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(Supurasshusutā) Star Splash
Type: Offensive
Rank: S-Rank
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:The user holding their sword in their hand will take on the a simple stance ,where they will gather their chakra into their blade till it begins to glow a light green color, as they reach a peach of chakra then user will then run at full speed, so fast it is difficult to keep track of the user when he/she moves in a zigzag pattern , with the opponent losing focus then user will then channel chakra into their feet and jump into the air taking a full 360 turn and as they return around the user will unleash barrage powerful thrusts with there sword that will create several chakra thrusts similar to the Samurai Sabre Technique to strike the opponent .These thrusts are not sharp on the sides that it will only bruise the target but the center of the thrusts(the point) is very sharp and can stab into the target leaving gashes in the targets skin and severely bleeding. This can also be performed while on the ground without having to jump into the air, while it can be used up to twice times per battle with a cooldown of two turns between each use.

You know the drill.
 

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Basically I rush at the target in a zigzag pattern while gathering chakra, causing the sword to glow greenish. Jumping and spinning, I deliver several jab thrusts to the enemy to pierce them severely as if I were fencing.

Question: if performed without the jump, is the 360 spin needed? It says it creates chakra thrusts; are these thrusts extensions of the sword to increase range or is the mid range aspect only related to traveling with it? Is this weak to Elemental Ninjutsu?
 

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Basically I rush at the target in a zigzag pattern while gathering chakra, causing the sword to glow greenish. Jumping and spinning, I deliver several jab thrusts to the enemy to pierce them severely as if I were fencing.

Question: if performed without the jump, is the 360 spin needed? It says it creates chakra thrusts; are these thrusts extensions of the sword to increase range or is the mid range aspect only related to traveling with it? Is this weak to Elemental Ninjutsu?
Nah the 360 ain't needed on land and extensions of it. They are like Samurai Sabre and thus neutral to elemental natures
 

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Katon: Moui Kagutsuchi|Fire Style: Fury of the Fire God
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damge Points: 60
Description: The user makes a few handseals, gathering large amounts of chakra in his arms, and slams his hands down onto the earth, releasing all the fire chakra within his arms. Upon the point of contact of his hands and the earth, a small wave of fire spreads out from around the location of the user. The wave of fire starts to spread quickly and becomes stronger as it spreads from the user. Within a matter of seconds, the entire distance of short- mid is filled with fire. Once complete, the only place that becomes clear of fire is the small area where the user is standing.
*Can only use twice*
*After using, the user cannot use any wind jutsus otherwise he will basically be committing suicide by powering the flames*
*If the user stays in the middle of the fire for more than a turn, he becomes several burned*

Okay, so it's pretty simple. You make a few handseals and slam your hands to the earth. A growing 360 wave of flames begins around you and spreads out, growing in size and power as it does so. Within seconds, everything is crushed by the wave of flames. Picture giant tidal waves but with flames and you have the appearance down. Questions?
 

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Ήφαιστος' Καταραμένο Άρσεναλ Khryselakatos ) - Hephaestus' Cursed Arsenal of the Golden Shaft
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Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40 (-10 per turn)
Attack points: 80
Description: Derived from the Strike of Artemis, the user channels fire chakra to his hands, coating them in a highly flammable and hot ash which begins to "overflow" from his hand, pieces of ash being seen falling from it as it ever grows, constantly dropping chakra and constantly reforming it, forming a Odama Rasengan size of cloud like ash in his hand. As this ash constantly grows, the user holds his arm outwards, adding lightning chakra to this creation, giving it a hotter temperature as well as causing it to maintain an erosive like property, capable of eating through earth jutsus of one rank higher and below through burning through the earth at high temperatures via fire chakra and the natural effect lightning has on earth jutsus when in contact with one another. As the lightning is channeled, the user draws his remaining hand back as multiple arrows begin to form from the ash. Forming the arrows, the user wills them forward, causing the ash to be released in a powerful burst, the ash lingering in trails as the arrows are released. Upon reaching their target, these arrows strike with great force despite it's pseudo-solidity properties due to the lightning chakra imbibed in the arrows, piercing through earthen defenses with little power or momentum lost, the ash spreading across the earth jutsu defense erroding it (this only works if the earth jutsu is of equal or lower rank), the lightning in the ash allowing for this. Should the arrows reach the target, the user is able to control these arrows via hand movements, the trail of ash still emanating from the arrows. Upon his signal, the user can cause the arrows to detonate, causing an explosion that spans short range of these arrows and cause the trails of ash to detonate, creating an A ranked stream of fire behind these arrows, following the path the user willed the arrows to travel.
Note: Can only be used twice
Note: After using, takes 2 turns before being able to use again
Note: Cannot use any Fire jutsu of S rank and higher next turn and no lightning above S rank next turn.
Note: Can last up to 3 turns if the user continiously controls the arrows, spending 30 chakra per turn. If active, the user can only use one technique per turn.
Note: Costs 2 moves of the users 3 per turn

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Alright so the basic gist of this technique allows the user to combine their fire and lightning natures to create this combination technique. First hot amounts of flammable ash is created in a large amount, and due to it overflowing the user molds the shape of the ash into a cloud the size of Odama Rasengan and adding in the Lightning nature at this point making the temperature hotter and giving it erosion effects so that it may deal with Earth techniques of one rank higher and below.

The user then pulls their other hand back, much like an archer, causing multiple arrows to form. They release it em to chase after the targets, leaving behind trails of ash as the arrows fly. The user can then detonate the arrows to explode, but also the ash left behind dealing damage of thier own.


Ok here's a few question:
1. "erosive like property, capable of eating through earth jutsus of one rank higher and below through burning through the earth at high temperatures via fire chakra and the natural effect lightning has on earth jutsus when in contact with one another." It says this here, but then later says of equal rank or lower so I'm just clarifying on this part which is it exactly.

2. When dealing with a boosted version of this technique, so in this case my Bijuu - the arrows would be dealing 110 damage but it says of one rank and higher. I'm assuming once it goes pass the 90 damage threshold - it's just a matter of if the arrows are higher in damage than the earth technique.

3. While I can sustain it for three turns, does the ash cloud remain behind so I can release more arrows or do I have to reuse the technique over?
 

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1. No, youre reading it a little wrong. It can work on earth one rank higher but against earth same rank and lower, it will burn through with no momentum or speed lost. One rank higher, it will naturally be slowed down.
2. If your arrows do 110 damage, then they'd be able to defeat 130 damage and below earth
3. It lasts, as you control the arrows it creates the cloud when moving. As long as the arrows are moving, it works.
 

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1. No, youre reading it a little wrong. It can work on earth one rank higher but against earth same rank and lower, it will burn through with no momentum or speed lost. One rank higher, it will naturally be slowed down.
2. If your arrows do 110 damage, then they'd be able to defeat 130 damage and below earth
3. It lasts, as you control the arrows it creates the cloud when moving. As long as the arrows are moving, it works.
Ah alright no other questions
 
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