When Worlds Collide: Chapter 2: New Lives

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"What do you mean by, 'interesting'?" Kakashi asked.
"Whoa, Barbra. Who's this?"
"This is your new partner for the search for the kid."
"New partner?"
"He fought in 'Nam and wanted to be an urban cop. Can you believe it?"
"Not really..." Officer Georgeson eyed Kakashi up and down. "What's up with the jacket, man?"
"It's my Flack Jacket. I got addicted to it in 'Nam."
"And I suppose you lost your eye in 'Nam, too, eh?" he said sarcastically.
"Yes." There was silence for a moment or two.
"Alright, kid, come with me. We're on the hunt for a strange kid." Officer Georgeson and Kakashi got into a police cruiser, turned on the sirens, and began to roll.
"So, what's your name?" Georgeson asked.
"Kakashi Hatake."
"Odd name."
"My parents are Japanese."
"Okay. Were you born in Canada?"
"... Yes."
"Cool, man. Can I call you 'Shi'?"
"Fine, whatever. So, who are we after?"
"I'm not sure, we were just radio'd about him a little while ago. Teenager, maybe fifteen to sixteen. Blonde, spikey hair, doesn't look like it's been brushed or anything in a while. Wear's an orange and black jumpsuit, and can punch a man twenty feet through the air into the side of a wooden building, causing it to collapse around him."
"Oh, my." I'M GOING TO KILL YOU, NARUTO!!!!
"And that's not the worst part."
"It isn't?"
"No. Appearantly, he can run at forty kilometer's per hour, and can cover himself in some sort of yellow light/energy thing."
REALLY, NARUTO!?!?!? YOU DID THAT HERE!?!?!?
"He can extend his arms out to great lengths, with enough strength to crush a police car just like this one, and then when that cloak is around him, he runs on all fours at twice the speed."
"Well, it makes sense."
"It does!?!?!?"
"Ummm... Yeah. He has two extra feet, so he can run twice as fast."
"I suppose..."

As Kakashi was patroling the city with Officer Georgeson, Sasuke was trying to find out where he was. There were large, brick buildings around him, and the place he was in smelled a little... Off.
"Hey, check out this loser!" someone called. Four boys, all about Sasuke's age, walked up to him. One of them was wearing sunglasses and all of them had leather jacket's on.
"Hey, Halloween's over, kid. You can take off the costume," one of the followers said.
The leader shifted the toothpick in his mouth. "And the mask," he said.
"Oooh... You just got SERVED!" all of the followers said in unison.
"It seems as though you are mocking me," Sasuke said, his hand falling to the handle of his sword. "When people mock me," Sasuke pulled his sword out of it's holster and chopped the leader's head off in a single, fluent motion, putting the sword as fast as he had pulled it out, as if nothing happened. "Head's roll."
The leaders head rolled to Sasuke's feet, and he put his foot on the guy's head, bent over, took off his sunglasses, and put them on.
"Now you three best be on your way." Sasuke turned to leave, when the three kids stopped him.
"DUDE! That was awesome! You HAVE to take his place as our leader!" one of them said.
"But first, get a costume change."
"Let's check 'The Bite'!"
The kids took Sasuke to a local clothing shop, Reality Bites, to get him some new clothes. When Sasuke walked out, he was wearing a black, leather jacket, a leather collar with metal spikes around his neck and wrists, black skinny jeans, the leaders old sunglasses, and a toothpick in his mouth. Sasuke also refused to part with his sword for something more like a small knife the others suggested, repeatedly saying, "Can a knife do what my sword did?"

"Is that..." Kakashi looked out the window of the cruiser to see four boy's in leather jackets, one of them with Sasuke's hairstyle (which he understood to be almost unheard of in this new world).
"Is that what? Oh, they're just kids. Can't do nothin' 'less we have proof they're breaking the law. That one with the sunglasses has real wierd hair, though."
"So, we can't do anything? Because, they look like a suspicios bunch."
"Can't do nothin' without proof."
Kakashi leaned his head on his hand and propped his elbow against the window. Sasuke saw him, and gave a small nod with an evil smirk.
Looks like we both got a new style, Sasuke thought to himself. I like him in a bandana instead of some ratty headband.
Sasuke turned, revealing his camoflaged sword for a moment.
"WHOA!" Kakashi yelled, bolting upright. Georgeson swirved across the stree, and parked near a mall.
"What is it!?" he asked. "Did you see the kid!?!?"
"No, but that kid has a SWORD!"
"Which one?"
"The one with wierd hair!" How did I forget that Sasuke had a sword!?!?
Kakashi and Officer Georgeson walked over to the boys.
"Young man," Officer Georgeson said to Sasuke. "I've been told that you have a sword. This is a standard police check that shouldn't take very long."
"What are you doing!?" Sasuke asked.
"He's gunna pat ya' down, kid!" one of Sasuke's new followers said.
"Told ya' ta' go with the knife," another whispered in Sasuke's ear.
As Officer Georgeson came in to do the inspection, Sasuke lowered his sunglasses.
"Before you do anything," he said. "Could you look me in the eyes?"
Oh, no, Kakashi thought. Officer Georgeson looked Sasuke in the eye's to see the Mangekyo Sharingan and enter the Tsukuyomi realm.
"You and 'Officer' Hatake can leave us alone," Sasuke said. He stabbed Officer Georgeson in the stomache. "Or you can look forwards to one of those in the real world!"
They came back to reality, and Officer Georgeson stumbled into Kakashi's arms.
"Let's go, Shi. These boy's don't have anyting."
"But, I saw a-:
"THEY DON'T HAVE ANYTHING!" The two officers got into the cruiser and drove away.
So you're apart of this world's ANBU, eh Kakashi? Sasuke thought. Interesting...

Naruto ran across the bridge, and down the path to the highway. He ran across the highway, cars swirving out of the way to avoid the 'meanace' that all the radio stations were talking about. The Kyuubi cloak dissappaited and Naruto settled down in an empty train car.
Several people stopped by the side of the road to call the police about the boy they were after.
"Thank, you," the receptionist said. "We'll be right on it. Hello? Yes, this is thrityth call we've had about him, thank you. Hello?"

"We just got a call about the kid, Shi."
"You were serious about that!?"
"Of course I was! Now let's roll; he's in a train car by highway 39."

"So, what can we call you?" one of the kids asked.
"Hm?" Sasuke said. "Oh, just call me 'Ke'(kay), okay?"
"Sure thing, Ke okay!"
"Not the sharpest knives in the drawer, are you?"
"Sasuke?" Madara leaped down from the apartment building (which happened to be fairly near the parking lot Sasuke was in) and walked across a street to him.
"Look out, gramps!" one of the kids said. "CAR!" The car did a backflip and blocked off any other cars comming for Madara. "Whoa."
"Yeah, and it was him who did that," Sasuke said.
"There you are, Sasuke. I've been looking for you. I bet we could take over this world. Who're they?"
"We're-"
"They're no one," Sasuke said, cutting them off.
"Hey, Ke. Who's the loser with the mask?"
"Oh, you really didn't want to say that."
"Loser?" The kid was thrown into the air by an unseen force, and landed ontop of a glass pyramid on the mall, shattering it.
"Whoa," one of the remaining two said. "That was so cool!"
"They don't care that one of their own was just killed?" Madara asked.
"I killed their leader, and they took me in as his replacement," Sasuke replied.
"No matter! No doubt you heard about Naruto?"
"No. What happened?"
"He's currently the top most wanted of this province."
"What's a province?"
"As far as I can tell, it's a part of a country."
"I see..."
"Okay, you two are really wierd, no matter how cool you are. We're out of her-"
"CHIDORI!"
"ALMIGHT PUSH!"
Madara and Sasuke each killed one of the boys, and teleported away.

"Ah," Naruto said, relaxing in the empty train. "This is great, but I wonder where Sasuke and Madara went."
"FREEZE!"
Naruto sat bolt upright, and stared at the cops hiding behind their cars.
I don't want to shoot you, Naruto, Kakashi said to himself. So I'll take the first shot, miss, and let you get away. There was a bang, and Kakashi turned to Officer Georgeson.
"YOU SHOT!?!?"
"Yeah! We can't just leave him, can we!?"
Naruto rolled off the train and under it to avoid the bullets. He peeked out to see his oppressors.
"Kakashi!?!?!?"


How will Naruto react to Kakashi shooting at him? How will Madara alter his image to fit in with his surroundings? What are Sasuke and Madara planning? Will the deaths in this chapter have ANY importance later on? Find out, in the next instalment of the seris. And remember, I like it when people comment; good, bad, so long as it's not spam. And if it's bad, at least make it constructive crtiticism.
 

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Nice job. Solid story idea, developing well.

With that much dialogue though, it would be nice to have a 'Kakashi said' or a 'Naruto replied' somewhere in there to help keep track. Especially if there's more than two people talking.

Another solid 4/5
 
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