WEAVING DESTINY CHAPTER ONE: Memories Of The Sun

[Nikkou Arashi]

Nice I see you did as me by posting a link

Ehehehe...been trying to learn some stuffs...

 

[-Tauburn-]

it was good i plan to read the other chapters

 

[UR NOT EVEN MLG]

Its really good. Please keep it going. xd

 

[Nikkou Arashi]

it was good i plan to read the other chapters

Its really good. Please keep it going. xd

Thanks, guys. I hope you've gone through the Prologue, too. I had it in my blog though. Was not sure where to put it at first.

 

[oFuiinJutsuu]

I'm back xd Hmmm What do I have to say about chapter one ?
Pros : Honestly, your skills as an author are quite impressive. You seem to adapt really well to the FanFic that people are looking for.

Cons : Well, I've gotta say that the story is a tad bit boring... I'm guessing you have that coming in the next few chapters seeing as you've got a bright mind and tons of potentiel.

Off to the next ^^

 

[BluePhenix]

geez, that's hot stuff... you're really good at writing

i'll be sure to learn a thing or two from your writing style

 

[~Cross Marian~]

Love it! Would love to see more

 

[Nikkou Arashi]

geez, that's hot stuff... you're really good at writing

i'll be sure to learn a thing or two from your writing style

Thanks Had to complete that in a week. Always out of words as I said. xd

Love it! Would love to see more

Hi, you're new and thank you for noticing my work. I have this up to chapter 5 already. You will have to search thru the FanFic section tho. Or you can visit my profile and go to my Blog tab. Its all there.

 

[~Cross Marian~]

Thanks Had to complete that in a week. Always out of words as I said. xd



Hi, you're new and thank you for noticing my work. I have this up to chapter 5 already. You will have to search thru the FanFic section tho. Or you can visit my profile and go to my Blog tab. Its all there.

Great will take a look

 

[UzumakiClash]

Nice! I like it. Its interesting..

 

[Nikkou Arashi]

Nice! I like it. Its interesting..

Thank you. I hope the next chapters will interest you, too.

 

[UzumakiClash]

Thank you. I hope the next chapters will interest you, too.

Yup, I'll be sure to read the next chapters!

 

[Mist]

Another very enjoyable, the start part of the chapter had me giggling away. How typical Naruto. With a nice twist of events to the more sad/serious part of the story. Very nice writing of Kakashi's thoughts.

reposting comment here instead of the blog

 

[Nikkou Arashi]

I did notice. I'm glad you like it, thanks.

Well, the story kinda had a fall down after chapter 5 - I must say, I really loved the way I did the descriptions/narration there. After that, I had to go down to details and so it lost a number of viewers and commentaries. But as I've been having this story in mind even before I joined NB, I still went through it. Its currently running with 12 chapters. 13 is long over due as I've been caught up with a lot of other things. Though, I might post it within the week.

Cya,see you around then and sorry for the late reply.

 

[Dastan]

LOL! You just made a good humor out of Naruto's sleep. Its soo like him to be dreaming of Sakura, eh? I like the way you described kakashi's inner thoughts there. On to the next chapter now.

 

[Nikkou Arashi]

LOL! You just made a good humor out of Naruto's sleep. Its soo like him to be dreaming of Sakura, eh? I like the way you described kakashi's inner thoughts there. On to the next chapter now.

LOL! I'm glad you had a good laugh at it. As for kakashi's somewhat solitary moment - you'll find answers to it as the story goes along. Thank you for reading.