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venom i still want you to perform them. Darui, no it replenishes the clouds, imo doesn't create new ones.

Kyuutai no Ame) - Orb of Rain
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: After a long line of handseals, the user is able to place a large amount of chakra into their hands and gather rain towards their palms. The user must begin running towards the target of the jutsu, once enough rain has been gathered and condensed to form a fist sized orb of water in the user's hand, the user must place their hand near the target. The orb of water will "explode" pushing enemies back and creating openings for attacks.

It's funny, reading the technique it gets better and cooler as you read. Then it just sucks at the end. A lot of hand seals, make an orb and it will explode and an A rank for some reason will push your target back instead of causing actual damage <_<

Hitoshirenu Ame Naifu) - Hidden Rain Knives
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user creates the necessary handseals and rain drops in an area of 20 meters around the user is able to turn into sharp water needles, these are relatively weak but can be directed towards an opponent.

More pointy rain, but for some reason this can't kill. Yet C rank hidden slash can? Rain trolls a lot as you can tell lol

(Hyaku Touei Ame Bushin) - Hundred Rain Reflection Clones
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A large scale upgrade of the Reflection Rain clone. The user can create his reflection one hundred different times, these clones don't cause a threat to the enemy and is destroyed by one hit but can make the enemy confused and the user will have time to issue another attack. l The clones mimic the user's every move.

Rain clones + Tajuu o-o basic lol no need to do anything but understand with this one.

Ame toraidento no Jutsu) - Rain Trident Technique
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: A powerful jutsu that uses chakra to gather rain and form it into a long Trident. The Trident is able to change lengths at the user's well and thanks to the chakra has a somewhat solid form. The Trident returns to its' normal state shortly after creation. When the trident cuts into an object, it expands into said object causing more damage and sometimes can even be used to break bones.

Kinda cool, tell me how you would use it. Creating a trident behind the user where they can't see you is a way i would xD
 

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(Touketsu Ame Aikuchi) - Frozen Rain Dagger
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: An advance version of rain daggers where the user bounces the rain into the clouds.The higher up they go the more colder they get until they freeze and come falling down(similar to hail).

*I manipulate my chakra within the rain to bounce up into the clouds. I control them to go higher and higher until the reach frozen temperature and fall down back as frozen rain daggers and keep a control of them as they fall in the head of darui.*




(Touketsu Ame Ittou) - Frozen Rain Blade
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: An advance version of rain blade where the user bounces the rain into the clouds.The higher up they go the more colder they get until they freeze and come falling down(similar to hail) and unlike the original they do not turn back into train until after 3 turns.

*I use my chakra control to make the rain go upwards into the clouds, further and further until they're completely frozen and simply let them free fall down on darui's position*




(Hougeki Arare) - Bombarding Hail
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Using this jutsu requires great chakra control, performing hand seals and sending chakra into the clouds. After a bit of development,(three turns) a ninja will form the precipitation of the cloud into hail. This hail will fall for a brief time from the clouds and by chakra control be targeted at the opponent.
Note:must have clouds in the sky to use this jutsu.

*I perform a set of hand seals, sending chakra into the clouds already present in the atmosphere. After three turns, I see all the hail falling down*




Suiton: Kouu no Fukkou) - Water Style: Rain's Renaissance
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user slams his hand on the ground and sends a large wave of chakra into the ground. This wave of chakra causes all small, nearby sources of water to fly back into the clouds to replenish them. This has little effect on natural storms but on artificial ones it can be used multiple times to lengthen it almost indefinitely.

*I quickly slam my hands on to the ground, to cause the water on the ground to bounce up into the clouds, replenishing the clouds.*



New submission ._.

Kyuutai no Ame) - Orb of Rain
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: After a long line of handseals, the user is able to place a large amount of chakra into their hands and gather rain towards their palms. The user must begin running towards the target of the jutsu, once enough rain has been gathered and condensed to form a fist sized orb of water in the user's hand, the user must place their hand near the target. The orb of water will "explode" pushing enemies back and creating openings for attacks.

*I perform a set of hand seals, and rush forward, while having both my hands forward. As i continue to run, the rain form a ball around both fist. As i reach short range, i punch forward towards the opponent to cause a mild explosion to push him back a couple feet*

Advantages:
-Short-Mid range
-Good for certain openings

Disadvantages:
-Hand seals
-Doesn't do much damage (?)





Hitoshirenu Ame Naifu) - Hidden Rain Knives
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user creates the necessary handseals and rain drops in an area of 20 meters around the user is able to turn into sharp water needles, these are relatively weak but can be directed towards an opponent.

*I send my chakra in the rain, forming it to a more sharper rain drop.*

Advantages:
-No hand seals
-A wide area of 20 meters
-Can be directed to different people

Disadvantages:
-Doesn't kill =_=




(Hyaku Touei Ame Bushin) - Hundred Rain Reflection Clones
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A large scale upgrade of the Reflection Rain clone. The user can create his reflection one hundred different times, these clones don't cause a threat to the enemy and is destroyed by one hit but can make the enemy confused and the user will have time to issue another attack. l The clones mimic the user's every move.

*Just as how I am able to make clones, i release my chakra in the surrounding rain, making a perfect replica of myself. I use more chakra to make a lot more, releasing a constant flow of chakra to them and making them move to my beat*

Advantages:
-Can make people believe its a genjutsu
-Can cause a massive confusion, making the enemy loose track of the real target
-The user can hit the enemy from a blind spot

Disadvantages:
-Clones can't do physical damage




Ame toraidento no Jutsu) - Rain Trident Technique
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: A powerful jutsu that uses chakra to gather rain and form it into a long Trident. The Trident is able to change lengths at the user's well and thanks to the chakra has a somewhat solid form. The Trident returns to its' normal state shortly after creation. When the trident cuts into an object, it expands into said object causing more damage and sometimes can even be used to break bones.

*Watching darui doing his own thing, I manipulate the rain directly behind his blind spot into a 5 feet long trident. As soon as it is created, I make the trident launch itself into darui's neck, puncturing his skin. As the trident reaches into his neck, it expands, causing the 3 sharp tips to go in different direction inside his neck and killing him instantly.*

Advantages:
-No hand seals
-Can be created anywhere up to mid range

Disadvantages:
-Can only make one
 

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(Kadou Tsunami no Jutsu) - Vortex Tsunami Technique
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: A highly advanced technique that draws all the rain into one point, this single point spins at high speeds, so high that they begin to pull the rain cloud into them. The final effect of this technique is a swirling storm of Water that rushes towards an opponent in a fierce tidal wave like motion.
The speeds that this vortex spins at are so fast that it is able to cut through armor. This technique, once sent out is almost impossible to stop and will continue going until the chakra supporting it runs out. As a downside, the storm will chase down an opponent and anything near an opponent, including the user of the jutsu .

Self explanatory. Gather all the rain into a point and create a spinning vortex. Drawback is if you have to perform another technique it stops.

(Haisou no Kouryuu no Jutsu) - Flight of the Rain Dragons
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40(-10 each turn to keep this jutsu in play)
Damage Points: 80
Description: After performing a long row of hand seals, the user makes a small cut on each of his or her ring fingers and raises his or her hands to the sky. Some of the user's blood raises up into the sky, apparently as a sacrifice. The clouds then begin to warp and form into several dragons. Once fully formed, each of the dragons is capable of emitting one spiral rain spear per turn. The dragons also act as alternate sources of rain.
 

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(Kadou Tsunami no Jutsu) - Vortex Tsunami Technique
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: A highly advanced technique that draws all the rain into one point, this single point spins at high speeds, so high that they begin to pull the rain cloud into them. The final effect of this technique is a swirling storm of Water that rushes towards an opponent in a fierce tidal wave like motion.
The speeds that this vortex spins at are so fast that it is able to cut through armor. This technique, once sent out is almost impossible to stop and will continue going until the chakra supporting it runs out. As a downside, the storm will chase down an opponent and anything near an opponent, including the user of the jutsu .

*I gather my rain chakra in a single point where it is raining, and make all the rain drops converge at that single point. A spinning water vortex is then form and i quickly send it towards the enemy*

Advantages:
-No hand seals
-Reaches mid range
-Continues to chase your targert
-Sucks in most things near it

Disadvantages:
-Need to use another technique to make it stop
-If too close you can get hurt




(Haisou no Kouryuu no Jutsu) - Flight of the Rain Dragons
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40(-10 each turn to keep this jutsu in play)
Damage Points: 80
Description: After performing a long row of hand seals, the user makes a small cut on each of his or her ring fingers and raises his or her hands to the sky. Some of the user's blood raises up into the sky, apparently as a sacrifice. The clouds then begin to warp and form into several dragons. Once fully formed, each of the dragons is capable of emitting one spiral rain spear per turn. The dragons also act as alternate sources of rain.

*I take out a single kunai, and with my right arm cut each finger on my left hand. I place the kunai in my left hand, then cut each finger on my right hand. After doing this, i put both hands above my hands, extending it towards the sky as if i am praising someone. Actually i am simply release my chakra into the rain clouds above, then using shape manipulation i form 10 dragons that spit out a long rain spear*

Advantages:
-Several dragons
-Can be used as a source for the rain

Disadvantages:
-Many hand seals
-Need to cut finger
 

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(Kadou Tsunami no Jutsu) - Vortex Tsunami Technique
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: A highly advanced technique that draws all the rain into one point, this single point spins at high speeds, so high that they begin to pull the rain cloud into them. The final effect of this technique is a swirling storm of Water that rushes towards an opponent in a fierce tidal wave like motion.
The speeds that this vortex spins at are so fast that it is able to cut through armor. This technique, once sent out is almost impossible to stop and will continue going until the chakra supporting it runs out. As a downside, the storm will chase down an opponent and anything near an opponent, including the user of the jutsu .

Self explanatory. Gather all the rain into a point and create a spinning vortex. Drawback is if you have to perform another technique it stops.

(Haisou no Kouryuu no Jutsu) - Flight of the Rain Dragons
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40(-10 each turn to keep this jutsu in play)
Damage Points: 80
Description: After performing a long row of hand seals, the user makes a small cut on each of his or her ring fingers and raises his or her hands to the sky. Some of the user's blood raises up into the sky, apparently as a sacrifice. The clouds then begin to warp and form into several dragons. Once fully formed, each of the dragons is capable of emitting one spiral rain spear per turn. The dragons also act as alternate sources of rain.

*I quickly gather my Rain chakra into the rain around us. I then focus it into a single point and manipulate it, giving it destructive properties then I send it out.*

Advantages:
No handseals
Destructive
Goes after opponent
Vaccum properties

Disadvantages:
If you perform another technique it will stop
Destructive to user also

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*I quickly start completing a row of handseals. I then bite my finger then raise my hand to the sky. I manipulate my chakra allowing it to collect my blood and raise it into the clouds. I then manipulate my chakra causing it to create several dragons of rain within the clouds. *

Advantage:
Can be used as alternate for rain jutsu
Attacks constantly

Disadvantages:
Requires some time to perform
Needs a blood sacrifice
 

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(Kuro Ame no Jutsu) - Dark Rain Technique
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40(-5 each turn after 3 turns have passed)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user forms the necessary handseals and the all the rain drops in the area becomes pitch black, they can be felt pouring down but would not be seen, and they would still be transparent. This is a very strong technique because as soon as this is done every technique the user create using this will be pitch black and the enemy will not see them coming

All these hand seals z.z pitch black rain which can't be seen. Kinda OP when you use other techs after it. Rain dragon shooting invisible spears z.z lawl.

(Suiton: Kouryuu no Jutsu) - Water Style: Rain Dragon Skill
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: powerful jutsu that's into motion the creation of a dragon made of clouds. the dragon itself is very powerful and adds a level of versatility previously unknown to rain-based techniques. The dragon swoops down from the sky and onto the battlefield. Not only is it capable of shooting a spiral rain spear from any point on its body once per post, but it is capable of directing a small rainstorm from its body. This allows rain techniques to be used from the dragon, and become more localized.

my favorite rain jutsu o-o I think you can tell why xD
 

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I don't understand that at all. If its pitch black how can it no be seen? .-. I mean if you are fighting in the middle of the day you will see pitch black rain drops ._.

*I quickly perform the C rank rain tech to make it rain, as the rain drops are forming i string up a couple more hand seals to turn all the rain drops pitch black.*

Advantages
- Cannot be seen in the night (The rain drops)
- All other rain techs that uses rain drops will be 'invisible'

Disadvantages
- Will be kinda useless to use in the middle of the day ._.
- Hand seals



*Channels chakra into the sky to create a dragon made of pure clouds to move around* ._.

Advantages:
-Can be used to create a rain cloud
-Can shoot out a rain spear any part of his body
-Can make hide in it
-No hand seals

Disadvantages
-The dragon itself can't be used offensively since its just clouds

Questions:

-Ok so by performing this tech I can just make it rain to perform other rain techs?
-Are rain clouds or regular clouds required to be in the sky to use this dragon or do the clouds just form out of no where to this dragon?
-The rain spear is S rank strength i guess?
 

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you and shady what tf? if it's raining, it really isn't all happy sky blue and all O_O black clouds dark skys cmon <.<

basic concept of rain techniques man, you need rain clouds lol

Si, you use 2 spears both are A rank and so on

Alright these next.

Rasen Yari no Kirinonai Kouu) - Endless Rain of the Spiral Spears
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: An advanced form of the Rain Spear that uses chakra to condense a large amount of rain water into one place to form spears of water in the clouds. The spears can at any time be called down to strike an opponent with only one hand-seal. Unlike its predecessor, these spears are made of constantly moving water that can actually cut an opponent. They also move in a corkscrew pattern that can be slightly manipulated. By widening or sharpening the turns, you can change where the spear will hit mid-technique. The water will stay in the form of spears for a short amount of time (2 turns). Any spears that are not used by that time it will fall uselessly as rain.


(Kadou Boufuu no Jutsu) - Vortex Storm Technique
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: A powerful high level jutsu that uses a great deal of chakra to pull down the storm clouds from the sky and place them around the user and enemy. The chakra that pulled down the clouds keeps them moving at high speeds so that neither the user nor enemy can escape. This jutsu in effect doubles the damage done by rain jutsu attacks and makes them more difficult to dodge. When this technique is used, the rain that comes from the clouds falls sideways, down, up, and near every direction, keeping enemies off balance.

lets see what you got. Any question just tell me.
 

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*I channel my chakra into the falling rain to condense it into a single spear after the single hand seal. With my chakra, I guide the spear to fall on the neck back of better’s clone.*

Advantages:

-these spears are made of constantly moving water that can actually cut an opponent
-They also move in a corkscrew pattern that can be slightly manipulated
-By widening or sharpening the turns, you can change where the spear will hit mid-technique.
-The water will stay in the form of spears for a short amount of time (2 turns)


Disadvantages:

-The water will stay in the form of spears for a short amount of time (2 turns)
-Any spears that are not used by that time it will fall uselessly as rain.




This ****ing jutsu is mad OP. I'm just seeing this O____________O and I got a perfect Cj in mind that will work with this xD "Heavy Cloud" Watch out for it z.z

*I focus my chakra into the storm clouds above in the sky and bring them down to surround my opponent and me.*

Advantages:

- Doubles Rain jutsu's dmg
- Brings down clouds
- Makes the rain flow in any other direction, before it could only go vertically but now it can go various ways.


Disadvantages:

- Clouds can be blown away




In your next post can you just do the last 3 in one post? z.z
 

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(Boufuu Kumo Kaigara) - Storm Cloud Shell
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A powerful technique that draws down a small portion of rain clouds and places them over the user like a full body shell. The clouds continue to produce rain, which allow the user to send out rain jutsu like the Rain spear from their body. This shell also defends against lightening jutsu, cutting their damage in half.


Rasen Yari no Kirinonai Kouu) - Endless Rain of the Spiral Spears
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: An advanced form of the Rain Spear that uses chakra to condense a large amount of rain water into one place to form spears of water in the clouds. The spears can at any time be called down to strike an opponent with only one hand-seal. Unlike its predecessor, these spears are made of constantly moving water that can actually cut an opponent. They also move in a corkscrew pattern that can be slightly manipulated. By widening or sharpening the turns, you can change where the spear will hit mid-technique. The water will stay in the form of spears for a short amount of time (2 turns). Any spears that are not used by that time it will fall uselessly as rain.


(Kadou Boufuu no Jutsu) - Vortex Storm Technique
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: A powerful high level jutsu that uses a great deal of chakra to pull down the storm clouds from the sky and place them around the user and enemy. The chakra that pulled down the clouds keeps them moving at high speeds so that neither the user nor enemy can escape. This jutsu in effect doubles the damage done by rain jutsu attacks and makes them more difficult to dodge. When this technique is used, the rain that comes from the clouds falls sideways, down, up, and near every direction, keeping enemies off balance.

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I did the last two in the previous move o_o

Ok so with the storm shell technique you basically draw down a small portion of rain clouds and places them over your body like a full body shell. The clouds continue to produce rain, which allow the user to send out rain jutsu like the Rain spear from their body. This shell also defends against lightening jutsu, cutting their damage in half.

Advantage:
-Protects from lightning jutsu
-Sends rain jutsu from the body, so closer to the ground

Disadvantage:
-None imo
 
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