WEAVING DESTINY CHAPTER ONE: Memories Of The Sun

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Hi, this Fanfic is dedicated to those who have continuously loved the Naruto Anime characters especially Kakashi, Naruto (and all other else). When I first wrote my synopsis, I did not think of a storyline that would be everyone’s preference. I thought only of my kind of genre. Later on, as I read from one Fanfic to the other, I realized that the storyline I have in mind does not really match the genre that most of the people registered here want a Fanfic to be.

I want mine to depict the passion that resides deep within Kakashi's strong, yet solitary personality. Since I do not see it in the manga or in animes much, I'm going to discover it myself. :)

Herewith is the first chapter.I hope to kindle your interest. :)


WEAVING DESTINY CHAPTER ONE:
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Memories Of The Sun

Konohagakure, Hidden Village of the Leaf. It was 4:00 in the morning and who else could be dreaming of Sakura in his little abode?

“Hmmmm, that feels great, Sakura…” Naruto mumbles as he dreams of Sakura gently massaging his back as he lies with his cheeks on the pillow. Sakura continued her massage up to his shoulders and then to his head. Later on, what used to be a gentle massage became sharp picks.

“U-Uh, that kinda hurts, Sakura-chan…please be gentle.” But the more he pleads for gentleness the more Sakura picked and picked on his head. And what more? She had become violently noisy too that her voice started to crackle loudly every minute.

“ka-kak! Ka-kak! Kak-kak!”

“Arr-rgggh - -!” Naruto shouted in despair and later on realized that he was only dreaming. What could have been Sakura hitting his head was actually an adult rooster picking on his head like it was fighting another rooster!

“Co-cook-cookroooook!” yelled the rooster back as Naruto turned up to face and glared at it.

Pissed off with what the rooster did, he caught it up with its neck and strangled it.

“Ahk-k-k-k!” cried the rooster as he struggled to get free from Naruto’s hold. With no hesitation, the rooster picked and picked on Naruto’s hands until Naruto let go of him.

“Arrrrggggghhhh!!!!, DAMN ROOSTER! I’LL TURN YOU INTO A ROASTED CHICKEN WHEN I GET HOLD OF YOOOUUUU!!!”

Naruto, all mad and angry shouted right at the rooster’s face. But before he could make another move, the rooster picked on his forehead and flew straight out of the window and up to the roof.

All red and mad, Naruto chased the rooster from one roof to the other, causing most of the sleeping villagers to wake up. The chase went on to the market place, to the village square, to the fields and back to the houses and then from trees to trees.

‘Huurrrmmm…where did that stupid chicken go?’, said a grumpy Naruto as he stopped on one of the branches of a large tree and lost sight of the rooster.

Naruto looked around all mad about the chicken which just ruined his dream and waking him before the sun was up. He searched every possible spot around him and found no sign of it. Then he stopped as his eyes landed on a man solemnly standing by the window.

‘Hmmm, Kakashi-Sensei is already up and ready to go?’ He wondered upon seeing Kakashi standing by his window, facing the east and all geared up. He didn’t notice that chasing the rooster had brought him near the teacher’s quarters and the tree where he is on, is just adjacent to Kakashi’s window.

He carefully stepped forward to get a closer look at him. From where he was standing, he could see Kakashi’s usual impassive face staring endlessly at the sun. As the sun started to come out, Naruto realized that he have been chasing the rooster for almost two hours now.

‘Uh! Damn chicken. Now, I wouldn’t have time to go back to sleep anymore.’ He said, still pissed off about the rooster robbing him of his dream and his sleep.

The sun continued to rise and the colorful clouds danced away with the wind as it gives way to the sun’s bright rays. Kakashi gazed outside the window to welcome a brand new day. New as it always is, deep within himself, there are some things that has remained unchanged.

As always, the sun brings him unexplained nostalgia that are left unanswered even to this day. He was always a late comer, yes. But that is just what everyone else sees because, even up to this day, he was never late to wait by his window, all set and ready to go just before the sun rises in the east. Its light brings him memories that have continued to live in him after all these years.

As the sun continued to rise and its rays enter his quarters, his eyes trailed along with it until it ended up in his bedside table. On top of it are memoirs that he have and will always treasure.

“Ah, I’m sorry Sasuke. If I had been a better teacher, you might have not gone the wrong way.” Kakashi whispered to himself as he held the picture frame of him, Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke.

“You sure have grown strong, Naruto. Surpassing even me and those that have gone before you. I know you will become a great Hokage. Far greater than anyone before you.”

With a silent laugh, he looked at Sakura’s picture.

“Sakura, you were always blinded with your admiration for Sasuke. I’m glad that finally, you have realized Naruto’s efforts that you have trained hard to become a useful ninja to everyone. Now, you were always there to heal Naruto not only with his physical injuries but with his stupidities, too.” Kakashi could not stop laughing at that.

“Yondaime, Sensei.” He continued as he picked up another picture frame. “I swear, I’ll be a better teacher this time. I will help Naruto and every growing Shobi in every way I can. Obito, I will always live with your teachings and make sure that every Genin learns the value of friendship and teamwork. Rin, I was not able to protect you as promised but I will protect every growing Shinobi to the best that I can.”

He put down the picture frame and picked up an old damaged head protector. Everyday he’d look at it speechlessly. After years of looking at it every day, he is still unable to find words to say to it. And this time, something in him is telling him to bring it with him but he doesn’t know why. Perhaps, he will find the answer along the way.

Yesterday, Tsunade called his team’s attention. They are to go as a backup to Prince Skye Nieville’s personal bodyguard. The prince from the Clover Country will go to visit his soon to be bride; the princess of the Yellow Country, Princess Tamara. Prince Skye is known to never take any more bodyguards other than his personal bodyguard. But since the journey is quite long, his personal bodyguard requested a backup of three or four men.

He is to meet Naruto, Sakura, and Sai in the village’s entrance gate at 7:00 AM. Ready to go now, he glanced for a second at the nearest tree by his window.

“Hmmn, I still have to visit the memory of Obito and Rin in the memorial stone. They can wait.”

He thought and then went out.

Naruto quickly hid from one of the branches as Kakashi glanced to his direction.

‘Has he noticed me?’ He wondered. Then, when he saw him leave, Naruto quickly jumped on to the next tree and the next until he was back in his room.

“Whew!, that chicken sure gave me a morning warm up. Yay!, it’s almost seven! I’d better get ready to meet Kakashi-Sensei and the rest.”

END OF CHAPTER ONE​

 
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It`s actually pretty good:D The best "Not using color codes and dialogue based" FF I`ve read so far if you get what I`m saying.
And aslo there aren`t many girls here who writes FFs, so that`s a + too;)

The way you portrait Naruto and Kakashi matches them pretty good and you`ve come up with a pretty interesting storyline:)

So is this your first FF? Well I`m looking forward to chapter 2 then. I`ll check the prolouge in the meantime. Just be sure to link me ti it when it`s out and make a thread of it in the FF section;):)
 
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It`s actually pretty good:D The best "Not using color codes and dialogue based" FF I`ve read so far if you get what I`m saying.
And aslo there aren`t many girls here who writes FFs, so that`s a + too;)

The way you portrait Naruto and Kakashi matches them pretty good and you`ve come up with a pretty interesting storyline:)

So is this your first FF? Well I`m looking forward to chapter 2 then. I`ll check the prolouge in the meantime. Just be sure to link me ti it when it`s out and make a thread of it in the FF section;):)


Oh, I didn't expect you'd drop by. I'm getting smaller and smaller the more I read your "Legendary Sage of Konoha". It's really very different. I guess mine is just too girlie. I'll probably try to weave in some masculine works along the way. :)
 
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Oh, I didn't expect you'd drop by. I'm getting smaller and smaller the more I read your "Legendary Sage of Konoha". It's really very different. I guess mine is just too girlie. I'll probably try to weave in some masculine works along the way. :)
Yeah I felt like i had too since you`re reading mine;)
Nah, my FF is nothing compared to yours, you`re way better at creating story and writing than me;)

I like it thou ;) Do more..
Agreed;):D
 

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You guys are giving me chills. I think I'm feeling pressure running up to my head. Thank you so much, though.

Yeah I felt like i had too since you`re reading mine;)
Nah, my FF is nothing compared to yours, you`re way better at creating story and writing than me;)

Agreed;):D
Yay! I'm getting pressured here. Still, I wish I could write the way you do. Simple and precise. It's like, one sentence describes everything. :worshippy:


I like it thou ;) Do more..
Thank you for the inspiration. :)
 
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You guys are giving me chills. I think I'm feeling pressure running up to my head. Thank you so much, though.

Yay! I'm getting pressured here. Still, I wish I could write the way you do. Simple and precise. It's like, one sentence describes everything. :worshippy:
Not bad for your first multi-quote, and not bad for your first FF either;) As Fallen said, we want more:)

Ps: When you multi quote, you may write something in between the quotes, you don`t have to write what you want after putting all the quotes after each other;)
 

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Not bad for your first multi-quote, and not bad for your first FF either;) As Fallen said, we want more:)

Ps: When you multi quote, you may write something in between the quotes, you don`t have to write what you want after putting all the quotes after each other;)

Thanks for the guidance. :)
I found a way to edit the posts, and the quotes. I hope that's how it's done. hehehehe...
 

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Dear Nikkou Arashi,
It was a lovely chapter and I really touched about how you phrase the Nostalgia of kakashi sensi and your description to the dialog between kakashi and himself was brilliant.

great job Nikkou Arashi promise me that you will keep writing.
I'm waiting your next chapter.
have a nice day
 

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Dear Nikkou Arashi,
It was a lovely chapter and I really touched about how you phrase the Nostalgia of kakashi sensi and your description to the dialog between kakashi and himself was brilliant.

great job Nikkou Arashi promise me that you will keep writing.
I'm waiting your next chapter.
have a nice day
Thanks, Asham.
Your signature poem is really heart-warming, by the way. Did you have that posted somewhere else here in NB? :)
 
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i can tell its going to be a really good story.......there is nothing with a girl writing fan-fic if anything they tend to flesh out the characters and story more not just getting right to action.

I really enjoyed the story...to be honest with out the color coded dialogue i thought this was going to be really long and tedious but once i started reading i got hooked by the story... keep it up

Ps. I love sad themed fan-fiction XD
 

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No It is not one of my writings . I wish that I was the writer of this poem It is really heart touching.
but thanks for the compliment Nikkou Arashi
 

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<3 Thank you guys for your encouragement. <3

i can tell its going to be a really good story.......there is nothing with a girl writing fan-fic if anything they tend to flesh out the characters and story more not just getting right to action.

I really enjoyed the story...to be honest with out the color coded dialogue i thought this was going to be really long and tedious but once i started reading i got hooked by the story... keep it up

Ps. I love sad themed fan-fiction XD
Thanks, Felixman. After reading your first comment, I realized that the storyline does seem gloomy. I want the story to be heart-touching rather than sad, so I'll try to cheer it up as it goes.

No It is not one of my writings . I wish that I was the writer of this poem It is really heart touching.
but thanks for the compliment Nikkou Arashi
Why don't you try? I think you have the feelings. And I believe our emotions can make us do anything we want. Remember, Naruto? He always work with his heart, right? :)

Looks like you got some fans afterall:)
So when will you release chapter 2?:D
Weeeh! Mike, it's giving me pressure right now...And my PC just got busted with lightning last night. huhuhuhuhuhu...I'm over a friend's house now and will be bringing the PC to the shop later. I'll try to do chapter two and post it by Saturday.
 

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<3 Thank you guys for your encouragement. <3

Weeeh! Mike, it's giving me pressure right now...And my PC just got busted with lightning last night. huhuhuhuhuhu...I'm over a friend's house now and will be bringing the PC to the shop later. I'll try to do chapter two and post it by Saturday.
Hehe, not intended:p
Oh:-/ Unlucky you:(
A nice, looking forward to a possible release then:)
 
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