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Yea I just realized that... Its water we are training in I was super tired lol
Okay, now that's straightened out, let's resume your Suiton training, then.

It seems you were in the middle of preforming Rising Water Slicer, so let's resume from there.

You'll need to describe exactly what you do with your chakra to form the jutsu, and then we'll move on. ^_^
 

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I take a deep breath to help settle me down because it's been a while since any training. I then flow a large amount of chakra into my right leg. Once there is a sufficient amount I convert it into suiton chakra. Now I lift my leg up and stomp it on the ground. As I stomp my leg i release the suiton chakra from my leg. Once it leaves my body I make the water very thin using shape manipulation imagining making the water sharp like a knife. The water travels along the ground heading straight for a tree which then slices it in half.

How's that sensei
 

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I take a deep breath to help settle me down because it's been a while since any training. I then flow a large amount of chakra into my right leg. Once there is a sufficient amount I convert it into suiton chakra. Now I lift my leg up and stomp it on the ground. As I stomp my leg i release the suiton chakra from my leg. Once it leaves my body I make the water very thin using shape manipulation imagining making the water sharp like a knife. The water travels along the ground heading straight for a tree which then slices it in half.

How's that sensei
You missed a few details; the chakra needs to be put into the ground beneath your foot, not actually into it; after that, it needs to be directed forward and upwards, as you compress it, so that it shoots through the ground in the form of a thin blade.

Once more.
 

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I take another breath thinking of a few key words "gather, compress, direct, and shoot". I begin flowing my suiton chakra beneath me into the ground. Once there is a sufficient amount I begin to compress it that way when it shoots it hits with full force. Now I lift my leg up and stomp it on the ground. As my leg hits the ground i direct the suiton chakra to go the direction i stomped towards a tree. Once it begins to travel I make the water very thin using shape manipulation imagining making the water sharp like a thin blade as it shoots out of the ground slicing a boulder in half.
 

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I take another breath thinking of a few key words "gather, compress, direct, and shoot". I begin flowing my suiton chakra beneath me into the ground. Once there is a sufficient amount I begin to compress it that way when it shoots it hits with full force. Now I lift my leg up and stomp it on the ground. As my leg hits the ground i direct the suiton chakra to go the direction i stomped towards a tree. Once it begins to travel I make the water very thin using shape manipulation imagining making the water sharp like a thin blade as it shoots out of the ground slicing a boulder in half.
Much better. ^_^

Next is:

(Suiton: Taihoudan) - Water Style: Water Gun
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: A strong water wave spit from the mouth that is more compressed than Chaos Water Wave and can carve the earth if used on the same area multiply times.

Requiring no handseals, this jutsu is preformed quite simply: you'll gather a mass of Suiton chakra into your gullet and compress it as you build it up - you'll then expel that chakra under immense pressure as you use your shape manipulation to turn it completely into water, creating an intense stream of water that you shoot from your mouth.

Though an offensive jutsu, I find this jutsu is better suited for quick defense against Moderate Ranked Katon jutsu, than actually being used to attack with.

Give it a shot.
 

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*I concentrate on flowing my chakra into my mouth. As my mouth is filling up with chakra I convert it into suiton chakra. I take in another deep breath and release a high pressured beam of water at a tree. Unlike before this jutsu being release from my mouth i continually add chakra to it making it stronger and able to continue in a straight line for longer completely obliterating the tree*

(so this it's what squirtle feels like)
 

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*I concentrate on flowing my chakra into my mouth. As my mouth is filling up with chakra I convert it into suiton chakra. I take in another deep breath and release a high pressured beam of water at a tree. Unlike before this jutsu being release from my mouth i continually add chakra to it making it stronger and able to continue in a straight line for longer completely obliterating the tree*

(so this it's what squirtle feels like)
More or less, that's it. o_o

Nicely done.

So, moving on, we have:

(Suiton: Suikoundan) - Water Style: Water shark bomb

Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: A water projectile shaped like a shark that comes crashing down on the opponent.
Note: No water source required

The handseals for this technique are: Tiger → Ox → Dragon → Hare → Dog → Bird → Rat → Clone seal → Dragon → Ram.

Which, in and of itself, makes this jutsu practically useless. <_<

Basically, you, after forming the string of handseals, create a mass of Suiton chakra in the air which you direct at your opponent, after giving it form by using Shape Manipulation.

._. I really don't have much to say about this one.
 

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*I start by making the long list of handsigns as I flow my chakra through my body and convert it into suiton chakra. I then relese the suiton chakra from my body into the air above you. Then as the chakra is released as water and as it is being released I manipulate it to look like a shark. Then with no hesitation at all I send it straight at you.*

:D Dont kill me
 

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*I start by making the long list of handsigns as I flow my chakra through my body and convert it into suiton chakra. I then relese the suiton chakra from my body into the air above you. Then as the chakra is released as water and as it is being released I manipulate it to look like a shark. Then with no hesitation at all I send it straight at you.*

:D Dont kill me
*Quickly drawing my blade, I cut the shark directly in half.*

That was decent.

But, now we move on to:

Now, we move on to:

(Suiton: Suiben) - Water Release: Water whip
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After the user performs a series of 3 hand seals Rat → Dog → Ox, the user creates a whip of water that can be used to strike the opponent with a lashing action or wrap around the target to bind them. This technique can also have lightning techniques channeled through when they have bound their victim with the water whip.

The handseals are listed.

This jutsu is similar to the Water Sword technique, in that you're creating a weapon out of water, rather than manipulating the water to do something.

In that aspect, this jutsu is useful in the same manner as the Sword of Draining, yet is simply a different weapon at your disposal. Likewise, it is preformed similarly.

Give it a shot.
 

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*Ibegin by making the three handsigns and focus my chakra flowing it through my body and down my right arm I then release the chakra out of my hand as I swing it above my head and release more chakra making the whip longer before lashing my arm out towards a boulder and the water slicing it in half*
 

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*Ibegin by making the three handsigns and focus my chakra flowing it through my body and down my right arm I then release the chakra out of my hand as I swing it above my head and release more chakra making the whip longer before lashing my arm out towards a boulder and the water slicing it in half*
Nicely done.

Now, we move on.

(Suiton: Mizuame Nababara) - Water Style: Starch Syrup Capture Field
Rank: C
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user After performing the required hand seals Ram → Tiger spits out high-viscosity, chakra infused water, aimed at a surface of wide scope. This is a stream of sticky liquid which can be used to form an adhesive trap that can inhibit a person's mobility. One can effectively reduce their enemy's area of activity with this technique, and has the effect of being able to take complete control over the battlefield. The normal scope of this technique is normally just a few metres, but if prepared, it is also possible to make an entire pond of starch syrup. Being caught in the technique can be avoided by channelling chakra to one's feet allowing one to walk upon it uninhibited, beforehand.

Suiton: Mizuame Nababara is a Supplementary jutsu that, despite common belief, can be quiet useful. By using this jutsu, you release an amount of syrup in proportion to the amount of time you "charge" the jutsu.

As a supplementary jutsu, it does no damage, but it is good for coating the ground or walls in a sticky substance, making it great for trapping, and also a great jutsu to use in conjunction with other water jutsu.

A cool fact about this jutsu is: If the opponents hands get covered in this, it would be harder for them to use jutsu that require handseals! Though I've never seen anyone do this, it makes perfect sense. If their fingers are sticking together, they're gonna have a heck of a time.

First, form the handseals (listed).

After that, focus Suiton chakra into your gut and manipulate it's properties using Shape Manipulation to increase both its viscosity (thickness), and give it a sticky quality, as well; then, lining your throat with chakra, force it upwards from your stomach, and propel it out, onto the ground.
 

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Sorry for the late reply, but... <_< I don't have the time to dig through your old stuff, especially since there are multiple threads. I need you to tell me with 100% certainty whether or not you've learned that technique.

And...sorry to do this, but if you want to seek out another Sensei (though, I'd still require you drop training with me), I'd understand, as I don't think my response speed is going to increase.
 
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