before all start saying im crazy i am not... i thought i would try death metal for a poem i need feedback if it is dark or not
by the way..... i am not doing another dark for a long time
i am stressed over stuff at home so this is stress relief (this a heavy metal song)
=chris
lycantrophy is my harmony
it is such a claimity of human vitality
oh the sweet serneity of their emotions clouded in group motion
look at them what a bunch cowards
they fall like their towers
as we devouer their flesh from thier bones
we all shall live a alone
they all point their bullets and guns
yet we shun them and call them to the sun gods
they put up a damn facade to the gods
nothin is sacred everything is dead
this melody they swing too is a death row
thye will hear our howls and know the cold of night
as we snuff out their light
it is ironic to think themselves master
yet we are the better species
their souls will fell a cold bite from our might
are claws rip through flesh and bone
they pray and pray yet we slay
they are all in dismay as we contemplate
their next slaughter as they faulter
it is such a claimity of human vitality
oh the sweet serneity of their emotions clouded in group motion
look at them what a bunch cowards
they fall like their towers
as we devouer their flesh from thier bones
we all shall live a alone
they all point their bullets and guns
yet we shun them and call them to the sun gods
they put up a damn facade to the gods
nothin is sacred everything is dead
this melody they swing too is a death row
thye will hear our howls and know the cold of night
as we snuff out their light
it is ironic to think themselves master
yet we are the better species
their souls will fell a cold bite from our might
are claws rip through flesh and bone
they pray and pray yet we slay
they are all in dismay as we contemplate
their next slaughter as they faulter
by the way..... i am not doing another dark for a long time
i am stressed over stuff at home so this is stress relief (this a heavy metal song)
=chris
