not to hate but the first two lines are wrong. the last is right but by luck maybe? so not really a haikuI am war
Inner battle of wills,
Soul wants to be still.
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What am I?
doesnt have to be a flying fck cuz if this is a haiku then its hellish and stupid. that means a lower fck cuz this haiku gets -97568756786875657. thats a low fck.I don't give a flying fck.
Waindo dear,I don't give a flying fck.
not trying to be smart but you cant draw whiskers on a man and call it a cat. its a poem i guess, just not a haiku.Waindo dear,
People will always try to show how smarter they are by saying stuff like that. Haiku has evolved a lot in time. You know that, so why even bother answering? And I love that you brought it back <3 it's beautiful.
Ok. I agree.not trying to be smart but you cant draw whiskers on a man and call it a cat. its a poem i guess, just not a haiku.
Well,not only cats have whiskers my friend and things evolve with time, if not it can't last in a changing world .not trying to be smart but you cant draw whiskers on a man and call it a cat. its a poem i guess, just not a haiku.
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sigh. everything evolves. but that means it changes. this is not a haiku. its a poem. and i never said only cats have whiskers, my friend. I used an example. Men don't have whiskers. Cats do. never compared cats to mice etc.Write more Waindo, only place you must go is up
Well,not only cats have whiskers my friend and things evolve with time, if not it can't last in a changing world .
if people carry out the same poetry tradition till now, there won't be romantic poems and it evolved because some were brave enough to go beyond the rules but yeah ! don't try to apply this to everything