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Quit looking awesome, there's only one awesome person here and that's me:p

Before we start you have to change into these clothes


*hands you a small parcel*

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Joking, no way I would do that to you or would I?

Now, before we start, tell me what you know about my style and about using a whip in general? What are they used for, what kind of whips are there etc.
 
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I disapprove, your awesomeness is contagious so I am awesome as well u-u, your argument is invalid. @-@

What clothes O_O
(Kinda happy that my internet is slow, and i can't see the pic <_>)

Your style? As in Snapey style, well it is similar to gangnam style/Harlem style, but in a more girly Snapey style
Your Style revolves around using whips to induce genjutsu upon the opponent, the user will focus his/her chakra through the whip, then hit the opponent with the whip, the opponent will take physical damage followed by a genjutsu, the genjutsus vary with the users will, and also the art requires quick movements mainly done through the wrist.

Using whip in general uses swift movements done through the arm mostly the wrists, whips have several uses, but the ones that I can think of are taming animals, it is also used in circus acts, it can also be used as weapons, whips being fast and slim can deliver a great deal of damage. The types of whips that I remember are from a documentary I watched on discovery channel >_>, I recall short whips, long whips, there are whips that have different fibers in them, this helps in increasing damage, having other effects, also whips are made up of various materials, and there can be also thick or thin whips.
 

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You will see in due time my friend, but for now we have more prominent business to attend.

You're description is correct^^ 10 points to the House of awesomeness! Yes, the weapons are used as a mediate to induce a genjutsu on the opponent while making physical contact with them. The idea is the the genjutsu's will be subtle so the opponent has a hard time figuring out what is happening to him until it is already actually to late.


*hands you a normal leather bull whip*

First things first. Before we can start practising with the whip and genjutsu you need to know how to handle a whip, how to attack and how to defend with it. See those line a tans there?

*Points to a row of 20 cans, all set apart with a distance of 20 cm*

You are going to hit those, with the whip only, one by one. You hit two or more at the same time, you set them all straight and start again, savvy?
One thing, like you said, whip movements are mainly made by the use of the wrist, so try only using your wrist. In the future it will give your opponent less time to react, because by the time they can react, the whip is already heading their way.
 

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Yay 10 points, the cup shall be ours this year :bouncy:

Takes whip, and looks at cans.

So I have to whip slap dem cans, seems legit:yay:

Narrator: MB observed the whip, carefully running his hand over the fine leather, the smoothness of the leather seemed to give pleasure to him, he slipped his hands down to the handle of the whip, with a strong hold the whip was firmly in his left hand, he had raised his hand above his head, ready to swing it, but abruptly he stopped lowering the whip and loosening his grip on it, he then began moving randomly apparently searching for something.

Either their is someone talking here, or I am seriously high.>_>

Narrator: Ha, the things people think of these days, hrm anyway, MB began running around whipping everything and anything(-Snapey and cans) in sight, this continued on for some time, MB was getting weaker, but his strikes were not, they had become more precise, they traveled faster, had a louder sound indicating more power behind the whips. MB has seemingly began to give up on his wild goose chase.*

"High I am definitely high, no doubt about it."

Narrator: Under the assumption of being high, MB proceeded to rest up a bit, he drank red bull and felt energized, he proceeded to do the instructions his teacher told him about a while ago, he stood a stance where his right foot was forwards, his left backwards, his feet were spread at shoulder length, in his left arm the whip was held tightly. With a slight movement of his lower arm and a swift movement of his wrist, the whip raised lazily hitting the first can barely knocking it off. MB was slightly frustrated with this, but in order to improve he kept at it, with each whip he added either more power or fixed his position, eventually he finally got the perfect wrist movement and lower arm movement, this lead to the 14th can being knocked out of the stratosphere(<_>), MB continued with the same way he did on the 14th can, his wrist movements improved, and all the cans were soon knocked away.

"I wonder if I'm still high."
 

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Everything I say is legit, but why you talk to yourself, I don't know. But if you are high, we might take a break, handling weapons while being high isn't such an idea.

Walks over to the cans and inspects them

hmmm, seems like you start to understand... Now, next!

I create 3 wooden dummies that standing at mid-range of you
(Mokuton: Mokujin) - Wood Style: Wooden Man
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A(+5 for any hits landed by the dummy)
Description: The user creates a training wooden dummy to help him train or to fight against an opponent.



So, next is improving your aim at the human body, you see the red dots on those dummies? Hit them all with your whip!

Red dots are on the shin, calve, knee, thigh, hip, chest, shoulders, biceps, elbows and wrists.
 

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Nah, I am always high, so this is kind of normal.

Well duh, it's thanks to you teacher(waits for another ten points >_>)


Observes the hit points of the wooden dummy*

This should be productive.

Narrator: MB after observing the wooden dummy prepares himself, he takes a stance where he will be balanced out even when delivering whip attacks, with the stance 'in place' MB begins to whip towards the wooden dummy, his whip attacks upon closer inspection appear to hit in a 1cm radius of the targeted area, taking that into account MB begins to focus more, he began using his wrist inna more efficient way, and with a few tries later, he had finally hit the required targets.
 

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Nah, I am always high, so this is kind of normal.

Well duh, it's thanks to you teacher(waits for another ten points >_>)


Observes the hit points of the wooden dummy*

This should be productive.

Narrator: MB after observing the wooden dummy prepares himself, he takes a stance where he will be balanced out even when delivering whip attacks, with the stance 'in place' MB begins to whip towards the wooden dummy, his whip attacks upon closer inspection appear to hit in a 1cm radius of the targeted area, taking that into account MB begins to focus more, he began using his wrist inna more efficient way, and with a few tries later, he had finally hit the required targets.
Okay, that looks fine. Of course, no opponent just stands still and waits for your attack, so now it's moving targets!

Creates 3 wooden man that move around and dodge your attacks.
(Mokuton: Mokujin soujutsu) - Wood Style: Wooden Men Manipulation
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user creates a Wooden Men (similar to the (Mokuton: Mokujin) - Wood Style: Wooden Man technique) that mimics his opponents moves. While it can be created from existing wood, earth or water, its major ability is that if used with Wood Men Coffin it can drain way Chakra from the enemy.



Same drill as before!
 

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That is surely a nice dance.

Narrator: The shït head, I mean MB.
l
=_= Shut you f*g of a narrator, just narrate what I am doing like a good f*ggy narrator.

Narrator: Retards....retards everywhere >_>..... MB gives me the finger although he can't see me O_O Anywho I should do my job which by the way I am underpaid in u-u.

=_= That's because you do a crappy job f*ggot....I swear I should hire Morgan Freeman....

Narrator: Noobs hiring noobs seems legit....

=_=

Narrator: u-u....MB observed the wooden man move, for MB the movement of the wooden man was somewhat comical, the man was being moved in a manner that made hitting specific parts harder, MB observed for a while taking into consideration the wooden man's movements and actions, after a while Vayne sees a pattern in the wooden man's movement, so he exploits this, he uses the pattern against the wooden man, he begins to whip & whip, with a few wrist movements and body stance changes capable of hitting the wooden man. As he hits the wooden man begins to loose his pattern, as a matter of fact there is no pattern anymore. MB knowing that he won't be able to hit the wooden man through predicting it's movements, changes his tactics and relies on speed, he begins to pour more chakra into his attacks, he uses faster wrist movements and more efficient stances, this added with the previous experiences made the attacks really fast, fast enough to hit the wooden man, MB had even been squinting his eyes in order to get a better aim.
 

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That is surely a nice dance.

Narrator: The shït head, I mean MB.
l
=_= Shut you f*g of a narrator, just narrate what I am doing like a good f*ggy narrator.

Narrator: Retards....retards everywhere >_>..... MB gives me the finger although he can't see me O_O Anywho I should do my job which by the way I am underpaid in u-u.

=_= That's because you do a crappy job f*ggot....I swear I should hire Morgan Freeman....

Narrator: Noobs hiring noobs seems legit....

=_=

Narrator: u-u....MB observed the wooden man move, for MB the movement of the wooden man was somewhat comical, the man was being moved in a manner that made hitting specific parts harder, MB observed for a while taking into consideration the wooden man's movements and actions, after a while Vayne sees a pattern in the wooden man's movement, so he exploits this, he uses the pattern against the wooden man, he begins to whip & whip, with a few wrist movements and body stance changes capable of hitting the wooden man. As he hits the wooden man begins to loose his pattern, as a matter of fact there is no pattern anymore. MB knowing that he won't be able to hit the wooden man through predicting it's movements, changes his tactics and relies on speed, he begins to pour more chakra into his attacks, he uses faster wrist movements and more efficient stances, this added with the previous experiences made the attacks really fast, fast enough to hit the wooden man, MB had even been squinting his eyes in order to get a better aim.
 

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Okay, now a bit more difficult;)

Creates 5 shadow clones.

Same as before, but al the shadow clones will move independently, and coming from different angles, what would you do against that?
 

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>_> I thought i replied to this.


5X da sexiness

Narrator: "What would you do?" Thought MB, "hmmm.... I will....Adapt" said the heroine(>_>). As the clones began to approach MB from different angles MB smirked and exploited the opportunity, he quickly lowered his stance and began to spin while spinning he released the whip, the whip hit the clones thus momentarily stunning them, MB exploited this opportunity to the fullest, he lowered his rotation speed ratio thus gaining a clearer perception of the location of the clones, with that perception MB whipped the clones one after the other.
 

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So young one, you told me you mastered genjutsu. Good, now we can finally continue to the real thing. But before we're doing anything with that whip of yours, explain to me what genjutsu is and how it can be used in battle.
 

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Genjutsu: It is known as illusionary arts, the art of deception, the art of the strategic. You see, Genjutsu is a way to trap and deceive your opponent, when your opponent is trapped in a Genjutsu that gives the user a tactical advantage. For example a illusion that makes the opponent see himself trapped inside a dome would force the opponent to attempt to destroy the dome.

Genjutsu commonly affects the five senses; Sight, Smell, Taste, Sensation, and Hearing. The most affected senses are Sight, and Sensation. The reason is due to it being more simpler to use, and quite frankly easier. Hearing is not commonly used, it is due to sound related Genjutsu requiring a instrument or Sound release itself. Smell induced genjutsus are also not common, that is due to the user needing to be near the affected person so that the person can get affected, Inuzuka's are at a disadvantage due to their increased sense of smell. Taste related are rarely seen, I personally think if someone where to use a taste related Genjutsu it should be during s meeting where the opponent is eating, that would make it easier to induce the genjutsu without suspicion.

Furthermore genjutsu requires great chakra control, since the user must precisely affect the opponents chakra network. Also Ocular Genjutsu exist, they are used by Uchiha through the usage of their Sharingan. With the increase of tomoes of the sharingan, the better the Genjutsu. Also Kurama clan members can make their Genjutsu real through their HA.
 

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Exactly, now you know all that we are going to incorporate it with a whip. As said before, Hoippu Geijutsu uses a whip as a medium to place opponent under a genjutsu. Most of the time they will be suble so that the opponent will have a difficult time realising he is under a genjutsu, giving the used a advantage in battle.

For now there are two technique's I can teach, and we start with the first one. I don't really see the use on 'preforming' it, so tell me the advantage's and disadvantage's of the technique and how you would use it in battle.


(Hoippu Geijutsu: Akuma no ikari) | Whip Arts: Devils Rage
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will move the whip around his body while channelling his chakra trough the whip. As the whip hits the opponent, a small amount of chakra of the users chakra will disrupt the opponent’s chakra flow, putting him under a subtle genjutsu B-Rank jutsu where he will feel a burning pain coming from the muscle's that are near the hit point. This pain will increase over the next 2 turns, if not broken out from the Genjutsu, until the opponent has the feeling that pain is too much, and can't use the hit limb any more, until broken out of the genjutsu.
Note: Requires Hoippu Geijutsu training
Note: Can only be taught by -Severus Snape-
 

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This technique is well made, it's subtle and effective, after the opponent takes physical damage, they would be placed in a genjutsu that will provide them with mental damage. Also since the pain of the genjutsu is on the hit body part, the opponent would have a hard time deducing he is in q genjutsu, and probably only after the first turn would it be logical for them to sense that something is wrong. As for a disadvantage I don't see any.
 

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Good, as for the disadvantage I'd say it works the same as with normal genjutsu, if the opponent uses a technique that is of a higher 'level' he'd break out of the genjutsu, most likely by accident.

Same as before, how you'd use it, advantage and disadvantages.


(Hoippu Geijutsu: Indiana no Hanketsu ) | Whip Arts: Indiana's Judgement
Type: Attack/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: This technique is the ultimate defence of a Whip Art Master. The user will spin his whip,while focusing chakra in it, rapidly around his body, creating an impenetrable dome around him. While moving creating the dome, the sound will trigger a genjutsu upon the opponent. The genjutsu itself if simple, instead of seeing the user moving around his whip constantly, the opponent will only see the whip being moved around once before the user seemed to rest the whip again by his side, while standing in the same position. In reality, the user will continue the move the whip around while moving forwards, and as the user comes within hitting distance from the opponent, he will flick the whip forwards and catch the opponent around the neck, effectively strangling or killing them, depending on the kind of whip the user carries.
Note: Can only be user twice per battle
Note: Can deflect any B-Rank or lower Elemental technique's, but the technique is broken
Note: Can deflect any A-Rank or lower Taijutsu and Kenjutsu technique's (except EIG technique's)
Note: The genjutsu breaks the moment the whip stops moving.
Note: Requires Hoippu Geijutsu training
Note: Can only be taught by -Severus Snape-
 

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I'd probably use the technique when approaching someone, or after a whip technique, or of their was suitable role-play from before for theatrical uses in a rp essence, of course, all those cases would help in deicieving the opponent. Also I can use it to defelct an attack, this allows me to place the opponent simultaneously inside a genjutsu. Now the technique has many adavantages, it can prevent elemental techniques, it can prevent CQC related techniques, also it affects a multitude of opponents simultaneously since it is sound based. However that is also a disadvantage since allies will fall prey to the genjutsu aswell. Another disadvantage is that the genjutsu breakes when the whip stops movings, also it is only usable two times.

Also I have a question, it's mentioned in the description, just making sure. When the opponent is in the genjutsu, they would see me standing still right? even during when I begin to move. Another question is: Is the sound of the whip present after the genjutsu placed?


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Perfect, altough I don't really see the disadvantage of being only able to use twice since you will effectively strangle your opponent before he can do something;)

The sound would depend on the movement of the whip, how hard you whip it around, the sound can be quite low depending on the power behind it, making it still hearable, but really difficult.

And yes, while your opponent is under the genjutsu he won't see you moving, but that can be a disavantage too since attacks to your previous location will be strange, they see them going right trough you;)

If you got any more questions feel free to ask them here or drop a VM;)
 
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