Water with -Gitanshu-

[Gitanshu]

- Well if you decide to twirl around with this jutsu, An enemy from long range can attack you

How exactly?

- If it used against me the quick thing to do is perform a earth technique to have the ground shake, It will be able to put the opponent off balance and by doing this there hands movements will most likely stop.

Nice counter, don't use it if you and he are standing, facing towards each other because in this case he will be able to release enough water to hit you.

Now you have completed all the jutsu up to B rank , now before moving on I would like to ask if you have any question regarding any technique or in general.

 

[0jordinio0]

Hi, are you still accepting students? I'm looking to build a small repertoire of useful Suiton Ninjutsu.

I'm looking to learn along the lines of : (Suiton: Suirou No Jutsu) - Water Style: Water Prison - (Suiton: Teppōdama) Water Release: Gunshot - (Suiton: Suijinheki) - Water Release: Water Encampment Wall - (Suiton: Suiryūdan no Jutsu) -
Water Release: Water Dragon Bullet Technique - (Kirigakure no Jutsu) - Hiding in Mist Technique.

It's a small list of Jutsu, yet very diverse and useful in almost every situation. And it would help me alot later on, when I want to attempt to develop a Raiton affinity and use both Suiton and Raiton in conjunction.

I'd appreciate taking me into consideration, but if you don't feel like it or particularly even want to then that's fine.

 

[0jordinio0]

Ah, woops. My bad. I'll just check in later lol. There seems to be some problems with my bio, I think?

 

[Noni]

I personally don't have any questions really .
If you have anything to add go ahead but nothing is really confusing me at the moment so we can keep going.

 

[Gitanshu]

Fine, Now it is time for applied science then, the same drill but this time around I want you to even post a counter to your own move.

 

[Noni]

what? can you explain what you mean

 

[Gitanshu]

I would like you to do 3 move combo for me, at least 1 of the three jutsu should be a water technique.

I then want you to counter it as well.

It is the same thing which we have previously done just the counter part is new.

 

[Noni]

ok one more question.
For the counter part how many jutsu's do you want me to use for a counter?

 

[Gitanshu]

As much as you want of course the maximum is three as we are abide by our RP rules.

Make it realistic.

 

[Noni]

First tell me how this attack looks.opponent is standing mid-range.

I notice my opponent standing mid-range. Without hesitating I concentrate on my chakra and mold the nature into doton. I perform the hand seals Rat → Horse → Dog → Snake. This raises a lot of pillars from the ground around my opponent trapping him.

Spoiler

(Doton: Ganchūrō no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Rock Pillar Prison Technique
Rank: C
Type: Defence/supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing the required hand seals Rat → Horse → Dog → Snake and they then create a large amount of rock pillars from under ground. They can then be controlled to surround their opponent and create a bamboo-like thicket of rock.

While my opponent is trap, I focus water chakra and channel it towards the grounf and then I perform the hand seal Tiger. This summons a jet of water. I manipulate the water to travel quickly through the ground towards my opponent who is trapped by the rock spears.

Spoiler

(Suiton: Mizu Kamikiri) - Water Release: Rising Water Slicer
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal the user creates a fast jet of water running through the ground that is powerful enough to slice through solid rock.

I know its only two but i know you will like my counter so please let me continue.
just give me the okay

 

[Gitanshu]

Not Okay, Sorry if I get your Idea wrong but won't your own earth pillars guard your opponent , at most the debris of pillar will harm him which will be more or less of no use.

They even follow the elemental chart.

 

[Noni]

two reasons.

- The water jutsu is strong enough to crush and slice to solid rock.
- Also the water jutsu is B-rank while the rock pillars are C-rank

So the water slicer will crush and slice through my pillars and opponent.

 

[Gitanshu]

According to elemental properties a C rank earth defense can block a B rank water attack, Now I did say that it may result in some debris but nothing which is life threatening or for that matter injurious.

 

[Noni]

Ok then let me do something else. It will be a 3 move attack.

I focus on my chakra and manipulate the nature into fire. I channel the fire towards my mouth and perform the hand seal Tiger, I then Inhale a large amount of air and spew a large stream of fire,I shape the fire to look like a circle that is running through the air. The fire begins to travel towards my opponent way.

Spoiler

( Katon: Gōkakyū no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the necessary hand seals Snake → Ram → Monkey → Boar → Horse → Tiger, a ninja inhales air, and utilizing a large amount of fire chakra, spews a large fireball from their mouth after blowing through a ring made by the thumb and index finger of the user, incinerating everything in range. The fireball ignites externally.

After this I jump into the air and focus wind chakra through my body and then channel the wind chakra towards my mouth and blow out a gust of wind immediately after the fire stream is shot out. The wind pushes me back but also hits the fire stream increasing the fire's inferno and overall power.

Spoiler

(Fūton: Kaze Ogawa no Jutsu) - Wind Release: Wind Stream Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to change direction in mid-air at high speeds by simply blowing wind out their mouth. The user can also use this technique by blowing it at the ground and causing a dust cloud to rise, concealing the users location and movement.

As the Fire ring is heading towards my opponent, I begin to look into my chakra and focus on it. I turn the chakra into water chakra, Then I perform Ram → Snake → Tiger hand seals, A thick black mists begin to show. Then I manipulate the mist to go above head and change the shape into a puffy cloud. I begin to make the cloud move towards towards my opponent, I release the cloud's oil drenching my opponent in oil, This means right when the massive fireball is in range the fire will destroy him, Killing him

Spoiler

(Suiton: Kokuun) - Water Style: Black Clouds
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description:After performing the Ram → Snake → Tiger hand seals the user creates a flammable black mist that forms a small cloud. The user can then move the cloud above their target and disperse it, covering the target in flammable oil.

Tell me how you like it and if I can move on with the counter.

 

[Gitanshu]

Please post the fire and wind technique that you used.

Now I like the overall move but there are few mistakes that I will like to point out, first the fire would reach the opponent way sooner then you are expecting it to, therefor your oil cloud combination is a fail, secondly I just loved how creatively you used the wind technique all thouh I have seen as well as used wind technique in similar manner but still I am very happy with your progress.

 

[Noni]

I edit my post.
Im still only D-rank on wind ! The senpai is quite slow at replying.
So is it a approval, should I just take out the oil cloud ?

 

[Gitanshu]

So is it a approval, should I just take out the oil cloud ?

If you take that out, well then you never actually used a water technique in your combo. So figure something out young one

Looks like your elemental combination training with NK is going well.

 

[Noni]

Yes he is a great battle teacher ! I have to thank him later lol.
Now this one might seem odd but bare with me.

I focus on my chakra and manipulate the nature into fire. I channel the fire towards my mouth and perform the hand seal Tiger, I then Inhale a large amount of air and spew a large stream of fire,I shape the fire to look like a circle that is running through the air. The fire begins to travel towards my opponent way.

Spoiler

( Katon: Gōkakyū no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the necessary hand seals Snake → Ram → Monkey → Boar → Horse → Tiger, a ninja inhales air, and utilizing a large amount of fire chakra, spews a large fireball from their mouth after blowing through a ring made by the thumb and index finger of the user, incinerating everything in range. The fireball ignites externally.

After this I jump into the air and focus wind chakra through my body and then channel the wind chakra towards my mouth and blow out a gust of wind immediately after the fire stream is shot out. The wind pushes me back but also hits the fire stream increasing the fire's inferno and overall power.

Spoiler

(Fūton: Kaze Ogawa no Jutsu) - Wind Release: Wind Stream Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to change direction in mid-air at high speeds by simply blowing wind out their mouth. The user can also use this technique by blowing it at the ground and causing a dust cloud to rise, concealing the users location and movement.

As the Fire ring is heading towards my opponent, I begin to look into my chakra and focus on it then channel it towards my feet. I turn the chakra into water chakra,I begin to manipulate the water to move around. I hold out my sword and move with the water with great pace, I make sure to stay a little behind the fire ball, After it hits my opponent and burn him I will then come to stab him with my sword for the finishing kill

Spoiler

( Suiton: Seisuiryū ) - Water Release: Azure Water Stream
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will create a moving body of water beneath him that travels towards the opponent carrying the user. They then slash the opponent with their sword multiple times.

 

[Gitanshu]

Fine, Nice move but to be frank you just ended up making it a kill box for your self, now let me tell you why, if you want to advance towards your opponent why did you even push your self backward's using the wind technique? Now I am guessing it is nothing more then the famous cut-copy-paste, moving on I like you went for an head on attack but it is done in a wrong manner because when I shoot any attack to deal with you fireball it will continue to advance towards you and given the fact that you are charging towards me with graet pace and that you are already using your chakra in the water release jutsu, will leave rather help less and you will most probably be hit by your opponent jutsu................ I think we do need to work on real battle part ._. but for now counter it for me and I am seriously going to make your training more hard as well as battle oriented in the future, so that you can have some practical knowledge as well, I hope you don't mind that and if you got any problems regarding my teaching or teaching style do tell me.


Go for the counter for the time being.

 

[Noni]

I didn't copy or paste I tried to describe it as good as possible so it looks more real.
If you think I have a problem with your training method your wrong ! Throw any thing you got at me, I will come out on top ! :scorps:

After noticing the huge fireball coming towards me I notice it comes quickly in short range. I channel chakra towards my hands and manipulate the nature into water. I release a torrent of a lot of powerful water through my hands directed towards the fireball. It extinguish the fire but not only that but it creates a large mist around the area due to the fire making the water evaporate and canceling each other out. I can see his shadow as well as him being able to see mine.

Spoiler

( Suiton: Seiryūshō ) - Water Release: Azure Dragon Palm
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user unleashes a spiralling torrent of water from his hands.

While the mist is still covering in between us, I focus my chakra and channel it towards the mouth, I use nature manipulation to turn the chakra into lighting. I release from my mouth a lighting spear and aim it towards the opponent Shadow. The spear quickly runs through the mist and out of it towards my opponent. My opponent tries to evade but then I manipulate the lighting spear to split into three. Preventing him to evade and since the mist was in between by the time the spear traveled pass the mist it was already close range towards the opponent. By splitting it in three it just makes sure one of the spears hit my opponent and leaving him no time to react.

Spoiler

(Raiton: Gian Yari) - Lightning Style: False Darkness Spear
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user emits a spear of lightning from their mouth. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies.