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Alright then! Seems that your body is all warmed up since last time (lol) so let's begin on some taijutsu techniques. Would you like to do it in a RP way or would you rather want me to post the technique's so that you can analyze them and I try to give the best feedback and other information about said technique's?
 

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It has been a while, but sure, let's do this!

Urek made a rather flashy entrance. Energy could be felt surging on the entire training field. Urek was filled and pumped with adrenaline and a rather yellow/reddish energy covered his entire body. He made his way towards his student, but stumbled during his phase. ''D... Dammit! I was trying to be all like Goku with this stuff on me but... Ah nevermind. I'm Urek Kiyoshi, and I will be your sensei for...'' Urek halted for a slight moment when sudden fireworks popped back and forth behind him. The firework explosions would eventually form into the letters ''Taijutsu''. ''TADAAAAA. What you think k...'' He took a deep breath, observed what was standing before him and asked him to introduce himself first. ''Introduce yourself first!!!!''
 

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Eh?! What a weird Sensei. He was so flashy, almost reminded me of myself. Nonetheless, it seemed he wanted me to introduce myself. Hmph! My eyes peered around, looking for signs of spies from the organization.

"Ku...ku....ku....MY name is...HOHOUIN"

*Crickets*

"I AM MAD NINJA. And actually here to learn Taijutsu under your tutelage."

I spin around, my white science jacket waving in the air.
 

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Since you've gone over the basics, we'll be jumping in the techniques now. Just analyse them a little bit, as in what's their best use and if there's something you don't like in that technique. We'll be going two at a time.

(Gangeki) - Rock Attack
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will strike their opponent with a strong punch to the chest

(Dainamikku Entori) - Dynamic Entry
Rank: D
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:20
Description:A taijutsu attack were the user does a jumping kick into the opponents face.

Both of these are self explanatory, so don't outdo yourself. Just keep it short and simple.
 

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(Gangeki) - Rock Attack

A simple technique where the user will deliver a simple punch to the opponent, aimed at the chest. Despite this, the techniques allows for freedom as to where it can be aimed, and deals some minor damage. Most effective spots to strike the opponent would be the face for example, or even the groin, should one get the chance. Simplicity is key in this technique and as such, not much to like, nor dislike.

(Dainamikku Entori) - Dynamic Entry

Another simple one, where the user will initiate a jumping kick and aim to hit the opponent in the face. Quite simple, though the jumping part does leave one vulnerable in the air, and as such, can be used against you, like for example diverting the leg when aiming to kick the opponent or simply using the outstretched leg against you, by pulling you down to the ground. Also makes you an easy target, as moving in mid air is increasingly difficult without the assistance of some form of weapon or Wind Ninjutsu, for example. Overall, not a technique I'd use easily.
 

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I'd suggest using the first technique in a combination with an elemental armor of your own, namely the B-rank Earth Release Armour one. The damage would be greatly enhanced to the point to dealing serious damage to your opponent. Excellent work.

(Konoha Reppū) - Leaf Gale
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points:20
Description: This technique is a good example of how even simple taijutsu can become a pre-eminently destructive, lethal technique. The attack is a simple rear spinning low kick, but a strong enough user can send a large adult flying as if they weighed nothing. The goal is to throw the enemy off balance, and deal damage to the lower half of their body.

(Konoha Senpū) - Leaf Hurricane
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 20
Description: A taijutsu where one launches a succession of high kicks and low kicks. Firstly, the opponent's evasion margin is restrained upon seeing the high kick, thus augmenting the chances for the low kick to hit the mark connecting to the rib cage area. So originally the high kick is little more than a feint.

Two kick based Taijutsu moves. The first one is a surprisingly strong kick to throw your enemy off balance by delivering a low rear kick in their lower body, then you can follow up with other moves. The second one is about dealing numerous high and low kicks, though the former ones are just feints in order to leave more room for the lower ones to hit.
 

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(Konoha Reppū) - Leaf Gale

A simple rear spinning kick, however, aimed at throwing the opponent off balance. Its aimed at their lower legs, which is inherently weak, and through enough momentum, can really cause someone to easily topple over. A simple technique, yet quite useful, however, turning your back on an opponent in any close combat scenario is quite dangerous. Other than that, no questions on this technique, I really quite like it.

(Konoha Senpū) - Leaf Hurricane

A technique where one will deliver a series of high and low kicks. However, the high kicks are merely feigns, aimed at making the opponent lose the chance of actually reacting to the following low kick, aimed at their mid section. Another simple one, but not easy to pull off in general. I don't see myself using it just yet, as I don't think it'd be advisable.
 

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Okay, the next three ones are really basic, and won't need an analysis on them, just perform all three of them in a combo against this training dummy which stands 5m in front of you.

(Kodzuku) Punch
Type: Offensive
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: 20
Description: One of the simplest moves in Taijutsu, the user will simply use one of his hands to deliver a simple punch by clenching his fist and swinging his arm. The user is free to do variations of a basic frontal punch and the technique though simple, can be deadly for strong users.

(Hirateuchi) Slap
Type: Offensive
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: 20
Description: One of the simplest moves in Taijutsu, the user will simply hit the opponent with an open hand, slapping him. It can also be used for defensive purposes to slap incoming limbs or weapons.

(Kikku) Kick
Type: Offensive
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: 20
Description: One of the simplest moves in Taijutsu, the user will simply hit the opponent with a kick from one of his legs. He is free to choose simple variations of the kick and the stronger he is, the more dangerous the technique is.
 

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Laura runs towards the dummy, slouching her body slightly. As she gets into close enough range, Laura pulls back her right arm combined with slightly adjusting her body to follow the momentum. Through a quick movement, she would thrust her fist forward, propelling her body as well, delivering a powerful punching to the dummy's chest. This hits it back a few meters, though Laura doesn't stop her approach and continues running towards the dummy. Upon close range once more, Laura opens her right hand, and delivers a simple open palm slap to the dummy's head, causing it to rotate on its axis. In this movement, she spins her entire body counter clockwise as she pivots off her right leg, and in this spin, lifts her left leg as it comes around and delivers a perfect kick to its chest area once more, sending it breaking in two due to the force. Although not a simple kick, a kick nonetheless.

"...."
 

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Keep up the good work!

(Fōringu Hōyō) Falling Embrace
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 20
Description: The user runs at the enemy and tackles them, slamming them into the earth.

Last D-rank. It's basically about tackling your enemy and forcing them to slam against the ground. To use this in the best way, pay attention to the terrain. If there are spikes next to the enemy, you can make him fall into them and potentially kill them.

(Konoha Shōfū) – Leaf Rising Wind
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: This technique uses the entire body as a spring, by amassing power through taking a posture where the back of the body falls down. With this powerful taijutsu, the user kicks just above the head. Because the power of the kick from the ground is instantly converted into a blow, the enemy hit with this attack will be launched high into the sky.

Break this one down for me.
 

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(Fōringu Hōyō) Falling Embrace

Laura runs toward her opponent, and as she gets close, she embraces him by fully tackling him. This sends him crashing into the ground, causing some damage from the hit on the ground, as well as the initial tackle.

(Konoha Shōfū) – Leaf Rising Wind

A technique where the user will use themselves as a spring as they fall back. Due to the position of their body, they will generate enough momentum to deliver an upward kick, which sends the opponent high into the air. I believe its the one used by Rock Lee on Sasuke during the Chunin exams.
 

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Good job, and yes you are correct, Rock Lee used that against Sasuke.

(Asshō) - Pressure Palm
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: The user strikes their opponent with a downwards thrust striking them to the floor.

(Shōgekishō) - Upwards Attacking Palm
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: The user strikes their opponent with an upwards thrust into the abdomen lifting them into the air.

Both of these techniques involve of the user using their palm. Respectively, the user uses a downwards and upwards palm thrust aimed at the enemy, doing tremendous internal damage especially if these palms are enhanced by some elemental chakra. Counter the following move with one of the techniques above.




Standing a few meters in front of his student, Feitan drops his body loosely forwards as he begins a quick sprint towards Laura. In a blink of an eye, the Dark user appears in front of her very eyes, a sinister smile escaping his lips as he did so. Without giving her a moment of relax, Feitan bends his knees a little bit and aims to punch her in the stomach.

(Kodzuku) Punch
Type: Offensive
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: 20
Description: One of the simplest moves in Taijutsu, the user will simply use one of his hands to deliver a simple punch by clenching his fist and swinging his arm. The user is free to do variations of a basic frontal punch and the technique though simple, can be deadly for strong users.
 
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