Wanted: Chapter Three: The Fight Aboard S.S TakaTendFallKush

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____________________________________Wanted
_______________________________Chapter Three
_______________________________The Fight Aboard S.S TakaTendFallKush
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______________________________Arc One: The First Map piece

Previous Chapter : Two :

Kushan: Do you think they will return?
SexyTendo: They have to, i mean we have a map piece.
Takawaan: Either way we need to get ready, they could attack any time
FallenUchiha: I cant fight when im hungry
Kushan: Me too.. i think im getting sea sick.
SexyTendo: Man up guys! this is serious! a once in a lifetime chance to find the scroll if we lose the map piece, were screwed!
FallenUchiha: i wonder.. that piranhas master maybe he has a map piece?
Takawaan: Who knows..
Suddenly a giant water dragon arises from the depths of the sea, the four boys jumped up in fear
Kushan: What is it!
SexyTendo: Its a water jutsu, the water dragon jutsu!
Four rogue ninja arise out of the water suddenly the water dragons mouth opened and a a powerful looking shinobi appeared on the dragons tongue, the lesser ninja on the water asked the man on the water dragon
Ninja.3: Juyta-San Whats the battle plan here?
Juyta: There kids, feel free to go wild.
FallenUchiha: Thats what she said!
Tendo punches fallen in the arm
FallenUchiha: Oww!
Takawaan: Get serious guys, there coming.
Ninjas.2 jumps up in the air and throws thousands of senbon at the four boys
Kushan: Watch out, Rotation!
Kushans rotation blows half of the senbon away, kushan stopped the rotation to early.
FallenUchiha: Dammit, Wind Release: Violent Wind Palm!
The jutsu pushes the rest of the senbon away, Ninja.2 fell on the water while Fallen activated his Sharingan
Juyta: A Hyuga and a Uchiha, interesting maybe when we take the map piece ill take your eyes for my self.
Takawaan appears behind Juyta but he disappears leaving Takawaan the on the water dragon, Juyta appears on the ships mast
Juyta: Swallow him
The water dragon shuts its mouth and swallows Takawaan
All: Takawaan!
Suddenly the water dragons body begins to bulge
SexyTendo: Whats happening? Takawaan isnt that fat?
The water dragon explodes
Takawaan: Wind release: DIVINE WIND!
Takawaan Falls on the water in the middle of the four ninja
Ninja.4: Here our chance.
SexyTendo: Dammit
Tendo jumps itachi style over the four ninja and Takawaan and throws 4 kunai at the ninja
SexyTendo: Yes Direct hit!
The four ninja were hit directly in the chest, tendo lands right next to Takawaan, Kushan and Fallen jump to the two
Juyta: Hmm, dont be acting all high and mighty, they were only minor ninja.
Takawaan: I could say the same about you too
Juyta: What..?
Takawaan: Come on, dont kid yourself, its four against one even though we are minor ninja your at a total disadvantaged
Juyta: That may be so but for the map piece ill do whatever i can, if we take your piece we will be the only gang in the world to have two piece
SexyTendo: So you do have a map piece.
Juyta: Yes why would i lie, in any case im wasting time time to finish you!
Juyta jumps onto the water with the four boys
FallenUchiha: Bring it on!
Fallen and Juyta pull out kunai's and clash
Kushan: Come on guys lets back him up!
SexyTendo: Right
Takawaan: Yep
Kushan Takawaan and Tendo grab out kunai's and run towards Juyta, Tendo and Kushan stand on the sides of Juyta and Takawaan stands behind Juyta.

Juyta exhaled wind chakra onto his kunai breaking Fallens kunai and cutting his chest
FallenUchiha: Ghaa!
Takawaan: Shit!
Takawaan starts engaging in hand to hand combat with Juyta
Juyta: Just give up!
Takawaan: ...Ne..ver. NEVER!
Takawaan successfully hit Juyta in the face causing him to fall back, while he was laying on the water Fallen ran toward Juyta and kicked him into the water below them
Kushan: Is he dead?
FallenUchiha: He must be..
The water below them starts bubbling
SexyTendo: What the..?
Suddenly a giant water dragon appears from the water with Juyta on its back
Takawaan: Its bigger this time!
The dragon goes after Takawaan and crashed down where takawaan is standing.
Kushan: Takawaan!
Takawaan appears behind Juyta
Takawaan: RASENGAN!
The rasengan sends Juyta across the water where he eventually meets his end
SexyTendo: Woah what was the Takawaan
Takawaan: *Puff* A technique taught to me by my uncle *Puff*
FallenUchiha: He's dead.
Kushan: He mentioned his gang had a map piece, maybe he has a map to the location of the whereabouts of the map piece
Takawaan: Lets check then.
The four boys look around Juyta's body and eventually found a map to Demonic Island
SexyTendo: So the next map piece is on that island.
Kushan: I guess so
FallenUchiha: Then, our next stop is on Demonic island
Takawaan: Yeaaah!


Next Time To Demonic Island

Authors note: sorry if its a bit crap i rushed it, and sorry if its short

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Good Job! Nice work on the action :)
But yeah, I can see you really rush on it...but it's okay, next time you have to describe the action more. So who's Juyta? I hope his dead. He and his gang is really on our way ;D

Keep the good work :)
 
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