'coating' the technique with sound waves that 'repel' anything in contact with the water which allows it to become destructive.

Doton - differing from the Suiton version, the user will create sound waves that pass harmlessly through the Doton technique whilst the sound waves on the outer part of the technique can be altered to mimic the frequency given off by Lightning techniques used by your opponent, causing them to dissipate.

♒ The seal is created in the same timeframe as the technique on which it is used
♒ Usable 4 times per battle
♒ Cannot be used on techniques above S rank
♒ Can only be taught by Lee

Analyze tis here.
 

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After performing a Water or Earth technique, an extra hand seal will be formed to create a seal on the technique, which releases sound waves. This allows Water and Earth to fight on equal terms with its Earth and Lightning, respectively. For Water, one will create low frequency, high amplitude sound waves to pass through, making it destructive and allow it to fight on equal terms with Earth. For Earth, one will cause Sound waves to cover the outer part, causing to mimic the sound frequency of Lightning techniques, making it equal to Lightning.

Quite useful tbh.
 

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( Ototon Genjutsu: Parseltongue ) - Sound Release Illusionary Arts: Parseltongue
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C - S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15 - 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user channels Ototon chakra and speaks in a snake like dialect called Parseltongue, aimed at various snakes. This serpentine language allows the user to talk to snakes in a language only the user and the animal can understand. The purpose of this is to deliver special coded messages that can't be deciphered by others. This however is only the basic application; by applying Ototon chakra, the user uses sound waves to cast a genjutsu upon the beasts that allow him to revert their minds to a primitive state, one where they rely on their normal, primal instincts and capabilities. This is achieved by simulating a period of unrest in the brain ( similar to going two days without sleep ) to rewire their brains, re-directing activity from the calming and rational prefrontal cortex to the "fear center" -- the amygdala. This causes the brain to revert back to more primitive patterns of activity, in that it was unable to put emotional experiences into context and produce controlled, appropriate responses. The purpose of this is to break them down and weaken mentally to a state where the user is able to use the same Sound waves to implant ideas into the snake's mind, encoding specific commands to them. This allows the user to "control" the snakes in a way that appears like the user in a way similar to Kotoamatsukami, but only works on beings of a lesser kind, only affecting snakes. The power needed to sustain and control a snake is based on it's individual ranking, allowing him to control up to S ranked snakes, i.e. to speak and control an A ranked snake, a genjutsu of A rank is needed to be cast. The user is able to use the C and B ranked variants without restraints; the A ranked version can only be used 5 times while the S ranked variant can only be used twice. The S ranked version lasts only two turns, which each lower rank lasting one turn longer than the previous rank, going from 2 for S up to 5 turns for C rank.

Note: Requires both Sound and the Snake Contract.
Note: Can only be used on Snakes (Vex included).
Note: A rank and above can only be used 3 times in total, split across A and S rank in whichever way the user chooses.
Note: After using the A rank version, the user is not able to use it in the next turn. If S rank is used, this time doubles.

You know the drill. :pkun:
 

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Through focusing your Sound based chakra, one is able to speak in a snake like dialect, which creates the medium between the user and the snake being spoken to. However, the true use of the technique is to cast a Genjutsu on the Snakes' mind, reverting it to a primitive state. A more easily manipulated state, really since the Snake will now be at your very command. Can only be used on Snakes, and Vex of course.
 

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(Akimichi Geijutsu: Reddohottochiri! ) – Akimichi Arts: Red Hot Chilis!
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15 ( -5 per turn )
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A passive Akimichi ability, where the user will through the rapid conversion of calories into chakra, release a large amount of steam from their person, or limb. Once any type of transformation takes place ( change in shape, into a larger shape of a hand for example ), the user will passively release steam from the changed body part en masse ( unleashing it outward in a 360 degree radius ). Although passive, this steam does no damage to the opponent, and merely acts as an aesthetic but also serves as an obstruction of the opponents' vision. This remains active throughout once activated, and since it carries no offensive capability, can be used in the same time frame of the initial technique.

Note: Can only be used twice and once activated, remains active until the user stops it himself.
Note: Although the steam acts as to obstruct vision, the enlarged limbs are too large to properly hidden. Only smaller tools such as kunai/shuriken would be properly hidden from sight.

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