[Mystery] What Am I? | Haiku

[Waindo]

I am war
Inner battle of wills,
Soul wants to be still.

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What am I?​

 

[Itachirules]

I am war
Inner battle of wills,
Soul wants to be still.

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What am I?​

not to hate but the first two lines are wrong. the last is right but by luck maybe? so not really a haiku

 

[Waindo]

I don't give a flying fck.

 

[Itachirules]

I don't give a flying fck.

doesnt have to be a flying fck cuz if this is a haiku then its hellish and stupid. that means a lower fck cuz this haiku gets -97568756786875657. thats a low fck.

 

[Waindo]

It really bothers you to that extent that it's not written by haiku rules?....

 

[Mis]

I don't give a flying fck.

Waindo dear,
People will always try to show how smarter they are by saying stuff like that. Haiku has evolved a lot in time. You know that, so why even bother answering? And I love that you brought it back <3 it's beautiful.

 

[Akаsh]

me love haikus
me want more

moooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrree!!!~

 

[Waindo]

Ty, both of you...

 

[Itachirules]

Waindo dear,
People will always try to show how smarter they are by saying stuff like that. Haiku has evolved a lot in time. You know that, so why even bother answering? And I love that you brought it back <3 it's beautiful.

not trying to be smart but you cant draw whiskers on a man and call it a cat. its a poem i guess, just not a haiku.

 

[Waindo]

not trying to be smart but you cant draw whiskers on a man and call it a cat. its a poem i guess, just not a haiku.

Ok. I agree.

 

[Kishi Uzumaki]

Write more Waindo, only place you must go is up

not trying to be smart but you cant draw whiskers on a man and call it a cat. its a poem i guess, just not a haiku.

Well,not only cats have whiskers my friend and things evolve with time, if not it can't last in a changing world .

if people carry out the same poetry tradition till now, there won't be romantic poems and it evolved because some were brave enough to go beyond the rules but yeah ! don't try to apply this to everything

 

[Waindo]

Yet I'm low as it can get...
Thx a bunch bro...

 

[Pumpkin Ninja]

5 Syllables
7 Syllables
5 Syllables

 

[Waindo]

5 Syllables
7 Syllables
5 Syllables

Sorry I don't speak any english at all.

 

[Goetia]

If you wish to be literal about it...then you are human. Always conflicted, battling with yourself in the hope that you find inner peace and a calmer being.

Good work.

 

[AnimusOra]

I understand this because i don't understand myself......lol. There are too many versions of me that i don't know who is the control subject anymore. Nice Haiku:hooray:

 

[Waindo]

Glad you liked it bro.

 

[Itachirules]

Write more Waindo, only place you must go is up



Well,not only cats have whiskers my friend and things evolve with time, if not it can't last in a changing world .

if people carry out the same poetry tradition till now, there won't be romantic poems and it evolved because some were brave enough to go beyond the rules but yeah ! don't try to apply this to everything

sigh. everything evolves. but that means it changes. this is not a haiku. its a poem. and i never said only cats have whiskers, my friend. I used an example. Men don't have whiskers. Cats do. never compared cats to mice etc.