Wait for Darkness - Chapter 3

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See the chapter 2 here:

and the 1 and prologue too before coment, u can give me hints here or vm me.

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Chapter 3 - Looks like this this guy is my job today...


----In Getsuga mind

Getsuga: Oh no, looks like this this guy is my job today...

Getsuga consience: Sooo... Go there!

Getsuga: Shut up, I know!

----Out of his mind

Bardon was there, looking to Getsuga, while his shoulder was bleeding. Nobody moved, after a while Getsuga points the tip of his sword to Bardon and then jumps in the air and falls behind is opponent, and with a fast movement uses his katana to stab Bardon in the chest but he evades at the last moment and punches Getsuga in the face four times: three circular punches came from the right side and the last one was an uppercut. To end the combo he does a frontal kick in Getsuga injured shoulder, Making him scream:

-Aaah! You are fast, really better than the others.

Bardon smiles and says:

-Don't even compare me with those Minora.

Now Getsuga is the one who smiles and awsers:

-Why? I can fell your Praesentia, you are not a lot different.

This time Bardon doesn't smile, his anger grows and then he screams:

-Shut up! You don't know what you are talking, I am stronger than them, I am a media peccata, a medium sin, not a minora! I am from another level!

When he stops speaking he runs to Getsuga and try to punch him in the face, but he avoided and countered with a kick, which didn't affect Bardon, who continued on rampage, and made a new combo of 20 fast punches and then he used a strong kick while screaming:

-Mons calcitrare! (Mountain kick)

Getsuga falls on the ground, his clothes were all ripped and covered in blood.
He lost? No, he just started fighting. His sword felt on the ground and now was far from him, the Honda too, he only had the gun of the previous Minora, but the gun didn't damaged his shoulder a lot, what could it to to the opponent? Bardon walks near him grabs him by the neck and started punching his face. Getsuga couldn't die now.
In the moment he was almost collapsing Siperian appears and Bardon releases Getsuga.
Bardon was now freezing, he couldn't move, and Siperian says:

-You should have waited for me...Want an hint? You can use a bullet the same way you use your sword.

Getsuga gets up and smiles one more time, then he try to talk:

-I know that, I already did that, but this guy is stronger...

Siperian looked at him and said:

-After killing him, we will have to train a lot. Now focus and shot.

Getsuga grabs the gun from a pocket, it has two bullets, and he screams

-I can't focus with all this cold!

He shots Siperian and the cold disappears, Siperian didn't got hurt and then, like an hearth pumping for the last time, he used the last bullet full of every bit of Vis he had, shotting Bardon head after he were not frosen, now running at him.

The noise of the shot, less than one second, was the last thing he heard before collapsing, he won the first battle.

-----In other country, at the same time, in the airport bathroom, Agetsug was reading the news when suddently he started screaming:

-Aahhh! My head! - stops screaming - A presence got weaker, the other died... what's happening?
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Well, the first real fight of my story! here it is!
 
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