[Mystery] Warmth of Spring

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HENI

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The flowers bloom
And the breeze heals
The running water sings in my ears
As the birds chirp the lyrics
Our love makes the warmth of spring..

The sky is blue and peace
The grass is green and pure
The fragrance of nature brings
Life to our brightening spring..

Our love makes the warmth of spring..


Tell me what you all think!
 
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Wparker6804

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I've never been an expert on poems. Although I have taken an interest in Haikus.....

Haikus Can Be Fun
But Sometimes, They Don't Make Sense
Refrigerators​

But good job :)
And I'm GLAD the winter is over.
 

HENI

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I've never been an expert on poems. Although I have taken an interest in Haikus.....

Haikus Can Be Fun
But Sometimes, They Don't Make Sense
Refrigerators​

But good job :)
And I'm GLAD the winter is over.
Thanks I'm turnt up for spring. I can't wait till my neighborhood opens up the pool!
 
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